| 43.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eleanor glanced away [away]" | | 1 | "Eleanor said quickly [quickly]" | | 2 | "she said flatly [flatly]" | | 3 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.19 | | effectiveRatio | 0.157 | |
| 71.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "suddenly" | | 6 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 78.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1413 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "flicker" | | 5 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1396 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 922 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eleanor" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Rory | 27 | | October | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Friday | 2 | | Clarke | 1 | | Cathays | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eleanor | 26 | | French | 1 | | Peroni | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Clarke" | | 5 | "Eleanor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.036 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "new it by name apparently, rankled in an unex" | | 1 | "looked like exhaustion" | | 2 | "quite fit her anymore" |
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| 56.73% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.433 | | wordCount | 1396 | | matches | | 0 | "Not unkindly, but there was something in it" | | 1 | "not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal dis" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 27.92 | | std | 20.37 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 54 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 87 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 55 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 92.73% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "being asked" | | 1 | "been invited" | | 2 | "been tired" |
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| 82.35% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was testing" | | 1 | "was fishing" | | 2 | "was hearing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 113 | | ratio | 0.088 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hair fell in fashionable waves past her collarbone—dyed a copper-auburn that caught the amber light." | | 1 | "She turned, and for a moment her composure cracked—just a hairline fracture, but enough to let Rory see the surprise underneath." | | 2 | "Eleanor had been wild then—sharp-tongued and reckless, the kind of person who'd convinced Rory to climb onto the university's glass roof just to see how Cardiff looked from up there." | | 3 | "Not unkindly, but there was something in it—a flatness, an assessment delivered from behind glass." | | 4 | "She picked up her gin and tonic again, and Rory noticed her nails were done in a nude French manicure—the kind that cost forty quid at least." | | 5 | "The way Eleanor said it—measured and careful—suggested she'd asked about Rory at some point." | | 6 | "\"Yes, I heard.\" Eleanor glanced away, and in that moment, Rory saw something flicker—discomfort, maybe, or guilt." | | 7 | "The betrayal was strange—not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal disasters to anyone who'd once been invited to family dinners." | | 8 | "Something in those words—the way Eleanor had arranged them, the rhythm of defeat underneath—made Rory understand that she was hearing something Eleanor didn't usually say aloud." | | 9 | "\"The thing I wanted. Or thought I wanted. It's complicated.\" She finally turned to face Rory fully, and her eyes—still that strange grey-green that could look almost silver in certain light—held something that looked like exhaustion." |
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| 96.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 939 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.043663471778487756 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01703940362087327 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 113 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 113 | | mean | 12.35 | | std | 9.35 | | cv | 0.756 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 57.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.36283185840707965 | | totalSentences | 113 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a handful of patrons" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd meant to slip upstairs" | | 1 | "Her hair fell in fashionable" | | 2 | "She turned, and for a" | | 3 | "She slid from her barstool" | | 4 | "Her clothes looked expensive in" | | 5 | "They'd been inseparable once." | | 6 | "She picked up her gin" | | 7 | "She took a long sip" | | 8 | "He read the situation with" | | 9 | "She twisted the bottle's cap" | | 10 | "She'd imagined their separation as" | | 11 | "It softened, just fractionally." | | 12 | "She set it down carefully." | | 13 | "She looked back at her" | | 14 | "she said flatly" | | 15 | "She finally turned to face" | | 16 | "She'd been tired for a" | | 17 | "It was the nearest thing" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 8.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon sign of" | | 1 | "She'd meant to slip upstairs" | | 2 | "The kitchen had packed someone" | | 3 | "The bar was quiet for" | | 4 | "Rory made for the counter," | | 5 | "The woman at the bar" | | 6 | "Her hair fell in fashionable" | | 7 | "Chin tilted up." | | 8 | "Eyes scanning the room with" | | 9 | "Recognition hit like a cold" | | 10 | "The woman's glass froze halfway" | | 11 | "She turned, and for a" | | 12 | "Eleanor Clarke set her drink" | | 13 | "She slid from her barstool" | | 14 | "Her clothes looked expensive in" | | 15 | "A cream silk blouse with" | | 16 | "Nothing like the thrifted band" | | 17 | "Eleanor stopped, one hand extending" | | 18 | "The number surprised her by" | | 19 | "They'd been inseparable once." |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Her hair fell in fashionable waves past her collarbone—dyed a copper-auburn that caught the amber light." | | 1 | "The kind of friends who'd shared a cramped student house in Cathays, stayed up until four in the morning dissecting philosophy essays and terrible dating decisi…" | | 2 | "Eleanor had been wild then—sharp-tongued and reckless, the kind of person who'd convinced Rory to climb onto the university's glass roof just to see how Cardiff…" | | 3 | "The betrayal was strange—not Eleanor's fault, but tied up with her mother's tendency to broadcast personal disasters to anyone who'd once been invited to family…" | | 4 | "It was the nearest thing to an embrace she could manage in a public bar on a Friday night, dressed in expensive clothes that didn't quite fit her anymore." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eleanor repeated (repeat)" | | 1 | "Rory admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.314 | | leniency | 0.627 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.078 | |