Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJA19QTNHV5SCJMFBRCDF

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The glass shattered against the brickwork inches from Rory's left hand, spraying shards across the damp pavement. She didn't flinch. Her hand simply closed around the handle of her delivery bag, knuckles whitening as she pivoted on the ball of her foot to face the shadow detaching itself from the alley mouth. "Wrong turn, love," the man growled, stepping into the smear of neon light cast by the distinctive green sign above the entrance. He held a rusted pipe with casual menace. "Hand over the bag. Contents only. No need for drama." Rory scanned the street. Empty. The usual Thursday night crowd inside The Raven's Nest muffled their laughter behind thick oak doors. She calculated the distance to the fire escape, the weight of the thermal bag, the angle of the man's swing. "Contents are cold," Rory said, her voice flat. "And spicy. You'd hate it." The thug lunged. Rory stepped inside his guard, not away. She drove her elbow into his solar plexus, using his forward momentum to spin him past her. He stumbled, gasping for air, the pipe clattering to the ground. Before he could recover, she swept his legs. He hit the wet concrete hard, the wind knocked out of him in a wet wheeze. "Stay down," she warned, adjusting the strap of her bag. "Next time I aim higher." She didn't wait for a response. She kicked the pipe further into the gutter and turned to the heavy door of the bar. Her heart hammered a steady, controlled rhythm against her ribs. Adrenaline tasted like copper on her tongue. She pushed through the door, the sudden shift from the cold London drizzle to the warm, stale air of the pub hitting her like a physical wall. The Raven's Nest smelled of aged wood, lemon polish, and the faint, metallic tang of old secrets. Black-and-white photographs of forgotten spies and vanished revolutionaries lined the walls, their eyes seeming to follow anyone who dared enter. Old maps, yellowed with age, covered the spaces between frames, marking borders that no longer existed. Rory navigated the sparse crowd, heading for the bar at the rear. She needed a moment to let her hands stop shaking, just a fraction. She set the delivery bag on the bar top, the plastic crinkling in the sudden quiet of the room. "You're late," a voice rumbled from the shadows of the booth in the corner. Rory froze. The voice belonged to a ghost. Or rather, a man she had spent three years trying to forget. She turned slowly. Evan sat in the booth, the leather creaking under his weight. He looked different. The soft, boyish features she remembered had hardened into something angular and severe. His suit was expensive, tailored to hide a frame that had filled out with muscle rather than fat. He swirled a glass of amber liquid, the ice clinking softly. "Evan," she said. The name felt wrong in her mouth, like swallowing a stone. "Rory." He gestured to the seat opposite him with a free hand. "Or do you go by Laila now? Malphora? I hear you collect aliases like some people collect stamps." "I go by Rory." She didn't move toward the booth. "And I'm working. Yu-Fei expects those dumplings hot." "Yu-Fei can wait." Evan's eyes, once warm brown, now looked like polished flint. "Sit. Five minutes. For old times' sake." "We don't have old times, Evan. We have a restraining order and a lot of bad memories." He smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. It was a shark's smile. "Always so dramatic. That's what I missed. The fire." He tapped the table. "Please. Sit. If I wanted you hurt, the man outside wouldn't have been holding a pipe." Rory's blood ran cold. She glanced back at the door, then at Evan. The pieces clicked together with terrifying speed. The ambush, the timing, the specific location. "You set that up," she whispered. "A test," Evan corrected. "To see if the stories were true. Cardiff University's brightest law student, reduced to running noodles through Soho rain. And yet, you dropped him in three seconds. Efficient. Brutal." He took a sip of his drink. "You've changed, Rory." "People change when they have to." She stayed standing, her hand resting near the pocket where she kept her phone. "What do you want?" "I want to talk about your father." The air left the room. Rory gripped the edge of the bar, the wood rough under her palm. "Don't." "Brendan Carter," Evan continued, ignoring her warning. "Good man. Irish barrister. Stubborn. Principled." He paused, letting the silence stretch until it snapped. "He's in trouble, Rory. Deep trouble." "My father is retired. He teaches Sunday school and argues about politics at the pub." "He borrowed money. From people who don't accept 'principled' as currency." Evan slid a folded piece of paper across the table. It stopped inches from the edge. "They want it back by tomorrow night. Or they start taking pieces. Starting with his fingers." Rory stared at the paper. She didn't touch it. "You're lying. My father doesn't gamble. He doesn't drink enough to lose control." "Not gambling. Protection. For a case he took pro bono years ago. Something involving land rights in Belfast. Old ghosts waking up, Rory. You know how it is." Evan leaned forward, the hazel light from the bar lamp catching the scar on his cheek she hadn't noticed before. "I'm the only one who knows. And I'm the only one who can fix it." "Why?" The word tore from her throat. "Why come to me? Why now?" "Because I know you," Evan said softly. "I know you'll do anything for family. Even swallow your pride. Even talk to the devil." He indicated himself with a tilt of his head. "And because you're the only one with the skills to get the money. Or the documents. Whatever it takes." "I'm a delivery driver, Evan. Not a thief." "You're a survivor," he countered. "You ran from Cardiff. You ran from me. You hid in London, changed your name, built a new life over a bar owned by a retired spook." He glanced toward the back of the room where Silas stood, polishing a glass. Silas had stopped moving. His hazel eyes locked onto Evan, sharp and calculating. "Silas Blackwood. Interesting company you keep." "Stay away from him," Rory warned, her voice dropping an octave. "Or what?" Evan stood up. He towered over the table, his presence filling the small space. "You'll drop me like the guy outside? That was a street thug, Rory. I'm not him." He reached into his jacket. Rory's muscles coiled, ready to spring. But he only pulled out a heavy envelope. He tossed it onto the table. It landed with a solid thud. "Down payment," Evan said. "Ten thousand. Cash. Enough to buy time. Enough to think." "I don't want your money." "It's not mine. It's theirs. Consider it an advance on your services." He buttoned his jacket, smoothing the lapels. "Think about your father, Rory. Think about that little crescent scar on your wrist. The one you got falling off your bike when you were seven. He carried you three miles to the hospital. Didn't let go of your hand once." Rory flinched. The intimacy of the threat made her skin crawl. He knew everything. He had been watching. "Tomorrow night," Evan said, turning to leave. "Midnight. The old railway arches near Waterloo. Come alone. If I see Silas, or the police, or even that delivery boy you fancy... your father loses a hand." He walked toward the door, his shoes clicking rhythmically on the floorboards. The patrons parted for him instinctively, sensing the predator in their midst. He paused at the threshold, looking back over his shoulder. "Oh, and Rory? Nice move with the elbow. I taught you that, didn't I? In the garden, all those years ago. You always were a quick learner." The door swung shut behind him, the bell jingling cheerfully, a stark contrast to the ice forming in Rory's veins. Silas appeared at her side, his limp more pronounced as he moved quickly. He picked up the envelope, weighing it in his hand without opening it. "Trouble?" Silas asked, his voice low and gravelly. Rory looked at the envelope, then at the door where Evan had vanished. The smell of his cologne, expensive and cloying, still hung in the air, masking the scent of rain and old beer. "My past," she said, her voice trembling for the first time that night. "And it's brought the future with it." Silas opened the envelope. Stacks of crisp fifty-pound notes stared back at them. "Burn it," Rory said. "No," Silas replied, snapping the envelope shut. "We count it. Then we plan. If he knows about your father, he knows about us." He looked at her, his gaze intense. "Who was he, Rory? Really?" She looked at her left wrist, tracing the small crescent scar with her thumb. "He was the reason I left," she said. "And now he's the reason I have to stay." A heavy crash echoed from the kitchen followed by the sound of running footsteps. Not one pair. Many. Silas's hand went to the small of his back. "Back room. Now." "No," Rory said, grabbing a heavy glass bottle from the bar top. "If they're coming for him, they're already inside." The front door burst open, not with the gentle chime of a customer, but with a violent kick that splintered the frame. Three men in black tactical gear poured into the room, weapons raised, silencers attached. "Target acquired," the lead man shouted, his voice distorted by a mask. "Eliminate the witness." Rory didn't think. She swung the bottle.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Evan said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.029
effectiveRatio0.029
84.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"quickly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1626
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"calculated"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"efficient"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"scanned"
2"calculated"
3"weight"
4"navigated"
5"efficient"
6"silence"
7"calculating"
8"predator"
9"stark"
10"tracing"
11"echoed"
12"footsteps"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1621
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1034
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Thursday1
Raven2
Nest2
London1
Evan13
Silas7
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.678
windowScore0.333
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"tasted like copper on her tongue"
1"looked like polished flint"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.617
wordCount1621
matches
0"not with the gentle chime of a customer, but with a violent kick"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean27.47
std17.09
cv0.622
sampleLengths
052
140
241
313
462
515
667
753
844
914
1020
1159
1214
1330
1418
1520
1617
1742
1827
196
2043
2124
227
2319
2428
2515
2643
2722
2863
2913
3051
318
3265
3311
3432
3531
3614
375
3860
3918
4035
4134
4227
4320
4426
458
4634
4720
4813
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1037
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.02700096432015429
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009643201542912247
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean11.18
std8.1
cv0.725
sampleLengths
017
13
232
322
48
510
64
71
816
920
108
115
123
137
1417
1511
168
1716
1810
195
206
2117
2210
237
2427
2517
2620
2716
2812
2913
3019
3114
322
336
3412
353
3611
373
3813
3918
4011
413
4211
4312
4418
4510
468
4713
487
4917
62.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners58
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences101
matches
0"She didn't flinch."
1"Her hand simply closed around"
2"He held a rusted pipe"
3"She calculated the distance to"
4"She drove her elbow into"
5"He stumbled, gasping for air,"
6"He hit the wet concrete"
7"she warned, adjusting the strap"
8"She didn't wait for a"
9"She kicked the pipe further"
10"Her heart hammered a steady,"
11"She pushed through the door,"
12"She needed a moment to"
13"She set the delivery bag"
14"She turned slowly."
15"He looked different."
16"His suit was expensive, tailored"
17"He swirled a glass of"
18"He gestured to the seat"
19"She didn't move toward the"
ratio0.455
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences101
matches
0"The glass shattered against the"
1"She didn't flinch."
2"Her hand simply closed around"
3"the man growled, stepping into"
4"He held a rusted pipe"
5"Rory scanned the street."
6"The usual Thursday night crowd"
7"She calculated the distance to"
8"Rory said, her voice flat"
9"The thug lunged."
10"Rory stepped inside his guard,"
11"She drove her elbow into"
12"He stumbled, gasping for air,"
13"He hit the wet concrete"
14"she warned, adjusting the strap"
15"She didn't wait for a"
16"She kicked the pipe further"
17"Her heart hammered a steady,"
18"Adrenaline tasted like copper on"
19"She pushed through the door,"
ratio0.931
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Before he could recover, she"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Black-and-white photographs of forgotten spies and vanished revolutionaries lined the walls, their eyes seeming to follow anyone who dared enter."
1"The front door burst open, not with the gentle chime of a customer, but with a violent kick that splintered the frame."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory said, her voice flat"
1"Rory warned, her voice dropping an octave"
2"Evan said, turning to leave"
3"Silas asked, his voice low and gravelly"
4"she said, her voice trembling for the first time that night"
5"He looked, his gaze intense"
47.06% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"the man growled (growl)"
1"she warned (warn)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"Evan corrected (correct)"
4"Evan continued (continue)"
5"Rory warned (warn)"
6"the lead man shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0.389
effectiveRatio0.206
78.6773%