Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJFCCDEGEQ5TKZP4THE32

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.004160
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed low, a comfortable rumble of hushed conversations and clinking glasses. Rory, fresh off a late delivery, slipped through the green neon glow of the sign, the chill of the London night still clinging to her coat. Silas, perched on his usual stool behind the polished mahogany, offered a nod as she passed, his hazel eyes meeting hers for a fleeting moment before returning to the book open on the counter. She walked towards the back, where the low light softened the angular lines of old maps on the walls. The air, thick with the scent of aged whiskey and faint tobacco, wrapped around her, a familiar comfort. A lone figure sat at a corner table, back to the room, head bent. Their straight, shoulder-length black hair caught the dim light, mirroring the raven hues of her own. A small, crescent-shaped scar, barely visible on their left wrist, peeked out from under a rolled-up sleeve. Rory’s breath hitched. Her hand instinctively went to her own wrist, tracing the matching mark. The world outside the bar, the deliveries, the cold night, all faded. Only the shape of the head, the curve of the spine, the faint, familiar scent of lavender and something sharp, like ink, remained. As she drew closer, the figure shifted, looking up. Bright blue eyes, startling against a pale face, met hers. Her heart leaped, then plummeted, a stone dropping into a bottomless well. It wasn't a mirror. It was Laila. No, Aurora. No, Rory. The past, fractured and scattered, suddenly coalesced into a single, painful point. “Rory?” The voice, quiet, hesitant, resonated with a ghost of the past. Her own name, spoken with that particular lilt, felt like a tremor through the floorboards of her carefully constructed present. “Laila?” Rory’s voice was a whisper, a question that held twenty-five years of answers. Or absence. The name felt strange on her tongue, an echo from a time she had buried deep. Aurora's lips curved, a slow, sad smile. “It’s Aurora now. Been for years.” She gestured with a graceful hand, palm up, towards the empty chair opposite her. “Please. Join me.” Rory sank into the chair, the worn velvet a soft contrast to the sudden hardness in her chest. She studied Aurora, a stranger and a reflection, all at once. The bright blue eyes were the same, but the spark, the fire that used to dance there, seemed dimmed, replaced by a quiet intensity. The straight black hair, once a wild halo framing a perpetually eager face, now lay sleek and contained. Her clothes, a dark, impeccably tailored suit, seemed to swallow the light, a stark contrast to the vibrant colors she remembered. “You look different,” Rory managed, the words tasting like dust. Aurora’s laugh was a soft exhalation of air, devoid of humor. “We all do, don’t we? Time, they say, marches on.” Her gaze swept over Rory, a meticulous assessment that made her feel suddenly aware of her worn jeans and practical jacket. “You haven’t changed much, though. Still the same spirit, I imagine.” Rory bristled, a faint flush creeping up her neck. “Some things are hardwired.” “Indeed.” Aurora’s gaze drifted to the whiskey glass on the table. “Care for a drink? Silas makes a formidable Old Fashioned.” “Just water.” Rory still felt the phantom weight of her delivery bag. “Long night.” Aurora nodded, turning her head slightly, catching Silas’s eye. He approached, his slight limp more pronounced now that Rory noticed it. He placed a glass of water on the table, a silent acknowledgment to Rory, then looked at Aurora, a polite query in his hazel eyes. “Another for me, please, Silas.” Aurora’s voice was calm, almost detached. Silas gave her a discerning look, then moved back to the bar. “So.” Rory broke the quiet. “What brings you to this corner of London? Last I heard, you were… elsewhere.” The word hung in the air, weighted with unspoken questions. *Wales. Cardiff. Evan.* The memories were a tangle of thorns, sharp and painful. Aurora picked at a loose thread on her sleeve. “Business, mostly. A new project. London’s the hub, after all.” She took a slow sip of her whiskey when Silas returned, the amber liquid glinting in the low light. “And you? Still here, above the bar?” “It works.” Rory shrugged, a non-committal gesture. The truth was more complicated. The flat above Silas’s bar, a sanctuary from her past, a place where she could breathe. “Works for what, Rory?” Aurora’s tone was gentle, but the question felt like a probe. “You were always destined for more. Law school, remember? Your father’s legacy.” Rory’s hand tightened around her water glass. “Some legacies are best left unclaimed.” The memory of her father, Brendan Carter, pushing her towards a future she didn’t want, burned. “And some plans change. Life isn’t a straight path, Aurora.” Aurora’s eyes darkened, a shadow passing over them. “No, it isn’t. But sometimes, we just need a gentle push to see the way forward.” She looked around the bar, her gaze lingering on the black-and-white photographs on the wall, then returning to Rory. “You always had a fire, Rory. A strong sense of justice. It’s a shame to see it… dormant.” “Dormant?” Rory scoffed, a genuine laugh escaping her. “You think I’m dormant? I’m living, Aurora. I’m making my own way, on my own terms.” The words felt like a declaration, a desperate plea for her choices to be understood. “On your own terms, yes. But at what cost?” Aurora’s voice was soft, persuasive, a silken thread weaving its way into the conversation. “We had dreams, Rory. Big dreams, for how we’d change the world. What happened to those?” “Dreams shift. People change.” Rory glanced away, towards the hidden bookshelf that led to Silas’s secret room. A symbol of another life, another layer of her existence, that Aurora knew nothing about. “But some core truths remain.” Aurora leaned forward, her elbows on the table, her bright blue eyes fixed on Rory. “You were always the one with the sharp mind, the quick wit. The one who saw through the lies, who fought for the underdog. You still are, aren’t you?” Rory met her gaze, a flicker of something she couldn’t name—resentment, longing, a ghost of their shared past—passing between them. “What do you want, Aurora?” The question was blunt, cutting through the pleasantries and the weight of their history. Aurora smiled then, a genuine, if fleeting, smile that softened the edges of her face. “I want us to talk, Rory. Properly. After all these years.” She paused, then added, “And perhaps, to remind you of who you truly are.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"the question felt like [like]"
1"She looked around [around]"
2"The words felt like [like]"
3"Rory glanced away [away]"
4"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0.294
effectiveRatio0.294
77.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1117
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"fleeting"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"resonated"
count1
7
word"lilt"
count1
8
word"constructed"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"weight"
count2
16
word"unspoken"
count1
17
word"glinting"
count1
18
word"sanctuary"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"chill"
2"fleeting"
3"familiar"
4"tracing"
5"fractured"
6"resonated"
7"lilt"
8"constructed"
9"whisper"
10"echo"
11"velvet"
12"dance"
13"intensity"
14"stark"
15"weight"
16"unspoken"
17"glinting"
18"sanctuary"
19"sense of"
20"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords1108
ratio0.003
matches
0"Wales. Cardiff. Evan."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount843
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Laila1
Aurora15
Rory19
Silas6
Brendan1
Carter1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Laila"
3"Aurora"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Brendan"
7"Carter"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.373
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a tremor through the floorboa"
1"seemed dimmed replaced by a quiet intensity"
2"felt like a probe"
3"felt like a declaration, a desperate pl"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1108
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean41.04
std26.19
cv0.638
sampleLengths
074
1134
254
332
432
530
692
710
853
913
1021
1114
1246
1311
1412
1542
1645
1728
1827
1939
2061
2139
2239
2332
2449
2539
2640
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences79
ratio0.013
matches
0"Rory met her gaze, a flicker of something she couldn’t name—resentment, longing, a ghost of their shared past—passing between them."
89.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount852
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04460093896713615
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.01056338028169014
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean14.03
std8.1
cv0.578
sampleLengths
014
126
234
319
418
514
616
717
83
912
1012
1123
129
1310
1412
154
163
172
182
1912
2012
2120
2214
232
2416
257
2620
273
2818
2911
3024
3118
3221
3310
3411
3531
3611
379
384
3911
4010
4112
422
439
4412
4525
4611
4712
485
4924
73.84% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4810126582278481
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"Only the shape of the"
1"Bright blue eyes, startling against"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences63
matches
0"She walked towards the back,"
1"Their straight, shoulder-length black hair"
2"Her hand instinctively went to"
3"Her heart leaped, then plummeted,"
4"It wasn't a mirror."
5"It was Laila."
6"Her own name, spoken with"
7"She gestured with a graceful"
8"She studied Aurora, a stranger"
9"Her clothes, a dark, impeccably"
10"Her gaze swept over Rory,"
11"He approached, his slight limp"
12"He placed a glass of"
13"She took a slow sip"
14"She looked around the bar,"
15"She paused, then added"
ratio0.254
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences63
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed low,"
1"Rory, fresh off a late"
2"Silas, perched on his usual"
3"She walked towards the back,"
4"The air, thick with the"
5"A lone figure sat at"
6"Their straight, shoulder-length black hair"
7"A small, crescent-shaped scar, barely"
8"Rory’s breath hitched."
9"Her hand instinctively went to"
10"The world outside the bar,"
11"Her heart leaped, then plummeted,"
12"It wasn't a mirror."
13"It was Laila."
14"The past, fractured and scattered,"
15"The voice, quiet, hesitant, resonated"
16"Her own name, spoken with"
17"Rory’s voice was a whisper,"
18"The name felt strange on"
19"Aurora's lips curved, a slow,"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The bright blue eyes were the same, but the spark, the fire that used to dance there, seemed dimmed, replaced by a quiet intensity."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She took, the amber liquid glinting in the low light"
1"Rory scoffed, a genuine laugh escaping her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.0314%