| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 912 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 912 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "churn" | | 5 | "pounding" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "echoing" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 911 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 841 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift and change in the flickering moonlight" | | 1 | "quite make out" | | 2 | "pits that seemed to swallow the light, and its smile was a slash of crimson across its face" | | 3 | "chorus that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 911 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.33% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 35.04 | | std | 14.62 | | cv | 0.417 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 47 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 19 |
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| 92.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "was covered" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "was looking" | | 1 | "were waking" |
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| 93.60% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying foliage, but beneath it lurked something else—something cloying and sweet, like rotting flowers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 842 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.027315914489311165 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009501187648456057 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 15.71 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.411 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 62.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.39655172413793105 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the trees and the" | | 1 | "Then, from the darkness between" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 73.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped into the clearing," | | 1 | "It made her stomach churn," | | 2 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone" | | 3 | "It had led her here," | | 4 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She had come here for" | | 6 | "Its surface was covered in" | | 7 | "They brushed against her skin" | | 8 | "She snatched her hand back" | | 9 | "She could feel eyes on" | | 10 | "she called out, her voice" | | 11 | "It was tall and slender," | | 12 | "Its eyes were black pits" | | 13 | "it whispered, its voice like" | | 14 | "She tried to speak, but" | | 15 | "it continued, reaching out to" | | 16 | "it said, its voice a" | | 17 | "She turned and fled, branches" | | 18 | "She collapsed against a tree," |
| | ratio | 0.365 | |
| 46.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before" | | 1 | "She stepped into the clearing," | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "It made her stomach churn," | | 4 | "Her fingers found the Heartstone" | | 5 | "It had led her here," | | 6 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 7 | "The shadows seemed to writhe" | | 8 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 9 | "Aurora forced herself to breathe," | | 10 | "She had come here for" | | 11 | "The Heartstone grew warmer, its" | | 12 | "There, nestled between the roots" | | 13 | "Its surface was covered in" | | 14 | "They brushed against her skin" | | 15 | "Aurora reached out, her hand" | | 16 | "The whispers grew louder, more" | | 17 | "She snatched her hand back" | | 18 | "The air around her seemed" | | 19 | "She could feel eyes on" |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 15.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed before Aurora like ancient sentinels, their weathered surfaces gleaming dully in the moonlight that filtered through the canopy of an…" | | 1 | "It had led her here, to this forgotten corner of Richmond Park, pulsing with an insistent rhythm that matched the pounding of her heart." | | 2 | "Its surface was covered in strange symbols that seemed to shift and change in the flickering moonlight." | | 3 | "The whispers grew louder, more insistent, until they formed a single word, spoken in a voice that was both ancient and achingly familiar." | | 4 | "She snatched her hand back as if burned, her heart racing." | | 5 | "It was tall and slender, with skin as pale as moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver." | | 6 | "Its eyes were black pits that seemed to swallow the light, and its smile was a slash of crimson across its face." | | 7 | "A man with antlers sprouting from his brow, his laughter echoing through a forest of crystal trees." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice shaking" | | 1 | "it said, its voice a sibilant hiss" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "it continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |