Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXH8YBACC6W8VZA60G2VC0

Run Details

Duration:
1m 30s
Cost:
$0.001338
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—damp and heavy, with the metallic tang of impending rain clinging to the back of Rory’s throat. She’d walked these paths a dozen times by daylight, but night transformed the familiar into something alien. Shadows pooled thick beneath the trees, and the distant city glow seemed to shrink away, leaving her isolated under a starless sky. She clutched the Heartstone pendant, its chain wound tight around her fingers. The deep crimson gem pulsed faintly against her palm, a steady, warm rhythm like a second heartbeat. Dymas hadn’t explained much when he’d pressed it into her hand—just muttered something about resonance and thresholds, his eyes darting toward the trees as if they might be listening. *Find the grove,* he’d said. *The stones will guide you.* Now here she was, guided by nothing but a faint warmth that grew stronger with every step toward the oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. The pendant’s heat was a low, persistent thrum against her skin, a silent confirmation she was heading the right way. Or walking straight into a trap. She couldn’t be sure which. The first standing stone loomed ahead, ancient and gnarled, more living wood than rock. She paused, running her fingers over the rough bark. The air shifted as she stepped past it—a subtle drop in temperature, a sudden silence that felt heavier than mere quiet. No distant traffic hum, no rustle of night creatures. Just the sound of her own breathing, too loud in the oppressive stillness. Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in riotous patches across the clearing, their petals glowing faintly in the gloom as if holding moonlight within them. It should have been beautiful. Instead, the unnatural perfection felt staged. Wrong. She moved deeper into the grove, the pendant’s warmth intensifying. Her left wrist, the one with the small crescent scar, tingled. A childhood accident, her mother called it. Rory remembered the blood, the panic, the way the cut had refused to close for days. Here, in this place, the old mark felt fresh, sensitive. A soft crunch echoed from somewhere to her left. Rory froze, heart hammering against her ribs. She held her breath, straining to hear past the blood rushing in her ears. Nothing. Just that profound, waiting silence. “Hello?” Her voice came out thin, swallowed by the grove. No answer. Of course there was no answer. She was alone. She had to be alone. She took another step. The flowers beneath her feet made no sound, their stems bending without a whisper. Another crunch, this time from behind her. Sharper. Closer. She spun around, fists clenched. “Who’s there?” Only the standing stones watched her, their dark forms like silent sentinels. The pendant throbbed in her hand, its warmth now a near burn. She unwound the chain from her fingers and let it hang around her neck, the gem resting against her sternum. A bad idea, probably. Like wearing a beacon. Something flickered at the edge of her vision—a shift in the shadows between two oaks. Not movement, exactly. More a… thickening. A shape that wasn’t there a moment before. She took a slow step backward, her training—useless pre-law seminars on situational awareness—screaming at her to keep her eyes open, don’t turn your back, don’t run. Running felt like the only sane option. The air grew colder. Her breath misted in front of her face. In high summer. The flowers nearest her seemed to wilt, their luminous petals curling inward as if touched by frost. A low whisper brushed against her ear, no more substantial than a cobweb. It wasn’t a word. It was a feeling. A sensation of being peeled open, examined. “Show yourself.” Her voice was steadier this time. Demanding. The voice she used on drunk patrons at Silas’s bar just before she cut them off. The whisper came again, this time from her right. It coalesced into something almost linguistic. A sigh that sounded like her name. Not Rory. *Aurora.* The pendant flared, its crimson light bleeding through her shirt, casting a bloody glow on the ground at her feet. The warmth was no longer comforting; it was urgent. A warning. Another flicker of movement. This time, she saw it clearly—a tall, slender figure gliding between the trees without seeming to touch the ground. It was there for a fraction of a second, then gone, leaving behind only a deeper patch of cold and the scent of ozone and decay. Her skin prickled. She was being circled. Hunted. The figure appeared again, closer now, standing perfectly still beside a towering oak. It was man-shaped but impossibly thin, its outlines blurred, as if she were looking at it through warped glass. It had no face, just a smooth, pale expanse where features should be. It tilted its head. The pendant burned against her chest, the pain sharp and sudden. She gasped, her hand flying to the gem. It was scalding hot. The figure took a step forward. It made no sound. The flowers did not bend beneath its feet. Rory took a matching step back. Her heel caught on a root and she stumbled, catching herself against one of the standing stones. The bark was icy to the touch, and for a horrifying second, it felt like it gripped her back, holding her in place. The thing was gliding toward her now, closing the distance with that silent, effortless motion. The air around it shimmered, distorting the grove behind it like a heat haze. A chorus of whispers erupted around her, a cacophony of sighs and half-formed words, all speaking her name, her full name, the one she never used. They came from everywhere and nowhere, from the trees, the stones, the very air. The figure raised a long, slender hand. Its fingers were too many, jointed in all the wrong places. It reached for her. The pendant’s light exploded, a blinding flash of crimson that made her eyes water. The thing recoiled with a sound that was not a scream but a rupture of silence—a high, piercing shatter of glass and bone. The grove snapped back into focus. The whispers cut off. The crushing silence returned, heavier than before. Rory was on her knees, her hands braced against the cold earth, the pendant cooling rapidly against her skin. She was alone. The figure was gone. The frost was receding from the flowers, their petals unfurling once more. But the feeling of being watched remained. It clung to her, a weight in the air, a pressure against her skull. She wasn’t alone. She had never been alone. This place was awake, and it knew her name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1123
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"silence"
count4
6
word"oppressive"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"profound"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count3
11
word"sentinels"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"comforting"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"effortless"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"cacophony"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"resonance"
3"warmth"
4"loomed"
5"silence"
6"oppressive"
7"gloom"
8"echoed"
9"profound"
10"whisper"
11"sentinels"
12"throbbed"
13"beacon"
14"flickered"
15"comforting"
16"flicker"
17"effortless"
18"shimmered"
19"cacophony"
20"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords9
totalWords1113
ratio0.008
matches
0"Find the grove,"
1"The stones will guide you."
2"Aurora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1108
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory6
Heartstone1
Fae1
Grove1
Demanding1
Silas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if holding moonlight within them"
1"felt like the only sane option"
2"sounded like her name"
3"appeared again, closer now, standing perfectly still beside a towering oak"
4"felt like it gripped her back, holding"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.898
wordCount1113
matches
0"not a scream but a rupture of silence"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean32.74
std17.38
cv0.531
sampleLengths
064
168
260
366
436
554
69
727
81
925
1027
117
1252
1329
1433
1532
1628
1725
1825
1931
2049
218
2245
234
2423
2518
2646
2729
2840
2922
3037
3117
3238
3338
92.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences113
matches
0"was, guided"
1"being peeled"
2"being circled"
3"was gone"
7.32% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was heading"
1"were looking"
2"was scalding"
3"was gliding"
4"was receding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences115
ratio0.07
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—damp and heavy, with the metallic tang of impending rain clinging to the back of Rory’s throat."
1"Dymas hadn’t explained much when he’d pressed it into her hand—just muttered something about resonance and thresholds, his eyes darting toward the trees as if they might be listening."
2"The air shifted as she stepped past it—a subtle drop in temperature, a sudden silence that felt heavier than mere quiet."
3"Something flickered at the edge of her vision—a shift in the shadows between two oaks."
4"She took a slow step backward, her training—useless pre-law seminars on situational awareness—screaming at her to keep her eyes open, don’t turn your back, don’t run."
5"The warmth was no longer comforting; it was urgent."
6"This time, she saw it clearly—a tall, slender figure gliding between the trees without seeming to touch the ground."
7"The thing recoiled with a sound that was not a scream but a rupture of silence—a high, piercing shatter of glass and bone."
99.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1118
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04025044722719141
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009838998211091235
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean9.68
std7.1
cv0.734
sampleLengths
025
117
222
312
417
529
65
75
829
920
106
115
1214
139
1421
159
1613
1724
185
196
201
2110
2211
237
2416
2510
269
277
2814
291
305
311
329
332
346
353
365
374
3814
397
401
411
425
432
4412
4512
4620
474
484
4915
44.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.34782608695652173
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the sound of her"
1"Instead, the unnatural perfection felt"
2"Just that profound, waiting silence."
3"Of course there was no"
4"Only the standing stones watched"
ratio0.05
73.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences101
matches
0"She’d walked these paths a"
1"She clutched the Heartstone pendant,"
2"She couldn’t be sure which."
3"She paused, running her fingers"
4"It should have been beautiful."
5"She moved deeper into the"
6"Her left wrist, the one"
7"She held her breath, straining"
8"Her voice came out thin,"
9"She was alone."
10"She had to be alone."
11"She took another step."
12"She spun around, fists clenched."
13"She unwound the chain from"
14"She took a slow step"
15"Her breath misted in front"
16"It wasn’t a word."
17"It was a feeling."
18"Her voice was steadier this"
19"It coalesced into something almost"
ratio0.366
24.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"She’d walked these paths a"
2"Shadows pooled thick beneath the"
3"She clutched the Heartstone pendant,"
4"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
5"Dymas hadn’t explained much when"
6"*The stones will guide you.*"
7"The pendant’s heat was a"
8"She couldn’t be sure which."
9"The first standing stone loomed"
10"She paused, running her fingers"
11"The air shifted as she"
12"Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed"
13"It should have been beautiful."
14"She moved deeper into the"
15"Her left wrist, the one"
16"A childhood accident, her mother"
17"Rory remembered the blood, the"
18"Here, in this place, the"
19"A soft crunch echoed from"
ratio0.871
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Now here she was, guided"
ratio0.01
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Dymas hadn’t explained much when he’d pressed it into her hand—just muttered something about resonance and thresholds, his eyes darting toward the trees as if t…"
1"Now here she was, guided by nothing but a faint warmth that grew stronger with every step toward the oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove."
2"The air shifted as she stepped past it—a subtle drop in temperature, a sudden silence that felt heavier than mere quiet."
3"Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in riotous patches across the clearing, their petals glowing faintly in the gloom as if holding moonlight within them."
4"She held her breath, straining to hear past the blood rushing in her ears."
5"The flowers nearest her seemed to wilt, their luminous petals curling inward as if touched by frost."
6"The pendant flared, its crimson light bleeding through her shirt, casting a bloody glow on the ground at her feet."
7"It was man-shaped but impossibly thin, its outlines blurred, as if she were looking at it through warped glass."
8"The pendant’s light exploded, a blinding flash of crimson that made her eyes water."
9"The thing recoiled with a sound that was not a scream but a rupture of silence—a high, piercing shatter of glass and bone."
10"The frost was receding from the flowers, their petals unfurling once more."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
76.1098%