Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKJZRBEE3BVJ7S3J89A5K

Run Details

Duration:
1m 50s
Cost:
$0.001537
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hummed with the low, comfortable murmur of a Tuesday evening. Green light from the neon sign outside stretched long fingers across the polished wood of the bar. Aurora Carter, known to most here as Rory, slid a clean glass under the tap. The hiss of lager filled the silence between an old Billy Bragg song fading out and the next one beginning. She wiped her hands on the dark apron tied around her waist, her eyes scanning the room out of habit. Silas was in the back, probably on the phone with one of his “importers.” The place felt like a second skin to her now—the scent of old polish and spilled whiskey, the gentle creak of floorboards worn smooth by decades of footsteps. Safe. The door swung open, letting in a gust of damp London air and the distant wail of a siren. A man stepped inside, shrugging off a wet coat. He paused just beyond the threshold, his eyes adjusting to the dim light. Something in the way he held himself—a slight stiffness in the shoulders, a careful turn of the head—made Rory look twice. Then he turned fully toward the bar, and her breath caught. It was Evan. Not the Evan from three years ago, all sharp angles and restless energy, the boy who could talk a room into silence or laughter with a single well-placed word. This man was thicker through the chest, his face leaner, harder. His hair was shorter, military neat, and he wore a simple grey sweater that looked both expensive and utterly impersonal. But the eyes were the same—that particular shade of hazel-green, like moss on stone. They found hers across the room and held. He didn’t smile. He just looked, and the weight of that look pressed the air from her lungs. He walked toward the bar, his footsteps quiet on the wood. He didn’t limp, but there was a deliberateness to his movement, a control that feltred. “Rory.” Her name in his voice was a relic. It sounded strange, dislocated from time. She hadn’t been Rory to him in years. To him, she’d been Laila, a name he’d chosen because he said Aurora was too formal, too soft for the girl who argued politics with his mates and knew every back alley in Cardiff. Laila had been his invention. She’d buried her with the rest of it. “Evan.” Her own voice was steady, a minor miracle. She reached for a glass, needing something to do with her hands. “What are you doing in London?” “Work.” His gaze didn’t waver. It travelled over her face, down to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, then back up. Taking inventory. “You’re working here?” “I help Silas out. Nights.” A faint, almost imperceptible tightening around his mouth. “Silas Blackwood owns this place?” “You know him?” “I know of him.” He finally looked away, scanning the bottles lined up behind her. “Old spook. Thought he’d be retired to a cottage in Dorset by now.” “He likes the noise.” Evan’s attention returned to her. “And you? Do you like the noise?” It was such an Evan question. Not ‘how are you’ or ‘it’s been a long time,’ but a probe, a way to peel back the surface. Laila would have laughed, given him a flippant answer. Rory just looked at him. “It pays the rent. What can I get you?” “Scotch. Neat. Whatever he keeps for himself, not the house stuff.” She turned, her back to him, and reached for the good bottle of Oban on the top shelf. Her fingers were perfectly steady. She poured two fingers into a heavy-bottomed glass, the liquid catching the amber light. When she set it in front of him, he didn’t reach for it immediately. “You cut your hair.” Her hand went unconsciously to the ends of her black hair, now brushing her shoulders. “It’s practical.” “It suits you.” He finally picked up the glass, swirling the whisky once before taking a sip. He closed his eyes for a second, savoring it. “Good.” Silence stretched between them, thick and awkward, filled with the ghosts of a thousand conversations they’d once had in rooms just like this. He used to hold forth on philosophy, on the inherent corruption of systems, his voice passionate, his hands chopping the air for emphasis. Now he just stood there, a monument to a silence she didn’t know how to read. “You look different,” she said, because someone had to say something. “I am different.” He said it without inflection, a simple statement of fact. His eyes were flat, the mossy green gone dull. “You left Cardiff.” “I did.” “You didn’t say goodbye.” The accusation, though the damp cloth she’d been using to wipe the bar. “There didn’t seem to be a point.” “A point.” He repeated the words, tasting them. “We were together for two years, Laila. A point.” “Don’t call me that.” “Why not? It’s who you wered intended. For the first time, a crack appeared in his composure. A flicker of something—annoyance, pain—in his eyes. He took another, longer drink of the Scotch. “I wanted you to be happy. You weren’t. Not at the end.” “No,” she agreed quietly. “I wasn’t.” The memory of those final months hung in the air between them: the slammed doors, the cutting remarks disguised as jokes, the way he’d isolate her from her friends, his possessiveness curdling into something darker, more controlling. The constant walking on eggshells. The fear that had started as a tiny seed and grown into a thorny vine, choking everything else out. “I heard you were in London,” he said, changing tack. His voice was casual again, the moment of tension passing. “Through Eva, I think. She mentioned you were delivering Chinese food.” “It’s a job.” “You were going to be a barrister. Like your dad. You were top of your class.” “Plans change.” She could feel her walls going up, brick by brick. This was the interrogation she’d always feared, the one where she’d have to justify her escape, her smaller life. “You were brilliant,” he said, and for a second, the old Evan was there—the one who’d looked at her in a lecture hall like she’d hung the moon, who’d smuggled a flask of gin into the library during finals week just to make her laugh. The one she’d thought she’d loved. “That was a long time ago,” she said, her voice softer now. He finished his drink, the ice clinking softly as he set the glass down. “What happened to us, Rory?” The question hung there, vast and unanswerable. She could have told him. She could have listed the reasons, the specific instances of cruelty, the slow erosion of her self. She could have described the terror she felt the night she finally packed a single bag and took the first train out of Cardiff, watching the familiar streets blur into nothing through a rain-streaked window. But looking at him now—this harder, quieter, stranger version of the boy she’d known—she saw that it wouldn’t matter. The past was a country they could no longer visit. The person who had hurt her was gone, replaced by this man with scarred knuckles and a military posture. And the girl who had been hurt was gone, too. “Life happened, Evan,” she said finally, picking up his empty glass. “We grew up. We grew apart.” He nodded slowly, as if he’d expected that answer. He pulled a wallet from his back pocket and laid a twenty-pound note on the bar. “Keep the change.” “You don’t have to.” “I know.” He hesitated, his hand resting on the wood for a moment longer. “It was good to see you, Rory.” He said her name like a farewell. He turned and walked back toward the door, his figure outlined for a moment in the green neon glow before he stepped out into the London night, leaving her alone with the silence and the faint, lingering scent of his cologne—something clean and sharp and utterly unfamiliar.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:22:13.758Z" 2/19/2026, 12:22:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
26.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The place felt like [like]"
1"she agreed quietly [quietly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
3"He nodded slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.413
leniency0.826
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.174
81.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"perfectly"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1359
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"silence"
count5
2
word"scanning"
count2
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"silence"
2"scanning"
3"footsteps"
4"weight"
5"flicker"
6"tension"
7"could feel"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1343
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1125
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Laila"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Carter1
Rory4
Billy1
Bragg1
London2
Evan5
Laila3
Aurora2
Cardiff2
Oban1
Scotch1
Chinese1
Like1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Billy"
5"Bragg"
6"Evan"
7"Laila"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a second skin to her now—the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.745
wordCount1343
matches
0"Not ‘how are you’ or ‘it’s been a long time,’ but a probe, a way to peel back the surface"
99.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"saw that it"
1"expected that answer"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.86
std21.96
cv0.818
sampleLengths
065
163
262
311
43
582
618
726
81
969
1027
1127
125
1313
143
1528
164
1712
1849
1911
2037
2118
2217
2327
2462
2511
2625
272
284
2920
3017
314
327
3337
346
3561
3631
373
3816
3931
4051
4112
4219
4364
4458
4517
4628
474
4821
4954
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs174
matches
0"were delivering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"Silas was in the back, probably on the phone with one of his “importers.” The place felt like a second skin to her now—the scent of old polish and spilled whiskey, the gentle creak of floorboards worn smooth by decades of footsteps."
1"Something in the way he held himself—a slight stiffness in the shoulders, a careful turn of the head—made Rory look twice."
2"But the eyes were the same—that particular shade of hazel-green, like moss on stone."
3"For the first time, a crack appeared in his composure. A flicker of something—annoyance, pain—in his eyes. He took another, longer drink of the Scotch. “I wanted you to be happy."
4"“You were brilliant,” he said, and for a second, the old Evan was there—the one who’d looked at her in a lecture hall like she’d hung the moon, who’d smuggled a flask of gin into the library during finals week just to make her laugh. The one she’d thought she’d loved."
5"But looking at him now—this harder, quieter, stranger version of the boy she’d known—she saw that it wouldn’t matter. The past was a country they could no longer visit. The person who had hurt her was gone, replaced by this man with scarred knuckles and a military posture. And the girl who had been hurt was gone, too."
6"He said her name like a farewell. He turned and walked back toward the door, his figure outlined for a moment in the green neon glow before he stepped out into the London night, leaving her alone with the silence and the faint, lingering scent of his cologne—something clean and sharp and utterly unfamiliar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount952
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03361344537815126
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011554621848739496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.57
std12.96
cv0.955
sampleLengths
013
117
215
320
420
542
61
719
89
913
1021
1111
123
1329
1411
1520
1614
178
183
1915
2011
2115
221
238
246
258
2634
275
288
299
3012
316
325
3317
342
353
365
378
385
393
4015
4113
424
435
447
456
4620
479
485
499
68.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.43434343434343436
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners43
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then he turned fully toward"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences70
matches
0"She wiped her hands on"
1"He paused just beyond the"
2"It was Evan."
3"His hair was shorter, military"
4"They found hers across the"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"He just looked, and the"
7"He walked toward the bar,"
8"He didn’t limp, but there"
9"Her name in his voice"
10"It sounded strange, dislocated from"
11"She hadn’t been Rory to"
12"She’d buried her with the"
13"Her own voice was steady,"
14"She reached for a glass,"
15"His gaze didn’t waver"
16"It travelled over her face,"
17"He finally looked away, scanning"
18"It was such an Evan"
19"She turned, her back to"
ratio0.6
38.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hummed with"
1"Aurora Carter, known to most"
2"The hiss of lager filled"
3"She wiped her hands on"
4"Silas was in the back,"
5"The door swung open, letting"
6"A man stepped inside, shrugging"
7"He paused just beyond the"
8"Something in the way he"
9"It was Evan."
10"This man was thicker through"
11"His hair was shorter, military"
12"They found hers across the"
13"He didn’t smile."
14"He just looked, and the"
15"He walked toward the bar,"
16"He didn’t limp, but there"
17"Her name in his voice"
18"It sounded strange, dislocated from"
19"She hadn’t been Rory to"
ratio0.843
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"To him, she’d been Laila,"
1"Now he just stood there,"
ratio0.029
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Not the Evan from three years ago, all sharp angles and restless energy, the boy who could talk a room into silence or laughter with a single well-placed word."
1"His hair was shorter, military neat, and he wore a simple grey sweater that looked both expensive and utterly impersonal."
2"The memory of those final months hung in the air between them: the slammed doors, the cutting remarks disguised as jokes, the way he’d isolate her from her frie…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice softer now"
1"He hesitated, his hand resting on the wood for a moment longer"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"she agreed quietly (agree)"
2"She mentioned (mention)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.391
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.13
80.9129%