Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKJEY2P56FKFWCWDYEGBY

Run Details

Duration:
47.5s
Cost:
$0.006605
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked and the door swung inward. Rory's heart stopped. She stood frozen in the doorway of Eva's flat, one hand still wrapped around the door handle, the other clutching her phone like a weapon. Ptolemy wound between her ankles, oblivious to the tension crackling through the air. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe opposite her, ivory-handled cane tucked under one arm. His platinum hair was slicked back as always, though a strand had fallen loose across his forehead. His suit — charcoal, perfectly tailored — was rumpled at the shoulders. Dark circles shadowed the space beneath his heterochromatic eyes. One amber, one black. Both fixed on her with an intensity that made her skin prickle. "You're not Eva." "Brilliant observation." She didn't move aside. Didn't invite him in. "She's not here." "I can see that." His gaze swept past her into the cluttered flat, cataloguing the towers of books, the scrolls unfurled across every surface, the teacup rings staining Eva's research notes. "When will she return?" "Don't know. She didn't say." Rory tightened her grip on the door. Her knuckles had gone white. "You could try calling." "She doesn't answer my calls." "Wonder why." A muscle in his jaw flexed. In the dim light of the corridor, the amber eye caught the glow of the single flickering bulb while the black one swallowed it whole. An eternal reminder of what he was. What she'd tried so hard to forget. "May I come in?" "No." "Rory —" "It's Aurora." The words came out sharp, honed to a cutting edge. "You don't get to call me that anymore." He absorbed the blow without flinching. His fingers drummed once against the head of his cane — the only tell he ever allowed himself. She remembered that tell. Remembered watching it in smoky underground clubs while he negotiated deals with creatures that shouldn't exist. Remembered seeing it across a candlelit table in a restaurant that served blood wine to patrons who weren't human. She remembered the night he'd done it while lying to her face. "Three months," he said quietly. "You've been avoiding me for three months." "Good maths. Must be all those languages you speak." "Five, actually. I've learned another since we last spoke." "How lovely for you." She shifted her weight, ready to close the door. "Now if you'll excuse me, I was in the middle of —" "Delivering noodles?" His head tilted toward the paper bag on the table behind her, the Golden Empress logo stamped across its side in red. "Or perhaps you were busy pretending I don't exist?" The accuracy stung. She'd taken extra shifts at Yu-Fei's restaurant, filled her hours with drop-offs and pick-ups, anything to avoid the parts of London where she might run into him. Silas' bar had become a minefield. The supernatural underground she'd once navigated with him as her guide had become enemy territory. "I'm not pretending anything. I'm living my life. You should try it sometime." She stepped back, preparing to shut him out. "Goodbye, Lucien." "Wait." His hand shot out, not to grab her but to press something into the doorframe. A card. Black stock, silver lettering. An address she didn't recognize. "If something happens — if you're in danger — go there. Ask for Moira. She'll protect you." "I don't need protection." "Everyone needs protection." His voice dropped, and for a moment the mask slipped. Beneath the expensive suit and the half-demon composure, something raw flickered across his features. "Especially those who refuse to ask for it." She stared at the card. At his long fingers still pinning it to the wood. At the scar on his knuckle she'd traced a hundred times in the dark. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" He didn't answer immediately. The flickering bulb overhead cast shadows across his face, half-light and half-dark, and she thought not for the first time that he belonged to neither world fully. Not human enough for one. Not demon enough for the other. Straddling the divide, always. "I heard about the delivery. The one in Lambeth." Her stomach dropped. "How did you —" "Information is my trade, Aurora. Did you think I wouldn't hear about a rift opening in the middle of a council estate? About the creature that crawled through?" His hand fell away from the card. "About the woman who banished it?" She said nothing. Her tongue felt thick, her throat tight. The encounter had lasted less than ten minutes — a tear in reality, something with too many teeth pulling itself into her world, and then nothing. She'd acted on instinct. On knowledge she'd gathered from Eva's research, from nights spent poring over texts she barely understood. On things Lucien had taught her. "You could have died." "But I didn't." "That's not the point." He stepped closer, and she caught the scent of him — sandalwood and cigarette smoke and something underneath that was purely him, something that triggered memories she'd spent months burying. "You walked into a situation you didn't understand, against an enemy you couldn't predict, and you survived through sheer dumb luck." "Luck?" A laugh scraped out of her, brittle and hollow. "I've been studying. Training. Eva's been teaching me —" "Eva is a researcher. She knows theory, not combat. She's never faced a rift-spawn in her life." His voice hardened. "You could have called me." "Why?" The word cracked open something inside her, and suddenly three months of silence poured out. "So you could lie to me again? So you could use me as bait for whatever deal you were brokering with the Obsidian Court? So you could tell me you cared while you handed me over to —" "I never handed you over." "No. You just planned to." She was shaking now. She hadn't meant to say any of this, hadn't meant to let him see how deeply the blade had twisted. "You sat there, that night at the restaurant, and you let me believe we were... that you and I were..." She couldn't finish. The memory was too sharp — the candlelight, the wine she hadn't drunk, the way he'd reached across the table to take her hand. The way his thumb had traced the crescent scar on her wrist. The way his contact had stormed in and revealed everything. "Aurora." He said her name like a prayer. Like a wound. "I called it off. The deal. I refused the terms." "After you were caught." "Before." He stepped closer again, and this time she didn't retreat. Couldn't. The doorframe pressed into her shoulder blades. "The moment I realized what they wanted — what it would mean for you — I ended the negotiation. Antoine revealed it to hurt me. To punish me for walking away." "Convenient." "It's the truth." His hand rose, hesitated, then brushed a strand of hair from her face. His fingertips grazed her cheekbone, and she felt the touch like electricity, like a match struck in the dark. "I have never been honest with anyone the way I was honest with you. I have never wanted to be." Her breath caught. The amber eye searched her face. The black one reflected nothing. "Then why didn't you find me? After." She hated how small her voice sounded. Hated that she still wanted to believe him. "Three months, Lucien. You knew where I lived. You knew where I worked. If any of that was true, why didn't you come?" "Because you looked at me that night." The words were barely audible. "And I saw you'd already decided what I was. What I'd always be." He pulled back, and the loss of his touch left her cold. "I didn't come because I thought you'd made your choice." The card remained pinned to the doorframe. An address. A woman named Moira. Protection. She thought about the rift-spawn. About the terror that had seized her when it turned its attention to her. About the moment she'd realized she was going to die alone in a crumbling estate hallway, and the only person she'd wanted to call was the one she'd sworn never to speak to again. "I'm still angry." "I know." "I don't trust you." "I wouldn't expect you to." "But I..." She pressed her lips together. The words stuck in her throat, tangled up with pride and hurt and the memory of his hands in her hair. "I don't want to keep doing this. The avoiding. The pretending. It's exhausting." Something shifted in his expression. Hope, maybe. Or something more fragile. "What are you saying?" "I'm saying you can come in." She stepped aside, pulling the door wider. "But only for tea. And only because I have questions about that address you just gave me." "Of course." He was already moving past her, already cataloguing the flat with that sharp, predatory gaze. But he paused on the threshold, close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from him. Close enough that if she turned her head, her lips would brush his jaw. "Aurora." "What?" "Thank you." She didn't respond. Couldn't. Ptolemy wound between them, purring like a small orange engine, and Lucien bent to scratch behind his ears. When he straightened, his gaze met hers. Three months of silence. Three months of fury. And still, watching him standing there in Eva's cramped flat, she felt the pull like gravity. She'd let him in. That was already more than she'd meant to give. Ptolemy leaped onto the nearest stack of books, watching them both with the inscrutable patience of a creature who'd seen far stranger things than two people who couldn't decide whether to kiss or kill each other.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
35.62% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
2"His hand fell away [away]"
3"His hand rose hesitated then [then]"
4"He pulled back [back]"
5"She stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.288
leniency0.575
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.164
90.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"traced"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"intensity"
2"reminder"
3"weight"
4"navigated"
5"flickered"
6"traced"
7"stomach"
8"encounter"
9"silence"
10"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences105
matches
0"p with pride"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1610
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1074
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.37
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Didn1
Rory2
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
London1
Lucien3
Like1
Couldn2
Hated1
Moira1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Moira"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Yu-Fei"
1"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.621
wordCount1610
matches
0"not to grab her but to press something into the doorframe"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences155
matches
0"remembered that tell"
1"Hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean22.68
std19.18
cv0.846
sampleLengths
09
141
268
33
413
535
621
75
82
945
104
111
122
1320
1463
1512
1612
179
189
1925
2033
2151
2223
231
2426
2517
264
2735
2829
296
3046
319
327
3341
3456
356
364
373
3855
3919
4025
4154
425
4349
4439
4510
4621
474
4850
491
98.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was rumpled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was shaking"
50.69% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences155
ratio0.032
matches
0"His suit — charcoal, perfectly tailored — was rumpled at the shoulders."
1"His fingers drummed once against the head of his cane — the only tell he ever allowed himself."
2"The encounter had lasted less than ten minutes — a tear in reality, something with too many teeth pulling itself into her world, and then nothing."
3"\"That's not the point.\" He stepped closer, and she caught the scent of him — sandalwood and cigarette smoke and something underneath that was purely him, something that triggered memories she'd spent months burying."
4"The memory was too sharp — the candlelight, the wine she hadn't drunk, the way he'd reached across the table to take her hand."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount949
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.037934668071654375
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009483667017913594
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean10.39
std8.39
cv0.808
sampleLengths
09
13
225
313
414
517
612
79
84
912
103
116
124
133
1431
154
1612
175
184
195
202
216
2225
237
247
254
261
272
2812
298
306
3118
324
3316
3419
3512
365
377
389
399
4013
4112
4224
439
443
4527
466
4715
4821
492
65.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.44516129032258067
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners69
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences99
matches
0"She stood frozen in the"
1"His platinum hair was slicked"
2"His suit — charcoal, perfectly"
3"She didn't move aside"
4"His gaze swept past her"
5"Her knuckles had gone white."
6"He absorbed the blow without"
7"His fingers drummed once against"
8"She remembered that tell."
9"She remembered the night he'd"
10"he said quietly"
11"She shifted her weight, ready"
12"His head tilted toward the"
13"She'd taken extra shifts at"
14"She stepped back, preparing to"
15"His hand shot out, not"
16"His voice dropped, and for"
17"She stared at the card."
18"He didn't answer immediately."
19"Her stomach dropped."
ratio0.424
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences99
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked and"
1"Rory's heart stopped."
2"She stood frozen in the"
3"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
4"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"His suit — charcoal, perfectly"
7"Both fixed on her with"
8"She didn't move aside"
9"His gaze swept past her"
10"Rory tightened her grip on"
11"Her knuckles had gone white."
12"A muscle in his jaw"
13"An eternal reminder of what"
14"The words came out sharp,"
15"He absorbed the blow without"
16"His fingers drummed once against"
17"She remembered that tell."
18"She remembered the night he'd"
19"he said quietly"
ratio0.727
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Remembered watching it in smoky underground clubs while he negotiated deals with creatures that shouldn't exist."
1"Remembered seeing it across a candlelit table in a restaurant that served blood wine to patrons who weren't human."
2"About the terror that had seized her when it turned its attention to her."
3"Ptolemy leaped onto the nearest stack of books, watching them both with the inscrutable patience of a creature who'd seen far stranger things than two people wh…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She shifted, ready to close the door"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences73
tagDensity0.041
leniency0.082
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.027
83.4424%