Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXG773PWPS3W02BCDCYFXT

Run Details

Duration:
1m 32s
Cost:
$0.008214
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement, a relentless drumming that soaked through Harlow Quinn’s coat and chilled the skin beneath. She stood across the street from the Raven’s Nest, the green neon sign buzzing in the damp air, its reflection shimmering in oily puddles on the road. The sharp jawline she pressed against her collarbone tightened. Her watch read eleven-forty. Late for a meeting, early for a body. A figure burst out of the bar's heavy oak doors. A hood obscured the face, but the frantic energy, the way the shoulders hunched forward, screamed guilt. Harlow moved. Boots gripping the slick asphalt, she crossed the street, dodging a black cab that hissed and swerved, tyres throwing up a curtain of filthy water. She ignored the driver's curses. "Police! Stop!" The figure didn't falter. He sprinted toward the mouth of an alleyway, cutting between a kebab shop and a boarded-up laundrette. Harlow followed, her breathing already falling into the rhythmic cadence she’d perfected over eighteen years on the force. Three years since Morris died under that bridge, since the shadows had grown teeth and the world had stopped making sense. She’d chased things like this before, things that shouldn't exist but left footprints in the mud. She hit the alley at full tilt. Bags of rubbish lined the brick walls, smelling of rot and chip grease. The suspect vaulted a stack of crates with an agility that bordered on unnatural, landing without a sound on the other side. Harlow scrambled over, scraping her palms against the rough wood. Her knees protested, but she pushed the pain down. Military precision. One foot in front of the other. The alley opened onto a narrower service road behind the theatres of Shaftesbury Avenue. The rain here came down in sheets, distorting the streetlights into bleeding watercolours. The suspect was twenty yards ahead, turning sharp left toward Camden. She picked up speed. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird in a cage. She needed to close the gap. If she lost him in the labyrinth of North London, he’d be gone. Another ghost. Another dead end. "Stop or I will tase you!" The figure glanced back. For a split second, lightning illuminated the face beneath the hood. Pale skin, eyes too wide, a mouth twisted in terror. Not a normal criminal. A runner for the clique. He put on a burst of speed, moving impossibly fast. Harlow gritted her teeth and forced her legs to pump harder. The muscles in her thighs burned, acid building up, but she ignored it. Focus. The target. They left the main roads, slipping into the quieter, industrial shadow of the Camden locks. The canal water below them churned, black and angry. The suspect scrambled down a grassy embankment, slipping on the mud but righting himself instantly. Harlow followed, sliding down the incline, using a tree trunk to brake her descent. Bark bit into her shoulder. He was heading for the old station. Abandoned since the war, the entrance to the Underground station stood like a gaping wound in the earth. Fences had been erected, but someone had cut through the chainlink weeks ago, leaving a jagged hole. The sign above was rusted illegible, the paint flaking away like dead skin. The suspect vanished into the darkness of the tunnel mouth. Harlow skidded to a halt at the threshold. The air here was different. Colder. It smelled of ozone, old dust, and something metallic, like blood left on a counter. The sounds of the city—the distant traffic, the hum of the pubs—faded, replaced by a heavy, suffocating silence. She unholstered her torch, flicking the beam on. The light cut through the gloom, illuminating damp, tiled walls covered in graffiti. "Police! Come out with your hands where I can see them!" Her voice echoed, bouncing off the curved ceiling, sounding strangely flat. She stepped onto the platform. Debris littered the ground—old tickets, syringes, crushed beer cans. Her beam caught movement at the far end of the platform. A heavy iron door, painted a deep, bruising purple, stood slightly ajar. The suspect was standing before it, fumbling with something in his hands. Harlow ran, keeping her footsteps light. The door swung open. Warm, amber light spilled out onto the dirty concrete, accompanied by a wave of noise. Chatter, the clink of glass, low thrumming music. It smelled of spices, leather, and unwashed bodies. The Veil Market. The rumours were true. The suspect threw himself through the doorway. Harlow was ten yards away. Five yards. A hand shot out from the opening and grabbed the suspect by the collar, yanking him inside. Another figure stepped into the frame to block the way. Harlow skidded to a stop, raising her weapon. "Step back! Let me through!" The figure in the doorway didn't flinch. He was shorter than the runner, olive-skinned, with short curly dark hair plastered to his forehead with sweat. He wore a loose shirt that revealed the scar running along his left forearm. A Saint Christopher medallion glinted around his neck. Tomás Herrera. She knew his face from the files. The paramedic who lost his license. He looked at her, his warm brown eyes devoid of fear. He looked at the gun, then at her face. "You shouldn't be here, Detective." His voice was calm, carrying over the noise of the market behind him. He held a small, carved bone token in his hand—the key to the door. "I'm placing you under arrest," Harlow said, though her grip on the gun tightened. The air pressure was dropping, her ears popping. "Step away from the door." Tomás shook his head slowly. "This isn't your jurisdiction. You know that. Deep down, you've always known that." Behind him, the shadows of the market seemed to writhe. Figures moved in the amber haze, distorted shapes that didn't look quite human. "I have a suspect fleeing custody. That makes it my jurisdiction." "He isn't fleeing custody. He's seeking asylum." Tomás stepped back, his hand on the iron door handle. "Go home, Harlow. Go back to the rain and the real world." He used her first name. A chill that had nothing to do with the rain raced down her spine. "Stop!" she shouted. Tomás pulled the door. "Wait!" The iron slab swung shut with a heavy, final thud. The lock clicked into place, loud as a gunshot in the sudden silence of the abandoned station. Harlow stood alone in the dark. The beam of her torch caught the empty space where he had stood. The door was solid, seamless iron. No handle on this side. No keyhole. Just a barrier between the world she knew and the world she hunted. She lowered her weapon slightly, breathing hard. The silence pressed in on her ears. The chase had ended at a brick wall. A literal and metaphorical dead end. She walked up to the door, placing her hand against the cold metal. It vibrated faintly, the energy of the crowd on the other side humming through the steel. She could smell the lingering scent of whatever incense they burned in there—sulphur and sandalwood. She could turn around. Walk back up the stairs, call it in, report a suspect lost in the tunnels. Write it up like she did the others. A glitch in the system. A runner who got away. She looked down at her wrist, at the worn leather watch. The second hand ticked, indifferent to the impossible door standing before her. Morris would have gone through. Morris would have kicked the damn thing down or found a way to burn it. Harlow holstered her gun. She reached into her pocket and pulled out her tactical knife. The blade snapped open with a clean click. She knelt by the door, examining the frame, the gaps between the iron and the crumbling concrete of the station wall. If the token was a bone, maybe the lock was old. Maybe it responded to something else. Force, or blood, or sheer stubborn will. She wasn't leaving. Not tonight. Not while the image of Tomás Herrera's calm eyes burned in her memory. She jammed the tip of the knife into a small fissure in the mortar surrounding the door frame. She put her weight behind it. The stone crumbled slightly, dust puffing out. The decision wasn't about the arrest anymore. It was about the truth. She pulled on the knife, testing the integrity of the wall. It groaned, a low, grinding sound of stone shifting against iron. She was an outsider here, a tourist in hell, but she was a tourist with a crowbar and a grudge. She leaned her shoulder against the door, pushing with everything she had, ignoring the strain in her muscles, the rain drying on her skin, the logical part of her brain screaming that she was about to step off a cliff. The door didn't budge, but the stone around it shifted. Just a little. She gritted her teeth, wiped the sweat from her eyes with her sleeve, and shoved again.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:20:23.4Z" 2/19/2026, 12:20:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.154
86.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1514
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1514
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"churned"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"rhythmic"
2"churned"
3"silence"
4"gloom"
5"echoed"
6"footsteps"
7"chill"
8"raced"
9"down her spine"
10"vibrated"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences144
matches
0"d in terror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences144
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1506
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1422
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.91
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Harlow13
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris3
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Camden2
North1
London1
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera2
Tomás5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Market"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Raven"
1"Shaftesbury"
2"Avenue"
3"North"
4"London"
5"Underground"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1506
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences154
matches
0"screaming that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean25.53
std16.38
cv0.642
sampleLengths
067
127
232
32
421
555
642
728
838
940
106
1134
1237
1339
1419
157
1648
1710
1847
1921
2011
2111
2249
236
2435
257
267
277
2827
298
305
3147
3215
3320
345
3527
3627
3718
3823
3911
4029
4119
423
434
441
4527
4645
4728
4844
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences144
matches
0"been erected"
1"was rusted"
83.55% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was heading"
1"was standing"
2"was dropping"
3"wasn't leaving"
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences154
ratio0.026
matches
0"The sounds of the city—the distant traffic, the hum of the pubs—faded, replaced by a heavy, suffocating silence."
1"Debris littered the ground—old tickets, syringes, crushed beer cans."
2"He held a small, carved bone token in his hand—the key to the door."
3"She could smell the lingering scent of whatever incense they burned in there—sulphur and sandalwood."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1430
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"short curly dark hair"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02097902097902098
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.007692307692307693
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean9.78
std5.83
cv0.596
sampleLengths
019
127
29
34
48
510
617
72
825
95
102
114
1217
1318
1421
1516
167
1713
1822
1910
209
212
227
2314
2413
2511
264
2712
286
2913
302
313
326
334
3411
3510
364
375
3810
3911
4013
411
422
4315
449
4515
4614
475
487
4918
37.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.3116883116883117
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners48
75.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences133
matches
0"Just a barrier between the"
1"Maybe it responded to something"
2"Just a little."
ratio0.023
87.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences133
matches
0"She stood across the street"
1"Her watch read eleven-forty."
2"She ignored the driver's curses."
3"He sprinted toward the mouth"
4"She’d chased things like this"
5"She hit the alley at"
6"Her knees protested, but she"
7"She picked up speed."
8"Her heart hammered against her"
9"She needed to close the"
10"He put on a burst"
11"They left the main roads,"
12"He was heading for the"
13"It smelled of ozone, old"
14"She unholstered her torch, flicking"
15"Her voice echoed, bouncing off"
16"She stepped onto the platform."
17"Her beam caught movement at"
18"It smelled of spices, leather,"
19"He was shorter than the"
ratio0.331
27.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount115
totalSentences133
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement,"
1"She stood across the street"
2"The sharp jawline she pressed"
3"Her watch read eleven-forty."
4"A figure burst out of"
5"A hood obscured the face,"
6"Boots gripping the slick asphalt,"
7"She ignored the driver's curses."
8"The figure didn't falter."
9"He sprinted toward the mouth"
10"Harlow followed, her breathing already"
11"She’d chased things like this"
12"She hit the alley at"
13"Bags of rubbish lined the"
14"The suspect vaulted a stack"
15"Harlow scrambled over, scraping her"
16"Her knees protested, but she"
17"The alley opened onto a"
18"The rain here came down"
19"The suspect was twenty yards"
ratio0.865
75.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"If she lost him in"
1"If the token was a"
ratio0.015
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She stood across the street from the Raven’s Nest, the green neon sign buzzing in the damp air, its reflection shimmering in oily puddles on the road."
1"Boots gripping the slick asphalt, she crossed the street, dodging a black cab that hissed and swerved, tyres throwing up a curtain of filthy water."
2"The suspect vaulted a stack of crates with an agility that bordered on unnatural, landing without a sound on the other side."
3"He wore a loose shirt that revealed the scar running along his left forearm."
4"She leaned her shoulder against the door, pushing with everything she had, ignoring the strain in her muscles, the rain drying on her skin, the logical part of …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.154
86.7065%