Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHXFJRECBN7NNRNMNE1SF

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.020306
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain in Soho never seemed to wash the streets clean; it merely slicked the grime into a reflective sheen, catching the neon green glow of the sign above The Raven’s Nest. Inside, the air was thick with the smell of beeswax and stale tobacco, a aroma that seemed to seep from the dark mahogany panelling. Rory sat on a stool at the far end of the bar, a glass of cheap whiskey sweating a ring onto the coaster. She twisted the tumbler, watching the amber liquid swirl. Her shift at the Golden Empress had ended two hours ago, but the damp chill in her bones hadn't quite left. She pulled her sleeves down over her wrists, hiding the small, crescent-shaped scar. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a heavy crystal glass with a linen cloth. His movements were precise, practiced. He didn't look at her, but she felt the weight of his attention, a subtle pressure he always carried. He placed the glass on the shelf, the clink barely audible over the low hum of the refrigerator. "You're staring," Rory said, not lifting her gaze from the drink. "I'm observing." "Same difference." "There's a difference." Silas leaned against the back shelf, his left leg stiffening as he settled his weight. He wore his silver signet ring, the light catching the metal as he tapped his fingers against the wood. "You've been sitting there for forty minutes. The ice has melted. You're not drinking it, you're just punishing it." "Just thinking." "Dangerous habit." The heavy wooden door creaked open, the sound cutting through the jazz playing softly from the corner speakers. A gust of wind blew in, carrying the scent of wet asphalt and exhaust. Rory didn't turn around. She didn't care about the latest customer looking for a hideaway or a stiff drink. She heard the shake of an umbrella, the heavy thud of wet boots on the floorboards. "Evening, Silas. Close the door, will you? It's freezing out there." The voice hit Rory like a physical blow. It was a voice from another life, a life of lecture halls and libraries, of padded rooms and expensive arguments. It was smooth, confident, layered with an affected sincerity that made her stomach turn. She spun the stool slowly. Julian stood by the entrance, shaking droplets from a black trench coat. He looked older. The softness of university life had been carved away, leaving cheekbones that were sharper, eyes that were more guarded. His hair was styled with precision, and the suit underneath the coat cost more than Rory earned in three months. He held himself with the rigid posture of a man who spent his days convincing people he was right. He looked up, his eyes scanning the room before landing on the bar. They locked onto hers. The recognition was instant, a flicker of shock followed by a slow, spreading smile that didn't quite reach his eyes. "Rory?" Silas stopped polishing. He watched the exchange, his body shifting imperceptibly, placing himself between the newcomer and his employee. "Julian." The name felt foreign in her mouth. "I heard you moved to the City." "Last year. Clerkship turned junior partnership." He walked to the bar, his gaze never leaving her face. "God, look at you. It’s been what, three years? Since the summer before our finals?" "Four." "Four." He signalled to Silas. "Whiskey, single malt. No ice. And put her drink on my tab." "She's fine," Silas said. His voice was low, gravel grinding together. Julian glanced at the bartender, dismissing him with a polite nod before turning back to Rory. "I'm buying, Rory. It’s the least I can do for an old friend. We lost touch. You just... vanished." "I didn't vanish. I moved." "To London. Eva told me." Julian leaned an elbow on the bar, invading her space. He smelled of sandalwood and expensive cologne. "She said you were taking a gap year. But a gap year doesn't usually last four years. Pre-Lace was practically handed to you. You had the mind for it. We all said you'd be on the bench before you were thirty." Rory gripped the glass tighter. The condensation was slick against her palm. "People change." "Do they?" Julian looked her up and down, taking in the cheap trousers, the faded t-shirt, the lack of makeup. "You look different. Harder. You used to be... softer." "Maybe I was tired of being soft." Silas placed a coaster on the wood in front of Julian and set the whiskey down with a heavy thud. He didn't move away. Julian ignored the drink. He focused on Rory, his expression shifting to something resembling pity. It was a look he had probably perfected in court, designed to dismantle witnesses. "You know, I ran into Evan a few months ago. Back in Cardiff." Rory’s breath hitched, just once. Silas’s eyes narrowed. "He asked about you," Julian continued, oblivious to the sudden drop in temperature. "He wasn't in great shape. Said he made mistakes. We all make mistakes, don't we? But leaving the degree... leaving everything you worked for... that seems like a mistake you can't take back." "I like my life," Rory said. Her voice was steady, but she could feel a vein throbbing in her temple. "Do you?" Julian gestured around the dim room. "This? Delivering takeaway, living in a flat above a pub in Soho? It’s a bit of a fall from grace, isn't it? For the girl who had the highest GPA in the cohort." "It's honest work." "It's stagnation." Julian took a sip of his whiskey, savouring it. "We were going to change the world, remember? You and me, debating until sunrise in the student union. You had a fire in you then. This..." He waved a hand at her. "This is just embers." "Embers can burn you just as well as a flame," Silas said quietly. Julian finally looked at the older man, annoyance flickering across his face. "I'm talking to the lady." "And she's listening. But I'm watching." Silas wiped the counter with a slow, deliberate motion. "She doesn't need you to audit her life choices, son. She needs a drink or she needs the door." Julian chuckled, a dry, humourless sound. "Protective, isn't he? You always did collect strays, Rory. First that messed-up boyfriend, now... barkeeps." Rory stood up. The movement was sudden, scraping the stool legs against the floor. She looked Julian in the eye, her bright blue gaze cold and unyielding. She didn't see the confident lawyer. She saw the boy who used to correct her grammar in the cafeteria, the man who turned a blind eye to bruises because they didn't fit his narrative of success. "You don't know anything about my life, Julian. You see what you want to see. A tragedy. A warning tale." "Isn't it?" He tilted his head, studying her like a specimen in a jar. "You're wasting that brain, Rory. It's tragic. And the worst part is, you know it. I can see it in your eyes. You're tired." "I'm not tired of my life," she said, stepping closer to the bar, forcing him to lean back. "I'm tired of people like you. People who think they know where everyone belongs just because they're standing on the ladder." "It's not a ladder, Rory. It's a structure. Without it, things collapse." He pulled a card from his breast pocket, smooth and white, embossed with gold lettering. He placed it next to her empty glass. "If you ever get sick of the damp. My firm handles a lot of pro bono work. We could use a researcher with your... background." Rory looked at the card. It lay there, a white flag on a dark battlefield. Silas reached out, his hand moving with the speed of a man who had spent years defusing situations. He picked up the card between two fingers, looked at the name, and dropped it into the bin behind the bar. "Recycling's on Tuesday," Silas said. Julian stared at the bin, then at Silas, his face flushing a dull red. He looked back at Rory, waiting for her to apologise, to laugh it off, to be the girl he remembered. She didn't move. She didn't speak. She just watched him, her expression unreadable, her hands loose at her sides. The air between them felt heavy, filled with the dust of years they couldn't sweep away. "Right," Julian muttered. He downed the rest of his whiskey, grimacing as it burned. "Well. It was... seeing you." He turned and walked to the door, his coat flaring behind him. He didn't look back. The door swung shut, the latch clicking with finality. Rory stood there for a long moment, staring at the space where he had been. The rain drummed harder against the glass, distorting the lights of the street outside. "He seems pleasant," Silas said. He picked up the cloth again. "He's successful," Rory said, sitting back down. The energy that had held her upright drained away, leaving her slumped against the bar. "That's all that matters to him." "Success is a relative term." "Is it?" She traced the rim of her glass. "He's right about one thing. I was good at it. The law. The arguing." "You're still good at it. I've seen you talk down a delivery driver who wouldn't take 'no' for an answer." Rory snorted, a short, sharp sound. "That's not the same." Silas poured a measure of whiskey from a bottle on the bottom shelf—a bottle he kept for himself, not for the customers—and slid it over to her. "You didn't take the card." "No." "Why?" She looked at the amber liquid in the new glass. "Because I don't want to be the person I was when I knew him. She was smart. She was ambitious. But she was scared." "And now?" Rory picked up the glass. She looked at her reflection in the mirror behind the bottles, seeing the dark circles under her eyes, the sharp angle of her jaw. "Now I'm just delivering Chinese food." "You're surviving," Silas said, his voice softening. "And there's a difference between surviving and stagnating. Don't let a man in a suit tell you otherwise." Rory drank. The whiskey was smoky, peaty, grounding. It burned her throat, but it was a clean burn. Outside, the neon sign buzzed, a constant, electric heartbeat in the rainy London night. She sat with her memories, letting them settle like dust, heavy but manageable, and listened to the silence of the empty room.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:21:18.971Z" 2/19/2026, 12:21:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Julian gestured around [around]"
1"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.061
94.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1759
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1759
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"structure"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"crystal"
2"weight"
3"stomach"
4"scanning"
5"flicker"
6"could feel"
7"structure"
8"unreadable"
9"traced"
10"electric"
11"silence"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1755
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1163
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas15
Rory18
Julian14
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Empress"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Julian"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"London"
globalScore0.726
windowScore0
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"aroma that seemed to seep from the dark mahogany panelling"
1"quite left"
2"quite reach his eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1755
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean25.43
std18.96
cv0.745
sampleLengths
056
166
256
311
42
52
656
72
82
932
1035
1111
1242
135
1473
1537
161
1719
1815
1932
201
2117
2211
2335
245
2563
2614
2729
287
2924
3042
318
3246
3320
3441
353
3647
3713
3817
3934
4021
4163
4220
4338
4439
4560
4615
4739
485
4934
98.45% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"been carved"
1"was styled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences145
ratio0.014
matches
0"The rain in Soho never seemed to wash the streets clean; it merely slicked the grime into a reflective sheen, catching the neon green glow of the sign above The Raven’s Nest."
1"Silas poured a measure of whiskey from a bottle on the bottom shelf—a bottle he kept for himself, not for the customers—and slid it over to her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1166
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.024013722126929673
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.00686106346483705
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean12.1
std8.05
cv0.665
sampleLengths
032
124
223
39
421
513
614
75
819
918
1011
112
122
1318
1419
1519
162
172
1818
1914
204
2115
2216
2311
248
2520
2614
275
2812
293
3019
3120
3219
3313
344
3520
361
373
3816
398
407
4117
4215
431
445
4512
464
477
4816
4919
40.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3103448275862069
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.94% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences97
matches
0"She twisted the tumbler, watching"
1"Her shift at the Golden"
2"She pulled her sleeves down"
3"His movements were precise, practiced."
4"He didn't look at her,"
5"He placed the glass on"
6"He wore his silver signet"
7"She didn't care about the"
8"She heard the shake of"
9"It was a voice from"
10"It was smooth, confident, layered"
11"She spun the stool slowly."
12"He looked older."
13"His hair was styled with"
14"He held himself with the"
15"He looked up, his eyes"
16"They locked onto hers."
17"He watched the exchange, his"
18"He walked to the bar,"
19"He signalled to Silas"
ratio0.505
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain in Soho never"
1"Rory sat on a stool"
2"She twisted the tumbler, watching"
3"Her shift at the Golden"
4"She pulled her sleeves down"
5"Silas stood behind the bar,"
6"His movements were precise, practiced."
7"He didn't look at her,"
8"He placed the glass on"
9"Rory said, not lifting her"
10"Silas leaned against the back"
11"He wore his silver signet"
12"The heavy wooden door creaked"
13"A gust of wind blew"
14"Rory didn't turn around."
15"She didn't care about the"
16"She heard the shake of"
17"The voice hit Rory like"
18"It was a voice from"
19"It was smooth, confident, layered"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
11.66% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Inside, the air was thick with the smell of beeswax and stale tobacco, a aroma that seemed to seep from the dark mahogany panelling."
1"It was smooth, confident, layered with an affected sincerity that made her stomach turn."
2"The softness of university life had been carved away, leaving cheekbones that were sharper, eyes that were more guarded."
3"He held himself with the rigid posture of a man who spent his days convincing people he was right."
4"He looked up, his eyes scanning the room before landing on the bar."
5"The recognition was instant, a flicker of shock followed by a slow, spreading smile that didn't quite reach his eyes."
6"He watched the exchange, his body shifting imperceptibly, placing himself between the newcomer and his employee."
7"He focused on Rory, his expression shifting to something resembling pity."
8"Silas reached out, his hand moving with the speed of a man who had spent years defusing situations."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, not lifting her gaze from the drink"
1"Silas said, his voice softening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Julian continued (continue)"
1"Julian muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.061
74.0473%