Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHBJ4QT9D494AAGZJYS51

Run Details

Duration:
42.7s
Cost:
$0.106890

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood silent against the October sky, their branches reaching like skeletal fingers into the darkness. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped off the path, her breath misting in the cold air. The Heartstone pendant lay heavy against her chest, its usual faint warmth now pulsing with an urgency that had drawn her from her flat above Silas' bar. She'd been here before, of course. The Fae Grove existed somewhere between the mundane park and something else entirely, but finding it was never straightforward. The standing stones that marked its boundary only appeared when they wanted to be found. A twig snapped behind her. Aurora froze, listening. The sound came again, deliberate and measured, like footsteps matching her pace. She forced herself to keep walking, maintaining the same rhythm while her pulse hammered in her throat. The pendant grew warmer. "Just a deer," she whispered, though the words felt hollow. Richmond Park had plenty of deer, but they didn't follow people. They didn't walk with such careful precision. The darkness pressed closer as she moved deeper into the trees. Her phone's flashlight carved a narrow tunnel through the blackness, making the shadows beyond seem deeper by contrast. The familiar path looked wrong somehow—the oak she usually passed on the left now loomed on her right, and the fallen log she'd stepped over countless times was nowhere to be seen. The footsteps stopped. Aurora turned slowly, sweeping her light across the empty path behind her. Nothing. Just trees and darkness and her own ragged breathing. She waited, counting her heartbeats. One. Two. Three. The silence stretched taut as a wire. A branch creaked overhead. Not from wind—there was no wind tonight. The sound came again, a groan of wood under weight, as if something large had settled onto the limb. Her light jerked upward, catching only swaying leaves. The pendant burned against her skin. She pressed forward, abandoning caution for speed. The standing stones had to be close. They always appeared when she needed them most, when the barrier between worlds grew thin. But tonight the forest seemed to fold in on itself, paths doubling back, landmarks shifting when she wasn't looking directly at them. A whisper drifted through the trees, too soft to make out words but unmistakably a voice. Then another, and another, until the darkness hummed with barely audible conversation. The voices overlapped, some speaking in English, others in languages she didn't recognize, all of them wrong in a way that made her teeth ache. Aurora stumbled into a clearing she didn't remember. Moonlight filtered through the canopy, painting everything in shades of silver and shadow. The ground was carpeted with wildflowers—impossible given the season—their petals glowing faintly in the darkness. She recognized this wrongness. The Grove was bleeding through, but something had torn the careful boundaries that usually contained it. Movement flickered at the edge of her vision. She spun, catching a glimpse of something tall and wrong-jointed disappearing behind an oak. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, though the words remained maddeningly unclear. The pendant blazed now, hot enough to hurt. Aurora grabbed it through her shirt, gasping at the heat. This wasn't its normal warning about Hel portals. This was something else, something the artifact recognized as a threat beyond its usual purpose. She pressed on across the clearing, fighting the urge to run. Running would acknowledge the wrongness, would give it power. The flowers brushed against her jeans with a sound like fingernails on silk. A figure stood at the far edge of the clearing. Aurora's light caught it full on—a person, or something wearing the shape of one. It faced away from her, perfectly still, dressed in clothes that might have been modern or might have been centuries old. The fabric seemed to shift and blur when she tried to focus on it. "Hello?" The word came out as a croak. The figure didn't move. Didn't breathe. Aurora circled wide, keeping her distance while trying to see its face. The whispers rose to a crescendo, urgent now, almost angry. As she moved, she realized the figure was turning too, maintaining the same angle, never letting her see more than its back. Her foot caught on something soft. She looked down to find a jacket—modern, North Face, the kind hikers wore. Fresh mud clung to it. A few feet away lay a backpack, its contents scattered across the flowers. A wallet had fallen open, revealing a driver's license that gleamed in her phone light. The photo showed a young woman, smiling. The issue date was last month. The whispers stopped. In the sudden silence, Aurora heard breathing that wasn't her own. Slow, measured, coming from directly behind her. She closed her eyes, gripping the pendant hard enough to cut into her palm. The standing stones had to be close. They had to be. When she opened her eyes, the figure was gone. But the breathing continued, and now she could feel it, cold against the back of her neck. Something touched her shoulder—not quite a hand, the pressure all wrong, too many points of contact. The pendant flared with heat so intense she cried out, jerking away. Light exploded from the stone, crimson and blinding. The thing behind her made a sound like tearing metal, and the pressure vanished. Aurora ran.
total_cost0.10689

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount902
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"measured"
2"footsteps"
3"pulse"
4"familiar"
5"loomed"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"whisper"
9"flickered"
10"silk"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords894
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount888
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
October1
Heartstone1
Fae1
Grove2
English1
Hel1
North1
Face1
Aurora9
persons
0"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"English"
globalScore0.993
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a hand, the pressure all wrong, too many points of contact"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount894
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean33.11
std19.53
cv0.59
sampleLengths
066
140
237
34
428
561
63
737
838
96
1051
1153
1256
1334
1441
1533
1610
1749
188
1950
2052
2113
223
2343
2442
2534
262
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"was gone"
78.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs165
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"was bleeding"
2"was turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences83
ratio0.072
matches
0"The familiar path looked wrong somehow—the oak she usually passed on the left now loomed on her right, and the fallen log she'd stepped over countless times was nowhere to be seen."
1"Not from wind—there was no wind tonight."
2"The ground was carpeted with wildflowers—impossible given the season—their petals glowing faintly in the darkness."
3"Aurora's light caught it full on—a person, or something wearing the shape of one."
4"She looked down to find a jacket—modern, North Face, the kind hikers wore."
5"Something touched her shoulder—not quite a hand, the pressure all wrong, too many points of contact."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount65
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay heavy against her"
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.03076923076923077
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean10.77
std6.27
cv0.582
sampleLengths
021
118
227
36
419
515
65
73
812
917
104
1110
1211
137
1411
1518
1632
173
1812
191
209
215
221
231
241
257
264
277
2819
298
306
317
327
3315
3422
3516
3612
3725
388
3913
4015
414
4216
438
4414
4512
468
4710
488
4915
49.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3493975903614458
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners29
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just trees and darkness and"
1"Then another, and another, until"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences77
matches
0"She'd been here before, of"
1"She forced herself to keep"
2"she whispered, though the words"
3"They didn't walk with such"
4"Her phone's flashlight carved a"
5"She waited, counting her heartbeats."
6"Her light jerked upward, catching"
7"She pressed forward, abandoning caution"
8"They always appeared when she"
9"She recognized this wrongness."
10"She spun, catching a glimpse"
11"She pressed on across the"
12"It faced away from her,"
13"Her foot caught on something"
14"She looked down to find"
15"She closed her eyes, gripping"
16"They had to be."
ratio0.221
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences77
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
2"The Heartstone pendant lay heavy"
3"She'd been here before, of"
4"The Fae Grove existed somewhere"
5"The standing stones that marked"
6"A twig snapped behind her."
7"Aurora froze, listening."
8"The sound came again, deliberate"
9"She forced herself to keep"
10"The pendant grew warmer."
11"she whispered, though the words"
12"Richmond Park had plenty of"
13"They didn't walk with such"
14"The darkness pressed closer as"
15"Her phone's flashlight carved a"
16"The familiar path looked wrong"
17"The footsteps stopped."
18"Aurora turned slowly, sweeping her"
19"She waited, counting her heartbeats."
ratio0.857
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The sound came again, a groan of wood under weight, as if something large had settled onto the limb."
1"The voices overlapped, some speaking in English, others in languages she didn't recognize, all of them wrong in a way that made her teeth ache."
2"It faced away from her, perfectly still, dressed in clothes that might have been modern or might have been centuries old."
3"A wallet had fallen open, revealing a driver's license that gleamed in her phone light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, though the words felt hollow"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
76.3778%