| 35.62% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 6 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "She stepped back [back]" | | 2 | "His hand fell away [away]" | | 3 | "His hand rose hesitated then [then]" | | 4 | "He pulled back [back]" | | 5 | "She stepped aside [aside]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 73 | | tagDensity | 0.288 | | leniency | 0.575 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.164 | |
| 90.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1609 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1609 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tension" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "reminder" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "navigated" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "encounter" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1610 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1074 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.37 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Didn | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 3 | | Like | 1 | | Couldn | 2 | | Hated | 1 | | Moira | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Moira" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.621 | | wordCount | 1610 | | matches | | 0 | "not to grab her but to press something into the doorframe" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "remembered that tell" | | 1 | "Hated that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 71 | | mean | 22.68 | | std | 19.18 | | cv | 0.846 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 68 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 56 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 55 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 54 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 49 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 50 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 98.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was rumpled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | |
| 50.69% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "His suit — charcoal, perfectly tailored — was rumpled at the shoulders." | | 1 | "His fingers drummed once against the head of his cane — the only tell he ever allowed himself." | | 2 | "The encounter had lasted less than ten minutes — a tear in reality, something with too many teeth pulling itself into her world, and then nothing." | | 3 | "\"That's not the point.\" He stepped closer, and she caught the scent of him — sandalwood and cigarette smoke and something underneath that was purely him, something that triggered memories she'd spent months burying." | | 4 | "The memory was too sharp — the candlelight, the wine she hadn't drunk, the way he'd reached across the table to take her hand." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 949 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.037934668071654375 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009483667017913594 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 10.39 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.808 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 65.16% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.44516129032258067 | | totalSentences | 155 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.30% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood frozen in the" | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 2 | "His suit — charcoal, perfectly" | | 3 | "She didn't move aside" | | 4 | "His gaze swept past her" | | 5 | "Her knuckles had gone white." | | 6 | "He absorbed the blow without" | | 7 | "His fingers drummed once against" | | 8 | "She remembered that tell." | | 9 | "She remembered the night he'd" | | 10 | "he said quietly" | | 11 | "She shifted her weight, ready" | | 12 | "His head tilted toward the" | | 13 | "She'd taken extra shifts at" | | 14 | "She stepped back, preparing to" | | 15 | "His hand shot out, not" | | 16 | "His voice dropped, and for" | | 17 | "She stared at the card." | | 18 | "He didn't answer immediately." | | 19 | "Her stomach dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 96.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked and" | | 1 | "Rory's heart stopped." | | 2 | "She stood frozen in the" | | 3 | "Ptolemy wound between her ankles," | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 5 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 6 | "His suit — charcoal, perfectly" | | 7 | "Both fixed on her with" | | 8 | "She didn't move aside" | | 9 | "His gaze swept past her" | | 10 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 11 | "Her knuckles had gone white." | | 12 | "A muscle in his jaw" | | 13 | "An eternal reminder of what" | | 14 | "The words came out sharp," | | 15 | "He absorbed the blow without" | | 16 | "His fingers drummed once against" | | 17 | "She remembered that tell." | | 18 | "She remembered the night he'd" | | 19 | "he said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Remembered watching it in smoky underground clubs while he negotiated deals with creatures that shouldn't exist." | | 1 | "Remembered seeing it across a candlelit table in a restaurant that served blood wine to patrons who weren't human." | | 2 | "About the terror that had seized her when it turned its attention to her." | | 3 | "Ptolemy leaped onto the nearest stack of books, watching them both with the inscrutable patience of a creature who'd seen far stranger things than two people wh…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She shifted, ready to close the door" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 73 | | tagDensity | 0.041 | | leniency | 0.082 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.027 | |