"She checked her phone—11:47 PM—and the screen's blue glow painted her face in harsh light before she pocketed it."
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"She pressed her palm against it and felt it pulse—once, twice—like a second heartbeat trying to sync with her own."
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"Because it was silent—utterly, completely silent."
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"Aurora counted them as she approached—seven, there should be seven—and her steps faltered when she reached five and the fog swallowed everything beyond."
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"Her fingers came away unmarked, but the sensation remained, throbbing in time with—"
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"They were no longer pale—they were red, deep crimson, the exact color of the pendant's gemstone."
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"Behind her—close behind her, too close—footsteps."
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"It was tall—impossibly tall—and thin, and its limbs bent in directions that made her stomach lurch."
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"The pendant flared to life, its crimson glow pushing back the darkness just enough for her to see—"
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"The thing moved toward her—no, not moved, it simply was closer, as if the space between them had ceased to exist—and its void-face filled her vision."
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"The pendant's glow turned from crimson to white, blinding, and Aurora felt power surge through her veins—foreign, ancient, wrong—but it was hers, somehow, it had always been hers, and she grabbed onto it with both hands and screamed a word she didn't know in a language she'd never learned."
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"But the faces in the fog—they weren't retreating."
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"She heard a voice—Eva's voice—whispering her name."
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"The fingers tightened, squeezed, and she felt nails—no, not nails, something sharper—pressing into her skin."
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"The iron gates of Richmond Park groaned shut behind Aurora, the sound swallowed by fog that had rolled in from nowhere."
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"But the message had promised answers about the pendant, about the dreams that had plagued her for weeks now, and Aurora was tired of waking up screaming with no…"
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"But the deer track had vanished beneath a carpet of wildflowers that shouldn't be blooming in October, their petals pale as bone in the moonlight."
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"Actually burned, not the gentle warmth of proximity to something otherworldly, but a searing heat that made her gasp and yank at the chain."
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"Aurora backed away slowly, her hand finding the pocket knife and gripping it through the fabric."
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"The slope that had seemed gentle on the way up had turned treacherous, the ground soft and unstable beneath her boots."
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"Heavy and deliberate, each one landing a half-second after her own, as if something was matching her pace precisely."
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"Everything burned except the pendant, which had gone ice-cold against her chest, and that terrified her more than anything else."
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"So close she could feel it on the back of her neck, a cold exhalation that smelled of turned earth and rotting flowers."
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"It was tall—impossibly tall—and thin, and its limbs bent in directions that made her stomach lurch."
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"Aurora understood, with a certainty that bypassed thought entirely, that running was pointless."
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"Aurora fell to her knees, clutching her arm, watching her own blood drip onto the crimson flowers."
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"Not words this time, but a shriek that rattled her bones and made her teeth ache."
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"The delivery driver who'd trained her at the Golden Empress."