Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKJNSX9VEJTP5Q52Y0V1F

Run Details

Model:
GPT-5
Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.055909
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first knock rattled all three deadbolts. Ptolemy’s ears pricked from the back of the sofa, then he vanished under a stack of journals with a thump. Curry, onions and rain crept through the window cracks. Rory wiped soy sauce off her wrist with the hem of a tea towel and stared at the door like it owed her money. Another knock. Slower. Measured. She unlatched the first deadbolt, then the second, then stood with her hand on the third. Her chest tightened as if the flat had shrunk a little around her. Fine. She slid the last bolt. Lucien filled the doorway like a rumour turned real. Tailored charcoal suit, rain dotted across the shoulders. Slicked-back platinum hair that glinted under the hallway light. One amber eye, one black. He put a gloved hand to the frame as if the wood might change its mind. Bonsoir, Rory. Her grip flexed around the edge of the door. Ptolemy stuck his tabby face out from behind a pile of Eva’s notes and sniffed the air, then shot past her ankles to rub himself against Lucien’s trousers like a traitor. She folded the towel, gave it too much attention. You’ve got nerve. His gaze dropped to the towel, then her wrist, the crescent scar pale against her skin. He rested the ivory handle of his cane against the doorframe. I’ve been told. You don’t do Brick Lane. I do tonight. She held her ground. This isn’t my place. I know whose it is. He watched her, expression clean as a knife. He smelled like rain and expensive soap. Outside, a scooter buzzed up the street, someone shouted for naan, and her reflection trembled in the chain of the door. She let the door swing wider. He stepped past her without brushing her. He always walked like a man who owned his stride. The flat swallowed him, and his attention pulled over the riot of books and scribbled notes that mapped the coffee table and most of the floor. He looked for a second at the web of string Eva had pinned to a corkboard above the futon. Names, places, dates. Avaros circled in red like a curse word. You redecorated. This is Eva’s idea of tidying. He removed his gloves and slid them into his breast pocket, then set the cane beside the bookshelf that leaned like a drunk. Ptolemy climbed onto his shoe and stared up at him as if waiting for a password. He crouched. Hello, old man. The cat purred like an idling engine. Her laugh snapped out before she could tug it back. He’d fed Ptolemy once. Right. She backed into the kitchenette and poured water from the kettle that hadn’t cooled for long. The hiss filled the quiet. Steam smudged the window. She focused on the mug. Focused on not thinking about his mouth, framed in that half-smile he weaponised when the room didn’t need a blade. Tea? If you’re offering. I didn’t. He moved closer, the shift of the floorboards a small warning. She kept her eyes on the mug. He stopped on the other side of the counter. The cheap light lightened his eyes differently. Amber like a bottle at sunset. Black like the underside of a storm. You changed your number, Rory. You found me anyway. Bravo. How many little birds sang? No birds. You’re not that hidden. That hurt more than it should have. She set the mug down a touch too hard, liquid lapping over the lip onto her thumb. She hissed and stuck it in her mouth. He watched her do it, mouth tightening, then glanced away to the corkboard. You’ve been studying him. Your father gets mentioned in half the messes that drift past this flat. You’ll forgive the curiosity. Curiosity. He traced the red circle with his eyes, not his finger. Ptolemy leaped onto the back of the sofa and knocked a stack of folios askew with his bulk. Lucien reached out, caught the top one before it slid, flicked his gaze to a sketch of a sigil, then set it back down. Where’s Eva? Out. Working a late shift. You remember she exists? I remember her cat. You remember what you want. He breathed out, as if she had placed something on the table he didn’t like the look of. She took her thumb out of her mouth, wiped it on the tea towel and reached past him for the plasters in the junk drawer. He looked down at his hands before she even tugged the drawer open. Knuckles split, skin scraped. She hadn’t clocked it at the door. He always presented perfect until the angles revealed. He reached for the drawer, his fingers brushed her wrist like a line drawn over a map. I’m fine. You bleed on Eva’s books; she’ll exorcise you herself. He held his hands out. Do your worst. She pulled a chair with her ankle and gestured. Sit. And don’t touch that, it’s balanced like Jenga and the last person who breathed near it had to sleep with dictionaries. He sat, careful, the suit pulling at his shoulders. Up close, he looked less untouchable. There was stubble darkening his jaw. A bruise gathered at his temple like a storm creeping inland. He watched her tear open a plaster, attention steady in a way that made the room tilt. You always keep plasters in the cutlery drawer. It’s the junk drawer. And you knew that already. He flinched as she pressed the pad to the split skin. The flinch was small, but it cracked something inside her. He kept his hands still and his eyes on her face. You left. No. I told you I was leaving. I packed a bag. You watched me do it. You left after I asked you to wait. You asked after you sold me out. I never sold you. You sold the information. That’s the same shape. His jaw worked like he’d bit down on something. He drew his hands back as she smoothed the plaster, then set them on his knees. A contact was dying. He bought his life with the names of everyone he thought I cared about. I paid to make sure yours weren’t on his lips. You paid with my trust. Nice exchange rate. I paid with mine. She stared at him, heat climbing her throat. The kettle clicked in the silence. Outside, a motorbike revved then died. Rain pressed its face to the window, breath clouding the glass. She picked up the abandoned tea mug and pushed it towards him. Drink it before the skin forms. He took the mug. He didn’t drink. His hands wrapped around it like a hearth he’d never admit he needed. I didn’t come to fight. Then don’t. I came because there are men who think your friend’s flat is a library they can burgle. And because I rang your bell at the bar and Silas threw me out with a look that could end a drought. You deserve worse. You always did have a way with forgiveness. You always did like throwing me bones like I was starved for them. He dragged a hand over his mouth. Rainwater glistened at the cuff of his jacket. The wool held its lines, but his shoulders didn’t. A moment snagged, both of them looking at the stubborn stain on the floor near the kitchen bin where Eva had sacrificed a curry to chaos months ago. The stupidest details always lingered. I missed you. The words lodged in the doorway between them and sat there like an uninvited guest. Her knees felt hollow. She forced her toes to uncurl in her trainers. Ptolemy blinked at Lucien, then at her, judge and jury. You missed an informant. He met her look and didn’t look away. Informants don’t look at me like you do. Don’t get poetic. It doesn’t suit the tie. He glanced at his tie, ridiculously discreet, grey on grey. He loosened it as if it had grown too tight. It’s a bad night. I thought— God, forget it. Say it. I thought you might prefer to hear from me that the men looking for Eva aren’t amateurs. They’re not here for her, not really. They want what’s on that board. She planted her palm on the nearest pile of notes and splayed her fingers. They’re bits of paper. They’re maps. Someone’s bought the legend at auction. They need the key. And you think she has it. I think you do. Her throat clicked. He watched her like a hawk watched the tremor of grass over a rabbit warren. She pulled her hand back from the notes as though they were hot. That night behind the bar, you— Her voice roughened. —you kissed me like you were leaving a place you hated and coming home in the same breath. Do you remember that? He closed his eyes for a heartbeat, lashes sinking into skin. I remember you tasting like lime and salt. Then you walked away and told me you couldn’t afford me. Like I was a watch in a window. I told you I couldn’t keep you safe. I’m not a thing that breaks, Lucien. You are a person I break. She laughed, sharp. That’s not on your business card. No. That one I keep in my pocket. You don’t get to be tragic while standing in my kitchen. He looked at her mouth. Looked at the curve of it like it was an equation he had failed the last time. The cane leaned against the bookcase. He had come without it once and promised he never would again. It wasn’t about the limp; it was about the blade hidden in the hollow. He set the mug on the table, untouched. Let me help you lock this place down tonight. I’ll sleep on the floor. I’ll be gone before your friend returns. She ran a finger along the rim of the second mug. The tea had formed a film, skin that wrinkled when the cup moved. The words rose in her like tide. The part of her that had slept with the sound of his voice under her night, like a radio in another room, woke and stretched. You always make choices for people, don’t you? I would like you to choose. And if I say no? You slink back to your den and count your favours? If you say no, I go downstairs and sit on the step with your cat until someone throws us off. Ptolemy sneezed and licked a paw as if disavowing affiliation. She pressed her fingers to her scar without thinking. Childhood accident, nothing to do with him, yet it burned under her skin whenever he brought trouble through a door. You could have knocked at noon. I was busy at noon. Doing what, selling the rest of me at market? I was tailing a man who has a photograph of you in his pocket. Her stomach dropped like she’d missed a step. She hid it in a breath and a turn to the sink. Tap on. Water battering steel. She washed her thumb as if the heat could clean more than a burn. She turned back off the tap. The flat listened. What photograph. You in a blue dress at the university. Your hair longer. Your eyes brighter. She pictured the shade. She’d worn it to prove something to someone who no longer mattered. She met his eyes. If you had that photograph, what would you do with it. I would put it in a drawer and turn the key and throw the key in the Thames. Because you collect keys. Because people collect lives and spend them without counting. She pulled a blanket off the back of the sofa and shoved it at him. You get the floor. Try not to drip drama on Eva’s rug. He took the blanket like a man accepted a sentence. Thank you. Don’t make it a speech. The memory of his mouth pressed itself against the back of her teeth. She walked to the door and turned the locks he had just challenged with his knock. One, two, three. The metal sounded like a clock wound too tight. He looked up as she faced him again. The bruise at his temple had spread while they spoke. It made him human in a way his suit refused. He pushed up his sleeve and something pale showed at his wrist. A mark, not ink. Not human. She pretended she hadn’t seen it and he pretended he hadn’t shown it. I brought something. Oh good. Presents from Hell. From an auction house in Mayfair, which is worse. He reached into his inner pocket and pulled out a folded scrap. Not paper. Parchment. The edges charred, as if it had been rescued from a bin fire. He set it on the table between the mugs and stepped back as though it might bite. She didn’t touch it. The symbols sketched in a cramped hand looked like ants that had been scattered. The circle in the centre matched the one on Eva’s board so perfectly her skin prickled. You shouldn’t have that. Neither should the man who will come for it at dawn. Don’t do that. What. Imagine there is a dawn for you in this flat. He swallowed and looked away at the windows that reflected their shapes back at them like ghosts. He nodded, once, a capitulation scrubbed clean of pride. He reached for the blanket and spread it on the floor beside the sofa. The movement pulled his shirt free at the waist, a small mess in his usual order. He toed off his shoes. His socks had a hole at the big toe. She had never seen him with a flaw that domestic. It made her throat ache worse than any bruise. She felt her tiredness drop onto her like a coat. It smelled of curry and rain and old paper. Ptolemy leaped onto the arm of the sofa and crabbed across the back, tail high, watching the small theatre set play out as if he had seen it before in other lives. Turn off the big light, would you. He flicked the switch and the flat sank into the kind of half-dark that forgave a crowd of sins. Only the street lamps smeared orange over the spines of books and the line of his jaw. Thank you for not slamming the door in my face. I thought about it. I would have deserved it. You do a lot of things you reckon you deserve. He lay down on his side, one arm under his head. He looked both too big for the floor and exactly the right shape for that spot. He faced the door. He would. She curled her legs under herself on the sofa, half a cushion as a barrier, the other half a bridge she refused to name. Do you ever stop guarding. Only when someone tells me to. Stop, then. He closed his eyes. She let her head fall against the back of the sofa, and in the darkness, all the lines between them rearranged themselves without permission. The flat listened to their breaths until Ptolemy broke the silence with a rattling purr and stepped daintily over the parchment on the table like a priest over coals. Lucien spoke into the cushion, voice low, shaped like the truth he had skirted all evening. I didn’t come to leave you again. She let the words hang there like damp on laundry, refused to peg them into place. She tucked the blanket tighter around his shoulders, a small vandalism of his dignity, and pretended her hands shook from the draft.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2628
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2628
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"trembled"
2"traced"
3"flicked"
4"perfect"
5"silence"
6"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences303
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences303
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
2"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences303
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2625
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount2625
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Eva9
Lucien6
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy9
Jenga1
Silas1
God1
Thames1
Hell1
Mayfair1
You31
Do3
Don3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Silas"
5"God"
6"You"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Thames"
3"Hell"
4"Mayfair"
5"Do"
globalScore0.91
windowScore0.5
82.80% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences186
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"smelled like rain and expensive soap"
1"as if waiting for a password"
2"as if disavowing affiliation"
3"sounded like a clock wound too tight"
4"looked like ants that had been scattered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2625
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences303
matches
0"touch that, it’s"
1"had that photograph"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs135
mean19.44
std18.78
cv0.966
sampleLengths
060
14
235
347
42
540
612
730
85
93
108
115
1242
1373
142
156
1639
175
187
1965
201
213
222
2347
245
2510
266
2745
284
2917
3054
312
329
334
345
3575
3619
379
388
3931
4049
418
429
4334
4416
458
467
474
488
4953
99.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences303
matches
0"been told"
1"gets mentioned"
2"was starved"
3"been rescued"
4"been scattered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs515
matches
0"was leaving"
1"was dying"
2"were leaving"
3"was tailing"
95.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences303
ratio0.017
matches
0"You bleed on Eva’s books; she’ll exorcise you herself."
1"I thought— God, forget it."
2"That night behind the bar, you— Her voice roughened."
3"—you kissed me like you were leaving a place you hated and coming home in the same breath."
4"It wasn’t about the limp; it was about the blade hidden in the hollow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2628
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount73
adverbRatio0.027777777777777776
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0030441400304414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences303
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences303
mean8.66
std6.08
cv0.702
sampleLengths
07
120
29
324
42
51
61
716
813
91
105
119
128
139
145
1516
162
179
1831
199
203
2116
2211
233
245
253
264
274
285
298
307
3121
326
337
3410
3526
3619
373
388
392
406
4123
4216
432
443
457
4610
474
481
4916
39.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats31
diversityRatio0.2607260726072607
totalSentences303
uniqueOpeners79
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences270
matches
0"Then you walked away and"
1"Only the street lamps smeared"
2"Only when someone tells me"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount168
totalSentences270
matches
0"She unlatched the first deadbolt,"
1"Her chest tightened as if"
2"She slid the last bolt."
3"He put a gloved hand"
4"Her grip flexed around the"
5"She folded the towel, gave"
6"You’ve got nerve."
7"His gaze dropped to the"
8"He rested the ivory handle"
9"I’ve been told."
10"You don’t do Brick Lane."
11"I do tonight."
12"She held her ground."
13"I know whose it is."
14"He watched her, expression clean"
15"He smelled like rain and"
16"She let the door swing"
17"He stepped past her without"
18"He always walked like a"
19"He looked for a second"
ratio0.622
45.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount224
totalSentences270
matches
0"The first knock rattled all"
1"Ptolemy’s ears pricked from the"
2"Curry, onions and rain crept"
3"Rory wiped soy sauce off"
4"She unlatched the first deadbolt,"
5"Her chest tightened as if"
6"She slid the last bolt."
7"Lucien filled the doorway like"
8"He put a gloved hand"
9"Her grip flexed around the"
10"Ptolemy stuck his tabby face"
11"She folded the towel, gave"
12"You’ve got nerve."
13"His gaze dropped to the"
14"He rested the ivory handle"
15"I’ve been told."
16"You don’t do Brick Lane."
17"I do tonight."
18"She held her ground."
19"This isn’t my place."
ratio0.83
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences270
matches
0"If you’re offering."
1"If you say no, I"
2"If you had that photograph,"
3"Because you collect keys."
4"Because people collect lives and"
ratio0.019
96.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences107
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The flat swallowed him, and his attention pulled over the riot of books and scribbled notes that mapped the coffee table and most of the floor."
1"He removed his gloves and slid them into his breast pocket, then set the cane beside the bookshelf that leaned like a drunk."
2"He watched her tear open a plaster, attention steady in a way that made the room tilt."
3"She pulled her hand back from the notes as though they were hot."
4"The part of her that had slept with the sound of his voice under her night, like a radio in another room, woke and stretched."
5"I was tailing a man who has a photograph of you in his pocket."
6"He flicked the switch and the flat sank into the kind of half-dark that forgave a crowd of sins."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.2587%