Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKMW05T432Z3C5YQCN765

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed before Aurora like ancient sentinels, their weathered surfaces gleaming dully in the moonlight that filtered through the canopy of ancient oaks. She stepped into the clearing, her boots crunching softly on the carpet of fallen leaves, and immediately felt the wrongness settle over her like a shroud. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying foliage, but beneath it lurked something else—something cloying and sweet, like rotting flowers. It made her stomach churn, but she pressed on, drawn by a force she couldn't name. Her fingers found the Heartstone pendant at her throat, its crimson surface warm against her skin. It had led her here, to this forgotten corner of Richmond Park, pulsing with an insistent rhythm that matched the pounding of her heart. She moved deeper into the grove, her senses on high alert. The shadows seemed to writhe and twist, forming shapes that disappeared when she tried to focus on them. A twig snapped behind her, and she whirled around, heart leaping into her throat. Nothing. Just the trees and the endless night. Aurora forced herself to breathe, to push down the rising tide of panic. She had come here for a reason, and she wouldn't leave until she found what she was looking for. The Heartstone grew warmer, its pulse quickening as she approached the center of the clearing. There, nestled between the roots of the largest oak, was a small stone altar. Its surface was covered in strange symbols that seemed to shift and change in the flickering moonlight. As she drew closer, a gust of wind swept through the grove, carrying with it a chorus of whispers. They brushed against her skin like ghostly fingers, murmuring words she couldn't quite make out. Aurora reached out, her hand trembling as she brushed her fingertips against the cold stone of the altar. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, until they formed a single word, spoken in a voice that was both ancient and achingly familiar. "Aurora..." She snatched her hand back as if burned, her heart racing. The air around her seemed to thicken, pressing in on her from all sides. She could feel eyes on her, watching from the shadows, waiting. "Who's there?" she called out, her voice shaking. "Show yourself!" For a moment, there was only silence. Then, from the darkness between the trees, a figure emerged. It was tall and slender, with skin as pale as moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver. Its eyes were black pits that seemed to swallow the light, and its smile was a slash of crimson across its face. Aurora stumbled back, her hand flying to the knife at her belt. The figure moved with preternatural grace, gliding across the clearing until it stood before her, close enough that she could feel the chill radiating from its body. "You should not have come here, little one," it whispered, its voice like the rustling of dead leaves. "This place is not meant for mortals." Aurora's throat was dry, her tongue heavy in her mouth. She tried to speak, but no words came out. The figure tilted its head, a gesture that was both curious and predatory. "But you are not entirely mortal, are you?" it continued, reaching out to trace a cold finger along her jawline. "You bear the mark of the old ones. The Heartstone sings for you." The pendant at her throat burned like a brand, and Aurora gasped as a flood of images filled her mind. A woman with eyes like stars, her hands weaving threads of light and shadow. A man with antlers sprouting from his brow, his laughter echoing through a forest of crystal trees. A city of silver and gold, its towers reaching towards a sky filled with unfamiliar constellations. The figure watched her, its black eyes gleaming with ancient knowledge. "You have been chosen, Aurora Carter," it said, its voice a sibilant hiss. "The time of the old ways is upon us once more. And you will play your part, whether you wish to or not." With a suddenness that left her breathless, the images vanished, and the figure was gone. Aurora stood alone in the clearing, the Heartstone still pulsing against her skin, its rhythm now a frantic, desperate beat. She turned and fled, branches tearing at her clothes and skin as she ran through the darkness. The whispers followed her, a mocking chorus that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. When she finally burst from the trees and onto the familiar path of Richmond Park, the first light of dawn was just beginning to paint the sky in shades of pink and gold. She collapsed against a tree, her body shaking with exhaustion and fear. The Heartstone lay cold and still against her chest, but she knew it was only a matter of time before it called to her again. And next time, she might not be able to resist its siren song. As the sun rose higher, banishing the shadows of the night, Aurora pushed herself to her feet and began the long walk home. But even as the warmth of the new day seeped into her bones, she couldn't shake the feeling that something had changed. That she had crossed a threshold from which there was no return. The old ways were waking, and she was a part of them now, whether she liked it or not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount912
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"churn"
count1
5
word"pounding"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count2
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"gleaming"
3"stomach"
4"churn"
5"pounding"
6"pulse"
7"familiar"
8"racing"
9"could feel"
10"silence"
11"chill"
12"echoing"
13"crystal"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords911
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount841
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora8
Heartstone4
Richmond2
Park2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"symbols that seemed to shift and change in the flickering moonlight"
1"quite make out"
2"pits that seemed to swallow the light, and its smile was a slash of crimson across its face"
3"chorus that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount911
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
76.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean35.04
std14.62
cv0.417
sampleLengths
051
141
240
343
48
532
646
734
841
91
1036
1110
1217
1340
1439
1525
1632
1733
1867
1947
2035
2134
2245
2338
2457
2519
92.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"was covered"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs142
matches
0"was looking"
1"were waking"
93.60% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences58
ratio0.017
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and decaying foliage, but beneath it lurked something else—something cloying and sweet, like rotting flowers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount842
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.027315914489311165
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009501187648456057
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean15.71
std6.45
cv0.411
sampleLengths
025
126
225
316
416
524
611
718
814
91
107
1113
1219
1315
1414
1517
1619
1715
1818
1923
201
2111
2214
2311
248
252
267
2710
2818
2922
3012
3127
3218
337
3410
359
3613
3720
3813
3920
4014
4117
4216
4311
4413
4523
4615
4720
4817
4917
62.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.39655172413793105
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences52
matches
0"Just the trees and the"
1"Then, from the darkness between"
ratio0.038
73.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences52
matches
0"She stepped into the clearing,"
1"It made her stomach churn,"
2"Her fingers found the Heartstone"
3"It had led her here,"
4"She moved deeper into the"
5"She had come here for"
6"Its surface was covered in"
7"They brushed against her skin"
8"She snatched her hand back"
9"She could feel eyes on"
10"she called out, her voice"
11"It was tall and slender,"
12"Its eyes were black pits"
13"it whispered, its voice like"
14"She tried to speak, but"
15"it continued, reaching out to"
16"it said, its voice a"
17"She turned and fled, branches"
18"She collapsed against a tree,"
ratio0.365
46.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences52
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before"
1"She stepped into the clearing,"
2"The air was thick with"
3"It made her stomach churn,"
4"Her fingers found the Heartstone"
5"It had led her here,"
6"She moved deeper into the"
7"The shadows seemed to writhe"
8"A twig snapped behind her,"
9"Aurora forced herself to breathe,"
10"She had come here for"
11"The Heartstone grew warmer, its"
12"There, nestled between the roots"
13"Its surface was covered in"
14"They brushed against her skin"
15"Aurora reached out, her hand"
16"The whispers grew louder, more"
17"She snatched her hand back"
18"The air around her seemed"
19"She could feel eyes on"
ratio0.827
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The standing stones loomed before Aurora like ancient sentinels, their weathered surfaces gleaming dully in the moonlight that filtered through the canopy of an…"
1"It had led her here, to this forgotten corner of Richmond Park, pulsing with an insistent rhythm that matched the pounding of her heart."
2"Its surface was covered in strange symbols that seemed to shift and change in the flickering moonlight."
3"The whispers grew louder, more insistent, until they formed a single word, spoken in a voice that was both ancient and achingly familiar."
4"She snatched her hand back as if burned, her heart racing."
5"It was tall and slender, with skin as pale as moonlight and hair that flowed like liquid silver."
6"Its eyes were black pits that seemed to swallow the light, and its smile was a slash of crimson across its face."
7"A man with antlers sprouting from his brow, his laughter echoing through a forest of crystal trees."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she called out, her voice shaking"
1"it said, its voice a sibilant hiss"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"it whispered (whisper)"
2"it continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.667
71.8895%