| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Lucien turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.282 | | leniency | 0.564 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 90.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1042 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "mask of indifference" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "beacon" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "mask of indifference" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "amidst" | | 10 | "predator" | | 11 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1038 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 666 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.2 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Savile | 1 | | Row | 1 | | Towers | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Ptolemy | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.899 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.32% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.927 | | wordCount | 1038 | | matches | | 0 | "not a crease in sight, but the air around him vibrated with a low, dangerous frequency" | | 1 | "Not hard enough to bruise, but firm enough to stop me cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 22.57 | | std | 15.42 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 34 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 45 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 50 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "For a moment, the animosity between us—the failed alliances, the arguments, the night six months ago that we never spoke of—crackled into something else." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 670 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 17 | | adverbRatio | 0.025373134328358207 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005970149253731343 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 12.21 | | std | 6.75 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 34 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 62.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.64% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "I pulled the door open," | | 1 | "His charcoal suit was immaculate," | | 2 | "I didn't step back" | | 3 | "I didn't invite him in." | | 4 | "I gripped the edge of" | | 5 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 6 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped against" | | 7 | "He stopped in the centre" | | 8 | "He turned slowly, his cane" | | 9 | "I slammed the door, the" | | 10 | "I crossed my arms, ignoring" | | 11 | "He moved closer." | | 12 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 13 | "I flinched, pulling my hand" | | 14 | "he said softly, his voice" | | 15 | "I forced a laugh, but" | | 16 | "He twitched the curtain aside" | | 17 | "He stepped into my personal" | | 18 | "I could feel the heat" | | 19 | "I turned towards the tiny" |
| | ratio | 0.491 | |
| 5.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Thefirst deadbolt screeched as I" | | 1 | "The second followed with a" | | 2 | "The third, a heavy brass" | | 3 | "I pulled the door open," | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 5 | "His charcoal suit was immaculate," | | 6 | "The amber iris of his" | | 7 | "I didn't step back" | | 8 | "I didn't invite him in." | | 9 | "I gripped the edge of" | | 10 | "He didn't wait for an" | | 11 | "His ivory-handled cane tapped against" | | 12 | "He stopped in the centre" | | 13 | "Towers of books, stacks of" | | 14 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed" | | 15 | "Lucien ignored the cat." | | 16 | "He turned slowly, his cane" | | 17 | "I slammed the door, the" | | 18 | "I crossed my arms, ignoring" | | 19 | "Lucien had a talent for" |
| | ratio | 0.909 | |
| 90.91% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Before I could demand specifics," |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "he said softly, his voice dropping an octave," | | 1 | "Lucien turned back, the light catching the sharp angle of his jaw" | | 2 | "He released, but his fingers trailed down to my wrist, lingering over the pulse point" | | 3 | "he roared, his human veneer shattering to reveal the predator beneath" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien sighed (sigh)" | | 1 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "he roared (roar)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.103 | | leniency | 0.205 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |