Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHXR4HPYF80V4HPV9Y5DE

Run Details

Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.001504
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, a relentless drumbeat that swallowed the rhythm of Quinn’s boots. She sprinted down the narrow alleyway, her breath hitching in her chest, the cold air stinging her lungs like broken glass. Wet asphalt slid beneath her feet, slick and treacherous, but her momentum carried her forward. She didn’t look at the fractured reflection of her face in the puddles; she kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead. The suspect weaved through the clusters of people huddled under awnings. A heavy coat he’d tucked into his waistband swung wide with every desperate step. He wasn't just running; he was fleeing something far worse than a failing breathalyzer test. Quinn knew the signs—the hunched shoulders, the darting glances. "Freeze!" The shout tore from her throat, raw and ragged. Her tactical training kicked in, her body snapping into a combat stance even as she pumped her legs. She reached for her sidearm, the leather strap of her holster damp against her hip. The figure didn't stop. He ducked under a wooden fence panel just ahead, disappearing into a shadowy recess that looked more like a ruin than an entrance. Quinn skidded to a halt, her boots squeaking against the wet brick. She peered around the corner, water dripping from the brim of her cap. A concrete door stood ajar, revealing a dark maw of an entrance. It was bolted shut from the inside, but the lock hadn't been shrouded in the heavy dampness that coated the rest of the city. Rainwater pooled near the threshold in unnatural, clean lines, defying the grime of the streets. She crouched, pressing her back against the damp wall. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a primal rhythm of survival. She tapped the comms device in her ear. Static. Just the hiss of electrical interference in the storm. *Useless. Just as useless as it was three years ago.* She looked at the open door. The dark interior smelled of ozone and copper. It wasn't the scent of sewage or rot; it smelled of magic. The kind of heavy, static-charged cold that made the hair on her arms stand up. Quinn vaulted over the fence, landing in a crouch on the other side. She crept forward, her military precision taking over. She reached for the doorframe, her gloved fingers tracing the rough concrete. To her left, a small, carved hole waited in the stone. Inside the hollow sat a small, bleached bone. A bone token. Just as the files indicated. But there were no crowds here, no tourists, no entry fee. The entrance to the Veil Market shifted locations every full moon, but some things remained constant. You needed a key. The suspect had access. He was already inside. Quinn pushed through the door. It clicked shut behind her, sealing the sounds of the city away instantly. The temperature dropped ten degrees in a heartbeat. The damp London chill was replaced by a stale, recycled air that smelled of strange spices and old iron. Torches lined the narrow passage, flames that burned with a sickly, violet hue. She stopped, pressing her hand against the stone to steady herself. The walls here were lined with rusted pipes that hummed with energy. This was beneath Camden, under the Tube station, where the very ground vibrated with the screech of trains miles above. The passage opened into a cavernous space, but it wasn't a cave. It was a series of tunnels carved into the bedrock, lit by flickering neon signs and guttering torches. Stalls lined the walls, arranged with a chaotic density that suggested organized crime. Vials of glowing liquids sat beside jars of dried, writhing herbs. Weapons of all shapes and descriptions—knives made of black glass, clubs wrapped in barbed wire—hung from hooks like meat in a butcher shop. She pulled her service weapon, checking the chamber. The click echoed loudly in the enclosed space. "He's close," she whispered, though she wasn't sure if anyone could hear her. The market was loud. A cacophony of bartering, hisses, and footsteps filled the air. A figure in a long, hooded cloak stood near the entrance, examining a stack of scrolls. The cloak was heavy, woven with a fabric that seemed to shift color in the gloom. Quinn watched the hood turn away. Her target was already twenty yards ahead, moving deeper into the maze of stalls. "Police!" she called out. Her voice didn't carry like she expected it to; the acoustics absorbed the volume, turning her command into a soft murmur. The hooded figure ignored her, heading for a stall selling strange alchemical apparatus. The suspect in the foreground turned a corner, moving toward a set of stairs leading down into a darker, lower level. Quinn tightened her grip on her gun. She needed backup. *South Yard, now.* But the silence of the comms device mocked her. She was alone in a den of supernatural criminals, and she had only seconds to decide. If she went back to the station, they would have to file the paperwork, notify the liaison, and wait for the appropriate supernatural task force. By then, the suspect would be gone, scattered into the ether. But if she followed him down into the belly of this beast, she walked into unknown territory where the laws of England didn't apply. She looked at the stall she’d passed. A woman with skin the color of obsidian sat there, mixing a bubbling potion. She didn't look up from her cauldron. The people in the market looked like refugees from a nightmare. They weren't afraid of a police uniform. They knew she didn't belong here. The suspect turned down the stairs. His silhouette was swallowed by the darkness. Quinn’s jaw tightened. The line of work had cost her too much. DS Morris hadn't died in a car crash. She knew that now, even if the official report said otherwise. He had been taken by something they hadn't seen in twenty years, and she suspected this market was the venue for business they preferred to keep in the shadows. She took a step forward, her boot crunching on something that crumbled like dry bones. The sounds of the market died down around her as heads turned. The collective gaze of the room pinned her to the spot like a specimen in a jar. She didn't flinch. Quinn adjusted her grip on her watch, the leather worn smooth against her palm, a grounding weight in the chaos. She walked toward the stairs, her eyes scanning the shadows for threats. The Veil Market was dangerous territory, a black market where the only coin that mattered was the bone token in her pocket. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of sulfur and anticipation. She stepped onto the first landing, the damp smell of the tunnel intensifying. The suspect was waiting for her on the floor below, a silhouette standing near a heavy iron door. There was no turning back now. She pressed the muzzle of her gun forward and began the descent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1176
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"maw"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"cacophony"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"fractured"
2"maw"
3"charged"
4"tracing"
5"chill"
6"vibrated"
7"chaotic"
8"echoed"
9"cacophony"
10"footsteps"
11"gloom"
12"silence"
13"weight"
14"scanning"
15"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords13
totalWords1172
ratio0.011
matches
0"Useless. Just as useless as it was three years ago."
1"South Yard, now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1168
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn9
Veil2
Market2
London1
Camden1
Tube1
Yard1
England1
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
1"London"
2"England"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"fabric that seemed to shift color in the gloom"
1"looked like refugees from a nightmare"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1172
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean39.07
std19.85
cv0.508
sampleLengths
072
149
21
342
452
551
638
710
841
952
1043
114
1258
1343
1477
1516
1627
1752
1825
1934
2038
2160
2252
2313
2460
2544
263
2754
2843
2918
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"was bolted"
1"been shrouded"
2"was replaced"
3"were lined"
4"was swallowed"
5"been taken"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was fleeing"
1"was waiting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences100
ratio0.06
matches
0"She didn’t look at the fractured reflection of her face in the puddles; she kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead."
1"He wasn't just running; he was fleeing something far worse than a failing breathalyzer test."
2"Quinn knew the signs—the hunched shoulders, the darting glances."
3"It wasn't the scent of sewage or rot; it smelled of magic."
4"Weapons of all shapes and descriptions—knives made of black glass, clubs wrapped in barbed wire—hung from hooks like meat in a butcher shop."
5"Her voice didn't carry like she expected it to; the acoustics absorbed the volume, turning her command into a soft murmur."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1172
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.017918088737201365
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005972696245733789
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean11.72
std5.95
cv0.508
sampleLengths
014
121
215
322
411
514
615
79
81
99
1018
1115
124
1323
1412
1513
1612
1724
1815
199
2011
218
221
239
241
259
266
278
2812
2915
3013
318
3212
3311
348
353
365
3711
3816
394
404
414
425
4313
448
4519
4613
4711
4812
4920
44.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners31
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just the hiss of electrical"
ratio0.01
59.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences97
matches
0"She sprinted down the narrow"
1"She didn’t look at the"
2"He wasn't just running; he"
3"Her tactical training kicked in,"
4"She reached for her sidearm,"
5"He ducked under a wooden"
6"She peered around the corner,"
7"It was bolted shut from"
8"She crouched, pressing her back"
9"Her heart hammered against her"
10"She tapped the comms device"
11"She looked at the open"
12"It wasn't the scent of"
13"She crept forward, her military"
14"She reached for the doorframe,"
15"You needed a key."
16"He was already inside."
17"It clicked shut behind her,"
18"She stopped, pressing her hand"
19"It was a series of"
ratio0.402
27.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences97
matches
0"She sprinted down the narrow"
1"She didn’t look at the"
2"The suspect weaved through the"
3"A heavy coat he’d tucked"
4"He wasn't just running; he"
5"Quinn knew the signs—the hunched"
6"The shout tore from her"
7"Her tactical training kicked in,"
8"She reached for her sidearm,"
9"The figure didn't stop."
10"He ducked under a wooden"
11"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
12"She peered around the corner,"
13"A concrete door stood ajar,"
14"It was bolted shut from"
15"Rainwater pooled near the threshold"
16"She crouched, pressing her back"
17"Her heart hammered against her"
18"She tapped the comms device"
19"She looked at the open"
ratio0.866
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences97
matches
0"Just as useless as it"
1"To her left, a small,"
2"Just as the files indicated."
3"If she went back to"
ratio0.041
84.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She sprinted down the narrow alleyway, her breath hitching in her chest, the cold air stinging her lungs like broken glass."
1"He ducked under a wooden fence panel just ahead, disappearing into a shadowy recess that looked more like a ruin than an entrance."
2"The damp London chill was replaced by a stale, recycled air that smelled of strange spices and old iron."
3"She took a step forward, her boot crunching on something that crumbled like dry bones."
4"The Veil Market was dangerous territory, a black market where the only coin that mattered was the bone token in her pocket."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
81.8655%