Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXHZSBX9Q5MX798JWBNS4N

Run Details

Duration:
4m 10s
Cost:
$0.006714
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed with a dying insect rhythm, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest and shook the rain from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. The air inside smelled of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper. Dim light filtered from brass sconces, illuminating walls papered with faded maps and black-and-white photographs of men in suits standing outside unmarked buildings. She moved toward the bar, her boots leaving damp prints on the floorboards. Behind the counter, a man wiped a glass with a rag that looked cleaner than the surface he cleaned. He paused when she approached. Hazel eyes locked onto bright blue ones. The rag stopped moving. Silas Blackwood set the glass down on the counter. The movement caused the light to catch the silver signet ring on his right hand. He leaned forward, resting his weight on his good leg. The left one stayed straight, the knee locked from an old injury. You look like your father. Aurora gripped the edge of the bar. Her fingers brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The wood felt rough under her fingertips. People say I look like my mother. Jennifer had the smile. Brendan had the stare. You have the stare. Silas reached for a bottle of whiskey and poured two fingers into a tumbler. He slid it across the wood. The liquid settled, amber against the dark grain. Aurora did not touch the glass. She watched the condensation form on the outside. Eva told me you were here. Eva talks too much. She said you could help. Silas picked up his own glass and took a sip. The ice clinked against his teeth. He set it down with a solid thud. Help implies there is something to fix. Most things break beyond repair, Aurora. She turned her wrist over, exposing the pale skin and the mark there. The light from the neon sign outside flickered through the window, painting a green stripe across her hand. I left Cardiff. I heard. I left everything. Silas stepped around the end of the bar. He moved with a slight hitch in his stride, the limp more pronounced when he walked on the hard floor. He stopped a foot away from her. The grey streaks in his auburn beard caught the low light. He looked older than the photographs on the wall, yet the same authority radiated from him. You walked away from a law degree. You walked away from a family home. You walked away from a man who hurt you. Aurora flinched. The air in the room grew heavy. A clock ticked somewhere in the back, near the bookshelf that looked slightly out of place against the brickwork. I survived. Survival costs interest. You pay it every day you wake up and remember why you ran. She picked up the whiskey. The glass felt cold against her palm. She took a sip. The burn traveled down her throat and settled in her chest. I didn't think you'd remember me. We haven't spoken since I was twelve. I remember the Carter family. Brendan owed me a favor. He's not here to call it in. No. He is in Cardiff. You are in London. Silas reached out and tapped the counter with his index finger. The silver ring made a dull sound against the wood. You want a job? You want a place to stay? Or do you want revenge? Aurora set the glass down. She met his gaze. The blue of her eyes stood out in the dim room. I want to disappear. Disappearing requires money. It requires new documents. It requires you to stop being Aurora Carter. I know. Do you? You walk in here wearing your own face. You drink whiskey like your father. You touch your wrist when you lie. She pulled her hand away from the scar. Her fingers curled into a fist. I'm not lying. You want to disappear, but you want to be found by the right people. You want safety without solitude. Silas turned and looked at the wall of photographs. One picture showed a street in Prague, blurred by motion and rain. He stared at it for a long moment. I retired from this life. The Raven's Nest is a bar. It is not a safe house. Eva said you run things. Eva sees what she wants to see. She said you know people. I know people who ask questions. I know people who take things. I know people who make problems go away. None of them are friends. Aurora stepped closer. The scent of his cologne mixed with the smell of the whiskey. It smelled like sandalwood and smoke. I'm not asking for a friend. I'm asking for a chance. Silas turned back to her. He studied her face, tracing the line of her jaw and the set of her shoulders. He looked at the damp hem of her coat and the mud on her boots. You look tired. I haven't slept in two days. Sleep clouds judgment. I don't need judgment. I need a roof. Silas walked back behind the bar. He picked up the rag and resumed wiping the glass he had cleaned earlier. The circular motion was rhythmic, hypnotic. There is a flat above the bar. It sits empty. The rent is high. I can work. You have no references. You have no history in London. You have a target on your back from a man who knows where you were born. I can learn. You will deliver food. Yu-Fei Cheung owns the Golden Empress down the street. She owes me. You will wear a uniform. You will keep your head down. You will not speak to customers. Aurora nodded. The movement was stiff. And the flat? You clean it. You fix the lock on the door. You stay out of the back room. She glanced at the bookshelf behind him. The shadows there seemed deeper than the rest of the room. What's in the back room? Nothing you need to see. Silas stopped wiping the glass. He held it up to the light, inspecting it for smudges. The hazel eyes narrowed. If you stay here, you follow my rules. You do not bring people here. You do not ask about my past. You do not use the name Carter outside these walls. Understood. If you break a rule, you leave. If you bring trouble to my door, I will handle it. You will not like how I handle it. Aurora took another drink of the whiskey. The heat grounded her. She looked at the scar on her wrist again, then covered it with her sleeve. I won't bring trouble. Trouble finds us. It does not need an invitation. Silas placed the clean glass on the rack. He leaned against the counter again, the limp settling into a static tension in his leg. Why London? It's big. Easy to get lost. Cardiff is small. Everyone knows everyone. Everyone knows who I was there. Here, I'm just another face in the crowd. Silas reached under the counter and pulled out a set of keys. He held them by the ring, letting them dangle. The metal caught the light. Take these. Don't lose them. Aurora reached out. Her fingers brushed the cold metal. She closed her hand around them. Thank you. Don't thank me. This is a transaction. You work. You pay. You stay quiet. She pocketed the keys. The weight of them settled against her hip. What do I call you? Silas. Just Silas? Just Silas. Aurora finished the whiskey. She set the empty glass on the counter. The sound echoed in the quiet bar. I should go up. See the flat. It's unlocked. Silas turned away from her. He began organizing the bottles on the shelf behind him, aligning the labels with precise movements. Aurora stood there for a moment. She watched the muscles in his back shift under his shirt. The grey streaks in his hair looked like ash in the dim light. You didn't ask what happened. Silas paused. His hand hovered over a bottle of gin. I know what happens. Men like Evan think they own things. Women like you realize they don't. He turned his head slightly. The profile was sharp against the shadows. Go upstairs. Lock the door. Sleep. Tomorrow you start at the Golden Empress. Aurora turned toward the door behind the bar. The stairs led up into darkness. She placed her foot on the first step. The wood creaked. Silas. He did not turn around. He picked up the gin bottle and checked the level. Yes. If he comes here? Silas set the bottle down. He picked up the rag again. Then we deal with it. Aurora climbed the second step. The light from the bar faded as she ascended. The smell of old paper and lemon polish lingered in the air. She stopped on the landing and looked back down. Silas stood behind the bar, a solitary figure under the brass lights. He wiped the same spot on the counter, over and over. She turned and continued up the stairs. The keys jingled in her pocket. The sound was loud in the stairwell. She reached the top landing and found the door. It was painted black, the paint chipped around the handle. She inserted the key. The lock turned with a heavy click. Inside, the flat smelled of dust and stale air. Moonlight filtered through the window, illuminating floating particles. Aurora walked to the window and looked down at the street. The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest buzzed below. A car passed, headlights sweeping across the walls. She touched the scar on her wrist again. The skin felt smooth under her thumb. Downstairs, the music started. A low jazz track played from a record player. The sound vibrated through the floorboards. Aurora walked to the center of the room. She dropped her bag on the floor. The zipper sounded loud in the silence. She stood still and listened to the music. The saxophone wailed, a lonely sound in the empty room. She walked to the door and locked it. She tested the handle. It held. She walked back to the window and looked out at the London skyline. The rain had stopped. The clouds parted slightly, revealing a sliver of moon. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. She pulled it out. The screen lit up with a message from an unknown number. Welcome to London. Aurora stared at the screen. The backlight illuminated her face. She typed a reply, then deleted it. She put the phone face down on the windowsill. Downstairs, the music changed tempo. The saxophone faded, replaced by the sound of glasses clinking. People were arriving. The bar was opening for the night. Aurora turned away from the window. She walked toward the small kitchen area. The tap dripped. She tightened it. The dripping stopped. She opened a cupboard. It was empty. She closed it. She walked back to the center of the room and stood there. The floorboards creaked under her weight. She listened to the sounds of the bar below. Voices murmured. Ice cracked in glasses. Silas moved around down there, a ghost in the machine. Aurora sat on the floor. She pulled her knees to her chest. She rested her chin on her knees. The scar on her wrist pressed against her leg. The music continued. The night stretched out ahead, long and uncertain. She closed her eyes and listened to the rhythm of the bar below. It sounded like a heartbeat. Slow. Steady. Alive.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1957
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1957
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"solitary"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flickered"
2"tracing"
3"rhythmic"
4"tension"
5"echoed"
6"solitary"
7"vibrated"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences292
matches(empty)
89.04% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount11
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences292
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"realize"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences292
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1952
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions103
wordCount1952
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven3
Nest3
Blackwood1
Aurora20
Cardiff3
Carter3
London5
Prague1
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas20
Evan1
You33
Eva4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
5"Cheung"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
8"You"
9"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Prague"
4"Golden"
globalScore0.655
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences164
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like sandalwood and smoke"
1"seemed deeper than the rest of the room"
2"looked like ash in the dim light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1952
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences292
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs115
mean16.97
std14.84
cv0.874
sampleLengths
079
148
246
35
425
57
612
742
86
94
105
1124
1213
1331
143
152
163
1762
1823
1928
202
2116
2227
2313
2410
257
269
2721
2815
2920
304
3115
322
3323
3414
353
3619
3729
3817
395
407
415
4225
4321
4411
4536
463
476
483
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences292
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs375
matches
0"were arriving"
1"was opening"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences292
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1957
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.01890648952478283
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.004087889626980072
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences292
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences292
mean6.68
std3.96
cv0.592
sampleLengths
023
121
212
323
413
519
65
77
84
99
1015
1110
1212
135
147
1511
167
177
184
194
204
2114
226
238
246
258
266
274
285
2910
306
318
327
336
3413
3518
363
372
383
398
4020
417
4211
4316
447
457
469
472
487
4919
36.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats40
diversityRatio0.2191780821917808
totalSentences292
uniqueOpeners64
12.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences264
matches
0"Then we deal with it."
ratio0.004
27.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount127
totalSentences264
matches
0"She moved toward the bar,"
1"He paused when she approached."
2"He leaned forward, resting his"
3"You look like your father."
4"Her fingers brushed the small"
5"You have the stare."
6"He slid it across the"
7"She watched the condensation form"
8"She said you could help."
9"He set it down with"
10"She turned her wrist over,"
11"I left Cardiff."
12"I left everything."
13"He moved with a slight"
14"He stopped a foot away"
15"He looked older than the"
16"You walked away from a"
17"You walked away from a"
18"You walked away from a"
19"You pay it every day"
ratio0.481
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount240
totalSentences264
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"She moved toward the bar,"
4"He paused when she approached."
5"Hazel eyes locked onto bright"
6"The rag stopped moving."
7"Silas Blackwood set the glass"
8"The movement caused the light"
9"He leaned forward, resting his"
10"The left one stayed straight,"
11"You look like your father."
12"Aurora gripped the edge of"
13"Her fingers brushed the small"
14"The wood felt rough under"
15"People say I look like"
16"Jennifer had the smile."
17"Brendan had the stare."
18"You have the stare."
19"Silas reached for a bottle"
ratio0.909
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences264
matches
0"If you stay here, you"
1"If you break a rule,"
2"If you bring trouble to"
3"If he comes here?"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"A clock ticked somewhere in the back, near the bookshelf that looked slightly out of place against the brickwork."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.4996%