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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJHHEQGCK8D7X292VDJTD
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Model:
Claude Sonnet 4
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
51.0s
Cost:
$0.044286
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
75.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
79.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
66.97%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
84.52%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
43.29%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
24.94%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.8022%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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The lock clicked behind the
last patron at half past midnight.
Silas twisted the key twice
and
flicked
off The Raven's Nest's green neon sign.
The familiar ritual of closing
always brought him peace, twenty minutes to himself before the climb upstairs.
Glass clinked against glass as
he stacked the remaining pint glasses.
The evening's takings sat in
the till, modest but steady.
Another successful night of serving
watered-down memories to Soho's night shift.
The knock came soft but
insistent.
Silas paused, whiskey tumbler halfway
to his mouth. Past midnight meant trouble. Always did.
His hand found the cricket
bat beneath the bar as he approached the frosted glass door. "We're closed." "Si? It's Brendan. Brendan Carter."
The glass slipped from Silas's
fingers. Shattered against the hardwood floor. Twenty-five years collapsed into that voice, Irish
lilt
worn smooth by English courts and London living.
Brendan stood under the flickering
street lamp, hands deep in an expensive coat's pockets.
The boy who'd shared cigarettes
behind Dublin pubs had grown into something sleeker. Dangerous in the way only successful men could be. Silas turned the locks. "Christ almighty."
Brendan stepped inside, surveying the
dim interior. "Look at this place." "It pays the bills." "Does it though?"
Brendan's gaze swept across the
old maps and faded photographs. "Last I heard you were in Prague. Some nastiness with the Russians." "You heard wrong." "Did I?" Brendan settled onto a barstool, movements too careful. Too practised. "Whiskey. The good stuff."
Silas poured two measures of
eighteen-year-old Jameson.
Brendan's fingers wrapped around the
glass, and Silas noticed the wedding ring. Gold band, well-worn. "Married then." "Was. Jenny passed two years ago."
Brendan drained half his whiskey
. "Cancer. Quick, thank Christ." "I'm sorry." "She was pregnant once. Our girl. Rory."
Brendan's voice cracked slightly
. "Twenty-five now. Living here in London, actually." The
silence
stretched between them. Silas refilled their glasses without asking. "She doesn't speak to me much anymore." "Children rarely do." "This is different." Brendan stared into his whiskey. "Evan. Her ex. Charming lad on the surface. Reminded me of us at that age, you know? Confident. Ambitious." "And underneath?" "Monster." The word fell flat. Final. "Took me two years to see it. Two years of him controlling her, isolating her, making her smaller. By the time I cottoned on..." "Too late." "She blames me. Says I chose him over her. Welcomed him into the family while he was breaking her spirit." Brendan's knuckles whitened around his glass. "She's not wrong." Silas limped around the bar, his knee protesting. The old injury always ached when storms approached.
He settled onto the adjacent
stool. "Where is she now?" "Here. Soho, I think. Delivering food for some Chinese place. Living above..." Brendan gestured vaguely. "Some bar." The pieces clicked together with nauseating clarity. Bright blue eyes. Black hair. The small crescent scar on her wrist from falling off her bicycle at eight years old. "Aurora." "You know her?" Brendan's head snapped up. "How could you possibly..." "She lives upstairs. Works for Yu-Fei's Golden Empress." The colour drained from Brendan's face. "You're having me on." "Wish I was." "Jesus." Brendan slumped forward. "What are the bloody odds?" "In my experience? Higher than you'd think." Silas touched his signet ring, a nervous habit from the old days. "London's smaller than people imagine. Especially for the lost ones." "Is she...? I mean, is she all right?" "Surviving. Working. Keeping her head down." "But is she happy?" The question hung between them like smoke. Silas considered his answer
carefully
. Aurora, lugging delivery bags through rain-soaked streets. Aurora, flinching at sudden movements. Aurora, who never mentioned her family. "She's healing." "From him? Or from me?" "Both, I'd imagine." Brendan's laugh held no humour. "Christ, Si. Look at us. Used to think we'd conquer the world." "We were eighteen. Everyone thinks that at eighteen." "You did though. The Service. Prague. All those classified adventures." "One botched operation. One blown cover. One
shattered
kneecap." Silas gestured at his leg. "Conquest's overrated." "And I became everything I swore I wouldn't. Stuffy barrister in Cardiff. Failed father. Widow." Brendan's voice cracked again. "Rory was supposed to be a lawyer too, you know. Following the family tradition. She got within six months of qualifying and just... left." "She's brighter than both of us combined." "How would you know?" "She figured out my background within a week. Most people see a limping barkeeper. She sees patterns. Connections. The way I move. The way I listen." Silas smiled
slightly
. "Reminds me of someone I used to know." "Dublin seems like someone else's life." "It was someone else's life." The whiskey burned less now. Brendan stared at the photographs covering the walls. Black and white faces from decades past, frozen in time. "Do you miss it? The excitement? The purpose?" "Miss getting shot at? Having my cover blown by incompetent desk jockeys? Limping through Prague with Russian bullets in my leg?" Silas shook his head. "This is better. Quieter." "But meaningless." "Is it though?" Silas gestured upward. "Your daughter sleeps safely above my head every night. Yesterday I served coffee to a kid who'd been sleeping rough for weeks. Tomorrow I'll probably talk someone out of a
very
bad decision. Small meanings add up." "She won't see me, will she?" "No." "Not even if you asked?" "Especially not then." Brendan finished his whiskey. Set the glass down with deliberate care. "Twenty-five years. We were supposed to stay in touch." "We were supposed to do lots of things." "Remember that night in Temple Bar? We swore we'd never become our fathers." "I remember." "Well?" Brendan's smile
was bitter
. "How'd we do?" Silas considered the question.
His own father, a dock
worker who drank away his wages and died at fifty-three. Brendan's father, a successful solicitor who never had time for his son. "You loved her. Your daughter. That's more than either of our fathers managed." "I failed her when it mattered most." "Yes." The honesty hit like a physical blow. Brendan's shoulders sagged. "Could you... could you tell her I was asking about her?" "No." "Why not?" "Because she's building something new. Something that doesn't include the past. Doesn't include Cardiff or law school or men who think they know what's best for her." Silas met his old friend's eyes. "Doesn't include you." "That's harsh, Si." "It's honest." "And if she changes her mind?" "Then she'll find you." Brendan stood, movements stiff with alcohol and regret. He pulled out his wallet, but Silas waved him away. "On the house. For old times." "Right." Brendan paused at the door. "She's
really
all right though? Living above a bar, delivering takeaway?" "She's free." The word landed with unexpected
weight
. Brendan's hand froze on the door handle. "That's more than most people get, isn't it?" "More than we got." "Yeah." Brendan stepped into the night. "See you around, Si." "Brendan." Silas called after him. "She has your eyes. And your stubborn streak." The door closed with a soft click. Silas poured himself another whiskey and began sweeping up the broken glass. Upstairs, Aurora's
footsteps
creaked across old floorboards. Getting ready for bed after another long shift.
He wouldn't tell her about
tonight. Some secrets were kindnesses.
total_cost
0.044286
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
75.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
21
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"Brendan's voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
1
"Brendan's knuckles whitened around [around]"
2
"Brendan gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3
"Brendan's voice cracked again [again]"
4
"Silas smiled slightly [slightly]"
5
"Silas gestured upward [upward]"
dialogueSentences
96
tagDensity
0.219
leniency
0.438
rawRatio
0.286
effectiveRatio
0.125
79.36%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
1
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
2
adverb
"very"
count
1
3
adverb
"really"
count
1
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"carefully"
2
"very"
3
"really"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
66.97%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1211
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"flicked"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
1
2
word
"shattered"
count
2
3
word
"lilt"
count
1
4
word
"silence"
count
1
5
word
"weight"
count
1
6
word
"footsteps"
count
1
highlights
0
"flicked"
1
"familiar"
2
"shattered"
3
"lilt"
4
"silence"
5
"weight"
6
"footsteps"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
81
matches
0
"was bitter"
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
81
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
155
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
37
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1201
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
56
wordCount
568
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
4.23
worstName
"Brendan"
maxWindowNameDensity
6.5
worstWindowName
"Brendan"
discoveredNames
Raven
1
Nest
1
Soho
1
Silas
19
Irish
1
English
1
London
1
Dublin
1
Brendan
24
Jameson
1
Final
1
Aurora
4
persons
0
"Raven"
1
"Nest"
2
"Silas"
3
"English"
4
"Brendan"
5
"Jameson"
6
"Aurora"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"London"
2
"Dublin"
globalScore
0
windowScore
0
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
47
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1201
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
155
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
95
mean
12.64
std
11.22
cv
0.887
sampleLengths
0
42
1
32
2
6
3
30
4
2
5
5
6
27
7
36
8
4
9
13
10
4
11
25
12
3
13
16
14
22
15
2
16
15
17
2
18
18
19
11
20
7
21
3
22
27
23
2
24
30
25
2
26
29
27
22
28
4
29
17
30
28
31
1
32
11
33
8
34
10
35
3
36
9
37
29
38
8
39
6
40
4
41
30
42
2
43
5
44
3
45
17
46
8
47
10
48
16
49
43
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
81
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
95
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
155
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
575
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.03826086956521739
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.010434782608695653
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
155
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
155
mean
7.75
std
6.1
cv
0.787
sampleLengths
0
11
1
14
2
17
3
11
4
10
5
11
6
6
7
8
8
4
9
2
10
16
11
2
12
5
13
6
14
5
15
16
16
14
17
13
18
9
19
4
20
9
21
4
22
4
23
13
24
12
25
3
26
10
27
2
28
4
29
7
30
12
31
3
32
2
33
11
34
4
35
2
36
11
37
7
38
5
39
6
40
7
41
3
42
8
43
19
44
2
45
5
46
1
47
24
48
2
49
26
84.52%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.5225806451612903
totalSentences
155
uniqueOpeners
81
43.29%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"Bright blue eyes."
ratio
0.013
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
5
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"His hand found the cricket"
1
"He settled onto the adjacent"
2
"His own father, a dock"
3
"He pulled out his wallet,"
4
"He wouldn't tell her about"
ratio
0.065
24.94%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
67
totalSentences
77
matches
0
"The lock clicked behind the"
1
"Silas twisted the key twice"
2
"The familiar ritual of closing"
3
"Glass clinked against glass as"
4
"The evening's takings sat in"
5
"Another successful night of serving"
6
"The knock came soft but"
7
"Silas paused, whiskey tumbler halfway"
8
"His hand found the cricket"
9
"The glass slipped from Silas's"
10
"Brendan stood under the flickering"
11
"The boy who'd shared cigarettes"
12
"Silas turned the locks."
13
"Brendan stepped inside, surveying the"
14
"Brendan's gaze swept across the"
15
"Brendan settled onto a barstool,"
16
"Silas poured two measures of"
17
"Brendan's fingers wrapped around the"
18
"Brendan drained half his whiskey"
19
"Brendan's voice cracked slightly"
ratio
0.87
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
77
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
17
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"The boy who'd shared cigarettes behind Dublin pubs had grown into something sleeker."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
21
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
96
tagDensity
0.01
leniency
0.021
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
85.8022%