Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJM26K9H3EE4Z7Y6CXBJF

Run Details

Duration:
43.6s
Cost:
$0.006410
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement, turning the London streets into a slick mirror of fractured neon and grime. Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed the reflection of streetlights. Her breath came in sharp, controlled bursts, a rhythm drilled into her during years of service. The suspect ahead, a blur of dark fabric, vaulted over a discarded supermarket trolley. Quinn didn't slow. She planted her left foot, pushed off, and cleared the metal obstacle with military precision. Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to her scalp, water dripping into her eyes, but she blinked it away without breaking stride. The chase tore through Soho, weaving between late-night drinkers and shuttered storefronts. The air smelled of wet concrete, stale beer, and ozone. Quinn's hand brushed the worn leather watch on her left wrist, a subconscious tic whenever her pulse spiked. Three years since Morris vanished. Three years of dead ends and whispers about things that didn't fit any police report. This lead felt different. Solid. The figure ahead darted into an alleyway narrowed by overflowing bins and fire escapes. Quinn followed, her shoulder clipping a brick wall as she took the corner tight. The suspect stopped at a dead end. A high wall topped with broken glass blocked the path forward. To the left, a heavy steel door sat slightly ajar, emitting a faint, sickly green glow from within. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance flickered erratically, casting jagged shadows across the wet ground. *The Raven's Nest*. Silas' bar. Quinn knew the place. She'd watched it for weeks, noting the strange clientele who entered after midnight and never seemed to leave drunk. The suspect slipped through the gap in the door. Quinn reached it seconds later, her hand hovering over the handle. The noise from inside wasn't the roar of a typical pub. It was a low hum, like electricity mixed with chanting. She pushed the door open. The interior defied the cramped exterior. dim light filtered through walls covered in old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye. Patrons sat at small tables, their faces obscured by hoods or shadows. No one looked up as Quinn entered. Their silence felt heavy, oppressive. At the far end of the room, the suspect vanished behind a tall bookshelf filled with dusty tomes on maritime history and occult lore. Quinn moved toward the bookshelf, her hand resting near the holster of her service weapon. The air grew colder the closer she got. She ran her fingers along the spines of the books. One title caught her eye: *The Anatomy of Shadows*. She pulled it. The bookshelf groaned, pivoting inward on a hidden hinge. A draft of stale, metallic air rushed out, carrying the scent of sulfur and burnt sugar. Beyond the secret room lay a staircase spiraling down into darkness. The hum grew louder, vibrating in Quinn's chest. She hesitated. Protocol dictated she call for backup, secure the perimeter, and wait for a tactical team. But backup meant questions. Questions meant explanations she couldn't give about the things she'd seen in this city. Morris had wanted to bring the whole squad down here before he disappeared. She remembered the fear in his eyes the night he told her about the "other side" of London. She checked her watch. 02:14. No time to wait. Quinn descended the stairs. The steps were worn stone, slick with moisture. The walls transitioned from brick to rough-hewn rock, then to tiles that looked Victorian but bore symbols she didn't recognize. The sound of the bar faded, replaced by a cacophony of voices speaking in tongues that twisted her stomach. At the bottom, the tunnel opened into a vast cavern. An abandoned Tube station beneath Camden. Tracks long removed, the platform now served as a marketplace. Stalls constructed from scrap metal and enchanted wood lined the area. Lanterns fueled by blue flames hung from the ceiling, illuminating goods that defied logic. Jars containing swirling storms, bundles of dried herbs that twitched when touched, and weapons forged from materials that shimmered like oil on water. This was the Veil Market. The rumor mill of the underworld. A place that moved every full moon, accessible only to those with a bone token. Quinn patted her pockets. Empty. She had no token. No invitation. Just a badge that meant nothing here and a gun that might as well be a toy. The suspect wove through the crowd, dodging a vendor selling bottled memories. Quinn pushed forward, shoulders brushing against creatures that looked human but smelled of earth and decay. A woman with skin like cracked porcelain stared at Quinn, her eyes entirely black. Quinn held the gaze, refusing to flinch, until the creature looked away. "Lost, copper?" The voice came from her right. A man leaned against a stall piled high with vials of glowing liquid. He wore a stained apron over a dark shirt, and a Saint Christopher medallion rested against his olive skin. Short curly dark brown hair framed a face marked by exhaustion and a scar running along his left forearm. Tomás Herrera. She recognized him from a file on unlicensed medical practitioners. The paramedic who treated the untreatable. "I'm looking for someone," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chaos around them. "Everyone here is looking for someone," Tomás replied, wiping his hands on a rag. "Or running from them. You don't belong here, Detective. No token, no trade. Just trouble." "The man in the grey coat. Where did he go?" Tomás tilted his head, studying her. His warm brown eyes narrowed. "Grey coat? That's a bold description for a shadow-walker. They don't like being pointed at." "He stole evidence. Critical to an ongoing investigation." " Investigation." Tomás laughed, a dry, humorless sound. "You think your laws apply down here? The Met doesn't patrol the Veil. Not since the incident at King's Cross." Quinn stepped closer, invading his personal space. "I don't care about your rules. I care about catching a killer. Tell me where he went, or I start asking questions loud enough to bring the whole market down on you." Tomás didn't blink. He reached into his apron and pulled out a small, jagged piece of bone. He tossed it to her. She caught it instinctively. It felt warm, pulsing with a faint heartbeat. "One use," Tomás said. "Get in, get your man, get out. Don't touch anything. Don't make eye contact with the traders in the north aisle. And for the love of God, don't let them see your fear. They smell it like blood in water." "Why help me?" Tomás glanced toward the far end of the market, where the shadows seemed to deepen. "Morris was a good man. He brought me a kid once. Needed stitching that no hospital could provide. Said he owed me. Consider this me paying him back." Quinn gripped the bone token. It burned slightly against her palm. She looked down the platform. The suspect had stopped near a stall selling mirrors that showed reflections of people as they would look when dead. He was bargaining with a hooded figure. "Stay close to the stalls," Tomás advised, turning back to his vials. "And keep your hand near your weapon. Not that it'll do much good if things go south." Quinn nodded once, a sharp, decisive motion. She moved into the crowd, the bone token granting her a subtle shift in perception. The hostile glares from the vendors softened, or perhaps they simply looked through her now. She navigated the throng, her senses on high alert. Every step echoed on the tiled floor, mingling with the chants and bartering. The suspect finished his transaction, pocketing a small, writhing package. He turned, scanning the crowd. His eyes locked onto Quinn. Recognition flashed across his face, followed by panic. He bolted, shoving a tall, insect-like creature out of his way. The creature hissed, mandibles clicking, but Quinn was already moving. She sprinted down the platform, dodging a cart of floating orbs. The suspect leaped over the gap where the tracks used to be, landing on the opposite side. Quinn didn't hesitate. She planted her foot and launched herself across the void, her boots scraping the edge before finding purchase. She rolled, coming up in a crouch, and immediately resumed the pursuit. The suspect ducked into a narrow maintenance tunnel branching off the main platform. Rusty pipes lined the ceiling, dripping condensation. The air here smelled of mold and ancient dust. Quinn followed, her breath misting in the cold. The tunnel widened into a circular chamber filled with machinery that hummed with a unnatural energy. Gears turned without visible power sources, and steam vented in rhythmic bursts. The suspect stood in the center of the room, facing a large, ornate gate embedded in the far wall. Carvings of beasts and stars covered its surface. He fumbled with the package he'd bought, tearing it open to reveal a key made of blackened silver. "Don't," Quinn commanded, drawing her weapon. The click of the safety disengaging echoed loudly in the chamber. "Turn around. Hands where I can see them." The suspect froze. He slowly raised his hands, the key dangling from his fingers. "You have no idea what you're doing, Detective. This isn't about your case. This is about keeping the door shut." "Open your hands. Drop the key." "If I drop this, everything changes," the suspect said, his voice trembling. "The Veil thins every night. This key stabilizes it. Without it, things come through. Things you can't shoot." Quinn kept her aim steady. Her finger rested lightly on the trigger. "I've seen things, remember? I've lost partners to things I couldn't explain. Don't lecture me on the dark." "You haven't seen anything," the suspect spat. "Morris saw. And look where it got him." The mention of Morris sent a jolt through Quinn's chest. Her grip tightened on the pistol. "What do you know about Morris?" "He asked the wrong questions. Came down here looking for answers about the disappearances. Found them. Then he vanished because he tried to stop what's coming." The suspect took a step toward the gate. "I'm not the criminal here, Quinn. I'm the lock." "Stop moving." "I have to seal the gate. The market moves tonight. The full moon rises in an hour. If the gate isn't sealed before then, the barrier breaks." Quinn's mind raced. The timeline matched the market's schedule. The supernatural activity spiking in the city. Morris's disappearance three years ago coinciding with a similar surge. Pieces of a puzzle she hadn't known existed began to click into place. But admitting the suspect's story meant letting him go. Letting him perform whatever ritual he intended with that key. "If you're lying," Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous, "I will hunt you to the ends of the earth." "If I'm telling the truth," the suspect countered, inserting the key into a slot on the gate, "you need to decide right now whether to shoot me or help me hold the line." He turned the key. The gate groaned, the carvings beginning to glow with a pulsating red light. The temperature in the chamber plummeted. Frost spread across the floor from the base of the door. A wind howled from the other side, carrying screams that sounded disturbingly human. Quinn lowered her weapon an inch. The decision hung in the balance, suspended between duty and survival.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1916
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1916
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"cacophony"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"constructed"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count2
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"pulse"
2"flickered"
3"silence"
4"oppressive"
5"cacophony"
6"stomach"
7"constructed"
8"shimmered"
9"porcelain"
10"navigated"
11"echoed"
12"scanning"
13"rhythmic"
14"raced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences152
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1910
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven's Nest"
1"The Anatomy of Shadows"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1504
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London2
Harlow1
Quinn28
Soho1
Morris4
Raven1
Anatomy1
Victorian1
Tube1
Camden1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Herrera1
Tomás8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Raven"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Herrera"
7"Tomás"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore0.569
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"photographs that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1910
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean40.64
std25.04
cv0.616
sampleLengths
0100
193
281
346
478
570
685
79
851
974
1054
1154
122
1375
1414
1529
1610
1726
188
1928
2039
2134
2244
233
2443
2543
2629
2759
2849
2961
3065
3145
3225
3334
346
3530
3630
3715
3822
3943
402
4127
4258
4320
4433
4547
4617
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs286
matches
0"was bargaining"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences174
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount588
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, sickly green glow"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.01870748299319728
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006802721088435374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean10.98
std6.74
cv0.614
sampleLengths
017
115
216
314
43
515
620
712
810
918
105
1115
124
131
1414
1514
167
1711
1818
1917
203
212
224
2319
249
2511
2611
2710
285
296
3024
3112
327
335
3424
3515
368
3710
389
393
409
4116
4211
438
442
4515
464
4714
4813
4918
51.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3468208092485549
totalSentences173
uniqueOpeners60
22.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"Just a badge that meant"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences145
matches
0"Her breath came in sharp,"
1"She planted her left foot,"
2"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
3"She'd watched it for weeks,"
4"It was a low hum,"
5"She pushed the door open."
6"Their silence felt heavy, oppressive."
7"She ran her fingers along"
8"She pulled it."
9"She remembered the fear in"
10"She checked her watch."
11"She had no token."
12"He wore a stained apron"
13"She recognized him from a"
14"His warm brown eyes narrowed."
15"He reached into his apron"
16"He tossed it to her."
17"She caught it instinctively."
18"It felt warm, pulsing with"
19"It burned slightly against her"
ratio0.241
18.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences145
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted, her"
1"Her breath came in sharp,"
2"The suspect ahead, a blur"
3"Quinn didn't slow."
4"She planted her left foot,"
5"Her salt-and-pepper hair clung to"
6"The chase tore through Soho,"
7"The air smelled of wet"
8"Quinn's hand brushed the worn"
9"This lead felt different."
10"The figure ahead darted into"
11"Quinn followed, her shoulder clipping"
12"The suspect stopped at a"
13"A high wall topped with"
14"The distinctive green neon sign"
15"*The Raven's Nest*."
16"Quinn knew the place."
17"She'd watched it for weeks,"
18"The suspect slipped through the"
19"Quinn reached it seconds later,"
ratio0.883
34.48% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"To the left, a heavy"
ratio0.007
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted, her boots splashing through puddles that swallowed the reflection of streetlights."
1"She'd watched it for weeks, noting the strange clientele who entered after midnight and never seemed to leave drunk."
2"dim light filtered through walls covered in old maps and black-and-white photographs that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye."
3"Jars containing swirling storms, bundles of dried herbs that twitched when touched, and weapons forged from materials that shimmered like oil on water."
4"Quinn pushed forward, shoulders brushing against creatures that looked human but smelled of earth and decay."
5"The suspect had stopped near a stall selling mirrors that showed reflections of people as they would look when dead."
6"She planted her foot and launched herself across the void, her boots scraping the edge before finding purchase."
7"The tunnel widened into a circular chamber filled with machinery that hummed with a unnatural energy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chaos around them"
1"the suspect said, his voice trembling"
2"Quinn said, her voice low and dangerous,"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Tomás laughed (laugh)"
1"Tomás advised (advise)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.424
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.121
80.3614%