Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHMYJXFTFFR0S8V6D6MQ3

Run Details

Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.011242
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest hummed its familiar frequency as Rory pushed through the door, shoulders hunched against the October drizzle. She'd meant to slip upstairs to her flat without stopping, but Silas had texted about a delivery mix-up that needed sorting. The kitchen had packed someone else's order into her bag three streets back. The bar was quiet for a Friday evening. Only a handful of patrons scattered across mismatched tables, nursing their drinks like secrets. Rory made for the counter, already composing an apology for whatever administrative disaster awaited her, when she stopped. The woman at the bar held a gin and tonic at shoulder height, her forearm flexed with the casual confidence of someone who'd spent years at the gym. Her hair fell in fashionable waves past her collarbone—dyed a copper-auburn that caught the amber light. But it was the posture that caught Rory. Chin tilted up. Eyes scanning the room with the kind of assessment that didn't miss much. Recognition hit like a cold floor. "Christ. Is that Eleanor?" The woman's glass froze halfway to her lips. She turned, and for a moment her composure cracked—just a hairline fracture, but enough to let Rory see the surprise underneath. "Rory?" Eleanor Clarke set her drink down with deliberate precision. She slid from her barstool and stood, and the motion was all sleek assembly. Her clothes looked expensive in that understated way that suggested someone had advised her on them. Black wool trousers. A cream silk blouse with pearl buttons. Nothing like the thrifted band t-shirts and charity shop blazers Rory remembered from university. "I didn't expect—" Eleanor stopped, one hand extending halfway, then withdrawing. "It's been what, six years?" "Seven," Rory said. The number surprised her by sitting so precisely in her mouth. "Since graduation." They'd been inseparable once. The kind of friends who'd shared a cramped student house in Cathays, stayed up until four in the morning dissecting philosophy essays and terrible dating decisions, borrowed each other's clothes so often that ownership became theoretical. Eleanor had been wild then—sharp-tongued and reckless, the kind of person who'd convinced Rory to climb onto the university's glass roof just to see how Cardiff looked from up there. Eleanor's smile emerged cautiously, like she was testing whether Rory's face was trustworthy. "You're living here? In London?" "Upstairs. I rent a flat from Silas." "You work for a bar owner?" The phrasing landed strange. Rory pulled out the adjacent stool and settled onto it, creating a barrier of casual distance between them. "I do deliveries for the Golden Empress, a few streets over. Silas lets me rent cheap in exchange for the occasional favour." "That sounds very you," Eleanor said. Not unkindly, but there was something in it—a flatness, an assessment delivered from behind glass. "Always sorting yourself out in unconventional ways." "And you?" Rory gestured at her. "The corporate look suits you." Eleanor's laugh was short, brittle. She picked up her gin and tonic again, and Rory noticed her nails were done in a nude French manicure—the kind that cost forty quid at least. Eleanor's nails used to be bitten to the quick, decorated with chipped black varnish. "I'm in property development," Eleanor said. "London, mostly. Some overseas investment portfolios." "That's brilliant. That's really—" Rory paused. The words felt hollow in her mouth. "You always said you'd do something like that. Remember? When we were pissed on that cheap wine in the student kitchen, you said you'd buy up whole buildings and—" "I remember what I said," Eleanor cut in. She took a long sip of her drink. "I also remember what I meant to do and what actually had to happen." The subtext hung between them like cigarette smoke. Rory turned to signal Silas for a drink, catching his eye from where he stood at the far end of the bar. He read the situation with the efficiency of someone trained to read rooms, and brought her a bottle of Peroni without being asked. "So what's keeping you in London?" Eleanor asked. "I'd have thought you'd go home eventually. Back to Cardiff. I imagine your parents still expect it." The way Eleanor said it—measured and careful—suggested she'd asked about Rory at some point. Or at least, she was fishing for information to fill whatever gaps the years had carved into their shared history. "I'm not going back," Rory said. She twisted the bottle's cap and took a drink. "Left Cardiff for a reason." "Yes, I heard." Eleanor glanced away, and in that moment, Rory saw something flicker—discomfort, maybe, or guilt. "Your ex. The one you were with at graduation." The fact that Eleanor knew this information, knew it by name apparently, rankled in an unexpected way. She'd imagined their separation as clean, a simple fracture where they both moved away and forgot in parallel. But Eleanor hadn't forgotten. Eleanor had kept tabs. "How did you—" "I saw your mum at Tesco in Cardiff about three years ago," Eleanor said quickly. "We talked for ages. She mentioned everything. About Evan, about you leaving. She seemed worried." Rory's jaw tightened. The betrayal was strange—not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal disasters to anyone who'd once been invited to family dinners. "My mum tends to overshare," Rory said. "She was being a mum," Eleanor replied, and something in her voice shifted. It softened, just fractionally. "She still thinks the world of you, you know. Spoke about you like you'd hung the moon." The glass in Rory's hand suddenly felt very fragile. She set it down carefully. "What about you?" she asked. "You haven't been home much, I'd guess." Eleanor's expression closed like a door. She looked back at her gin and tonic, watching the ice cubes settle in the liquid. "My parents are disappointed in me," she said flatly. "Or rather, they were. They've moved past disappointment into something quieter. Resignation, maybe. I'm not the daughter they imagined anymore, and I think they've made peace with it. There's not much to go back to when you've already proved you're not the person they remember." Something in those words—the way Eleanor had arranged them, the rhythm of defeat underneath—made Rory understand that she was hearing something Eleanor didn't usually say aloud. The corporate shell could be stripped away sometimes, it seemed. "Is that what the property thing is?" Rory asked. "The thing they wanted?" "No," Eleanor said. "The thing I wanted. Or thought I wanted. It's complicated." She finally turned to face Rory fully, and her eyes—still that strange grey-green that could look almost silver in certain light—held something that looked like exhaustion. "You know how it was. The pressure. The expectations. My parents wanted me to be successful, stable, and I thought that meant property portfolios and wine tasting events and not calling my university friends because I was too busy building a life that looked good from the outside." Rory felt something sharp catch in her chest. "We were supposed to stay in touch." "I know." "You could have messaged. Called. Even once." "I know," Eleanor repeated, and this time her voice was smaller. "I was angry at myself, not at you. You stayed in the city we'd made plans for, and I just... left. Physically and every other way. And then enough time passed that reaching out felt like admitting how badly I'd handled the whole thing." Eleanor wrapped her hands around her glass. "So I didn't. I just let the silence happen. It was easier than explaining myself." Rory stared at her reflection in the dark glass beneath the bar's counter. The woman looking back at her looked tired. She'd been tired for a long time, she thought. Tired from the things she'd left behind, the things she'd chosen not to carry forward. "I'm angry too," Rory said quietly. "But not at you. I'm angry that we had something and we just... let it go." Eleanor's hand moved across the space between them, stopping short of touching Rory's wrist. It was the nearest thing to an embrace she could manage in a public bar on a Friday night, dressed in expensive clothes that didn't quite fit her anymore. "I don't know how to fix this," Eleanor said. "Neither do I," Rory admitted. The neon sign outside hummed its eternal frequency. Neither woman reached for her drink.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
43.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Eleanor glanced away [away]"
1"Eleanor said quickly [quickly]"
2"she said flatly [flatly]"
3"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.157
71.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"cautiously"
2"very"
3"really"
4"quickly"
5"suddenly"
6"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1413
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanning"
2"silk"
3"measured"
4"flicker"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1396
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount922
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eleanor"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory27
October1
Silas2
Friday2
Clarke1
Cathays1
Cardiff1
Eleanor26
French1
Peroni1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Clarke"
5"Eleanor"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.036
windowScore0
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"new it by name apparently, rankled in an unex"
1"looked like exhaustion"
2"quite fit her anymore"
56.73% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.433
wordCount1396
matches
0"Not unkindly, but there was something in it"
1"not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal dis"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean27.92
std20.37
cv0.73
sampleLengths
058
140
268
36
44
529
61
763
816
916
1070
1118
127
136
1444
1528
1611
1746
1812
1942
2030
2153
2225
2334
2420
2526
2643
273
2830
2929
307
3134
3214
3312
3422
3554
3636
3713
3887
3915
402
417
4255
4322
4445
4522
4643
479
485
4914
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences84
matches
0"being asked"
1"been invited"
2"been tired"
82.35% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was testing"
1"was fishing"
2"was hearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences113
ratio0.088
matches
0"Her hair fell in fashionable waves past her collarbone—dyed a copper-auburn that caught the amber light."
1"She turned, and for a moment her composure cracked—just a hairline fracture, but enough to let Rory see the surprise underneath."
2"Eleanor had been wild then—sharp-tongued and reckless, the kind of person who'd convinced Rory to climb onto the university's glass roof just to see how Cardiff looked from up there."
3"Not unkindly, but there was something in it—a flatness, an assessment delivered from behind glass."
4"She picked up her gin and tonic again, and Rory noticed her nails were done in a nude French manicure—the kind that cost forty quid at least."
5"The way Eleanor said it—measured and careful—suggested she'd asked about Rory at some point."
6"\"Yes, I heard.\" Eleanor glanced away, and in that moment, Rory saw something flicker—discomfort, maybe, or guilt."
7"The betrayal was strange—not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal disasters to anyone who'd once been invited to family dinners."
8"Something in those words—the way Eleanor had arranged them, the rhythm of defeat underneath—made Rory understand that she was hearing something Eleanor didn't usually say aloud."
9"\"The thing I wanted. Or thought I wanted. It's complicated.\" She finally turned to face Rory fully, and her eyes—still that strange grey-green that could look almost silver in certain light—held something that looked like exhaustion."
96.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount939
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.043663471778487756
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01703940362087327
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.35
std9.35
cv0.756
sampleLengths
024
121
213
38
414
518
628
716
88
93
1013
116
124
138
1421
151
169
1714
1816
193
207
2114
2211
235
243
2511
262
274
2836
2930
3013
315
327
336
344
3518
3622
376
3815
397
406
415
425
4327
4414
456
466
476
487
4929
57.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.36283185840707965
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners41
46.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"Only a handful of patrons"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences72
matches
0"She'd meant to slip upstairs"
1"Her hair fell in fashionable"
2"She turned, and for a"
3"She slid from her barstool"
4"Her clothes looked expensive in"
5"They'd been inseparable once."
6"She picked up her gin"
7"She took a long sip"
8"He read the situation with"
9"She twisted the bottle's cap"
10"She'd imagined their separation as"
11"It softened, just fractionally."
12"She set it down carefully."
13"She looked back at her"
14"she said flatly"
15"She finally turned to face"
16"She'd been tired for a"
17"It was the nearest thing"
ratio0.25
8.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences72
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"She'd meant to slip upstairs"
2"The kitchen had packed someone"
3"The bar was quiet for"
4"Rory made for the counter,"
5"The woman at the bar"
6"Her hair fell in fashionable"
7"Chin tilted up."
8"Eyes scanning the room with"
9"Recognition hit like a cold"
10"The woman's glass froze halfway"
11"She turned, and for a"
12"Eleanor Clarke set her drink"
13"She slid from her barstool"
14"Her clothes looked expensive in"
15"A cream silk blouse with"
16"Nothing like the thrifted band"
17"Eleanor stopped, one hand extending"
18"The number surprised her by"
19"They'd been inseparable once."
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her hair fell in fashionable waves past her collarbone—dyed a copper-auburn that caught the amber light."
1"The kind of friends who'd shared a cramped student house in Cathays, stayed up until four in the morning dissecting philosophy essays and terrible dating decisi…"
2"Eleanor had been wild then—sharp-tongued and reckless, the kind of person who'd convinced Rory to climb onto the university's glass roof just to see how Cardiff…"
3"The betrayal was strange—not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal disasters to anyone who'd once been invited to family…"
4"It was the nearest thing to an embrace she could manage in a public bar on a Friday night, dressed in expensive clothes that didn't quite fit her anymore."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eleanor repeated (repeat)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.314
leniency0.627
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.078
73.0390%