Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJY3J7EYB2EB6H8YR66A0

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Duration:
3m 19s
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$0.004300
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NextBit

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above the entrance flickered its familiar green glow onto the wet pavement outside. Inside, The Raven's Nest held its usual handful of late-night regulars, a scattered constellation of souls who found comfort in the dim corners and the reliable pour of Silas's whiskey. He polished a glass with a worn cloth, the silver signet ring catching the low light from the brass lamp above the bar. The door opened. A gust of October rain slipped in with the customer. Silas didn't look up immediately. Twenty years behind this bar had taught him to read a man's entrance before his face—the weight of footsteps, the hesitation in the threshold, the particular rhythm of someone who wasn't sure they wanted to be there. This one stood in the doorway too long, letting the door swing shut behind him with a soft click. "Last call's in an hour," Silas said, still polishing. "Plenty of time if you want something strong." "Still opening with the weather report, I see." The voice hit him like a fist to the sternum. Silas set the glass down. His hand found the edge of the bar, fingers tightening around the worn wood as he looked up. Marcus Webb stood in the doorway of his own bar like a ghost wearing a familiar coat. The years had not been kind. His once-dark hair had gone fully white, swept back from a forehead more lined than Silas remembered. His shoulders had rounded inward, the posture of a man who had spent too many years hunching over classified files in windowless rooms. But the eyes—those pale grey eyes—were unchanged. They held the same watchful stillness Silas remembered from Prague, from that disastrous night when everything had gone wrong. "Marcus." The name came out rougher than Silas intended. "In the flesh." Marcus moved toward the bar, each step deliberate, favoring his right leg slightly. A cane. He carried a dark wooden cane with a silver head, and Silas realized with a cold pang that it wasn't for effect. Marcus settled onto a stool three seats down, placing the cane carefully against the bar. "I wasn't sure you'd still be here." "Where else would I be?" "I didn't know, Si. That's rather the point, isn't it?" The old nickname—Si—landed between them like a dropped coin. Silas reached for a bottle without asking, poured two fingers of Macallan into a glass, slid it across the bar. He poured the same for himself, though his hands weren't quite steady. "To what do I owe the pleasure?" Silas asked. "It's been—what—fifteen years?" "Sixteen." Marcus took the glass but didn't drink. He turned it slowly between his palms, watching the amber liquid catch the light. "I read about Prague. The file said you took early retirement. Medical discharge." "The file." Silas laughed, a dry sound with no humor in it. "You'd have access to the file." "I pulled strings. It was the least I could do for my best field operative." Marcus finally looked up, met his eyes. "I wanted to know you were alive. After—" "After you disappeared." Silas drank. The whiskey burned, but not enough. "After you walked away and never looked back. After Prague went sideways and you left me in that safehouse with a bullet wound and a cover story that fell apart." "I had orders." "We all had orders, Marcus. Orders are what got us into that mess. Orders are what got Nicky Kowalski killed." The name hung in the air. Nicky. Nikolai Kowalski, their contact in the Czech resistance, dead in a warehouse fire that Marcus had ordered them to investigate. An ambush. A setup. The only reason Silas had survived was the bullet had missed his spine by inches—and Marcus had vanished before the inquiry, gone to ground before anyone could ask questions. "I didn't order that fire." Marcus's voice was very quiet. "You know I didn't." "I know you left me to explain it alone. I know you went to the Americans and I spent six months in a rehabilitation center while the Service tried to decide whether to disavow me." Silas poured another drink, emptied half of it. "I know you never called. Never wrote. Nothing. Sixteen years of nothing." "I wrote you a letter. After the inquiry wrapped. They intercepted it." "A letter." "A goodbye, Si. I was dying. Did they tell you that part?" Silas set his glass down. The bar had gone quiet around them—the regulars were veterans of silences, knew when to leave them undisturbed. "What do you mean, dying?" "Pancreatic. The doctors gave me eight months." Marcus finally took a sip of his whiskey, and his hand trembled slightly. "That was fourteen years ago." "The Americans have better doctors." "The Americans have experimental treatments and very little oversight." Marcus smiled, a thin expression that didn't reach his eyes. "I'm a statistical anomaly, apparently. A miracle of modern medicine and stubbornness." "That's why you left. You were sick and you didn't—" "I was dying and I didn't want you to watch." Marcus's voice cracked slightly on the last word. "I wanted you to remember me as I was. Not as a ghost fading in some hospital bed. I thought—I thought it would be easier." "Easier." Silas tasted the word like poison. "You thought it would be easier for me to think you just walked away? That you abandoned me like everyone else?" "I thought it would hurt less than watching me disappear a little more each day." Marcus set down his glass. His hand found the cane, gripped it. "I was wrong. I know I was wrong. But I couldn't—I couldn't make myself call." The silence stretched between them, filled with the soft jazz playing from the old speakers in the corner, the muffled sound of rain against the window. Silas looked at the man he had once trusted more than anyone in the world, the man who had been his handler, his confidant, his almost-something-more in those long months in Vienna when they had been young and stupid and convinced they would live forever. "Why now?" Silas asked finally. "Why come back now?" "Because I'm out of time, Si. The cancer's back. They've given me three months this time, and they're not optimistic about the experimental options." Marcus met his eyes steadily. "I didn't want to die without seeing you again. Without saying—" He stopped. His hand tightened on the cane until his knuckles showed white through his skin. "Without saying what?" Silas prompted, and his own voice was rough. "I'm sorry." Marcus said it simply, plainly, like a debrief. "I'm sorry I left. I'm sorry I didn't fight harder to stay. I'm sorry I let you think I'd abandoned you when I was just—broken. And scared. And too proud to let you see me fall apart." The jazz continued. The rain continued. A glass clinked somewhere in the back corner as one of the regulars signaled for a refill. "Sixteen years," Silas said slowly. "Sixteen years I thought you'd moved on, started over, decided the Service wasn't worth the trouble. Sixteen years I wondered what I did wrong." "It was never you. It was never anything you did." Marcus reached out, his hand stopping just short of Silas's on the bar. "You were the best thing in my life, Si. That's why I couldn't—I couldn't let you watch me become nothing." "You're something," Silas said. "You're here. That's more than I had yesterday." "And tomorrow?" Silas looked at the hand hovering inches from his own. He thought about Prague, about the warehouse fire, about sixteen years of unanswered questions and half-healed wounds. He thought about Nicky Kowalski, dead in a blaze that was supposed to have been an intelligence coup, and he thought about the years of silence that had grown around that wound like scar tissue. "Tomorrow we have drinks," Silas said. "And then we have tomorrow after that." Marcus's hand moved forward, closed over Silas's. His grip was weaker than it had been, trembled with an effort that hadn't existed before, but his palm was warm and familiar. "That's not much." "It's enough. For now, it's enough." They stayed like that as the night deepened, as the regulars drifted out one by one and the neon sign flickered its green glow over empty streets. Outside, the rain slowed and stopped. Inside, two men sat at the bar with sixteen years of silence finally filling with words—not enough, never enough, but a beginning. It was a beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
62.07% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"his hand trembled slightly [slightly]"
1"Marcus's voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
2"Silas asked finally [finally]"
3"Silas said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.724
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.138
72.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"slowly"
3"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1438
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"pang"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count2
6
word"silence"
count3
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"pang"
5"trembled"
6"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1419
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
5.99% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount868
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.88
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas25
October1
Webb1
Prague2
Marcus16
Si1
Macallan1
Kowalski2
Czech1
Vienna1
Nicky2
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Webb"
3"Marcus"
4"Si"
5"Kowalski"
6"Nicky"
places
0"Raven"
1"Prague"
2"Czech"
3"Vienna"
globalScore0.06
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.705
wordCount1419
matches
0"not enough, never enough, but a beginning"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean27.82
std21.52
cv0.774
sampleLengths
069
113
261
317
48
533
689
79
862
95
1010
1141
1212
1335
1418
1530
1641
173
1820
1960
2014
2155
2212
232
2412
2528
2625
275
2831
2910
3043
3128
3242
3371
349
3540
3616
3711
3847
3923
4029
4143
4212
432
4462
4513
4630
473
486
4955
90.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"were unchanged"
1"was supposed"
2"been, trembled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences108
ratio0.056
matches
0"Twenty years behind this bar had taught him to read a man's entrance before his face—the weight of footsteps, the hesitation in the threshold, the particular rhythm of someone who wasn't sure they wanted to be there."
1"But the eyes—those pale grey eyes—were unchanged."
2"The old nickname—Si—landed between them like a dropped coin."
3"The only reason Silas had survived was the bullet had missed his spine by inches—and Marcus had vanished before the inquiry, gone to ground before anyone could ask questions."
4"The bar had gone quiet around them—the regulars were veterans of silences, knew when to leave them undisturbed."
5"Inside, two men sat at the bar with sixteen years of silence finally filling with words—not enough, never enough, but a beginning."
99.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount881
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04086265607264472
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.018161180476730987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean13.14
std9.53
cv0.725
sampleLengths
016
130
223
33
410
55
637
719
89
98
108
1110
125
1318
1417
156
1617
1723
187
1919
209
2116
222
2322
2415
257
265
2710
289
2920
3012
319
323
338
3414
3513
3612
376
3822
398
405
416
4230
433
4420
456
461
4720
482
492
42.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences64
matches
0"He polished a glass with"
1"His hand found the edge"
2"His once-dark hair had gone"
3"His shoulders had rounded inward,"
4"They held the same watchful"
5"He carried a dark wooden"
6"He poured the same for"
7"He turned it slowly between"
8"His hand found the cane,"
9"His hand tightened on the"
10"He thought about Prague, about"
11"He thought about Nicky Kowalski,"
12"His grip was weaker than"
13"They stayed like that as"
14"It was a beginning."
ratio0.234
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences64
matches
0"The neon sign above the"
1"He polished a glass with"
2"The door opened."
3"A gust of October rain"
4"Silas didn't look up immediately."
5"This one stood in the"
6"Silas said, still polishing"
7"The voice hit him like"
8"Silas set the glass down."
9"His hand found the edge"
10"Marcus Webb stood in the"
11"The years had not been"
12"His once-dark hair had gone"
13"His shoulders had rounded inward,"
14"They held the same watchful"
15"The name came out rougher"
16"Marcus moved toward the bar,"
17"He carried a dark wooden"
18"Marcus settled onto a stool"
19"The old nickname—Si—landed between them"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Inside, The Raven's Nest held its usual handful of late-night regulars, a scattered constellation of souls who found comfort in the dim corners and the reliable…"
1"Twenty years behind this bar had taught him to read a man's entrance before his face—the weight of footsteps, the hesitation in the threshold, the particular rh…"
2"His shoulders had rounded inward, the posture of a man who had spent too many years hunching over classified files in windowless rooms."
3"Silas looked at the man he had once trusted more than anyone in the world, the man who had been his handler, his confidant, his almost-something-more in those l…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Silas laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.138
leniency0.276
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.034
75.2805%