Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKPH0TDJDNKAH1ES08EF7

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Duration:
55.2s
Cost:
$0.037071

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an emerald glow across Rory's face as she pushed through the heavy door, seeking refuge from the October rain. Water dripped from her black hair onto the worn wooden floor. She hadn't planned on coming here tonight, but the delivery run had taken her past Soho, and something about the familiar weight of loneliness had drawn her in. The bar was nearly empty, save for a couple in the corner booth and a figure hunched over a whiskey at the far end. Maps and faded photographs lined the walls like ghosts of forgotten places. Rory slid onto a barstool and waited for Silas to emerge from the back room. "Christ, is that really you?" The voice froze her blood. She turned slowly, and there he was—Gareth Williams, though she barely recognised him. The lanky boy she'd known at Cardiff had filled out, his once-wild brown hair now cropped short and professionally styled. He wore a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent. But it was his eyes that unsettled her most. The mischievous spark she remembered had been replaced by something harder, more calculating. "Gareth." She kept her voice level, though her heart hammered against her ribs. "Bloody hell, Rory Carter. What are the odds?" He abandoned his drink and moved toward her, that familiar easy grin spreading across his face. "You look..." "Different?" "I was going to say good. Really good." His gaze swept over her delivery jacket, the worn jeans, the practical boots. "Though not quite what I expected from the girl who was going to change the world." She felt the familiar heat rise in her cheeks. "People change, Gareth. Plans change." "Don't they just." He slid onto the adjacent stool, close enough that she caught his cologne—expensive, nothing like the cheap aftershave he'd worn as a student. "What brings you to this particular den of iniquity?" "I live here. Upstairs." His eyebrows shot up. "Above a bar? How very bohemian of you." The condescension in his tone made her jaw tighten. "And you? Still in Cardiff, or did the big city finally tempt you away?" "London, actually. Have been for three years now. Corporate law, Hutchinson & Associates. You might have heard of us." She hadn't, but she wasn't about to give him the satisfaction. "Congratulations." "Thanks. Though I have to say, when I heard you'd left Cardiff so suddenly... well, we all wondered what had happened to the great Aurora Carter. The girl who was going to take on the establishment, fight for justice, all that." The words hit like physical blows. She gripped her hands together to hide the trembling in the crescent scar on her wrist. "Life happened." "Ah yes, life. That inconvenient thing that gets in the way of our grand plans." He signaled to the bartender who'd emerged from the back—not Silas, but a younger man she didn't recognize. "Two whiskeys, neat. The good stuff." "I didn't order anything." "My treat. Consider it a reunion drink." He leaned back, studying her with those changed eyes. "So what do you do now? Apart from living above bars, I mean." Heat flooded her face. "I deliver food." The silence stretched between them like a taut wire. She watched his expression shift, saw him process this information and file it away under 'disappointment' or perhaps 'amusing anecdote for dinner parties.' "Delivery. Right. That's... that's good. Honest work." "Don't." "Don't what?" "Don't patronize me, Gareth. We may not have seen each other in five years, but I still know that tone." He held up his hands in mock surrender. "Just making conversation, Rory. Christ, you're defensive." The whiskey arrived, amber liquid in heavy glasses. She didn't touch hers. "You know," Gareth continued, taking a generous sip, "I always thought you'd be the one to make it. You had that fire, that passion. Remember the protests? The way you'd stand up in seminars and absolutely eviscerate Professor Henley's arguments about corporate liability?" She remembered. She also remembered the night they'd spent together after one of those seminars, when passion had meant something entirely different. When they'd talked until dawn about changing the world, about justice, about all the things they'd do once they escaped the suffocating bubble of university life. "That was a long time ago." "Was it? Sometimes it feels like yesterday to me." His voice had gone softer, more like the boy she'd known. "I think about those days sometimes. When everything seemed possible." "And now?" He laughed, but there was no humor in it. "Now I help corporations minimize their tax burden and navigate environmental regulations with the least possible impact to their bottom line. Not exactly what I had in mind when I was twenty and full of righteous anger." "But you're successful." "Oh yes. Very successful. Partnership track, corner office, all the trappings." He drained his glass and set it down with deliberate care. "Funny how success can feel like its own kind of prison sometimes." The admission hung between them, unexpected in its honesty. For a moment, she glimpsed the boy she'd once known beneath the expensive suit and practiced charm. "What happened to you, Rory? Really. You just... vanished. One day you were there, fighting with Evan about something or other, and the next..." He shrugged. "Gone." Her stomach clenched at the mention of Evan's name. The memories threatened to surface—the raised voices, the controlling behavior that had slowly strangled her spirit, the final night when she'd fled with nothing but a bag of clothes and Eva's promise of refuge in London. "Sometimes leaving is the only option." "That's cryptic." "It's honest." He studied her face, and she forced herself not to look away. Whatever he saw there made him nod slowly. "We all have our reasons, I suppose. Our necessary compromises." He touched his signet ring—not silver like Silas's, but gold with some family crest. "Though I have to say, you were the last person I expected to find delivering takeaway in Soho." "And you were the last person I expected to find defending corporate interests in Mayfair." "Touché." He smiled, and for an instant it was genuine, unguarded. "We really are a pair, aren't we? The idealistic law students who were going to save the world." "Maybe we still are. Just... taking different routes." "Are we?" The question carried weight, as if he genuinely wanted to know her answer. Before she could respond, the door chimed and Silas limped in from the rain, his grey-streaked hair damp and his hazel eyes immediately cataloguing the scene. His gaze lingered on Gareth with the subtle intensity of a man accustomed to reading people, cataloguing threats and opportunities. "Evening, Rory." His voice carried its usual quiet authority. "Wasn't expecting you tonight." "Unplanned visit." She felt oddly grateful for his presence, though she couldn't say why. Gareth stood, extending a manicured hand. "Gareth Williams. Old friend of Rory's from university." Silas shook the offered hand, his silver ring catching the bar's dim light. "Silas Blackwood. I own this place." "Pleasure. Lovely establishment. Very... atmospheric." The politeness felt forced, two men sizing each other up across an invisible divide. Silas moved behind the bar with economical movements despite his slight limp, pouring himself two fingers of something that definitely wasn't on the shelf for customers. "Well," Gareth said, the moment stretching uncomfortably. "I should probably get going. Early morning tomorrow, and the partners don't appreciate tardiness." He pulled a business card from his wallet, placing it beside Rory's untouched whiskey. "My direct line. In case you ever want to catch up properly. Maybe over something better than bar whiskey." She stared at the crisp white card without touching it. "Maybe." "It was good seeing you, Rory. Really." He paused at the door, his hand on the brass handle. "For what it's worth, I hope you find whatever it is you're looking for." The door closed behind him with a soft thud, leaving only the sound of rain against the windows and the distant murmur of the couple in the corner booth. Rory finally picked up the whiskey and drained it in one burning gulp. "Old friend?" Silas's voice was carefully neutral. "Something like that." She slid the business card across the bar toward him, watching as his experienced fingers turned it over, reading not just the printed information but the story it told. "Expensive cardstock. Embossed lettering. Hutchinson & Associates—they handle acquisitions for some interesting clients." He looked up at her with those knowing hazel eyes. "The kind of firm that pays very well for very specific services." "Meaning?" "Meaning your old friend has traveled quite far from whatever he used to be." She thought about the boy who'd shared her passion for justice, who'd held her close and whispered about the future they'd build together. Then she thought about the man who'd just left, with his calculating eyes and casual condescension. "We all have, haven't we?" Silas said nothing, but his silence felt like understanding. Outside, the rain continued to fall, washing the neon-lit streets clean for another night's possibilities and regrets.
total_cost0.037071

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He leaned back [back]"
1"She felt oddly [oddly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.059
51.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsmAdverbs15
found
0
adverb"really"
count5
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count5
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1532
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"calculating"
count2
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"absolutely"
count1
6
word"navigate"
count1
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"unsettled"
3"calculating"
4"silence"
5"absolutely"
6"navigate"
7"charm"
8"stomach"
9"intensity"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1523
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount916
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory4
October1
Soho1
Silas8
Gareth5
Williams1
Cardiff1
Heat1
Evan1
Eva1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Gareth"
5"Williams"
6"Heat"
7"Evan"
8"Eva"
places
0"October"
1"Soho"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like understanding"
3.02% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.97
wordCount1523
matches
0"not Silas, but a younger man she didn't recognize"
1"not silver like Silas's, but gold with some family crest"
2"not just the printed information but the story it told"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean22.4
std17.19
cv0.767
sampleLengths
067
151
25
373
413
526
61
737
814
935
104
1112
1223
1319
1412
1541
1624
1739
184
1929
207
2132
227
231
242
2520
2615
2712
2843
2948
306
3130
322
3346
343
3534
3626
3727
3845
396
402
412
4220
4342
4415
4529
468
4715
4846
4913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs161
matches(empty)
19.70% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences116
ratio0.043
matches
0"She turned slowly, and there he was—Gareth Williams, though she barely recognised him."
1"\"Don't they just.\" He slid onto the adjacent stool, close enough that she caught his cologne—expensive, nothing like the cheap aftershave he'd worn as a student."
2"\"Ah yes, life. That inconvenient thing that gets in the way of our grand plans.\" He signaled to the bartender who'd emerged from the back—not Silas, but a younger man she didn't recognize."
3"The memories threatened to surface—the raised voices, the controlling behavior that had slowly strangled her spirit, the final night when she'd fled with nothing but a bag of clothes and Eva's promise of refuge in London."
4"\"We all have our reasons, I suppose. Our necessary compromises.\" He touched his signet ring—not silver like Silas's, but gold with some family crest."
86.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount688
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.05377906976744186
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.02180232558139535
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean13.13
std9.33
cv0.711
sampleLengths
028
111
228
324
412
515
65
75
813
920
1013
119
1213
1313
1424
152
161
1721
1816
199
205
2126
229
234
244
258
269
2714
2819
2911
301
3141
326
3316
342
3533
366
374
3816
3913
404
413
429
4323
447
451
462
4720
488
497
81.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5172413793103449
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners60
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then she thought about the"
ratio0.015
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences66
matches
0"She hadn't planned on coming"
1"She turned slowly, and there"
2"He wore a charcoal suit"
3"She kept her voice level,"
4"He abandoned his drink and"
5"His gaze swept over her"
6"She felt the familiar heat"
7"He slid onto the adjacent"
8"His eyebrows shot up."
9"She hadn't, but she wasn't"
10"She gripped her hands together"
11"He signaled to the bartender"
12"He leaned back, studying her"
13"She watched his expression shift,"
14"He held up his hands"
15"She didn't touch hers."
16"She also remembered the night"
17"His voice had gone softer,"
18"He laughed, but there was"
19"He drained his glass and"
ratio0.5
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Water dripped from her black"
2"She hadn't planned on coming"
3"The bar was nearly empty,"
4"Maps and faded photographs lined"
5"Rory slid onto a barstool"
6"The voice froze her blood."
7"She turned slowly, and there"
8"The lanky boy she'd known"
9"He wore a charcoal suit"
10"The mischievous spark she remembered"
11"She kept her voice level,"
12"He abandoned his drink and"
13"His gaze swept over her"
14"She felt the familiar heat"
15"He slid onto the adjacent"
16"His eyebrows shot up."
17"The condescension in his tone"
18"She hadn't, but she wasn't"
19"The words hit like physical"
ratio0.909
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Before she could respond, the"
ratio0.015
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The memories threatened to surface—the raised voices, the controlling behavior that had slowly strangled her spirit, the final night when she'd fled with nothin…"
1"Then she thought about the man who'd just left, with his calculating eyes and casual condescension."
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She kept, though her heart hammered against her ribs"
1"The question carried, as if he genuinely wanted to know her answer"
2"Gareth said, the moment stretching uncomfortably"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Gareth continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.029
79.5868%