Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXK25XGSHSWJTKY31D6FGV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 28s
Cost:
$0.007663
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow from the green sign outside bled through the fogged window, casting long shadows across the worn wooden floor of The Raven's Nest. Aurora Carter wiped down the bar counter, the cloth moving in absent circles as her mind wandered elsewhere. Tuesday nights were quiet. Silas had disappeared into the back room an hour ago, likely nursing a glass of whiskey while poring over whatever intelligence reports still found their way to him. The door swung open, bringing with it a gust of November cold and the scent of rain-soaked wool. Rory glanced up, expecting one of the regulars—maybe old Tom with his endless stories about the merchant navy, or perhaps Sarah, the barrister who stopped by after late nights at the chambers. Instead, a woman stood in the doorway, shaking water from an umbrella that had seen better days. Dark hair, cut severe and short against a angular face. Cheekbones that could cut glass. Eyes that swept the room with an assessment that spoke of years spent looking for threats in crowded spaces. Rory's hand stilled on the cloth. The woman's gaze landed on the bar, and something flickered across her face—recognition, surprise, then a careful blankness that settled over her features. "Mind if I get a drink?" That voice. Lower than Rory remembered, rougher at the edges, but underneath it all, still unmistakably her. "Miriam." The name fell from Rory's lips before she could stop it. Eight years. Eight years since Cardiff, since late nights in the university library, since shared flats and inside jokes and promises to stay in touch that neither of them had kept. Miriam approached the bar, each step measured. She wore a tailored charcoal coat over a black roll-neck, and when she placed her hands on the counter, Rory noticed the absence of rings. No wedding band. No engagement ring. The Miriam she'd known had worn a diamond on her left hand since second year, proud and certain of her future. "What are you doing in London?" Miriam slid onto a barstool, her posture rigid. "Business. I wasn't expecting to find you here." "Clearly." Rory reached for a glass, buying herself time to process. "What can I get you?" "Whiskey. Neat. Whatever's decent." Rory selected a bottle from the shelf behind her—the good stuff Silas kept for special occasions, or for people who looked like they needed it. She poured two fingers into the glass and set it down. Miriam wrapped her fingers around it but didn't drink. Her gaze moved across Rory's face, cataloguing changes the way one might scan a document for errors. "You look different." "So do you." It was an understatement. The Miriam Kowalski that Rory remembered had been soft around the edges, quick to laugh, always the first to suggest another round or a late-night adventure. She'd been studying psychology, planning to open a practice, talking about children and a house in the suburbs with her fiancé. This Miriam looked like she hadn't laughed in months. The softness was gone, replaced by something harder, sharper. The kind of hardness that came from necessity rather than choice. "Last I heard, you were in Bristol," Rory said. "Marcus got that position at the law firm there." Miriam's jaw tightened. A small movement, barely perceptible, but Rory caught it. "He did. For a while." Silence stretched between them, filled only by the distant murmur of jazz from the speakers and the drum of rain against the window. Rory thought about filling it—asking more questions, offering platitudes, doing any of the things that old friends did when they reconnected after years apart. But this wasn't a reunion. This was something else entirely. Two strangers wearing the faces of people who used to know each other. "I heard about your father," Miriam said finally. "I'm sorry." Rory's hand moved unconsciously to her left wrist, fingers tracing the crescent scar beneath her sleeve. "He's not dead." "No. But he might as well be, from what I understand." The words landed with surgical precision. Rory felt them settle somewhere beneath her ribs, a familiar ache that had become almost comfortable over the years. "You always did know how to cut to the bone." "Psychology degree." Miriam lifted her glass, took a slow sip. "Though I suppose that's common knowledge by now. Google is a terrible thing for keeping secrets." "Is that how you found me?" "Among other things." Rory leaned against the back counter, folding her arms. "Why are you really here, Miriam? You said business, but you didn't know I worked at this bar. So what brings you to Soho on a rainy Tuesday night?" For a moment, Miriam didn't answer. She stared into her glass as though the amber liquid might offer answers to questions she hadn't yet voiced. When she looked up, her eyes held something Rory couldn't quite read. Regret, maybe. Or resignation. "I left Marcus." The confession hung in the air, simple and devastating. Rory waited. "Three years ago. He—" Miriam stopped, her throat working. "He wasn't who I thought he was. Or maybe I wasn't who I thought I was. Either way, the life we'd planned..." She made a sound that might have been a laugh in another life. "It turns out you can plan every detail and still wake up one morning and realise none of it fits anymore." Rory thought about Cardiff. About Evan. About the night she'd packed a bag and fled to London with nothing but Eva's voice in her ear and the desperate need to be somewhere—anywhere—else. "Sometimes the plans we make are just the stories we tell ourselves to feel safe." Miriam's sharp gaze fixed on her. "You sound like someone who's learned that the hard way." "Everyone does, eventually." The door to the back room swung open, and Silas emerged, his limp more pronounced than usual. His hazel eyes moved from Rory to Miriam, assessing the tension in the air with the practiced ease of a man who'd spent decades reading rooms. "Everything alright out here?" Rory straightened. "Old friend. We were just catching up." Silas's gaze lingered on Miriam for a moment longer than necessary. He'd spent a lifetime spotting trouble, and whatever he saw in the woman at the bar clearly registered on whatever internal radar he still maintained. "Let me know if you need anything." He moved past them toward the staircase that led to the upper floors, his silver signet ring catching the low light as he gripped the bannister. When he was gone, Miriam exhaled slowly. "He's not just a bar owner." "No." "Neither are you just a bartender." Rory smiled, though it didn't quite reach her eyes. "No." Miriam finished her whiskey in one long swallow and set the glass down with a decisive click. "I should go. I have an early meeting." "Stay." The word slipped out before Rory could examine it. Miriam paused, halfway off her stool. "I've got a bottle of the good stuff and a quiet bar." Rory reached for the whiskey, poured another measure into Miriam's glass. "Whatever brought you here tonight, it can wait a little longer. Tell me about Bristol. Tell me about leaving. Tell me about the years I missed." Something shifted in Miriam's expression. The hardness cracked, just slightly, and beneath it, Rory glimpsed the friend she'd once known—the one who'd held her hair back after too many tequila shots, who'd studied until dawn and still showed up with coffee for everyone else, who'd believed in happy endings with an optimism that had been almost painful to witness. "You really want to know?" "I wouldn't have asked if I didn't." Miriam settled back onto the stool. Outside, the rain continued its relentless assault on the city, but inside, the green glow of the neon sign wrapped around them both. "It started with the small things," Miriam began, her voice barely above a whisper. "The way he'd correct me in front of people. Little comments about my weight. About my friends. About the way I laughed too loud." Her fingers traced the rim of her glass. "By the time I realised what was happening, I couldn't remember who I was without him." Rory said nothing. She simply listened, and in the quiet of the bar, two old friends began the slow work of finding each other again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Miriam said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.044
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"barely above a whisper"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
1"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"practiced ease"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"measured"
2"silence"
3"tracing"
4"familiar"
5"comfortable"
6"tension"
7"practiced ease"
8"whisper"
9"weight"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1391
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1031
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
November1
Tom1
Sarah1
Rory25
Cardiff2
Miriam21
Silas4
Kowalski1
Evan1
London1
Eva1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Tom"
3"Sarah"
4"Rory"
5"Miriam"
6"Silas"
7"Kowalski"
8"Evan"
9"Eva"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.288
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like they needed it"
1"looked like she hadn't laughed in months"
2"quite read"
3"quite reach her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1391
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean22.8
std19.05
cv0.836
sampleLengths
075
150
251
36
423
56
617
71
842
959
106
1116
1216
134
1436
1526
163
173
1851
1929
2018
2112
225
2347
2423
2510
2619
2711
2825
2910
3026
316
323
3338
3441
353
3611
3765
3832
3915
4016
413
4243
434
449
4536
4633
4713
481
496
96.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences116
ratio0.052
matches
0"Rory glanced up, expecting one of the regulars—maybe old Tom with his endless stories about the merchant navy, or perhaps Sarah, the barrister who stopped by after late nights at the chambers."
1"The woman's gaze landed on the bar, and something flickered across her face—recognition, surprise, then a careful blankness that settled over her features."
2"Rory selected a bottle from the shelf behind her—the good stuff Silas kept for special occasions, or for people who looked like they needed it."
3"Rory thought about filling it—asking more questions, offering platitudes, doing any of the things that old friends did when they reconnected after years apart."
4"About the night she'd packed a bag and fled to London with nothing but Eva's voice in her ear and the desperate need to be somewhere—anywhere—else."
5"The hardness cracked, just slightly, and beneath it, Rory glimpsed the friend she'd once known—the one who'd held her hair back after too many tequila shots, who'd studied until dawn and still showed up with coffee for everyone else, who'd believed in happy endings with an optimism that had been almost painful to witness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1041
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.0393852065321806
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011527377521613832
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean11.99
std9.57
cv0.798
sampleLengths
025
118
24
328
418
532
617
710
85
919
106
1123
126
132
1415
151
1611
172
1829
197
2025
213
223
2321
246
258
268
2711
285
294
3025
3111
329
3317
343
353
364
3726
3821
399
409
4111
429
439
443
459
465
4723
4824
495
76.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4827586206896552
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners56
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, a woman stood in"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences73
matches
0"She wore a tailored charcoal"
1"She poured two fingers into"
2"Her gaze moved across Rory's"
3"It was an understatement."
4"She'd been studying psychology, planning"
5"She stared into her glass"
6"She made a sound that"
7"His hazel eyes moved from"
8"He'd spent a lifetime spotting"
9"He moved past them toward"
10"Her fingers traced the rim"
11"She simply listened, and in"
ratio0.164
55.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences73
matches
0"The neon glow from the"
1"Aurora Carter wiped down the"
2"Tuesday nights were quiet."
3"Silas had disappeared into the"
4"The door swung open, bringing"
5"Rory glanced up, expecting one"
6"Eyes that swept the room"
7"Rory's hand stilled on the"
8"The woman's gaze landed on"
9"The name fell from Rory's"
10"Miriam approached the bar, each"
11"She wore a tailored charcoal"
12"The Miriam she'd known had"
13"Miriam slid onto a barstool,"
14"Rory reached for a glass,"
15"Rory selected a bottle from"
16"She poured two fingers into"
17"Miriam wrapped her fingers around"
18"Her gaze moved across Rory's"
19"It was an understatement."
ratio0.808
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"When he was gone, Miriam"
ratio0.014
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory glanced up, expecting one of the regulars—maybe old Tom with his endless stories about the merchant navy, or perhaps Sarah, the barrister who stopped by af…"
1"Rory selected a bottle from the shelf behind her—the good stuff Silas kept for special occasions, or for people who looked like they needed it."
2"Rory felt them settle somewhere beneath her ribs, a familiar ache that had become almost comfortable over the years."
3"His hazel eyes moved from Rory to Miriam, assessing the tension in the air with the practiced ease of a man who'd spent decades reading rooms."
4"The hardness cracked, just slightly, and beneath it, Rory glimpsed the friend she'd once known—the one who'd held her hair back after too many tequila shots, wh…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Miriam began, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.044
leniency0.089
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.7701%