Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJC578A8NJB5W31TXRGWE

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Duration:
56.2s
Cost:
$0.034806

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber liquid caught the light as Rory lifted the glass, pausing mid-sip when she spotted the familiar figure sliding onto the barstool three seats down. Twenty-five years of living hadn't prepared her for this moment—seeing Marcus Webb in The Raven's Nest, of all places. He hadn't noticed her yet, too busy studying the whiskey selection behind Silas with the same intensity he'd once reserved for dissecting Shakespeare sonnets in their sixth-form English class. The boy she'd known had possessed unruly brown curls and wore his rugby kit like armour. This man bore only traces of that teenager—his hair now cropped military-short, his shoulders broader but somehow diminished, as if carrying invisible weight. "Double Jameson, neat." Marcus' voice had deepened, acquired an edge that cut through the bar's ambient chatter. Silas poured without comment, though his hazel eyes flicked toward Rory with the subtle awareness of a man who'd spent decades reading rooms. The barman set the glass down and retreated to polish glassware at the far end, giving them space. Rory traced the rim of her pint glass, debating whether to speak. Seven years. Seven years since Cardiff, since everything went sideways with Evan, since she'd fled to London like a coward in the night. Marcus had tried calling then, left voicemails she'd deleted without listening to. "Bit posh for you, this place." The words escaped before she could stop them. Marcus' head snapped toward her, whiskey halfway to his lips. Recognition dawned slowly, like sunrise through thick clouds. "Christ. Rory Carter." She raised her glass in mock salute. "In the flesh." He shifted two stools closer, leaving one empty between them—close enough to talk, far enough to flee. The gesture struck her as calculated, a soldier's instinct for exits and angles. "You look..." He paused, studying her face. "Different." "Seven years'll do that." She kept her tone light, but her fingers found the small scar on her wrist, thumb tracing the familiar crescent. "You clean up well yourself, Webb. Proper grown-up now." Marcus glanced down at his charcoal suit, straightened his tie. "Work clothes." "What sort of work requires a tie in Soho at half-past nine on a Tuesday?" "The boring sort." He knocked back half his whiskey. "You?" "Delivery driver. Golden Empress, round the corner. Glamorous stuff." The lie came easily. No need to mention the part-time nature of it, or Silas' occasional requests that had nothing to do with Chinese takeaway. Marcus had always been too perceptive for his own good, but seven years might have dulled that particular blade. "Golden Empress." He nodded as if filing the information. "Remember when you swore you'd be arguing cases at the Old Bailey by now?" "Plans change." "They do, don't they." Marcus stared into his glass. "Your mum still teaching?" "Far as I know. We don't talk much these days." "Ah." He didn't press, though she caught the flicker of curiosity. The Marcus she'd known would have pushed, would have demanded explanations with the relentless logic that made him brilliant at debate club. Silence stretched between them, filled by the clink of glasses and low conversations from other patrons. A couple in the corner booth laughed at something on a phone screen. Normal people living normal lives, unburdened by the weight of unfinished conversations. "You disappeared," Marcus said finally. "Properly vanished. Even your dad didn't know where you'd gone." "You spoke to my father?" "Rang him when you stopped answering calls. Thought maybe..." Marcus shrugged. "Thought maybe something had happened." The something had been Evan's fist connecting with her ribs, but that wasn't a story for sharing. Not here, not with Marcus wearing that suit and that careful expression. "Nothing happened. Just time to go." "With Evan." She stiffened. "What about him?" "You left with him. Cardiff to London, sudden-like. People talk in small cities." "People should mind their own business." Marcus lifted his hands in surrender. "Fair enough." The gesture reminded her of their last proper conversation, the night before graduation. They'd sat by the River Taff, sharing a bottle of cheap wine Marcus had nicked from his older brother's stash. He'd kissed her then, soft and uncertain, and she'd pulled away because Evan was waiting at the pub, because eighteen-year-old Rory Carter thought she knew what love looked like. "I'm sorry," she said quietly. "For vanishing. For not... for handling it badly." Marcus turned the whiskey glass between his palms. "We all handle things badly sometimes." Something in his tone made her look closer. The boy she'd known had possessed an easy confidence, quick wit that could defuse any tension. This man seemed carved from harder material, all sharp angles and careful words. "What happened to you, Marcus?" "Life." He drained his glass, signalled Silas for another. "Same as everyone else." "Bollocks. You're not the same person." "Neither are you." The accusation hung between them, neither entirely wrong nor entirely right. Rory had changed—London had stripped away Cardiff's naive edges, replaced them with wariness and quick reflexes. But somewhere underneath remained the girl who'd loved Victorian poetry and dreamed of courtrooms. "I suppose I'm not," she admitted. Marcus' second whiskey appeared with Silas' silent efficiency. He took a smaller sip this time, seemed to be pacing himself. "Remember the last day of term?" Marcus asked. "You said you'd write. Keep in touch, all that." "I meant it then." "Did you?" The question carried no accusation, only genuine curiosity. Rory considered lying again, constructing some comfortable fiction about good intentions and bad timing. But something in Marcus' weathered face deserved honesty. "Maybe. I don't know anymore. Everything got complicated very quickly." "Evan." "Among other things." She finished her pint, debated ordering another. "What do you do now? Really?" Marcus hesitated, and in that pause she glimpsed the boy who'd agonised over choosing words for the school magazine. "Government work. Nothing exciting." The careful phrasing rang alarm bells. Rory glanced toward Silas, who was studiously avoiding their conversation while somehow remaining aware of every word. The Raven's Nest attracted a particular clientele—people who valued privacy and asked few questions. "How long have you been coming here?" "First time." Marcus followed her gaze to Silas. "Friend recommended it. Said it was... discreet." The word settled between them like a chess piece, heavy with implication. Rory understood discretion, lived it daily. But Marcus had always been transparent, incapable of deception. This new version unsettled her. "I live upstairs," she said. Marcus blinked. "Here?" "Flat above the bar. Silas is my landlord, sort of." "Sort of?" "It's complicated." She traced patterns on the bar's scarred wood. "Everything's complicated now." "Doesn't have to be." The simple statement hit her harder than expected. Marcus had always possessed that quality—the ability to cut through complexity and find the simple truth underneath. But life wasn't sixth-form anymore. Simple truths had sharp edges that drew blood. "Doesn't it?" She met his gaze directly. "You show up here after seven years, looking like you've seen things that would break the boy I knew. I'm living above a bar in Soho, delivering Chinese food and pretending that's enough. Nothing about this is simple." Marcus set down his glass with deliberate care. "No. I suppose it isn't." The admission felt like surrender, and something in Rory's chest twisted. She'd wanted him to argue, to insist with teenage confidence that complexity was just fear wearing fancy clothes. But this Marcus had learned better, had paid prices she could only guess at. "I should go," he said, reaching for his wallet. "Wait." The word escaped before she could consider it. "Don't. Not yet." Marcus paused, money half-withdrawn. "Why?" Because seven years was too long to compress into twenty minutes of careful conversation. Because the boy who'd kissed her by the river deserved better than polite lies and surface pleasantries. Because she'd spent seven years wondering what might have been different if she'd stayed, if she'd chosen differently, if she'd been brave enough to answer his calls. "Because we're here," she said finally. "Both of us, in this ridiculous place, drinking overpriced alcohol and pretending we're strangers. And maybe we are strangers now, but we weren't always." Marcus studied her face as if trying to read some hidden message. Slowly, he returned the money to his wallet. "No," he agreed quietly. "We weren't always."
total_cost0.034806

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He knocked back [back]"
1"Marcus said finally [finally]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
4"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.329
leniency0.657
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.143
82.13% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"quickly"
3"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1399
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"traced"
count2
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"comfortable"
count1
11
word"implication"
count1
12
word"unsettled"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"intensity"
2"weight"
3"flicked"
4"traced"
5"calculated"
6"tracing"
7"flicker"
8"silence"
9"tension"
10"comfortable"
11"implication"
12"unsettled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1382
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount964
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Marcus"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Marcus22
Webb1
Raven2
Nest2
Silas5
Shakespeare1
English1
Cardiff2
Evan3
London2
Recognition1
River1
Taff1
Carter1
Victorian1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Marcus"
2"Webb"
3"Raven"
4"Nest"
5"Silas"
6"Shakespeare"
7"Evan"
8"Recognition"
9"Carter"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"River"
3"Taff"
globalScore0.359
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if carrying invisible weight"
1"as if filing the information"
2"looked like"
3"seemed carved from harder material, all sharp angles and careful words"
4"felt like surrender, and something in R"
5"as if trying to read some hidden message"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.724
wordCount1382
matches
0"neither entirely wrong nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences136
matches
0"wearing that suit"
1"possessed that quality"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean18.68
std15.92
cv0.852
sampleLengths
045
168
217
341
447
514
618
73
810
930
108
1133
1212
1315
1410
159
1644
1723
182
1913
2010
2133
2241
2315
245
2516
2629
276
282
295
3013
316
328
3362
3413
3514
3637
375
3813
396
403
4141
426
4320
4417
454
462
4730
4810
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs182
matches
0"was waiting"
16.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences136
ratio0.044
matches
0"Twenty-five years of living hadn't prepared her for this moment—seeing Marcus Webb in The Raven's Nest, of all places."
1"This man bore only traces of that teenager—his hair now cropped military-short, his shoulders broader but somehow diminished, as if carrying invisible weight."
2"He shifted two stools closer, leaving one empty between them—close enough to talk, far enough to flee."
3"Rory had changed—London had stripped away Cardiff's naive edges, replaced them with wariness and quick reflexes."
4"The Raven's Nest attracted a particular clientele—people who valued privacy and asked few questions."
5"Marcus had always possessed that quality—the ability to cut through complexity and find the simple truth underneath."
96.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount359
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.04456824512534819
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.008356545961002786
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean10.16
std6.85
cv0.675
sampleLengths
026
119
229
316
423
517
623
718
812
92
1021
1112
1214
1310
148
153
167
173
1817
1913
207
211
2224
239
2410
252
2615
279
281
299
304
3121
3219
339
3414
352
369
374
3810
3911
4022
4116
4213
4312
445
4510
465
4711
485
4917
80.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners68
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Slowly, he returned the money"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences79
matches
0"He hadn't noticed her yet,"
1"She raised her glass in"
2"He shifted two stools closer,"
3"He paused, studying her face"
4"She kept her tone light,"
5"He knocked back half his"
6"He nodded as if filing"
7"He didn't press, though she"
8"They'd sat by the River"
9"He'd kissed her then, soft"
10"she said quietly"
11"He drained his glass, signalled"
12"He took a smaller sip"
13"She finished her pint, debated"
14"She traced patterns on the"
15"She met his gaze directly"
16"She'd wanted him to argue,"
17"he said, reaching for his"
18"she said finally"
19"he agreed quietly"
ratio0.253
54.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences79
matches
0"The amber liquid caught the"
1"He hadn't noticed her yet,"
2"The boy she'd known had"
3"This man bore only traces"
4"Silas poured without comment, though"
5"The barman set the glass"
6"Rory traced the rim of"
7"Marcus had tried calling then,"
8"The words escaped before she"
9"Recognition dawned slowly, like sunrise"
10"She raised her glass in"
11"He shifted two stools closer,"
12"The gesture struck her as"
13"He paused, studying her face"
14"She kept her tone light,"
15"Marcus glanced down at his"
16"He knocked back half his"
17"The lie came easily."
18"Marcus had always been too"
19"He nodded as if filing"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences79
matches
0"Because seven years was too"
1"Because the boy who'd kissed"
2"Because she'd spent seven years"
ratio0.038
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"This man bore only traces of that teenager—his hair now cropped military-short, his shoulders broader but somehow diminished, as if carrying invisible weight."
1"Silas poured without comment, though his hazel eyes flicked toward Rory with the subtle awareness of a man who'd spent decades reading rooms."
2"The Marcus she'd known would have pushed, would have demanded explanations with the relentless logic that made him brilliant at debate club."
3"The something had been Evan's fist connecting with her ribs, but that wasn't a story for sharing."
4"The boy she'd known had possessed an easy confidence, quick wit that could defuse any tension."
5"But somewhere underneath remained the girl who'd loved Victorian poetry and dreamed of courtrooms."
6"Marcus hesitated, and in that pause she glimpsed the boy who'd agonised over choosing words for the school magazine."
7"Rory glanced toward Silas, who was studiously avoiding their conversation while somehow remaining aware of every word."
8"The Raven's Nest attracted a particular clientele—people who valued privacy and asked few questions."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She kept, but her fingers found the small scar on her wrist, thumb tracing the familiar crescent"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"No need to mention the part-time nature of it (mention)"
1"He didn't (do)"
2"she admitted (admit)"
3"he agreed quietly (agree)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.114
79.2871%