Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHBAF66J58DC9YSN9DAVQ

Run Details

Duration:
40.7s
Cost:
$0.012264
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the Soho cobblestones, turning the reflection of the distinctive green neon sign above the door into a smear of toxic light. The Raven’s Nest. A pretentious name for a hole-in-the-wall, but the damp chill of the London evening drove her inside. Aurora pushed the heavy oak door and stepped into the gloom. The air inside smelled of pipe tobacco, lemon polish, and stale beer. Low jazz curled from the speakers, something slow and melancholic that seemed to hang in the rafters with the dust. She shook the water from her black hair and moved to the bar, her boots making no sound on the threadbare carpet. She needed a drink. Something to burn away the lingering adrenaline of the move, the endless boxes, the crushing weight of a city that felt too large and too small all at once. She sat on a stool that groaned under her weight. The bar top was polished mahogany, scarred by years of rings and careless knives. "What’ll it have?" The voice was gravel and honey, roughened by smoke and time. It scraped against her memory, a sound she hadn’t heard in seven years. Aurora froze. Her hand, halfway to pulling a wet strand of hair from her face, stopped. She turned her head slowly. The man behind the bar was wiping a glass with a white cloth. His hair was auburn streaked with iron grey, pulled back in a queue that sat loosely against his collar. A beard, neatly trimmed, framed a jawline that had hardened with age. He moved with a deliberate, heavy gait, favouring his left leg as he shifted his weight. "Double scotch. Neat." The words tumbled out before she could stop them. Habit. Muscle memory. Silas Blackwood paused, the cloth hovering over the tumbler. His hazel eyes, sharp and intelligent despite the lines fanning out from the corners, lifted to meet hers. He didn't smile. He didn't gasp. He just looked, his gaze dissecting her face, tracing the new lines in her forehead, the sharper angle of her cheekbones. He reached for a bottle of single malt, turning it in his hand to read the label before pouring. "I thought you were still in Cardiff, burying yourself in law books." "I dropped out." She watched the amber liquid splash into the glass. "Years ago." Silas slid the drink across the wood. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light, winking in the dim room. "So I heard." He limped around the end of the bar, settling onto a stool a few feet away. He didn't offer his hand. He didn't need to. The distance between them felt charged, heavy with the things that hadn't been said. "You look tired, Laila." The alias hit her like a physical blow. It was the name he used when she was a child, sitting on the floor of her father’s study while Silas and Brendan whispered over maps and files. Before she became Rory. Before she became anyone else. "I’m alive." "Alive is a low bar." "It’s raining outside. The bar is empty. The bar is relative." Silas huffed a short breath through his nose, not quite a laugh. He signalled the barback—a gangly kid in an apron who looked terrified of him—to take over the taps. When they were alone again, he turned his full attention to her. "The last time I saw you, you were running. Eva told me you caught a train to Paddington with nothing but a backpack and a bad attitude." "I had to get out." "Leaving without a word tends to suggest that." Aurora took a drink. The scotch burned, a clean, searing heat that settled in her stomach. She needed that heat. She looked at the walls of the bar. Black-and-white photographs of old London, maps of the world with red string stretched between points that probably meant nothing to the regular patrons. It was exactly the kind of place a man like him would retire to. A watchtower disguised as a watering hole. "You haven't changed," she said, gesturing to the maps with her glass. "Still playing spy games in the dark." "Knee doesn't let me play much anymore." He tapped his left leg. The thud was dull. "Prague. Bad exit strategy. Now I pour drinks and listen to people who think they’re important." "And are they?" "Rarely." The silence stretched, filled only by the rhythmic drumming of the rain against the windowpane. Aurora traced the rim of her glass. She wanted to leave. She wanted to stay. She wanted to ask him if he knew about Evan, if he knew why she really ran, if he had been the one pulling strings to make sure her ex never found her. But asking meant admitting weakness. Admitting that the cool, collected woman sitting here now was a fabrication built over a foundation of fear. "I live upstairs," she said, the words sudden and blunt. Silas’s eyebrows shot up. He turned on his stool to face her fully. "The flat above the delivery entrance?" "Move-in was today." He stared at her for a long moment, his expression unreadable. Then, a small, genuine smile touched the corner of his mouth. It transformed his face, softening the hardened edges of the retired operative. "And here I thought it was just the rats making that noise on the floorboards." "Funny." "You always did have a terrible sense of humour." "I have a fine sense of humour. You just have no appreciation for irony." "Irony is walking into a bar run by your old handler to hide from the world." "You weren't my handler. You were my dad's friend." "Same difference." "It isn't." She gripped the glass tighter, her knuckles white. "You people—my father, you—you always talked about the greater good. The mission. Keeping the world safe. You forgot about the people living in it. The people who got broken when the mission went sideways." Silas didn't flinch. He didn't look away. He reached for a bowl of peanuts on the counter, cracking one between his fingers before popping it into his mouth. "You're angry." "I'm not angry. I'm realistic." "You're angry because you thought you could run away from who you are, but you ended up right back where you started. A stone's throw from the Nest." "I'm not 'who I was.' I'm not that scared little girl in the study anymore." "No." His eyes dropped to her left wrist, exposed by the sleeve of her jacket riding up. The small, crescent-shaped scar was pale against her skin. "You aren't. You're something else now." She pulled her sleeve down. "You don't know anything about me, Silas. You don't know what I've done. What I've had to do to survive." "I know you're sitting in my bar. I know you didn't walk out when you saw me. I know you ordered scotch instead of running for the hills." He leaned forward, the light from the green neon sign washing over his face, making him look ghoulish and kind all at once. "You can't outrun your shadow, Rory. No matter how fast you run, or how far you go, it’s always attached to your feet." "I learned to walk in the dark." "Can you?" He challenged her, his voice dropping an octave. "Can you really?" Aurora stared at him. The familiar cool detachment she wrapped around herself like a shroud felt thin, fragile. Under Silas’s gaze, under the weight of seven years of silence, she felt the cracks forming. She thought of the boxes upstairs, the empty room, the phone she hadn't turned on in three days. She thought of the way her father looked at her before she left. Disappointed. And the way Silas looked at her now. Expectant. She finished her drink, the ice clinking against her teeth as she swallowed the last drop. She placed the glass firmly on the coaster. "I’m not working for you." "I don't need a delivery girl." Silas stood, his knee popping loudly. "I need someone who knows when to keep her mouth shut." "I know plenty of places that hire for that." "But they aren't upstairs." She stood up, sliding off the stool. She was tall for a woman, but Silas still towered over her, his presence filling the room. She pulled her coat tighter around her shoulders, shielding herself from the draft. "I'm going to bed." "Sleep well, Laila." She walked to the door, her hand on the brass handle. The cool metal seeped into her palm. She hesitated, her back to the bar. "The scotch was terrible." Silas’s laugh followed her out into the rainy night. "I'll buy a better bottle for next time." There wouldn't be a next time. She stepped out into the downpour, the green neon sign buzzing above her head like an angry insect. She looked up at the dark window of the flat above the bar. A home. Or a cage. She climbed the stairs, the water dripping from her hem, the taste of peat and smoke lingering on her tongue.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.192
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"loosely"
2"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1522
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"weight"
count4
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"searing"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"familiar"
count1
13
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"gloom"
2"weight"
3"tracing"
4"charged"
5"searing"
6"stomach"
7"silence"
8"rhythmic"
9"traced"
10"unreadable"
11"sense of"
12"familiar"
13"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences99
matches
0"looked terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1511
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1078
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
London2
Blackwood1
Silas11
Brendan1
Rory1
Evan1
Aurora5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Blackwood"
2"Silas"
3"Brendan"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.99
windowScore0.833
79.58% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"melancholic that seemed to hang in the rafters with the dust"
1"not quite a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1511
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"needed that heat"
1"Admitting that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean20.15
std18.92
cv0.939
sampleLengths
054
187
224
33
424
521
660
73
812
954
1019
1112
123
1311
1423
153
1639
174
1845
192
205
2111
2242
2327
245
258
2672
2719
2832
293
301
3163
3223
3310
3413
356
363
3734
3815
391
409
4114
4216
439
442
452
4642
4728
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"been said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences146
ratio0.007
matches
0"He signalled the barback—a gangly kid in an apron who looked terrified of him—to take over the taps."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1086
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.024861878453038673
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010128913443830571
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean10.35
std7.29
cv0.704
sampleLengths
023
13
217
311
412
520
622
74
829
910
1014
113
1211
1313
142
1514
165
1713
1819
1912
2016
213
229
231
242
259
2618
273
283
2921
3019
3112
323
339
342
357
3616
373
3816
395
404
4114
424
438
4428
454
465
472
485
4911
37.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.3082191780821918
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners45
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Then, a small, genuine smile"
ratio0.011
4.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences93
matches
0"She shook the water from"
1"She needed a drink."
2"She sat on a stool"
3"It scraped against her memory,"
4"Her hand, halfway to pulling"
5"She turned her head slowly."
6"His hair was auburn streaked"
7"He moved with a deliberate,"
8"His hazel eyes, sharp and"
9"He didn't smile."
10"He didn't gasp."
11"He just looked, his gaze"
12"He reached for a bottle"
13"She watched the amber liquid"
14"He limped around the end"
15"He didn't offer his hand."
16"He didn't need to."
17"It was the name he"
18"He signalled the barback—a gangly"
19"She needed that heat."
ratio0.538
19.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences93
matches
0"Rain slicked the Soho cobblestones,"
1"The Raven’s Nest."
2"A pretentious name for a"
3"Aurora pushed the heavy oak"
4"The air inside smelled of"
5"She shook the water from"
6"She needed a drink."
7"Something to burn away the"
8"She sat on a stool"
9"The bar top was polished"
10"The voice was gravel and"
11"It scraped against her memory,"
12"Her hand, halfway to pulling"
13"She turned her head slowly."
14"The man behind the bar"
15"His hair was auburn streaked"
16"A beard, neatly trimmed, framed"
17"He moved with a deliberate,"
18"The words tumbled out before"
19"Silas Blackwood paused, the cloth"
ratio0.882
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Before she became Rory."
1"Before she became anyone else."
2"When they were alone again,"
ratio0.032
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Low jazz curled from the speakers, something slow and melancholic that seemed to hang in the rafters with the dust."
1"Something to burn away the lingering adrenaline of the move, the endless boxes, the crushing weight of a city that felt too large and too small all at once."
2"He just looked, his gaze dissecting her face, tracing the new lines in her forehead, the sharper angle of her cheekbones."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas stood, his knee popping loudly"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.4359%