| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the creature said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 80.96% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1313 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 8.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1313 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "flicker" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "intricate" | | 5 | "pounding" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "jaw clenched" | | 11 | "footsteps" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "chill" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "echoed" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 5 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
| | 4 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "sent a chill down" | | 4 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1303 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.63% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1107 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.99 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 22 | | Soho | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Could | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Could" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.506 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 20.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "graffiti that seemed to shift and writhe in the low light" | | 1 | "leaves that seemed to move on their own, and trinkets that hummed with an otherworldly energy" | | 2 | "as if considering her words" | | 3 | "pull that seemed to tug at something deep within her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.60% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 32.58 | | std | 14.3 | | cv | 0.439 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 18 |
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| 88.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "were lost" | | 1 | "was involved" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a wiry man in a dark hoodie—darted around a corner, nearly colliding with a couple huddled under a shared umbrella." | | 1 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a rusted door, slightly ajar, its peeling paint barely visible in the dim light from a flickering streetlamp." | | 2 | "The air grew thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like copper pennies left too long in the rain." | | 3 | "Vendors hawked their wares—jars of glowing liquid, bundles of herbs with leaves that seemed to move on their own, and trinkets that hummed with an otherworldly energy." | | 4 | "As she neared the stall, the vendor—a gaunt man with hollow eyes—looked up from his wares." | | 5 | "The market had been strange enough, but this felt different—more dangerous, more..." | | 6 | "And in its eyes, she saw a flicker of recognition—and something else." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03043867502238138 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011638316920322292 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.57 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.497 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 54.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.34375 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 80.32% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a sudden movement," | | 1 | "Then, with a curse, she" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots splashed through puddles," | | 1 | "She rounded the corner, her" | | 2 | "She pushed the door open," | | 3 | "She scanned the crowd, her" | | 4 | "His gaze locked onto Quinn's" | | 5 | "he hissed, his voice barely" | | 6 | "She followed, her heart pounding" | | 7 | "She drew her weapon, the" | | 8 | "She thought of DS Morris," | | 9 | "She couldn't turn back now." | | 10 | "He turned slowly as Quinn" | | 11 | "he said, his voice low" | | 12 | "It was a twisted, grotesque" | | 13 | "She could feel a strange" | | 14 | "She knew she should leave," | | 15 | "it said, its voice now" | | 16 | "She was unarmed, alone, and" | | 17 | "she demanded, her voice steady" | | 18 | "It took a step closer," | | 19 | "it was all connected somehow," |
| | ratio | 0.265 | |
| 86.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Quinn's breath came in" | | 1 | "Her boots splashed through puddles," | | 2 | "The suspect—a wiry man in" | | 3 | "Quinn shouted, but the words" | | 4 | "She rounded the corner, her" | | 5 | "The man had vanished." | | 6 | "Frustration coiled in her chest" | | 7 | "The alleyway was a dead" | | 8 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 9 | "Quinn approached cautiously, her senses" | | 10 | "She pushed the door open," | | 11 | "The air grew thick with" | | 12 | "The stairs led to a" | | 13 | "The underground market stretched out" | | 14 | "Vendors hawked their wares—jars of" | | 15 | "The air was thick with" | | 16 | "She scanned the crowd, her" | | 17 | "A flash of dark fabric" | | 18 | "Quinn pushed through the throng" | | 19 | "His gaze locked onto Quinn's" |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed the door open, revealing a narrow staircase that descended into darkness." | | 1 | "The air was thick with the scent of incense and something else, something that made the hairs on the back of Quinn's neck stand on end." | | 2 | "The man tilted his head, as if considering her words." | | 3 | "She could feel a strange energy emanating from the pool, a pull that seemed to tug at something deep within her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn shouted, but the words were lost in the drumming rain" | | 1 | "he hissed, his voice barely audible over the din of the market" | | 2 | "he said, his voice low and mocking" | | 3 | "she demanded, her voice steady despite the pounding of her heart" | | 4 | "she asked, her voice low and dangerous" |
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| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "he hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |