Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXJYSREZ6HXF29MVH60JDQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 7s
Cost:
$0.010796
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell smelled of damp concrete and old smoke. Quinn kept her steps light and measured, heels finding the worn grooves in the landing tiles the way a drill sergeant expected you to move—purposeful, efficient. The taped-off mouth of the abandoned station opened into a low vault of light and shadow. Flashbulbs flared like cheap fireworks, making white islands on the tracks. Somewhere down the platform a radio hissed static between voices. She stopped at the line of officers and let them part. Her watch, old leather worn smooth at the strap, caught the camera light. She glanced at it the way soldiers checked compasses. The body lay half-curled at the base of a mosaic of a swimmer—an old Oyster card mosaic, tiles missing like loose teeth. A battered market stall had been pushed aside. Books and bottles had spilled from crates; a brass compass sat on the concrete with its face scratched and full of dust, its needle trembling toward the dark recess where the service tunnel narrowed. Eva crouched at the edge of the pool of light, glasses catching the glare, one freckled hand tucking a curl behind her ear the way she did when she read a bad line in a book. She kept her satchel close, the leather bulging with notebooks and thin, ribbon-marked volumes. The charge in the air that hummed along the station walls felt natural to her—her shoulders softened the way they did when she smelled old paper. "Do you see the sigils?" Eva asked, voice tight as a wire. She tapped a chalk ring struck into the concrete near the body. The chalk gleamed pale and new. Quinn crouched with knees square, military. Her fingers hovered above the victim's shirt, not touching. The man was mid-thirties, market stall apron smeared with something that read red from a distance. His left hand had a sliver of bone-white at the nail bed where the skin had split. No obvious blunt trauma. No host of knife wounds. No blackened edges that belonged to gate burns. Someone had moved as though the man would get up and then didn't. "He sells trinkets," a constable offered. "Name's Tomas Varek. Stall's on the east side—used to sell compasses, oddities. People saw him two hours ago." Eva's fingers found the compass. She nudged it. The face had sigils etched shallow and precise around the edge, tiny crescents that curled at the points. The brass casing had verdigris in the crevices, the green a soft beard along the seam. The needle quivered and pointed away from the platform, aiming toward the narrow iron of the old service tunnel. "That's a Veil Compass," Eva breathed. Her voice dropped. "Someone took it out to find a rift." Quinn let the word hang. Her jaw tightened, old gears of suspicion grinding. "Rift would take you clean," she said. "No body left behind, no blood pooling like this. Rifts don't leave burn-free leaves." A young officer found the blue chalk ring nearby and cut a ragged line through it. "We found this circle. People said—voices. There's scorch in one place. Smells like ozone." "Then why's there a pocket ripped open?" Quinn said. She gestured to the man's apron where the fabric near the seam had jagged cuts and the lining clung with a thread of oil. "Why'd someone cut him out of his apron? Why'd they leave a half-eaten sandwich in his stall, and why is his ledger folded into his satchel when it's usually zipped and tucked under the counter?" Eva's glasses flashed. "Could be he opened a portal and something grabbed him. They can leave things behind, can't they? Not everything goes through. The sigil—" "Sigils can be painted afterward," Quinn interrupted. Her voice didn't rise. It clipped the air, small and clean. "It fits a narrative. But narratives can be staged." A camera flashed. Officers murmured. Quinn looked at each mark like she could read the person as a page. The compass's needle did not point at the centre of the chalk ring, but toward a seam in the platform wall where old tiles met metal. Someone had pried at that seam. She ran her thumb along it, felt the grit. At one spot the concrete had a smear of oil, a grimy brush stroke that ended where a bolt head sat dark with recent file marks. "You saw that?" she asked. "Could be maintenance," the constable said. "Service doors have been tampered with before." "Maintenance didn't show up at midnight with a hacksaw," Quinn said. She drew the fossil-like edge of a line in the dust with a fingertip. The dust around where the man's boots had rested was undisturbed in arcs—like someone had been lifted vertically and then set down. She pointed to the scuffing on the back of the knee of his jeans, a pattern like a strap. Eva's eyes widened. "Lifted? Like hoisted." "Or carried through an aperture." Quinn rubbed the pad of her thumb over the tile. "Not through anything natural." A small crowd had gathered beyond the cordon, whispering. Someone joked about ghosts. Someone else whispered of dealers and vengeance. Quinn listened to the hum of voices the way she had once listened for changes in a suspect's breath. She tuned them out. "Why leave the compass?" Eva said. "If someone knew... they'd hide it. Unless they wanted someone to find it." Quinn watched the compass close. The needle still trembled, pointing into the service gap. Tiny flecks of something black had dried along the edge of the casing. She lifted the compass with fingers she kept steady and tested it; the needle swung before it settled back toward the tunnel. The motion betrayed a magnetism that wasn't normal for compass needles in a chain of underground pipes. "Someone brought a Veil Compass here to make it look like a rift," Quinn said. "Or someone used it as a homing beacon to find the tunnel. Both put an inside hand on the scene." "Or Tomas used it to find a rift himself," Eva said. "Maybe he followed something that shouldn't have had a human trail." Quinn set the compass down on a clean square of evidence paper. She didn't like leaving items on the ground. Evidence might speak in small languages; she didn't want to ruin a sentence. She had been a detective long enough to know the smell of staging. The ledger tucked into the satchel had neat lines of transactions written with a careful hand. But the scrawl elsewhere—on a scrap of paper jammed into a box of bottle caps—was quick, panicked. Two hands had written in two different scripts. That meant company. Someone had helped. "Why the half-eaten sandwich?" she asked. "Why not take lunch? Why cut the apron? Where's the bone token?" The mention of tokens made the station fall quieter; all eyes scraped toward the vendors' stalls. The Veil Market required a bone token to enter, a crude rite that even ordinary thieves respected. Vendors kept extras out of sight, always. The stall's cashbox lay open. No tokens. "What if the token was removed after?" Eva said. "Maybe whoever took him pocketed it as proof. Or—" Quinn looked at the man's hands. No token. No necklace. The knuckles bore rings of grime; the nails had been clipped neat. He had kept no talismans. A stall owner, she had thought, would have kept tokens handy above the counter, not sewn into their lining. She closed her fingers into a fist. "Whoever did this knew the Market's rules," Quinn said. "They know where tokens are stored. They know when the vendors sleep. They know how to open the service way without bringing the whole station down." She pointed to the bolt marks again. Small, deliberate, notched with a file like someone had ground down the edges so the bolt would turn under pressure. The seam met a cast-iron lip where the hatch used to sit. A maintenance hatch. Maintenance for the old Tube service tunnels that ran like veins under Camden—dark, damp, easy to forget. A uniformed man in gloves frowned. "We booked a maintenance team for repairs last week. Records show them here this afternoon. They left at five." "Who signed for them?" Quinn asked. "Can't see on tape. It's blurred." She walked the platform edge slowly, eyes the way she had been taught to hold a room—top to bottom, corner to corner. The pattern of dust told a simple truth. A footprint started at the stall and led to the seam where the hatch sat. Another set started from the other side of the seam and ended mid-platform. Between them the dust had been brushed like a hand across a table. She knelt and scraped a thumbnail along the edge of a groove; it came away with a sliver of black gum. "Rope fibres," she said. "And something else." Eva leaned in, the curl tucked behind her ear again, lips pressed thin. "Ash?" "Not ash." Quinn let the word settle where it fell. "Lubricant. Grease. Industrial, not oil from the stalls. Somebody used a winch. Hoisted him. Brought him through the maintenance hatch—either into the service tunnel or out of it." "You think they removed him and came back?" the constable asked, confused. Quinn's eyes flicked to the ledger in Eva's satchel. She uncurled a corner and read silently. There had been an odd payment two days ago—large for a stall that only sold trinkets. A name she didn't recognise. A delivery scheduled for night. A note scribbled in a sharp hand: 'Keep closed. For Shade.' Someone had circled the word 'Shade'. "Shade artisans don't need tokens," Eva murmured. "They make things. They move things. They can—" "They make tools," Quinn said. "And they make doors." Her voice narrowed. "This is not a random abduction by a stray, hungry rift. This feels curated." Eva reached for the compass again and turned it toward the seam. She held it like a book, reverent and small. "The needle points there," she whispered. "If it's a homing beacon, someone used it like a key." "Or it's a bait," Quinn said. "You plant an item associated with a market, you create a story. People who want to believe in rifts and markets will run with it. You get the community to police itself while the real work happens under the floor." An officer handed Quinn a bundle of photographs taken earlier—wide shots, close-ups, angles that tried to trap the truth like a net. She traced the pattern of the blood across the tiles. Not a blow that would knock someone immediately unconscious. No skull fracture, no broken wrist. The blood spread in a way that suggested an extended tidal drift—not the sudden crimson ring of a lethal wound, but the slow smear of someone who bled while being moved. "They tried to stage panic," she said. "They tried to make it look like the man vanished. They left traces of what they'd expect a rift to leave. Char smell. Sigil chalk. A compass pointed in the right direction. But forgeries are messy. They don't consider the small things." "Like token storage," Eva said. "Like a ledger tucked wrong. Like a strap mark on the back of a jean knee. Like the dented brass hinge along the service seam that had fresh file marks." Quinn stood and faced the mouth of the tunnel, where shadow pooled like quiet water. Her breath fogged in the cool air, steady and shallow. Officers shuffled their feet. "If someone with a winch or a harness wanted to take him, they came through the hatch," she said. "They removed token evidence, they moved his body to look half-rich in narrative, and they left the compass. They wanted somebody to find it and call the market, make people think an otherworldly crime had happened. That tells me two things. One: the perpetrator is someone who knows the Market and knows the Vendor's routines. Two: they wanted to distract." Eva's hand went to a notebook, fingers tracing the ribbon. "To distract from what?" Quinn looked at the crowd, at the stalls where bottled charms lay like fossils, at the mosaic swimmer whose tiles were cracked. She thought of the maintenance team that had a blurred signature and the suddenly missing bone token. "From whatever they did in the tunnel," she said. "Not everything that moves in this city wanted to be seen. But some of it likes to be read. Whoever moved Tomas moved him with tools and timing. They wanted a rift narrative to cover the track they opened under this station." She folded her arms for a second as officers stared. She found a man in business attire at the edge of the crowd—a nervous little man rubbing his palms. He had been seen arguing with Tomas earlier, the officers said. A purveyor of old watches, they'd claimed. Quinn studied the man's shoes; the soles had new mud caked with the same black gum she had scraped from the seam. "Get him here," she ordered. "Bring the maintenance logs. Pull the camera closer. Wipe the civilian perimeter. We need to know who signed for the hatch." She turned to Eva. "Stay with the compass. Keep it in sight. Bag the ledger. Someone move his satchel into evidence." Eva nodded, hands moving quick now, efficient, fingers tucking pages into evidence bags with the deftness of a librarian used to cataloguing dangerous knowledge. Quinn looked down at the compass one last time. The needle stood at the seam, precise as a finger. The verdigris on its casing told her someone had owned it long enough to wear it like a memory. She touched her mouth once, tasting cold. "Don't let anyone scrub the hatch," she said. "And tell your market people to stay away until we pull the tunnel." Eva's mouth pressed into a line. "You think—" "I think they staged a rift," Quinn said. "I think they used a tool that points toward portals because it sold the story more quickly than a camera or a lie would. I think this is not about Tomas being taken by something that slips between worlds. It's about someone using the idea of the Veil Market to hide better crimes." Footsteps sounded down the platform as an officer led the watch-seller into the cordon. The man's palms were damp, the mud on his soles drying into cracked webbing. He protested; his voice sounded small against the vault. Quinn kept watching the seam, where the bolt had been tampered with. The station's air hummed in the same note it had when she first stepped into the light. The needle kept pointing, unuttering for now where it aimed. She had put together a shape the others had missed, but shapes invited questions that could rupture easy judgments. She pulled her jacket tighter and reached for the radio clipped to her shoulder.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.507
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2512
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2512
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"efficient"
count2
2
word"mosaic"
count3
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"quivered"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"beacon"
count2
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"efficient"
2"mosaic"
3"etched"
4"quivered"
5"trembled"
6"beacon"
7"flicked"
8"traced"
9"otherworldly"
10"tracing"
11"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences164
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2485
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1658
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Oyster1
Eva18
Quinn26
Veil1
Market1
Tube1
Camden1
Tomas1
Footsteps1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Tomas"
4"Footsteps"
places(empty)
globalScore0.716
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.402
wordCount2485
matches
0"not the sudden crimson ring of a lethal wound, but the slow smear of someone who bled while being moved"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean37.65
std23.58
cv0.626
sampleLengths
072
133
264
376
430
578
624
761
817
934
1030
1168
1226
1327
1486
155
1613
1766
186
1919
2043
2119
2266
2335
2422
2533
2660
2718
2847
2918
3053
3135
3259
3325
346
356
3692
377
3814
3938
4012
4159
4215
4326
4438
4546
4678
4749
485
4930
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences164
matches
0"been pushed"
1"was undisturbed"
2"been lifted"
3"been clipped"
4"been taught"
5"been brushed"
6"being moved"
7"been seen"
8"been tampered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs298
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences19
totalSentences199
ratio0.095
matches
0"Quinn kept her steps light and measured, heels finding the worn grooves in the landing tiles the way a drill sergeant expected you to move—purposeful, efficient."
1"The body lay half-curled at the base of a mosaic of a swimmer—an old Oyster card mosaic, tiles missing like loose teeth."
2"Books and bottles had spilled from crates; a brass compass sat on the concrete with its face scratched and full of dust, its needle trembling toward the dark recess where the service tunnel narrowed."
3"The charge in the air that hummed along the station walls felt natural to her—her shoulders softened the way they did when she smelled old paper."
4"The dust around where the man's boots had rested was undisturbed in arcs—like someone had been lifted vertically and then set down."
5"She lifted the compass with fingers she kept steady and tested it; the needle swung before it settled back toward the tunnel."
6"Evidence might speak in small languages; she didn't want to ruin a sentence."
7"But the scrawl elsewhere—on a scrap of paper jammed into a box of bottle caps—was quick, panicked."
8"The mention of tokens made the station fall quieter; all eyes scraped toward the vendors' stalls."
9"The knuckles bore rings of grime; the nails had been clipped neat."
10"Maintenance for the old Tube service tunnels that ran like veins under Camden—dark, damp, easy to forget."
11"She walked the platform edge slowly, eyes the way she had been taught to hold a room—top to bottom, corner to corner."
12"She knelt and scraped a thumbnail along the edge of a groove; it came away with a sliver of black gum."
13"There had been an odd payment two days ago—large for a stall that only sold trinkets."
14"An officer handed Quinn a bundle of photographs taken earlier—wide shots, close-ups, angles that tried to trap the truth like a net."
15"The blood spread in a way that suggested an extended tidal drift—not the sudden crimson ring of a lethal wound, but the slow smear of someone who bled while being moved."
16"She found a man in business attire at the edge of the crowd—a nervous little man rubbing his palms."
17"Quinn studied the man's shoes; the soles had new mud caked with the same black gum she had scraped from the seam."
18"He protested; his voice sounded small against the vault."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1356
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thin, ribbon-marked volumes."
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.01327433628318584
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0022123893805309734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean12.49
std9.03
cv0.723
sampleLengths
09
126
216
311
410
511
613
79
822
98
1034
1136
1214
1326
1412
1512
166
176
189
1916
2017
214
225
238
2413
256
2618
275
283
2918
3016
3119
326
333
348
355
368
377
3814
3916
4014
419
4224
4335
443
4523
467
474
487
499
43.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.32160804020100503
totalSentences199
uniqueOpeners64
24.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences134
matches
0"Somewhere down the platform a"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences134
matches
0"She stopped at the line"
1"Her watch, old leather worn"
2"She glanced at it the"
3"She kept her satchel close,"
4"She tapped a chalk ring"
5"Her fingers hovered above the"
6"His left hand had a"
7"She nudged it."
8"Her voice dropped."
9"Her jaw tightened, old gears"
10"She gestured to the man's"
11"Her voice didn't rise."
12"It clipped the air, small"
13"She ran her thumb along"
14"She drew the fossil-like edge"
15"She pointed to the scuffing"
16"She tuned them out."
17"She lifted the compass with"
18"She didn't like leaving items"
19"She had been a detective"
ratio0.291
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences134
matches
0"The stairwell smelled of damp"
1"Quinn kept her steps light"
2"The taped-off mouth of the"
3"Flashbulbs flared like cheap fireworks,"
4"She stopped at the line"
5"Her watch, old leather worn"
6"She glanced at it the"
7"The body lay half-curled at"
8"A battered market stall had"
9"Books and bottles had spilled"
10"Eva crouched at the edge"
11"She kept her satchel close,"
12"The charge in the air"
13"Eva asked, voice tight as"
14"She tapped a chalk ring"
15"The chalk gleamed pale and"
16"Quinn crouched with knees square,"
17"Her fingers hovered above the"
18"The man was mid-thirties, market"
19"His left hand had a"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
72.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The man was mid-thirties, market stall apron smeared with something that read red from a distance."
1"The face had sigils etched shallow and precise around the edge, tiny crescents that curled at the points."
2"The motion betrayed a magnetism that wasn't normal for compass needles in a chain of underground pipes."
3"An officer handed Quinn a bundle of photographs taken earlier—wide shots, close-ups, angles that tried to trap the truth like a net."
4"The blood spread in a way that suggested an extended tidal drift—not the sudden crimson ring of a lethal wound, but the slow smear of someone who bled while bei…"
5"The man's palms were damp, the mud on his soles drying into cracked webbing."
6"She had put together a shape the others had missed, but shapes invited questions that could rupture easy judgments."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva asked, voice tight as a wire"
1"the constable asked, confused"
75.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags28
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Quinn interrupted (interrupt)"
2"Eva murmured (murmur)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.418
leniency0.836
rawRatio0.179
effectiveRatio0.149
80.9198%