Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKAJBBY3Q9NC5B6QXGEDZ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.003754
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Fae Grove lay like a secret pressed against the night, a pocketed nothing between the city’s clatter and the distant sigh of Richmond Park. Moonlight spilled through branches, catching on dew that didn’t look wet so much as deliberate, as if the world had set a glass bead under each blade of grass and decided to watch what would happen next. The standing stones stood like patient witnesses, rough-hewn and ancient, each one bearing a shadow not all that different from a face if you stared long enough. Time moved with careful, deliberate steps inside the grove; outside, the city kept its own fevered pace. Aurora Carter arrived at the edge as if trespassing on a map she should have memorized long before. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her skin, a rough warmth there that pulsed faintly whenever she drew closer to the boundary. The silver chain rested easy on her wrist, a tiny hinge of comfort against the night’s cold. She wore the stillness of someone who had learned to measure danger in small sounds—the creak of a door, a footstep on gravel, a breath’s hesitation. Her breath, when she drew it in, fogged the air, then softened as if the air itself decided not to notice. She came for a reason. The reason wasn’t loud, not the sort you could shout and be finished with. It was a quiet calculation, a risk weighed against a memory she was trying to keep in its proper place. The grove already felt like a trap laid with a patient smile—the way the air tasted of rain and old stories, the way the wildflowers bloomed regardless of season, and the way the time behavior hummed at the back of her skull. I came for the heart, she told herself, and her lips barely moved. The phrase sounded almost practical, the way you might say you came for directions when you were already halfway there. “Is anybody here?” she asked aloud, though she knew the answer wasn’t in the answering. The question hung, not answered, and she pushed forward. The first step took longer than it should. The dirt beneath her boots didn’t feel like dirt so much as a whisper refusing to be loud. The world’s edges sharpened, not with danger, but with a suspicion she could taste in the back of her tongue. The Heartstone in its quiet warmth rested against her skin; the crimson gem seemed to sigh with every breath she took. Another sigh. A second. A stir in the hedgerow—the kind that isn’t wind or forest, but something watching and deciding whether to show itself. “Who’s there?” she repeated, softer now, as if demanding a secret rather than an answer. The grove didn’t answer in voices. It answered in space. A hole of it opened between two birch trunks, a gap that hadn’t existed a moment before, and beyond it lay nothing and everything—low mist curling, an almost tangible suggestion of something there and not there at once. The pulse in her wrist quickened; the pendant’s warmth grew warmer, like a small sun pressed to her skin. The Heartstone pulsed in a quiet rhythm that reminded her of a heartbeat she had known since childhood, except this one wasn’t hers. It belonged to the grove in a way she couldn’t quite name, a binding she hadn’t chosen. The warm glow that skittered under the gem’s surface felt like a breath on the back of her neck. “Rory,” a voice whispered, not the wind, not the trees, a chorus of something that sounded like a chorus of many soft mouths, all not quite speaking the same language. The sound rolled over her skin, a rasping touch that made the hairs on her arms lift. “Not alone, not now,” she said, though the words didn’t feel like hers entirely. She curled her fingers around the pendant and stepped deeper, toward the clearing’s heart where the air seemed thick with a memory she hadn’t lived yet. The grove’s boundary hummed. A hum isn’t a sound that belongs only to a place; it belongs to a feeling that travels with a place. It was the sort of hum that made the teeth ache with anticipation, the sort that made you listen even when listening felt dangerous. “Why here?” she asked, not to a person or a wind, but to the place itself. The question bounced off the standing stones, a stone’s throw from a question that had no intention of being answered. The answer came as a threat in reverse: a sensation of being watched, of faces formed from shadows at the corners of her vision. They weren’t men or women, not exactly—more like silhouettes that forgot how to hold their forms. Hovering at the edge of sight, they watched, curiosity bright in their intangible eyes. She blinked and the shapes dissolved into the branches’ silhouettes, back to nothing. A rustle of leaves, a quick flicker of motion at the corner of her eye. When she looked, nothing remained but a branch bending under its own weight, the way a witness refuses to keep looking at the truth. The old oak’s hand of bark—the trunk with the ancient face—stood silent and patient, its roots thick as a man’s wrists, its branches like arms that might reach down to brush the crown of the head if one stood close enough. The stones’ face held a stonier patience than anything living had a right to. “Tell me what you want,” she said, though she wasn’t sure she wanted to hear. I want you here, the grove seemed to murmur. The words weren’t clear, not spoken aloud, but the thought came with the thickness of a memory you weren’t ready to claim. The phenomenon wasn’t fearsome so much as it was precise, a swap of one certainty for another—and that exchange felt like slipping on a stranger’s coat in the dark. The Heartstone pricked against her skin, a tiny ember at the wrist. The crimson gem’s glow grew to a soft, almost clinical rosiness, the kind of glow that would be comforting if you didn’t know it came with a price. Rory steadied her breath, learned to hold it and release it with deliberate timing. “I’m here for the gesture, for the opening,” she finally spoke aloud, though she could’ve sworn the words had crawled out of the pendant itself, slow and careful, as if the stone wanted to announce its purpose before she did. The phrase wasn’t a lie. It wasn’t pure truth, either. It was a sentence stitched from memory and necessity, a way to test what the grove would do with a question that wasn’t a question at all. A second later, a faint sound rose—like water sliding uphill through a slick, invisible tub. It wasn’t a stream, not exactly; it was the sound of listening. The grove listened to her not by ears but by the alignment of leaf and shadow, by the way the air gathered and pressed against the skin. “Not yet,” the grove’s whisper seemed to say, though it was the sort of thing a place could say without words. The pendant hummed in response, a warmth that spread along her forearm, chasing the chill away in the places that had learned to keep a careful, mathematical distance from fear. “Not yet for what?” she asked, because fear would have demanded a retreat, and retreat wasn’t a choice she was prepared to make just yet. The question stayed suspended in the air, not answered. The grove offered a pause, a moment’s stillness that felt like a held breath. A stray sound rose, sharp and wrong, as if a creature had learned to cough without air. It came from the far edge of the clearing, where the moss lay thick and unremarkable, the way a quiet dog might be visible only when it moved. She didn’t see it for long, only a flicker of a shape—small, humanlike, but etched with a pallor that didn’t belong to nighttime. It disappeared as quickly as it appeared, leaving behind a breath of cold that clung like a thin veil. “Stay.” It wasn’t a command, not exactly; it was an offer dressed as a plea. The grove’s voice, if that’s what it was, slowed her pulse to a careful tempo. The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, a bead of heat traveling from her wrist to her elbow, as if the pendant itself leaned toward something awaiting her touch. Rory stepped closer to the oak at the center of the clearing—the ancient tree that bore the marks of time like warts on a face. The oak’s bark bore a signature scar, a pale line where something along the line of a memory had been carved into living wood long before she was born. She pressed the pad of her thumb to the scar on her own wrist, a reflex sharpened by years of dodging pain and pretending it didn’t matter. The scar there winked under the skin, a crescent-shaped line that felt like a small, stubborn reminder. “Did something happen here?” she whispered, half to the tree, half to the memory she could not shake. The question wasn’t for any individual; it was a test, and the grove’s response would decide whether she could step forward or retreat with something intact. The oak shifted, not with a tree’s natural sway but with a deliberate exhale of air through rough bark and hollow crevices. A faint echo rolled along the ground, a wordless murmur that sounded like someone clearing a throat long after it’s been used to speak. The grove wasn’t angry, not exactly, but it was precise—like a warden counting to make sure you belong. The Heartstone gave a tiny, almost insistent pulse, a heartbeat in the palm of her hand now, a caution that asked permission for the next step. The warm glow intensified into a steady glow that pressed against her other senses: the air’s perfume changed, turning sweeter and heavier, as if the grove had decided to perfume the moment in which a decision would be made. “Open it,” she breathed. The words seemed to belong to the pendant, not to her, as if the stone had chosen to translate her intention into something a place could understand. The grove listened. The boundary between inside and outside thinned, and with that thinning came the sense of something shifting behind her—something large enough to block the light but not so large it would be visible outright. It moved with the slow, patient confidence of a predator who knows you’re watching but doesn’t mind the game. “Why here?” she asked again, the question turning into a thread she began to pull. The pendant sparked at the wrist, a delicate flare of crimson light that crawled toward her elbow, tracing the line of her forearm with a warmth that felt almost teasing, almost like a touch she could not ignore. “Because this is where you learned to listen,” the grove answered without a voice, or with a chorus of voices indistinguishable from the rustle of leaves and the sigh of a distant, unseen river. She listened. The sounds came in a swell, a careful layering of noises that shouldn’t belong in a place so still: the faint metallic click of something brushing stone, the whisper of fabric against fabric as she shifted weight, the soft, distant drop of water that could be nothing more than a distant rain in a place where rain did not fall on this night. “Show me then,” she said, the words not loud, not defiant. They existed in the space between the heartbeat and the hush, where action could happen if she let it. The grove obliged with a change she could not name. The space around the standing stones seemed to tighten, the air growing denser as if a second atmosphere had decided to nestle beside this one. A figure formed at the edge of her vision—clean lines, pale skin, a silhouette that stood too rigidly still to be real. It hovered at the margin of the moss, not stepping into the clearing, not stepping away. It did not blink; it didn’t seem to need eyes to see her. Rory watched it, then looked away, as if the very act of looking might summon anything. When she returned her gaze, it was gone, but the air felt heavier, as if something had paused in the room long enough to leave a fingerprint. “Not alone,” she whispered, not to the grove or to the apparition but to the nerve in her neck that seemed to coil with every minute she spent there. The Heartstone’s glow pulsed again, a soft, pulsing bead of warmth that traveled to her collarbone and settled there like a quiet weight. “Explain,” she demanded, though the word came out as a hiss. Silence followed, but the grove’s silence wasn’t the absence of sound; it was a containment, a force keeping something barely contained, something that preferred to stay unseen. The whisper returned, this time not in a mouthful of wind but in a line of sound that resembled a sound you make when you bite your lip and keep from saying something you know would destroy your own peace. The whisper was almost a map, a route through shadows: Not alone, not yet, not for long. Rory swallowed. The saying wasn’t helpful, but it felt honest in a way that made her chest tighten with something like fear and something like exhilaration. She stepped further toward the center where the stones gathered, where the wildflowers bloomed despite the late hour, where the air tasted of ice and honey all at once. The route to the Hel portal—the idea that had haunted the edges of her thoughts since she’d first heard the rumor—the idea that the pendant might link to something that could bend the rules of this world, to something ancient and indifferent and powerful—began to unwind in her mind. It wasn’t a plan yet; it was a thread Krista had once pulled when she spoke to Rory in a language only a few people learned to hear: not the words, but the ordering of the syllables; not the syllables, but the feeling they left behind. She placed her palm flat on the oak’s trunk, felt the rough bark beneath her fingers, the cold seam of a knot where a face might have pressed against the world, a memory that did not belong to her but that she could borrow if she held still enough. The pendant’s warmth grew as if answering a call, and in that warmth she sensed a second presence, not in her chest, not in her wrist, but in the space between. “Show me what you want from me,” Rory said, keeping her voice even, careful not to sound hopeful or afraid or furious. People get careless when they’re afraid, she thought, and she did not want to become careless. The grove answered with a tremor through the stones—a shallow quake that felt more like a heartbeat passing under the ground. The air thickened in a way that pressed against her lungs and insisted she take a deeper breath, as if the grove truly needed her to exhale to hear what came next. A sound rose—soft, unordered, like a hundred threads catching on a single nail—then collapsed into nothingness as if the universe decided to hide what it had just revealed. “Rory,” the whisper coalesced again, this time with a hint of urgency she could not ignore. The words were not addressed to her in the direct sense, but she heard them as if someone had whispered her name to a room’s corners. “What?” she asked, because she did not want to pretend she hadn’t heard, not when the room itself seemed to lean toward an answer. The answer came without an answer: a memory she hadn’t remembered, a scene that didn’t belong to her but that stitched itself to the edges of her thoughts. A corridor, long and narrow, lit by something dull and amber; feet echoing softly on stone; a voice she recognized though she could not name it—Evan’s voice? No, someone older, someone who spoke with the careful courtesy of a judge and the bitterness of a man who had learned to price compassion in coin. The memory arrived in fragments—windowpanes of a life she had refused to examine, a face she’d learned to forget. The fragments did not piece themselves into a whole; they clung, stubborn, to the mind’s damp corners. Rory blinked; the world swelled and then narrowed to a single, dim point of light—the Heartstone pendant—pulsing in a rhythm she could now interpret as a warning not to push too far, not to demand a conclusion that wouldn’t come in a night like this. She pressed her fingers into the knot of her own wrist, tracing the crescent-shaped scar, the tender line that pulled her attention away from the memory and back to the present. The grove’s warmth settled there, the sting of old pain softened by the knowledge that something was listening, something was counting. “Stop playing with the doors,” she whispered, not to the grove, not to the memory, but to the impulse inside that wanted to press on, to cross whatever threshold the stones guarded. The impulse was young and reckless, the opposite of what she’d trained herself to be. The grove did not yield a door, exactly. It offered a perception shift—a widening of vision that wasn’t about seeing more, but about seeing differently. The space around her grew quieter, but not empty; it was as if a chamber had opened within the grove for a moment, letting her hear what it heard, sense what it sensed. The whispering voices inside her mind, not hers but another’s, began to align in a pattern she could decipher, and with that alignment came a choice she could not avoid. “I came for the heart,” she repeated, more to remind herself than to convince anyone else. “And I’ll take what you give, not what you demand.” The Heartstone responded with a final, patient pulse. The glow brightened to a soft, steady radiance, and the grove’s boundary softened, as if the world outside had become a mist that could be walked through if you believed you weren’t losing your sense of direction. The stones’ shadows receded from the immediate area, leaving the clearing in a pale, almost sickly light, the kind that makes your skin look washed out and honest at the same time. Then, as if a curtain had been raised on a stage neither you nor the world knew existed, the space beyond the stones opened and closed in quick increments—like a breath drawn in and out, too fast for human lungs to keep pace with. The air began to taste metallic, a sensation that wasn’t fear so much as a chemical reminder of something you’d forgotten to fear previously. The memory that hadn’t belonged to her started to become something other people could witness, too, if they looked long enough. “Careful,” she said aloud, though she knew the words might not travel far enough to reach a listener who mattered. The phrase was a shield. A new sound joined the chorus: a soft, rhythmic tapping, like rain a moment after the storm passes. It came from somewhere between the standing stones, a rhythm coordinated and patient. She followed the sound, letting the warmth of the Heartstone pull her toward it, toward a corner of the clearing where a shard of moonlight stitched a pale, narrow line across the grass. The line led to a small, unremarkable pool of water that shouldn’t have existed in the grove this late. The surface shimmered with a glassy stillness that held its own kind of danger—the kind that lures you to lean in and see your own face, and in seeing it, to read the truth you didn’t want to know. The Heartstone’s glow intensified just above the pool, as if it longed to touch that surface, to blur the boundary between two worlds with a single move. Rory knelt at the pool’s edge, careful to keep her gaze on the water rather than on the shapes at the periphery. The pool’s reflection wasn’t hers alone; it showed a second version of the grove, a parallel scene where the stones bore scars that hadn’t yet formed in this life, where a figure stood where no figure should be, a pale silhouette cataloguing the space with a patient, predatory calm. The marks on the alternative grove’s stones pulsed in time with the Heartstone’s glow. The two scenes touched. The edge between them trembled, not breaking, not joining, but flirting with possibility. The memory’s echo sharpened, a knife of inevitability pressing against the sleep-behind-her eyes. “Show me,” she whispered, not to the pool, not to the grove, but to the possibility that she could glimpse something beyond the ordinary boundaries of her own life. The pool’s surface stirred as if something beneath decided to rise gently, a shape that did not move so much as become, a motif that looked both familiar and alien at once. The pale silhouette returned to the edge of the water, looked up at Rory with eyes like frost, and spoke without voice, in a language older than the trees but close enough to rub the skin raw if you tried to translate it. Rory couldn’t translate the words, but she understood their meaning through the tremor of the pendant against her wrist, through the pulse of warmth that said, You asked for a door and the door came. You asked for a sign, and the sign is this quiet, careful moment when fear stops being loud and becomes something like respect. “Not yet,” she repeated to the silent room, but her own voice sounded smaller than she intended, as if she’d spoken into a bowl that never echoed back quite the same way. The image in the water changed again, blurred at the edges, and then there she stood—the unknown benefactor, the one who had given her the pendant, but not in any way she could ever put into words. The benefactor wasn’t a person; it was a role filled by something ancient enough to forget a name, something that chose to present itself as a guardian in a place where guardians were scarce and honesty dangerous. Rory felt the grip of the pendant loosen, the warmth expanding into a calm that was almost a relief. The voice—still wordless, still a memory—speared through the calm with a gentle insistence: You are here because you are ready to listen. Not to be saved, but to hear what you can bear and still stand. The room outside the grove’s borders caved to the weight of that truth only for an instant, then reasserted itself—city sounds, far away; birds that had never learned to sing in that night; a distant engine’s rumble that felt somehow muffled by leaves and myth. She drew back slightly from the pool, hands flat on the grass, letting the image fade with the same quiet magic that had drawn it into being. The Heartstone’s warmth dimmed to a patient glow, as if content to be patient while she decided what to do with what she’d learned. The grove’s boundary returned to its careful, measured state, time resettling into its strange rhythm where an hour could be minutes or months or something unnameable. “It’s yours to carry,” the grove seemed to say, not in words but in a sense of possession—the kind of possession that isn’t theft but trust, a share of responsibility for a thing that will only answer to you if you decide to stay. Rory stood slowly, testing the weight of that decision. The scar on her wrist caught the pale light just right, a reminder of a life spent dodging locks and doors that shouldn’t have opened. She slid a hand along the pendant’s chain, letting the metal rest against the back of her knuckles, and looked toward the ancient oak again. “Then I’ll carry it,” she said softly, with the stubborn quiet of someone who had learned that some truths are best carried, not spoken, not shouted, but walked into daylight with your head held high enough that you can see the price you paid for knowing it. The grove seemed to listen, or at least it decided not to contradict her. The wildflowers, evergreen and unruffled, nodded as if agreeing with an unspoken ceremony. The air cleared a fraction, enough to hear the far-off city’s pulse again, to remind Rory how alone she was in the moment and how that loneliness could become a kind of focus if she did not break it with fear. She moved toward the boundary stones that marked the grove’s edge, her steps measured, the Heartstone pendant a steady, almost affectionate heat against her wrist. The moon, pale and patient, slipped behind a cloud, leaving the clearing in a delta of shadows that shifted with every breath of wind. As her silhouette crossed the threshold of the oak’s old, carved stones, a final sound rose—a soft syllable, not heard but felt, like someone whispering a secret against your ear and then letting it drift away. The grove released a shudder that wasn’t fear but decision, a last check to ensure she would not abandon the moment she’d chosen to face. She didn’t look back. Not yet. She moved forward, away from the pool, toward the trees and the exit the grove did not guarantee, toward a night that would not wait for her, toward an hour outside that had chosen to bend a little more for her sake. The Heartstone’s heat settled into a patient steadiness and then dipped to a comfortable warmth again as if the stone itself decided to pace her, to walk with her to wherever the boundary would permit. The grove narrowed behind her to a calm, watching hush, and the ancient oak’s face remained, a witness to what had happened and what would happen if she chose to return. Night pressed closer, and the Fae Grove, stubborn as memory, held its ground, listening. Rory stood in the glow and shadow, a small human form with a clear purpose and a stubborn heart, and she felt the garden of possibilities tilt very slightly toward one path that did not promise safety, only truth. The first step toward leaving felt heavier than the first step toward entering. The second step, lighter, as if the grove released a portion of its weight to follow her, to remind her that time moves differently here and that she, too, could move differently if she chose. The outside world’s distant noise returned as a careful echo, a reminder that life went on outside, that a girl named Rory with a pendant might still have to live with the consequences of having learned something tonight. A final turn of her head to the left, toward a shadow that did not vanish but settled into a memory’s corner, and she spoke, not to the shadow, not to the grove, but to herself: “I came for the heart, and I’ll bear the echo.” The grove did not answer in words, but it gave her something else—an invitation to carry on, to move through the boundary with a measured step, to leave with something intact, and to come back when the night would not be kind but would still offer the chance to listen again. She walked then, the Heartstone Pendant warm against her skin, its faint glow a map of the night’s choices, guiding her back toward the city’s waiting breath, toward a dawn that would come with questions and with answers that might never quite fit. The Fae Grove faded behind her, not erased but folded into memory, a door she could choose to knock on again, if the night asked.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"she asked aloud [aloud]"
1"she finally spoke aloud [finally aloud]"
2"she asked again [again]"
3"the whisper coalesced again [again]"
4"she said aloud [aloud]"
5"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.207
effectiveRatio0.207
89.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4704
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count2
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"truly"
3"softly"
4"gently"
5"slightly"
6"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
22.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4704
totalAiIsms73
found
0
word"warmth"
count15
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"whisper"
count6
3
word"tangible"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count6
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"anticipation"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"weight"
count6
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count4
13
word"echo"
count4
14
word"sense of"
count3
15
word"predator"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count2
17
word"silence"
count2
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"rhythmic"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"familiar"
count1
23
word"echoed"
count1
24
word"measured"
count3
25
word"unspoken"
count1
26
word"ensure"
count1
27
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"whisper"
3"tangible"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"anticipation"
7"flicker"
8"weight"
9"comforting"
10"chill"
11"etched"
12"reminder"
13"echo"
14"sense of"
15"predator"
16"tracing"
17"silence"
18"echoing"
19"rhythmic"
20"shimmered"
21"trembled"
22"familiar"
23"echoed"
24"measured"
25"unspoken"
26"ensure"
27"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of that truth"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences203
matches
0"e with anticipation"
1"t with fear"
2.11% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount16
narrationSentences203
filterMatches
0"listen"
1"know"
2"hear"
3"decide"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"seem to"
3"started to"
4"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences204
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4667
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions47
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"I came for the heart, she told herself, and her lips barely moved."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount4512
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.35
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Fae3
Grove3
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Heartstone16
Pendant2
Silence1
Hel1
Krista1
Rory15
People1
Evan1
You3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Silence"
5"Krista"
6"Rory"
7"People"
8"Evan"
9"You"
places
0"Fae"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences186
glossingSentenceCount17
matches
0"as if trespassing on a map she should have memorized long before"
1"felt like a trap laid with a patient sm"
2"as if demanding a secret rather than an answer"
3"quite name, a binding she hadn’t chosen"
4"felt like a breath on the back of her n"
5"not quite speaking the same language"
6"sounded like a chorus of many soft mouths"
7"seemed thick with a memory she hadn’t lived yet"
8"felt like slipping on a stranger’s coat"
9"felt like a held breath"
10"felt like a small, stubborn reminder"
11"sounded like someone clearing a throat lon"
12"neck that seemed to coil with every minute she spent there"
13"something like fear and something like exhil"
14"something like exhilaration"
15"as if answering a call, and in that warmth she sensed a second presence, not in her chest, not in her wrist, but in the space between"
16"it was as if a chamber had opened within the grove for a moment, letting her hear what it heard, sense what it sensed"
17"something like respect"
18"as if agreeing with an unspoken ceremony"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches30
per1kWords6.428
wordCount4667
matches
0"not with danger, but with a suspicion she could taste in the back of her tongue"
1"not to a person or a wind, but to the place itself"
2"not spoken aloud, but the thought came with the thickness of a memory you weren’t"
3"not by ears but by the alignment of leaf"
4"not with a tree’s natural sway but with a deliberate exhale of air through rough bark"
5"not exactly, but it was precise"
6"Not alone,” she whispered, not to the grove or to the apparition but to the nerve in her neck"
7"not to the grove or to the apparition but to the nerve in her neck"
8"not in a mouthful of wind but in a line of sound"
9"not the words, but the ordering of the syllables"
10"not the syllables, but the feeling they left behind"
11"not in her chest, not in her wrist, but in the space between"
12"not in her wrist, but in the space between"
13"not to the grove, not to the memory, but to the impulse inside"
14"not to the memory, but to the impulse inside"
15"not hers but another’s, began to align in a pattern she could decipher"
16"neither you nor"
17"not breaking, not joining, but flirting with possibility"
18"not joining, but flirting with possibility"
19"not to the pool, not to the grove, but to the possibility"
20"not to the grove, but to the possibility"
21"Not yet,” she repeated to the silent room, but her own voice sounded smaller than she intended, as if she’d"
22"Not to be saved, but to hear what you can bear"
23"not in words but in a sense of possession"
24"not spoken, not shouted, but walked into daylight with your head held high enough"
25"not shouted, but walked into daylight with your head held high enough"
26"not heard but felt, like someone whispering a secret against your ear"
27"not to the shadow, not to the grove, but to herself: “I came for the heart"
28"not to the grove, but to herself: “I came for the heart"
29"not erased but folded into memory, a door she could choose to knock on agai"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences204
matches
0"feeling that travels"
1"touch that surface"
2"learned that some"
73.84% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs81
mean57.62
std23.53
cv0.408
sampleLengths
0106
1103
281
333
424
567
624
715
867
959
1047
1140
1249
1336
1467
1594
1615
1760
1840
1954
2037
2154
2251
2348
2487
2556
2698
2744
2864
2965
3031
3156
3253
3334
3465
3530
3686
3743
3852
3938
4050
417
4255
4395
4480
4538
4681
4742
4824
49118
94.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences203
matches
0"being answered"
1"was prepared"
2"was, slowed"
3"been carved"
4"was gone"
5"been raised"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs729
matches
0"was trying"
1"was listening, was counting"
2"weren’t losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount34
semicolonCount20
flaggedSentences42
totalSentences204
ratio0.206
matches
0"Time moved with careful, deliberate steps inside the grove; outside, the city kept its own fevered pace."
1"She wore the stillness of someone who had learned to measure danger in small sounds—the creak of a door, a footstep on gravel, a breath’s hesitation."
2"The grove already felt like a trap laid with a patient smile—the way the air tasted of rain and old stories, the way the wildflowers bloomed regardless of season, and the way the time behavior hummed at the back of her skull."
3"The Heartstone in its quiet warmth rested against her skin; the crimson gem seemed to sigh with every breath she took."
4"A stir in the hedgerow—the kind that isn’t wind or forest, but something watching and deciding whether to show itself."
5"A hole of it opened between two birch trunks, a gap that hadn’t existed a moment before, and beyond it lay nothing and everything—low mist curling, an almost tangible suggestion of something there and not there at once."
6"The pulse in her wrist quickened; the pendant’s warmth grew warmer, like a small sun pressed to her skin."
7"A hum isn’t a sound that belongs only to a place; it belongs to a feeling that travels with a place."
8"They weren’t men or women, not exactly—more like silhouettes that forgot how to hold their forms."
9"The old oak’s hand of bark—the trunk with the ancient face—stood silent and patient, its roots thick as a man’s wrists, its branches like arms that might reach down to brush the crown of the head if one stood close enough."
10"The phenomenon wasn’t fearsome so much as it was precise, a swap of one certainty for another—and that exchange felt like slipping on a stranger’s coat in the dark."
11"A second later, a faint sound rose—like water sliding uphill through a slick, invisible tub."
12"It wasn’t a stream, not exactly; it was the sound of listening."
13"She didn’t see it for long, only a flicker of a shape—small, humanlike, but etched with a pallor that didn’t belong to nighttime."
14"“Stay.” It wasn’t a command, not exactly; it was an offer dressed as a plea."
15"Rory stepped closer to the oak at the center of the clearing—the ancient tree that bore the marks of time like warts on a face."
16"The question wasn’t for any individual; it was a test, and the grove’s response would decide whether she could step forward or retreat with something intact."
17"The grove wasn’t angry, not exactly, but it was precise—like a warden counting to make sure you belong."
18"The boundary between inside and outside thinned, and with that thinning came the sense of something shifting behind her—something large enough to block the light but not so large it would be visible outright."
19"A figure formed at the edge of her vision—clean lines, pale skin, a silhouette that stood too rigidly still to be real."
20"It did not blink; it didn’t seem to need eyes to see her."
21"Silence followed, but the grove’s silence wasn’t the absence of sound; it was a containment, a force keeping something barely contained, something that preferred to stay unseen."
22"The route to the Hel portal—the idea that had haunted the edges of her thoughts since she’d first heard the rumor—the idea that the pendant might link to something that could bend the rules of this world, to something ancient and indifferent and powerful—began to unwind in her mind."
23"It wasn’t a plan yet; it was a thread Krista had once pulled when she spoke to Rory in a language only a few people learned to hear: not the words, but the ordering of the syllables; not the syllables, but the feeling they left behind."
24"The grove answered with a tremor through the stones—a shallow quake that felt more like a heartbeat passing under the ground."
25"A sound rose—soft, unordered, like a hundred threads catching on a single nail—then collapsed into nothingness as if the universe decided to hide what it had just revealed."
26"A corridor, long and narrow, lit by something dull and amber; feet echoing softly on stone; a voice she recognized though she could not name it—Evan’s voice?"
27"The memory arrived in fragments—windowpanes of a life she had refused to examine, a face she’d learned to forget."
28"The fragments did not piece themselves into a whole; they clung, stubborn, to the mind’s damp corners."
29"Rory blinked; the world swelled and then narrowed to a single, dim point of light—the Heartstone pendant—pulsing in a rhythm she could now interpret as a warning not to push too far, not to demand a conclusion that wouldn’t come in a night like this."
30"It offered a perception shift—a widening of vision that wasn’t about seeing more, but about seeing differently."
31"The space around her grew quieter, but not empty; it was as if a chamber had opened within the grove for a moment, letting her hear what it heard, sense what it sensed."
32"Then, as if a curtain had been raised on a stage neither you nor the world knew existed, the space beyond the stones opened and closed in quick increments—like a breath drawn in and out, too fast for human lungs to keep pace with."
33"The surface shimmered with a glassy stillness that held its own kind of danger—the kind that lures you to lean in and see your own face, and in seeing it, to read the truth you didn’t want to know."
34"The pool’s reflection wasn’t hers alone; it showed a second version of the grove, a parallel scene where the stones bore scars that hadn’t yet formed in this life, where a figure stood where no figure should be, a pale silhouette cataloguing the space with a patient, predatory calm."
35"The image in the water changed again, blurred at the edges, and then there she stood—the unknown benefactor, the one who had given her the pendant, but not in any way she could ever put into words."
36"The benefactor wasn’t a person; it was a role filled by something ancient enough to forget a name, something that chose to present itself as a guardian in a place where guardians were scarce and honesty dangerous."
37"The voice—still wordless, still a memory—speared through the calm with a gentle insistence: You are here because you are ready to listen."
38"The room outside the grove’s borders caved to the weight of that truth only for an instant, then reasserted itself—city sounds, far away; birds that had never learned to sing in that night; a distant engine’s rumble that felt somehow muffled by leaves and myth."
39"“It’s yours to carry,” the grove seemed to say, not in words but in a sense of possession—the kind of possession that isn’t theft but trust, a share of responsibility for a thing that will only answer to you if you decide to stay."
40"As her silhouette crossed the threshold of the oak’s old, carved stones, a final sound rose—a soft syllable, not heard but felt, like someone whispering a secret against your ear and then letting it drift away."
41"The grove did not answer in words, but it gave her something else—an invitation to carry on, to move through the boundary with a measured step, to leave with something intact, and to come back when the night would not be kind but would still offer the chance to listen again."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount858
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03263403263403263
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005827505827505828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences204
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences204
mean22.88
std11.53
cv0.504
sampleLengths
025
137
227
317
418
521
617
726
821
95
1014
1120
1242
1313
1420
1515
169
178
1818
1920
2021
212
222
2320
2415
256
264
2738
2819
2923
3017
3119
3230
3317
3414
3526
364
3721
3824
3916
4020
4124
4216
4314
4413
4515
4624
4741
4814
4915
28.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats44
diversityRatio0.17647058823529413
totalSentences204
uniqueOpeners36
17.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences195
matches
0"Then, as if a curtain"
ratio0.005
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences195
matches
0"She wore the stillness of"
1"Her breath, when she drew"
2"She came for a reason."
3"It was a quiet calculation,"
4"I came for the heart,"
5"she asked aloud, though she"
6"she repeated, softer now, as"
7"It answered in space."
8"It belonged to the grove"
9"she said, though the words"
10"She curled her fingers around"
11"It was the sort of"
12"she asked, not to a"
13"They weren’t men or women,"
14"She blinked and the shapes"
15"she said, though she wasn’t"
16"I want you here, the"
17"she finally spoke aloud, though"
18"It wasn’t pure truth, either."
19"It was a sentence stitched"
ratio0.292
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount187
totalSentences195
matches
0"The Fae Grove lay like"
1"Moonlight spilled through branches, catching"
2"The standing stones stood like"
3"Time moved with careful, deliberate"
4"Aurora Carter arrived at the"
5"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
6"The silver chain rested easy"
7"She wore the stillness of"
8"Her breath, when she drew"
9"She came for a reason."
10"The reason wasn’t loud, not"
11"It was a quiet calculation,"
12"The grove already felt like"
13"I came for the heart,"
14"The phrase sounded almost practical,"
15"she asked aloud, though she"
16"The question hung, not answered,"
17"The first step took longer"
18"The dirt beneath her boots"
19"The world’s edges sharpened, not"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences195
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences149
technicalSentenceCount50
matches
0"Moonlight spilled through branches, catching on dew that didn’t look wet so much as deliberate, as if the world had set a glass bead under each blade of grass a…"
1"Aurora Carter arrived at the edge as if trespassing on a map she should have memorized long before."
2"A hole of it opened between two birch trunks, a gap that hadn’t existed a moment before, and beyond it lay nothing and everything—low mist curling, an almost ta…"
3"The Heartstone pulsed in a quiet rhythm that reminded her of a heartbeat she had known since childhood, except this one wasn’t hers."
4"It was the sort of hum that made the teeth ache with anticipation, the sort that made you listen even when listening felt dangerous."
5"The old oak’s hand of bark—the trunk with the ancient face—stood silent and patient, its roots thick as a man’s wrists, its branches like arms that might reach …"
6"The crimson gem’s glow grew to a soft, almost clinical rosiness, the kind of glow that would be comforting if you didn’t know it came with a price."
7"The pendant hummed in response, a warmth that spread along her forearm, chasing the chill away in the places that had learned to keep a careful, mathematical di…"
8"She didn’t see it for long, only a flicker of a shape—small, humanlike, but etched with a pallor that didn’t belong to nighttime."
9"The Heartstone’s warmth intensified, a bead of heat traveling from her wrist to her elbow, as if the pendant itself leaned toward something awaiting her touch."
10"The scar there winked under the skin, a crescent-shaped line that felt like a small, stubborn reminder."
11"The Heartstone gave a tiny, almost insistent pulse, a heartbeat in the palm of her hand now, a caution that asked permission for the next step."
12"The warm glow intensified into a steady glow that pressed against her other senses: the air’s perfume changed, turning sweeter and heavier, as if the grove had …"
13"The words seemed to belong to the pendant, not to her, as if the stone had chosen to translate her intention into something a place could understand."
14"It moved with the slow, patient confidence of a predator who knows you’re watching but doesn’t mind the game."
15"The pendant sparked at the wrist, a delicate flare of crimson light that crawled toward her elbow, tracing the line of her forearm with a warmth that felt almos…"
16"The sounds came in a swell, a careful layering of noises that shouldn’t belong in a place so still: the faint metallic click of something brushing stone, the wh…"
17"The space around the standing stones seemed to tighten, the air growing denser as if a second atmosphere had decided to nestle beside this one."
18"A figure formed at the edge of her vision—clean lines, pale skin, a silhouette that stood too rigidly still to be real."
19"When she returned her gaze, it was gone, but the air felt heavier, as if something had paused in the room long enough to leave a fingerprint."
20"The Heartstone’s glow pulsed again, a soft, pulsing bead of warmth that traveled to her collarbone and settled there like a quiet weight."
21"Silence followed, but the grove’s silence wasn’t the absence of sound; it was a containment, a force keeping something barely contained, something that preferre…"
22"The whisper returned, this time not in a mouthful of wind but in a line of sound that resembled a sound you make when you bite your lip and keep from saying som…"
23"The saying wasn’t helpful, but it felt honest in a way that made her chest tighten with something like fear and something like exhilaration."
24"The route to the Hel portal—the idea that had haunted the edges of her thoughts since she’d first heard the rumor—the idea that the pendant might link to someth…"
25"She placed her palm flat on the oak’s trunk, felt the rough bark beneath her fingers, the cold seam of a knot where a face might have pressed against the world,…"
26"The grove answered with a tremor through the stones—a shallow quake that felt more like a heartbeat passing under the ground."
27"The air thickened in a way that pressed against her lungs and insisted she take a deeper breath, as if the grove truly needed her to exhale to hear what came ne…"
28"A sound rose—soft, unordered, like a hundred threads catching on a single nail—then collapsed into nothingness as if the universe decided to hide what it had ju…"
29"No, someone older, someone who spoke with the careful courtesy of a judge and the bitterness of a man who had learned to price compassion in coin."
30"Rory blinked; the world swelled and then narrowed to a single, dim point of light—the Heartstone pendant—pulsing in a rhythm she could now interpret as a warnin…"
31"She pressed her fingers into the knot of her own wrist, tracing the crescent-shaped scar, the tender line that pulled her attention away from the memory and bac…"
32"It offered a perception shift—a widening of vision that wasn’t about seeing more, but about seeing differently."
33"The glow brightened to a soft, steady radiance, and the grove’s boundary softened, as if the world outside had become a mist that could be walked through if you…"
34"Then, as if a curtain had been raised on a stage neither you nor the world knew existed, the space beyond the stones opened and closed in quick increments—like …"
35"The air began to taste metallic, a sensation that wasn’t fear so much as a chemical reminder of something you’d forgotten to fear previously."
36"The line led to a small, unremarkable pool of water that shouldn’t have existed in the grove this late."
37"The surface shimmered with a glassy stillness that held its own kind of danger—the kind that lures you to lean in and see your own face, and in seeing it, to re…"
38"The Heartstone’s glow intensified just above the pool, as if it longed to touch that surface, to blur the boundary between two worlds with a single move."
39"The pool’s reflection wasn’t hers alone; it showed a second version of the grove, a parallel scene where the stones bore scars that hadn’t yet formed in this li…"
40"The benefactor wasn’t a person; it was a role filled by something ancient enough to forget a name, something that chose to present itself as a guardian in a pla…"
41"The room outside the grove’s borders caved to the weight of that truth only for an instant, then reasserted itself—city sounds, far away; birds that had never l…"
42"She drew back slightly from the pool, hands flat on the grass, letting the image fade with the same quiet magic that had drawn it into being."
43"The Heartstone’s warmth dimmed to a patient glow, as if content to be patient while she decided what to do with what she’d learned."
44"The wildflowers, evergreen and unruffled, nodded as if agreeing with an unspoken ceremony."
45"She moved toward the boundary stones that marked the grove’s edge, her steps measured, the Heartstone pendant a steady, almost affectionate heat against her wri…"
46"The moon, pale and patient, slipped behind a cloud, leaving the clearing in a delta of shadows that shifted with every breath of wind."
47"The Heartstone’s heat settled into a patient steadiness and then dipped to a comfortable warmth again as if the stone itself decided to pace her, to walk with h…"
48"Rory stood in the glow and shadow, a small human form with a clear purpose and a stubborn heart, and she felt the garden of possibilities tilt very slightly tow…"
49"She walked then, the Heartstone Pendant warm against her skin, its faint glow a map of the night’s choices, guiding her back toward the city’s waiting breath, t…"
90.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked again, the question turning into a thread she began to pull"
1"she demanded, though the word came out as a hiss"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
1"a voice whispered (whisper)"
2"she finally spoke aloud (speak)"
3"the grove’s whisper seemed (seem)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"she demanded (demand)"
8"she whispered (whisper)"
9"she repeated (repeat)"
10"she whispered (whisper)"
11"she repeated (repeat)"
12"the grove seemed (seem)"
13"she spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.897
leniency1
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.538
60.6220%