Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXG8VCPFK7W9J9Y3NS1ENG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.007850
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose against the night sky like broken teeth, their ancient oak surfaces silvered by a moon that seemed too large, too close. Aurora Carter tightened her jacket around herself and checked her phone for the third time. 11:47 PM. The text message had been clear enough: *Come to the grove. Midnight. Come alone. I have answers about your pendant.* No name. No number she recognised. Just those words, and the location pin that had led her to this corner of Richmond Park. She shouldn't have come. Every instinct she'd honed growing up with an overprotective father, every survival mechanism she'd built after Evan — all of it screamed at her to turn around, go back to the flat above Silas' bar, and pretend she'd never received the message. But the pendant had grown warm against her chest on the walk here, and that warmth meant something. Yu-Fei had told her as much, though the old woman had been frustratingly vague about what. The grass crunched beneath her boots as she stepped between two of the standing stones. A strange hush fell over the world, as though someone had muted the city's ambient hum. No distant traffic. No plane trails overhead. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in impossible abundance — bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, all blooming in direct defiance of the season. Rory crouched and touched a petal. Real enough. The scent of them filled her head, sweet and faintly decayed, like honey left too long in the sun. "Hello?" Her voice fell flat, absorbed by the darkness pooling between the trees that ringed the clearing. She counted them. Seven oaks, arranged in a perfect circle, their branches interlaced overhead to form a natural cathedral. The moonlight that filtered through was tinged amber, casting long shadows that stretched toward her across the wildflowers. The pendant pulsed. Rory's hand flew to her chest, fingers closing around the Heartstone through the fabric of her shirt. The gemstone throbbed with heat, quick and urgent, like a second heartbeat trying to synchronise with her own. She pulled the chain over her head and held the pendant up to the strange amber light. The deep crimson stone glowed from within, brighter than she'd ever seen it. "Okay. That's new." She turned in a slow circle, scanning the perimeter of the grove. The shadows between the trees had deepened while she'd been examining the pendant. Or had they? The light hadn't changed. The moon hung in the same position overhead, caught in the branches like something snared. A sound came from her left. Soft. Deliberate. Footsteps. Rory spun, but the space between two oaks stood empty. Just shadow and the pale columns of birch trunks beyond the grove's boundary. She waited, listening. Her breath plumed in the air — when had it grown so cold? "Who's there? You brought me here. Show yourself." Silence. Then, from her right this time, the unmistakable crack of a twig snapping underfoot. She whirled again. Nothing. The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel, their petals catching the amber light like tiny pale faces turned toward her. A prickle crawled up the back of her neck, the same sensation she used to get as a child when she'd wandered too far into her grandmother's overgrown garden and felt the weight of something ancient watching from the brambles. The pendant grew hotter. She shoved it into her jacket pocket and took a step backward, her heel grinding into something that crunched. Bone. Not a flower stem. Rory looked down. The wildflowers had thinned here, exposing soil that was too dark, too rich. Scattered across it were small white fragments that could have been bird bones, except they were too long, too delicate, arranged in patterns that her mind refused to interpret. Another sound. Closer now. The soft whisper of something moving through grass. She backed away, her eyes darting between the seven oaks. Which way had she come in? The standing stones should have been visible from anywhere in the clearing, but the shadows had grown so thick she could barely see three feet beyond the wildflower border. "I'm leaving. Whatever you wanted, you can tell me over the phone like a normal person." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. Small mercies. She chose a direction at random and walked toward it, quickening her pace as the shadows seemed to lean inward. The pendant burned against her thigh through her pocket, pulsing faster now, a desperate warning. The trees ahead shifted. No — the light shifted. The amber glow flickered like a candle in wind, casting the grove into momentary darkness before flaring back to life. The figure stood between her and the exit. Rory stopped so abruptly she stumbled, catching herself before she could fall. The figure was tall and thin, wrapped in something dark that moved independent of any wind. Its face hid in shadow, but she could feel its attention fixed on her, pressing against her skin like fever heat. "You came." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere, layered over itself like a chorus speaking in perfect unison. Not male. Not female. Something older, something that scraped against her eardrums like dry leaves on stone. Rory's hand found the pendant in her pocket. The stone seared her palm, but she didn't let go. That heat meant protection — Yu-Fei had been clear about that much. "Someone sent me a message. Was that you?" The figure tilted its head. A slow, deliberate movement, like a bird of prey considering something it had pinned. "A message. Yes. Words on your small bright screen. Words that brought you here." It took a step toward her. The wildflowers crumpled beneath its feet, but when it lifted its foot again, they were whole, unbent, as though the ground itself had healed at its touch. "Why? What do you want with me?" The pendant's pulse quickened, or maybe that was her own heart, beating so hard she could feel it in her throat. She took another step backward, but something pressed against her shoulders — the air itself, thick and heavy, holding her in place. The figure moved closer. Close enough that Rory could see its face, or what should have been its face. Smooth. Blank. No eyes, no mouth, no features at all. Just a pale oval of skin stretched over something that was definitely not a skull. "You have something that does not belong to you." Its hand — if it could be called a hand — extended toward her pocket. The fingers were too long, too jointed, bending in places where fingers shouldn't bend. "The Heartstone." The pendant blazed. Rory cried out as the heat became unbearable, yanking her hand from her pocket. The figure recoiled, its featureless face twisting in what might have been pain or rage. The shadows screamed. Not the figure — the shadows themselves, the darkness between the trees, the void pooling beneath the oaks. They writhed and stretched, reaching for her with hands that weren't there, whispering in voices that crawled inside her ears and nested in her thoughts. Rory ran. She didn't think, didn't plan — she just ran, straight through the wildflowers that grabbed at her ankles, straight toward the gap between two oaks where the standing stones should be. Behind her, the figure's layered voice rose in something that might have been a command or a curse. The shadows chased, cold and hungry, nipping at her heels. The pendant's glow illuminated her path, that crimson light cutting through the amber darkness like a blade. She could see the stones now — five feet, three feet, close enough to touch — She burst through the boundary and stumbled onto the grass of Richmond Park. Real grass. Real darkness, lit by a moon that hung small and distant overhead. The sounds of the city rushed back in a flood — traffic, distant sirens, the hum of a plane crossing the sky. Rory collapsed to her knees, gasping. Her hand still clutched the pendant, the stone cooling rapidly now, its glow fading to a faint shimmer. Behind her, the standing stones stood silent. No wildflowers. No amber light. No figure with a blank face and too-jointed fingers. But when she lifted her hand, she saw the marks on her palm — four thin crescents pressed into her skin, perfectly spaced, as though something had almost, almost managed to take hold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count2
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count2
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"perfect"
2"tinged"
3"pulsed"
4"throbbed"
5"scanning"
6"footsteps"
7"silence"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"flickered"
11"could feel"
12"pulse"
13"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
82.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords13
totalWords1421
ratio0.009
matches
0"Come to the grove. Midnight. Come alone. I have answers about your pendant."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1342
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
Evan1
Heartstone1
Yu-Fei2
Rory10
Real3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1421
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean29.6
std21.56
cv0.728
sampleLengths
062
123
280
346
451
51
653
73
865
93
1047
118
121
1339
148
1515
1666
1728
1845
1912
2045
2116
2210
2364
248
2549
262
2734
2830
298
3019
3114
3233
337
3443
3544
369
3729
382
3932
403
4143
422
4359
4433
4549
4645
4733
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences119
matches
0"was tinged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs224
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences129
ratio0.093
matches
0"Every instinct she'd honed growing up with an overprotective father, every survival mechanism she'd built after Evan — all of it screamed at her to turn around, go back to the flat above Silas' bar, and pretend she'd never received the message."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in impossible abundance — bluebells and foxgloves and flowers she couldn't name, all blooming in direct defiance of the season."
2"Her breath plumed in the air — when had it grown so cold?"
3"No — the light shifted."
4"That heat meant protection — Yu-Fei had been clear about that much."
5"She took another step backward, but something pressed against her shoulders — the air itself, thick and heavy, holding her in place."
6"Its hand — if it could be called a hand — extended toward her pocket."
7"Not the figure — the shadows themselves, the darkness between the trees, the void pooling beneath the oaks."
8"She didn't think, didn't plan — she just ran, straight through the wildflowers that grabbed at her ankles, straight toward the gap between two oaks where the standing stones should be."
9"She could see the stones now — five feet, three feet, close enough to touch —"
10"The sounds of the city rushed back in a flood — traffic, distant sirens, the hum of a plane crossing the sky."
11"But when she lifted her hand, she saw the marks on her palm — four thin crescents pressed into her skin, perfectly spaced, as though something had almost, almost managed to take hold."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.03488372093023256
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean11.02
std8.55
cv0.776
sampleLengths
025
115
22
311
41
52
66
72
84
917
104
1142
1218
1316
1415
1516
163
174
188
1924
206
212
2219
231
2416
253
2616
2718
283
2917
3018
3117
3213
333
3412
3513
363
374
3815
396
401
411
421
4310
4413
453
4613
478
481
4914
49.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences98
matches
0"Just those words, and the"
1"Even the wind seemed to"
2"Just shadow and the pale"
3"Then, from her right this"
4"Just a pale oval of"
ratio0.051
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences98
matches
0"I have answers about your"
1"She shouldn't have come."
2"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
3"She counted them."
4"She pulled the chain over"
5"She turned in a slow"
6"She waited, listening."
7"Her breath plumed in the"
8"She whirled again."
9"She shoved it into her"
10"She backed away, her eyes"
11"Her voice came out steadier"
12"She chose a direction at"
13"Its face hid in shadow,"
14"It took a step toward"
15"She took another step backward,"
16"Its hand — if it"
17"They writhed and stretched, reaching"
18"She didn't think, didn't plan"
19"She could see the stones"
ratio0.224
82.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences98
matches
0"The standing stones rose against"
1"Aurora Carter tightened her jacket"
2"The text message had been"
3"I have answers about your"
4"She shouldn't have come."
5"Every instinct she'd honed growing"
6"Yu-Fei had told her as"
7"The grass crunched beneath her"
8"A strange hush fell over"
9"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in"
10"Rory crouched and touched a"
11"The scent of them filled"
12"Her voice fell flat, absorbed"
13"She counted them."
14"The moonlight that filtered through"
15"The pendant pulsed."
16"Rory's hand flew to her"
17"The gemstone throbbed with heat,"
18"She pulled the chain over"
19"The deep crimson stone glowed"
ratio0.755
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The standing stones rose against the night sky like broken teeth, their ancient oak surfaces silvered by a moon that seemed too large, too close."
1"The moonlight that filtered through was tinged amber, casting long shadows that stretched toward her across the wildflowers."
2"She shoved it into her jacket pocket and took a step backward, her heel grinding into something that crunched."
3"The wildflowers had thinned here, exposing soil that was too dark, too rich."
4"Scattered across it were small white fragments that could have been bird bones, except they were too long, too delicate, arranged in patterns that her mind refu…"
5"Something older, something that scraped against her eardrums like dry leaves on stone."
6"The wildflowers crumpled beneath its feet, but when it lifted its foot again, they were whole, unbent, as though the ground itself had healed at its touch."
7"Just a pale oval of skin stretched over something that was definitely not a skull."
8"They writhed and stretched, reaching for her with hands that weren't there, whispering in voices that crawled inside her ears and nested in her thoughts."
9"She didn't think, didn't plan — she just ran, straight through the wildflowers that grabbed at her ankles, straight toward the gap between two oaks where the st…"
10"Her hand still clutched the pendant, the stone cooling rapidly now, its glow fading to a faint shimmer."
11"But when she lifted her hand, she saw the marks on her palm — four thin crescents pressed into her skin, perfectly spaced, as though something had almost, almos…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.4513%