| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 91.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1123 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "resonance" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "profound" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "sentinels" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "comforting" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "effortless" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "cacophony" | | 20 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 113 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1113 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Find the grove," | | 1 | "The stones will guide you." | | 2 | "Aurora." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1108 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Demanding | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "as if holding moonlight within them" | | 1 | "felt like the only sane option" | | 2 | "sounded like her name" | | 3 | "appeared again, closer now, standing perfectly still beside a towering oak" | | 4 | "felt like it gripped her back, holding" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.898 | | wordCount | 1113 | | matches | | 0 | "not a scream but a rupture of silence" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 32.74 | | std | 17.38 | | cv | 0.531 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 52 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 38 |
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| 92.84% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "was, guided" | | 1 | "being peeled" | | 2 | "being circled" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 7.32% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was heading" | | 1 | "were looking" | | 2 | "was scalding" | | 3 | "was gliding" | | 4 | "was receding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 115 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park tasted different after sunset—damp and heavy, with the metallic tang of impending rain clinging to the back of Rory’s throat." | | 1 | "Dymas hadn’t explained much when he’d pressed it into her hand—just muttered something about resonance and thresholds, his eyes darting toward the trees as if they might be listening." | | 2 | "The air shifted as she stepped past it—a subtle drop in temperature, a sudden silence that felt heavier than mere quiet." | | 3 | "Something flickered at the edge of her vision—a shift in the shadows between two oaks." | | 4 | "She took a slow step backward, her training—useless pre-law seminars on situational awareness—screaming at her to keep her eyes open, don’t turn your back, don’t run." | | 5 | "The warmth was no longer comforting; it was urgent." | | 6 | "This time, she saw it clearly—a tall, slender figure gliding between the trees without seeming to touch the ground." | | 7 | "The thing recoiled with a sound that was not a scream but a rupture of silence—a high, piercing shatter of glass and bone." |
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| 99.78% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1118 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04025044722719141 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009838998211091235 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 115 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 115 | | mean | 9.68 | | std | 7.1 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 44.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.34782608695652173 | | totalSentences | 115 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the sound of her" | | 1 | "Instead, the unnatural perfection felt" | | 2 | "Just that profound, waiting silence." | | 3 | "Of course there was no" | | 4 | "Only the standing stones watched" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 73.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d walked these paths a" | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant," | | 2 | "She couldn’t be sure which." | | 3 | "She paused, running her fingers" | | 4 | "It should have been beautiful." | | 5 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "Her left wrist, the one" | | 7 | "She held her breath, straining" | | 8 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 9 | "She was alone." | | 10 | "She had to be alone." | | 11 | "She took another step." | | 12 | "She spun around, fists clenched." | | 13 | "She unwound the chain from" | | 14 | "She took a slow step" | | 15 | "Her breath misted in front" | | 16 | "It wasn’t a word." | | 17 | "It was a feeling." | | 18 | "Her voice was steadier this" | | 19 | "It coalesced into something almost" |
| | ratio | 0.366 | |
| 24.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She’d walked these paths a" | | 2 | "Shadows pooled thick beneath the" | | 3 | "She clutched the Heartstone pendant," | | 4 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 5 | "Dymas hadn’t explained much when" | | 6 | "*The stones will guide you.*" | | 7 | "The pendant’s heat was a" | | 8 | "She couldn’t be sure which." | | 9 | "The first standing stone loomed" | | 10 | "She paused, running her fingers" | | 11 | "The air shifted as she" | | 12 | "Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed" | | 13 | "It should have been beautiful." | | 14 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 15 | "Her left wrist, the one" | | 16 | "A childhood accident, her mother" | | 17 | "Rory remembered the blood, the" | | 18 | "Here, in this place, the" | | 19 | "A soft crunch echoed from" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 49.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Now here she was, guided" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Dymas hadn’t explained much when he’d pressed it into her hand—just muttered something about resonance and thresholds, his eyes darting toward the trees as if t…" | | 1 | "Now here she was, guided by nothing but a faint warmth that grew stronger with every step toward the oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 2 | "The air shifted as she stepped past it—a subtle drop in temperature, a sudden silence that felt heavier than mere quiet." | | 3 | "Wildflowers she couldn’t name bloomed in riotous patches across the clearing, their petals glowing faintly in the gloom as if holding moonlight within them." | | 4 | "She held her breath, straining to hear past the blood rushing in her ears." | | 5 | "The flowers nearest her seemed to wilt, their luminous petals curling inward as if touched by frost." | | 6 | "The pendant flared, its crimson light bleeding through her shirt, casting a bloody glow on the ground at her feet." | | 7 | "It was man-shaped but impossibly thin, its outlines blurred, as if she were looking at it through warped glass." | | 8 | "The pendant’s light exploded, a blinding flash of crimson that made her eyes water." | | 9 | "The thing recoiled with a sound that was not a scream but a rupture of silence—a high, piercing shatter of glass and bone." | | 10 | "The frost was receding from the flowers, their petals unfurling once more." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |