Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKY783XNX1RB7S64Y5P2Y

Run Details

Duration:
33.1s
Cost:
$0.005098
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones formed a jagged circle against the bruised twilight sky, their bark slick with a moisture that smelled of ozone and rotting lilies. Aurora Carter stepped across the threshold where the mundane world of Richmond Park bled into something older, sharper. The air inside the Grove hit her like a physical wall, thick and heavy, pressing against her eardrums until they popped. She stopped, her breath hitching in her throat. The wildflowers carpeting the ground bloomed in violent splashes of color that hurt to look at directly—purples so deep they appeared black, reds that seemed to pulse. She checked her watch. The second hand stuttered, jerked backward, then froze entirely. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the leather creaking loud enough to echo in the unnatural silence. She came here because the pendant around her neck had burned a hole into her collarbone all afternoon. Now, the deep crimson gemstone rested cold against her skin, dormant and dead. That worried her more than the heat ever did. Heat meant activity. Cold meant waiting. Her boots sank into the soil, but the earth felt spongy, unnatural, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles. She moved toward the center of the clearing, where the air shimmered like heat haze off tarmac. The plan was simple: locate the anomaly, verify the source, leave. No heroes, no grand gestures. Just a job for Yu-Fei, albeit one that paid in secrets rather than cash. A twig snapped behind her. Rory spun, her hand flying to the pocket knife clipped to her belt. Nothing but the towering oaks and the impossible flowers. The wind didn't吹 here. The branches hung motionless, suspended in the stagnant air. She scanned the tree line, her bright blue eyes narrowing. Shadows pooled beneath the trees, darker than the surrounding dusk, pooling like spilled ink that refused to spread. "Show yourself," she called out. Her voice sounded thin, stripped of resonance, as if the Grove swallowed the sound the moment it left her lips. Silence answered. Not the quiet of an empty room, but the heavy, expectant silence of a held breath. She turned back to the center. The Heartstone pendant remained cold. She reached up, fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit ingrained since childhood. The skin felt clammy. Something scratched at the edge of her vision, a flicker of movement near the northern stone. When she whipped her head around, only the swaying grass remained, though no wind touched it. The grass bent inward, toward her, forming a subtle funnel. Rory took a step forward. The ground squelched. A low hum started in her teeth, vibrating through her jawbone. It wasn't a sound from outside; it resonated from within her own skull. The hum grew in pitch, sharpening into a whine that made her eyes water. She clamped her hands over her ears, but the noise persisted, drilling deeper. Through the gap between her fingers, she saw the flowers closest to her feet wilt. Petals curled inward, turning brown and brittle in seconds, dissolving into dust that swirled upward against gravity. The dust formed shapes—faint, translucent outlines of limbs, of torsos, reaching for her before collapsing back into nothingness. She backed away, her heel catching on a root that hadn't been there a moment ago. She stumbled, catching herself on the rough bark of an oak. The tree felt warm. Too warm. Like feverish skin. She snatched her hand back, wiping her palm on her jeans. The shadows between the trees lengthened. They stretched toward the center of the clearing, elongating despite the lack of a light source to cast them. The darkness coalesced, thickening until it looked solid, a tar-like substance oozing from the base of the standing stones. Rory's heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage. She needed to leave. Now. The job wasn't worth whatever waited in this pocket of wrongness. She turned toward the entrance, the gap between two stones that marked the way back to Richmond Park. The gap was gone. Where the exit should have been, a wall of dense thicket stood, brambles interlocked so tightly no light passed through. The thorns glistened with a wet sheen. She pivoted, scanning the rest of the circle. Every exit sealed by the same impenetrable wall of twisting wood and sharp steel-like thorns. Panic clawed at her throat, but she forced it down. Panic clouded judgment. She needed to think. Evaluate. Find the weak point. The humming in her head spiked, becoming a scream. She dropped to her knees, gasping for air that tasted metallic, like old blood. The Heartstone pendant suddenly flared. Not warm. Burning. It seared her chest, glowing with a faint inner light that cast long, dancing shadows against the tree trunks. The shadows detached themselves from the trees. They didn't move like shadows cast by moving objects. They flowed like liquid, pooling on the ground before rising up, taking form. Tall, spindly figures, too many joints in their arms and legs, their heads featureless voids. They didn't walk; they glided, inches above the deadly flowers that had wilted at Rory's approach. Rory scrambled to her feet, backing toward the center of the circle, the only space not yet occupied by the encroaching dark. Her back hit the invisible barrier of time distortion; the air here felt thinner, harder to breathe. One of the figures stopped ten feet away. It tilted its head, a motion that cracked audibly, like dry wood snapping. It had no face, yet Rory felt the weight of its gaze, a physical pressure boring into her soul. It raised a long, multi-jointed arm and pointed a finger that ended in a shard of obsidian. Another figure emerged from behind the southern stone. Then another from the west. They closed the circle, cutting off any chance of a rush, even if an exit existed. Rory's hand tightened around her knife. The metal felt insignificant, a toy against this ancient wrongness. The figures didn't attack. They just watched, their formless heads fixed on her, on the glowing pendant at her throat. The crimson light from the Heartstone pulsed faster, matching the frantic rhythm of her pulse. With every beat, the shadows surged forward, shrinking the safe space by inches. The air grew colder, freezing the sweat on her brow. Her breath plumed in front of her, white and thick. She listened. Beneath the high-pitched whine in her skull, a new sound emerged. A wet, slithering noise, like scales dragging over stone. It came from below. Rory looked down. The soil beneath her boots had turned to black sludge. The sludge bubbled. Hands, pale and bloated, broke the surface, grasping at her ankles. They weren't the shadow figures. These were solid, flesh and bone, or something mimicking them perfectly. Fingers dug into her boots, slick and strong. She kicked out, her boot connecting with something soft that gave way with a sickening crunch. The hand released, sinking back into the muck, but two more took its place. They pulled. Rory lost her balance, falling backward. She landed hard in the mud, the cold sludge soaking through her clothes instantly. The shadow figures loomed over her, blocking out the strange, color-saturated sky. They didn't speak. They didn't hiss. They simply advanced, their movements synchronized, a slow, inevitable tide of darkness. The pendant burned so hot it singed her skin through her shirt. The light flared, blindingly bright for a split second, illuminating the features of the things surrounding her. They weren't monsters. They were people. Or they had been. Faces she recognized, faces from the city, from the park, twisted in silent screams, their eyes hollow pits of that same consuming black. One figure knelt beside her. It reached out, a hand that looked disturbingly human, save for the nails which were long, black claws. It brushed a strand of straight black hair from her forehead. The touch froze the moisture on her skin, turning it to ice. Rory stopped struggling. Fighting only made the mud pull harder. She lay still, her chest heaving, watching the faceless thing lean closer. The smell of ozone intensified, mixing with the scent of wet earth and decay. The humming in her head ceased, replaced by a absolute, deafening silence that pressed against her eardrums until they ached. The figure's head tilted again. The crack of bone echoed in the stillness. It opened a mouth that shouldn't have been there, a vertical slit appearing in the smooth darkness of its face. Inside, no tongue, no teeth. Just an endless, swirling void that mirrored the space between the worlds. The hands in the mud pulled her legs. The shadow figures closed the final gap. The crimson light of the Heartstone flickered, dimmed, and then died, plunging the Grove into total darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1486
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"suddenly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1486
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"silence"
count4
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"resonated"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echo"
2"silence"
3"shimmered"
4"scanned"
5"resonance"
6"flicker"
7"resonated"
8"scanning"
9"dancing"
10"weight"
11"pulsed"
12"loomed"
13"synchronized"
14"echoed"
15"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences140
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
98.52% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0.007
matches
0"The wind didn't吹 here."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1480
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1478
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond2
Park2
Grove3
Yu-Fei1
Heartstone4
Rory11
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"reds that seemed to pulse"
1"appeared black reds that seemed to pulse"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.676
wordCount1480
matches
0"Not the quiet of an empty room, but the heavy, expectant silence of a held breath"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean42.29
std21.2
cv0.501
sampleLengths
0101
113
265
367
45
563
625
718
876
98
1051
1150
1247
1344
1447
154
1650
1722
1850
197
2053
2139
2257
2329
2436
2548
2626
2751
2832
2950
3062
3146
3256
3350
3432
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs263
matches(empty)
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences140
ratio0.036
matches
0"The wildflowers carpeting the ground bloomed in violent splashes of color that hurt to look at directly—purples so deep they appeared black, reds that seemed to pulse."
1"It wasn't a sound from outside; it resonated from within her own skull."
2"The dust formed shapes—faint, translucent outlines of limbs, of torsos, reaching for her before collapsing back into nothingness."
3"They didn't walk; they glided, inches above the deadly flowers that had wilted at Rory's approach."
4"Her back hit the invisible barrier of time distortion; the air here felt thinner, harder to breathe."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1484
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"heavy, pressing against her"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"strange, color-saturated sky."
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03032345013477089
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01078167115902965
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean10.57
std6.08
cv0.575
sampleLengths
027
118
221
38
427
54
69
719
818
913
109
113
123
1320
1417
1511
165
1714
185
1913
209
214
229
2310
2418
255
2620
272
2816
296
305
3119
324
3316
3416
3510
365
373
3811
3913
4014
4113
4215
4317
4418
4516
4611
474
482
493
39.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners44
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences132
matches
0"Just a job for Yu-Fei,"
1"Then another from the west."
2"Just an endless, swirling void"
ratio0.023
83.64% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences132
matches
0"She stopped, her breath hitching"
1"She checked her watch."
2"She came here because the"
3"Her boots sank into the"
4"She moved toward the center"
5"She scanned the tree line,"
6"she called out"
7"Her voice sounded thin, stripped"
8"She turned back to the"
9"She reached up, fingers brushing"
10"It wasn't a sound from"
11"She clamped her hands over"
12"She backed away, her heel"
13"She stumbled, catching herself on"
14"She snatched her hand back,"
15"They stretched toward the center"
16"She needed to leave."
17"She turned toward the entrance,"
18"She pivoted, scanning the rest"
19"She needed to think."
ratio0.341
39.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount111
totalSentences132
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"Aurora Carter stepped across the"
2"The air inside the Grove"
3"She stopped, her breath hitching"
4"The wildflowers carpeting the ground"
5"She checked her watch."
6"The second hand stuttered, jerked"
7"Rory adjusted the strap of"
8"She came here because the"
9"That worried her more than"
10"Heat meant activity."
11"Her boots sank into the"
12"She moved toward the center"
13"The plan was simple: locate"
14"A twig snapped behind her."
15"Rory spun, her hand flying"
16"Nothing but the towering oaks"
17"The wind didn't吹 here."
18"The branches hung motionless, suspended"
19"She scanned the tree line,"
ratio0.841
37.88% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"Now, the deep crimson gemstone"
ratio0.008
39.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones formed a jagged circle against the bruised twilight sky, their bark slick with a moisture that smelled of ozone and rotting lili…"
1"The wildflowers carpeting the ground bloomed in violent splashes of color that hurt to look at directly—purples so deep they appeared black, reds that seemed to…"
2"Her boots sank into the soil, but the earth felt spongy, unnatural, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles."
3"Shadows pooled beneath the trees, darker than the surrounding dusk, pooling like spilled ink that refused to spread."
4"Her voice sounded thin, stripped of resonance, as if the Grove swallowed the sound the moment it left her lips."
5"The hum grew in pitch, sharpening into a whine that made her eyes water."
6"Petals curled inward, turning brown and brittle in seconds, dissolving into dust that swirled upward against gravity."
7"She turned toward the entrance, the gap between two stones that marked the way back to Richmond Park."
8"She dropped to her knees, gasping for air that tasted metallic, like old blood."
9"She lay still, her chest heaving, watching the faceless thing lean closer."
10"It opened a mouth that shouldn't have been there, a vertical slit appearing in the smooth darkness of its face."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.3255%