| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "tinged" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "throbbed" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "could feel" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "quickened" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tended to" | | 2 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1421 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Come to the grove. Midnight. Come alone. I have answers about your pendant." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 1342 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Real | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1421 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 29.6 | | std | 21.56 | | cv | 0.728 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 51 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 33 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 59 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 45 | | 47 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Every instinct she'd honed growing up with an overprotective father, every survival mechanism she'd built after Evan — all of it screamed at her to turn around, go back to the flat above Silas' bar, and pretend she'd never received the message." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in impossible abundance — bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, all blooming in direct defiance of the season." | | 2 | "Her breath plumed in the air — when had it grown so cold?" | | 3 | "No — the light shifted." | | 4 | "That heat meant protection — Yu-Fei had been clear about that much." | | 5 | "She took another step backward, but something pressed against her shoulders — the air itself, thick and heavy, holding her in place." | | 6 | "Its hand — if it could be called a hand — extended toward her pocket." | | 7 | "Not the figure — the shadows themselves, the darkness between the trees, the void pooling beneath the oaks." | | 8 | "She didn't think, didn't plan — she just ran, straight through the wildflowers that grabbed at her ankles, straight toward the gap between two oaks where the standing stones should be." | | 9 | "She could see the stones now — five feet, three feet, close enough to touch —" | | 10 | "The sounds of the city rushed back in a flood — traffic, distant sirens, the hum of a plane crossing the sky." | | 11 | "But when she lifted her hand, she saw the marks on her palm — four thin crescents pressed into her skin, perfectly spaced, as though something had almost, almost managed to take hold." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 172 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.03488372093023256 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 11.02 | | std | 8.55 | | cv | 0.776 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 49.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.37209302325581395 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Just those words, and the" | | 1 | "Even the wind seemed to" | | 2 | "Just shadow and the pale" | | 3 | "Then, from her right this" | | 4 | "Just a pale oval of" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "I have answers about your" | | 1 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 2 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 3 | "She counted them." | | 4 | "She pulled the chain over" | | 5 | "She turned in a slow" | | 6 | "She waited, listening." | | 7 | "Her breath plumed in the" | | 8 | "She whirled again." | | 9 | "She shoved it into her" | | 10 | "She backed away, her eyes" | | 11 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 12 | "She chose a direction at" | | 13 | "Its face hid in shadow," | | 14 | "It took a step toward" | | 15 | "She took another step backward," | | 16 | "Its hand — if it" | | 17 | "They writhed and stretched, reaching" | | 18 | "She didn't think, didn't plan" | | 19 | "She could see the stones" |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 82.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose against" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter tightened her jacket" | | 2 | "The text message had been" | | 3 | "I have answers about your" | | 4 | "She shouldn't have come." | | 5 | "Every instinct she'd honed growing" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei had told her as" | | 7 | "The grass crunched beneath her" | | 8 | "A strange hush fell over" | | 9 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 10 | "Rory crouched and touched a" | | 11 | "The scent of them filled" | | 12 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 13 | "She counted them." | | 14 | "The moonlight that filtered through" | | 15 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 16 | "Rory's hand flew to her" | | 17 | "The gemstone throbbed with heat," | | 18 | "She pulled the chain over" | | 19 | "The deep crimson stone glowed" |
| | ratio | 0.755 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose against the night sky like broken teeth, their ancient oak surfaces silvered by a moon that seemed too large, too close." | | 1 | "The moonlight that filtered through was tinged amber, casting long shadows that stretched toward her across the wildflowers." | | 2 | "She shoved it into her jacket pocket and took a step backward, her heel grinding into something that crunched." | | 3 | "The wildflowers had thinned here, exposing soil that was too dark, too rich." | | 4 | "Scattered across it were small white fragments that could have been bird bones, except they were too long, too delicate, arranged in patterns that her mind refu…" | | 5 | "Something older, something that scraped against her eardrums like dry leaves on stone." | | 6 | "The wildflowers crumpled beneath its feet, but when it lifted its foot again, they were whole, unbent, as though the ground itself had healed at its touch." | | 7 | "Just a pale oval of skin stretched over something that was definitely not a skull." | | 8 | "They writhed and stretched, reaching for her with hands that weren't there, whispering in voices that crawled inside her ears and nested in her thoughts." | | 9 | "She didn't think, didn't plan — she just ran, straight through the wildflowers that grabbed at her ankles, straight toward the gap between two oaks where the st…" | | 10 | "Her hand still clutched the pendant, the stone cooling rapidly now, its glow fading to a faint shimmer." | | 11 | "But when she lifted her hand, she saw the marks on her palm — four thin crescents pressed into her skin, perfectly spaced, as though something had almost, almos…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |