Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXK5R6A1N04MPR22X9164T

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.068380
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones were not stones at all, not really. Aurora pressed her palm against the nearest one and felt bark beneath her fingers — ancient oak, petrified into something harder than granite, the grain still visible beneath centuries of lichen. The tree had died standing. Or perhaps it had never been alive in the way she understood living things. "Don't linger at the threshold." Nyx's voice slid past her like smoke through a keyhole. They hung at the edge of the clearing in a shape that was almost human, their violet eyes the only points of definition in a body that kept forgetting its own edges. "She's right to hesitate." Isolde stood between two of the standing oaks, her silver hair lifting in a breeze that touched nothing else — not the grass, not Aurora's jacket, not the wildflowers that grew in impossible profusion at the grove's edge. Snowdrops tangled with foxglove. Dog roses climbed over what looked like summer jasmine. Every season compressed into a single breath of color. Isolde's bare feet hovered a finger's width above the earth. She'd been doing that the entire walk through Richmond Park, and Aurora had stopped commenting on it somewhere around the second mile. "What happens if I linger?" "The boundary remembers you. Boundaries prefer to be crossed, not contemplated." Aurora pulled her hand away. Her fingertips tingled. She stepped through. The grove opened around her like a held breath finally released. The clearing was larger than it had any right to be — she could see the standing oaks at the perimeter, maybe fifty meters in every direction, but the space between them felt vast, as though distance had been folded in on itself and smoothed flat. The sky overhead was wrong. Not the heavy grey of the London afternoon they'd left behind. This sky held a luminous quality, pearl-white shading to pale gold at the horizon, and it cast no shadows. None. Aurora looked down at her feet and saw only grass. "Where's the sun?" "There isn't one." Isolde moved past her, leaving no impression in the ankle-high grass. "The grove borrows light. From when, from where — even I stopped asking." Nyx flowed through the boundary with considerably less ceremony, their shadow-form rippling as they crossed. They re-formed on the other side and stood very still, head tilted as though listening. "It's quiet here." "You expected noise?" "I expected echoes. Between-places always have echoes — fragments of the realms they border. This place..." Nyx turned slowly, scanning the tree line. "This place has been scrubbed clean." "Not clean." Isolde settled onto a low stone that Aurora could have sworn wasn't there a moment ago. "Curated." The grass moved underfoot. Not with wind — there was still no wind — but in slow, deliberate waves that radiated outward from Isolde's stone like ripples in water. The wildflowers tracked the movement, their petals turning to follow some invisible current. Aurora watched a cluster of bluebells near her boot rotate ninety degrees in perfect synchronization, pointing toward the center of the grove. She followed their direction. At the heart of the clearing stood a tree. Not petrified. Not dead. A hawthorn, massive and impossibly old, its trunk split into three main limbs that twisted upward and then curved back toward the earth like the ribs of an inverted cage. White blossoms covered every branch, so thick they looked like snow, and they glowed. Not reflected light. Generated light. Each flower pulsed with a rhythm Aurora felt more than saw — a slow, steady beat that pressed against her sternum. "Is it—" "Breathing? In its way." She took a step toward it. The pendant against her collarbone went warm. Not the gentle heat it gave off near Hel-touched places — this was different, an acknowledgment, as though the Heartstone recognized something in that ancient hawthorn and answered it. Aurora pressed her hand over the crimson gem through her shirt. It pulsed against her palm in time with the blossoms. "The tree is reacting to her." Nyx had gone fully solid, their form sharp-edged and defined in a way Aurora rarely saw. Their violet eyes hadn't left the hawthorn. "Isolde. You didn't mention the tree would react." "The tree does what the tree does. I don't speak for it." "You speak in circles around everything else." A flicker at the corner of Isolde's mouth. Not quite a smile. Aurora moved closer. The air thickened — not with humidity but with presence, as though the grove had become aware of her and was leaning in. Each step brought new details. The hawthorn's bark bore markings she'd initially mistaken for natural growth patterns. They weren't. Spirals and knots and something that might have been writing, if she could read a language written by wood growing over centuries. The symbols shifted when she looked at them directly, settling into legibility for half a second before sliding back into abstraction. "I can almost read it." "Almost is the operative word. The tree speaks the old tongue — Fae root language, unspoken since the courts divided." Isolde's voice came from closer than expected. She'd moved without Aurora noticing, standing now at her shoulder, those pale lavender eyes fixed on the bark. "My mother could read it. I catch fragments. Like hearing a song through a wall." Aurora reached for the trunk. The bark was warm and faintly damp, the way living wood felt after rain, though no rain had fallen here. Beneath her fingers, the carved spirals seemed to press upward, rising to meet her touch. The Heartstone pendant flared hot — not painful, but insistent. Something inside the tree responded. A vibration traveled up through the roots, through the ground, through the soles of her boots. It climbed her skeleton and settled behind her teeth. She jerked her hand back. "It tried to show me something." "What did you see?" "I didn't — it wasn't seeing. It was more like..." She flexed her fingers. They felt strange, oversaturated, as though her nerve endings had been dipped in something electric. "More like remembering something that never happened to me. A room. Underground. Long table. People — no. Not people." Nyx materialized at her other shoulder, solid and watchful. "Demons?" "I don't know. They had the shape of people, but the proportions were off. Too many joints in their fingers. The light in the room was amber, like late afternoon, but it was coming from everywhere at once." Isolde's expression changed. The perpetual half-amusement drained from her face, replaced by something Aurora had never seen there before — unease, sharp and genuine, breaking through the oracle's careful composure. "Amber light. A long table." "You know it." "I know of it. The feasting halls of Dymas. The tree should not be showing you Dymas." She turned to the hawthorn, and for the first time since Aurora had met her, Isolde addressed something other than a person. She spoke three words in a language that sounded like wind through crystal, and the hawthorn's blossoms dimmed, their pulsing slowing to a crawl. The grove went dim with them. That borrowed light guttered. Aurora could see the standing oaks at the perimeter more clearly now, their petrified forms stark against the pearl-and-gold sky, and between two of them — between the third and fourth oak on the eastern edge — something that had not been there when they entered. A shimmer. Faint, almost invisible, like heat distortion rising from summer tarmac. But this was vertical, a narrow ribbon of disturbed air hanging in the space between the oaks. It wavered. Steadied. Wavered again. "Nyx." "I see it." They had already lost their solid form, spreading into a low, dark current that flowed toward the distortion. Halfway there, they stopped. Drew back. Re-formed with an abruptness that suggested retreat rather than choice. "That's a rift point." "Inside the grove?" Aurora looked at Isolde. "How is that possible? You said this place was between realms, that the boundary—" "The boundary is intact. The grove exists in the fold. Nothing should be able to tear through here — the Veil is not thin in this place, it is layered, doubled back on itself." Isolde's bare feet had touched the ground. Aurora noticed because she could see the grass bending under them for the first time. "Something is pushing through from the other side." The shimmer pulsed. It matched the rhythm of the Heartstone exactly. Aurora pulled the pendant free from her shirt and held it in her open palm. The crimson gem threw light against her fingers, brighter than she'd ever seen it, casting her hand in deep red. The warmth had become heat, not quite burning, sitting right on the edge. The gem's inner glow surged with each pulse of the rift. "It's connected." "The pendant was forged in Dymas," Nyx said. "If the rift leads there—" "It does." Isolde cut them off. Her lavender eyes tracked the shimmer with the focus of someone watching a wound open. "The tree was not showing you a memory. It was showing you a destination. Something on the other side of that rift is calling the Heartstone home." The Fae blade at Aurora's hip — the leaf-shaped dagger Isolde had pressed into her hands two weeks ago, always cold, always faintly luminescent in any light that touched it — went colder. She felt it through the leather of its sheath, a sharp frost that bit into her thigh. The moonsilver was reacting too, but differently. Not reaching toward the rift. Pulling away from it. She stood between two objects that wanted opposite things, and the rift pulsed, and the hawthorn's blossoms dimmed further, and somewhere in the spaces between the standing oaks, the Veil was tearing open like wet paper. "We need to decide," Aurora said, "whether we're closing that or walking through it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx turned slowly [slowly]"
1"They had already [already]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.091
90.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"very"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoes"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count4
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"scanning"
2"perfect"
3"pulsed"
4"flicker"
5"unspoken"
6"electric"
7"crystal"
8"stark"
9"wavered"
10"warmth"
11"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1646
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1268
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora21
Snowdrops1
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Nyx6
Isolde13
Hel-touched1
Heartstone3
Halfway1
Fae1
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Snowdrops"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Hel-touched"
globalScore0.672
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like summer jasmine"
1"as though listening"
2"looked like snow, and they glowed"
3"sounded like wind through crystal, and the"
4"not quite burning, sitting right on the edge"
78.49% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.215
wordCount1646
matches
0"not with humidity but with presence, as though the grove had become aware of her"
1"not painful, but insistent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"doing that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean30.48
std27.27
cv0.895
sampleLengths
060
15
242
364
432
55
611
711
8103
93
1027
1130
123
133
1429
1519
1664
1787
182
194
2063
2137
2212
237
2412
2588
265
2760
2880
295
306
314
3248
3310
3438
3530
365
373
3863
3956
4034
411
4237
434
4421
4564
4611
4759
482
4913
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"been folded"
1"been dipped"
96.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was leaning"
1"was reacting"
2"was tearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences135
ratio0.081
matches
0"Aurora pressed her palm against the nearest one and felt bark beneath her fingers — ancient oak, petrified into something harder than granite, the grain still visible beneath centuries of lichen."
1"\"She's right to hesitate.\" Isolde stood between two of the standing oaks, her silver hair lifting in a breeze that touched nothing else — not the grass, not Aurora's jacket, not the wildflowers that grew in impossible profusion at the grove's edge."
2"The clearing was larger than it had any right to be — she could see the standing oaks at the perimeter, maybe fifty meters in every direction, but the space between them felt vast, as though distance had been folded in on itself and smoothed flat."
3"Not with wind — there was still no wind — but in slow, deliberate waves that radiated outward from Isolde's stone like ripples in water."
4"Each flower pulsed with a rhythm Aurora felt more than saw — a slow, steady beat that pressed against her sternum."
5"Not the gentle heat it gave off near Hel-touched places — this was different, an acknowledgment, as though the Heartstone recognized something in that ancient hawthorn and answered it."
6"The air thickened — not with humidity but with presence, as though the grove had become aware of her and was leaning in."
7"The Heartstone pendant flared hot — not painful, but insistent."
8"The perpetual half-amusement drained from her face, replaced by something Aurora had never seen there before — unease, sharp and genuine, breaking through the oracle's careful composure."
9"Aurora could see the standing oaks at the perimeter more clearly now, their petrified forms stark against the pearl-and-gold sky, and between two of them — between the third and fourth oak on the eastern edge — something that had not been there when they entered."
10"The Fae blade at Aurora's hip — the leaf-shaped dagger Isolde had pressed into her hands two weeks ago, always cold, always faintly luminescent in any light that touched it — went colder."
93.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1264
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"near Hel-touched places —"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.04113924050632911
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012658227848101266
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean12.19
std10.31
cv0.845
sampleLengths
010
131
25
314
45
510
632
742
84
99
109
1110
1222
135
1411
155
163
173
1811
1946
205
2111
2219
231
2410
253
2614
2713
2815
2915
303
313
3223
336
3418
351
364
3725
3813
3922
404
419
422
432
4430
4514
463
472
4821
492
58.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences93
matches
0"They hung at the edge"
1"She'd been doing that the"
2"Her fingertips tingled."
3"She stepped through."
4"They re-formed on the other"
5"She followed their direction."
6"She took a step toward"
7"It pulsed against her palm"
8"Their violet eyes hadn't left"
9"She'd moved without Aurora noticing,"
10"It climbed her skeleton and"
11"She jerked her hand back."
12"She flexed her fingers"
13"They felt strange, oversaturated, as"
14"She turned to the hawthorn,"
15"She spoke three words in"
16"They had already lost their"
17"It matched the rhythm of"
18"Her lavender eyes tracked the"
19"She felt it through the"
ratio0.226
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences93
matches
0"The standing stones were not"
1"Aurora pressed her palm against"
2"The tree had died standing."
3"Nyx's voice slid past her"
4"They hung at the edge"
5"Isolde stood between two of"
6"Snowdrops tangled with foxglove."
7"Dog roses climbed over what"
8"Every season compressed into a"
9"Isolde's bare feet hovered a"
10"She'd been doing that the"
11"Aurora pulled her hand away."
12"Her fingertips tingled."
13"She stepped through."
14"The grove opened around her"
15"The clearing was larger than"
16"The sky overhead was wrong."
17"This sky held a luminous"
18"Aurora looked down at her"
19"Isolde moved past her, leaving"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"They hung at the edge of the clearing in a shape that was almost human, their violet eyes the only points of definition in a body that kept forgetting its own e…"
1"The clearing was larger than it had any right to be — she could see the standing oaks at the perimeter, maybe fifty meters in every direction, but the space bet…"
2"They re-formed on the other side and stood very still, head tilted as though listening."
3"Not with wind — there was still no wind — but in slow, deliberate waves that radiated outward from Isolde's stone like ripples in water."
4"Not the gentle heat it gave off near Hel-touched places — this was different, an acknowledgment, as though the Heartstone recognized something in that ancient h…"
5"Spirals and knots and something that might have been writing, if she could read a language written by wood growing over centuries."
6"They felt strange, oversaturated, as though her nerve endings had been dipped in something electric."
7"Aurora could see the standing oaks at the perimeter more clearly now, their petrified forms stark against the pearl-and-gold sky, and between two of them — betw…"
8"She felt it through the leather of its sheath, a sharp frost that bit into her thigh."
9"She stood between two objects that wanted opposite things, and the rift pulsed, and the hawthorn's blossoms dimmed further, and somewhere in the spaces between …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.7227%