Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKZNVTAF61DN1FH3YA7H8

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Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.002734
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning the sodium-lit streets of Camden into a river of orange reflections. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner onto the main road, gun drawn, breath burning in her chest. There. Twenty meters ahead. The suspectvaulted a trash can and disappeared down the stairs of the Underground station. Quinn didn't slow down. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that hesitation meant escape. She hit the stairs at a sprint, concrete steps slick with rain and grime, her hand gripping the iron railing for balance. The station had been closed for years—boarded up, condemned, another casualty of budget cuts. So why was someone running toward it? The suspect's silhouette materialized at the bottom of the stairwell. He shoved through a gap in the rusted gate, metal screaming against metal. "Police!" Quinn's voice echoed off tile. "Stop!" The man didn't stop. He sprinted across the platform, his footsteps echoing in the cavernous darkness. Emergency lights flickered—green, sickly—illuminating torn advertisements and water stains climbing the walls like ivy. Quinn pushed through the gap he'd made. Her shoulder wrenched, protest shooting down her arm, but she kept running. The platform stretched ahead, abandoned turnstiles frozen mid-turn, their cages rusted into permanent stillness. The suspect veered left, toward a corridor that disappeared into shadow. She followed. The corridor smelled of damp and something else—incense, maybe, or burnt herbs. Her footsteps rang against the floor, too loud, announcing her presence. Ahead, the suspect's breathing ragged, his outline barely visible where the corridor turned. Quinn slowed. Her free hand found her torch, clicked it on. The beam cut through darkness, revealing brick walls slick with moisture, electrical wires hanging like vines. This wasn't right. This wasn't a normal abandoned station. Tiles lined the floor in patterns she didn't recognize—symbols, maybe, or letters in a language she couldn't read. The air grew colder as she moved deeper, rain soaking through her coat, her breath misting in front of her face. A sound. Voices. Multiple, overlapping, coming from ahead. The suspect had vanished around another corner. Quinn approached slowly, her back against the wall, her gun steady. Eighteen years. She'd done this a hundred times. But something about this place set her teeth on edge—the way the shadows seemed to move, the way the voices cut off when she drew near. She rounded the corner and stopped. A market stretched before her. Stalls and booths crowded together in the cavernous space, their canopies a riot of colors—deep purple, blood red, midnight blue. Lanterns hung from invisible supports, casting everything in warm amber light. People moved between the stalls, hundreds of them, some in ordinary clothes, others in garments that made her blink—a woman in a gown that seemed to shift between silk and smoke, a man with skin like polished copper, three figures in hooded robes that obscured their faces. Quinn's mind rejected what she was seeing. She blinked, raised her gun higher, scanned the crowd for her suspect. He was gone. Swallowed by the masses, by this impossible place. "Excuse me." The voice came from her left. Quinn spun, weapon level, to find a young man regarding her with mild curiosity. He had warm brown eyes, short curly dark hair, olive skin. A scar ran along his left forearm. Around his neck hung a medallion on a worn silver chain. "This is a private event," he said. His accent was faint, Spanish perhaps. "You need to leave." "I chasing a suspect." Quinn kept her voice level, professional. "He came through here." "No one came through here." The young man smiled, but it didn't reach his eyes. "You've made a mistake. The station exit is back the way you came." Quinn studied him. He wasn't afraid of her gun. That told her something. "What is this place?" "I don't know what you mean." "The underground market." She gestured with the torch toward the stalls, the crowd, the impossible architecture of a space that shouldn't exist beneath a condemned station. "The Veil Market, some call it." The young man's expression flickered. Just a moment, a crack in the composed facade. "You know nothing about this place, Detective. That's what keeps you alive." The word 'Detective' hit her like a physical blow. She hadn't told him her rank. She hadn't given him her name. "Who are you?" "Someone who doesn't want to see you die tonight." He stepped closer, lowered his voice. "You need to leave. Now. Before they realize you're not supposed to be here." "They?" The young man tilted his head toward the crowd. "The ones who run things. The clique." He said the word like a curse, like a warning. "They don't take kindly to intruders. Especially not police." Quinn thought of DS Morris. Three years ago, her partner had been chasing something—not a man, she'd said at the time, something else—and he'd ended up in the Thames, his body broken, his eyes open and filled with a terror she'd never forgotten. The case had been ruled a tragic accident. But Quinn had seen the marks on his body. The marks that didn't match any weapon she knew. She'd spent three years chasing shadows, following leads that went nowhere, listening to whispers about things that couldn't exist. And now she stood in the middle of one of those impossible things, and someone was telling her to walk away. "The man I was chasing," she said. "He came in here. I saw him." "Then he's already dead or worse." The young man—Tomás, something in her memory whispered, she'd heard that name in connection with certain circles—shook his head. "You can't help him now. But you can save yourself." Quinn looked past him, into the market. Stalls displayed wares she couldn't name—bottles of luminescent liquid, cages containing creatures that shifted and snarled in languages she didn't recognize, scrolls and grimoires and objects that seemed to fold in on themselves. People moved between them, browsing, bargaining, their faces lit by the strange glow of a hundred different lights. She should go. She knew she should go. This wasn't her world—whatever this world was. She was a detective with Metropolitan Police, eighteen years of service, a badge and a gun and a lifetime of不相信 the impossible. But the suspect was still in here. And somewhere, maybe, was the truth about Morris. "What do I have to do to stay?" Tomás stared at her. "You want to stay?" "I want the man I was chasing." "He's not worth dying for." "Maybe not." Quinn lowered her gun but didn't holster it. "But I didn't come here to die. I came here to do my job." For a long moment, Tomás said nothing. Then he reached into his pocket and withdrew something small—a bone, white and curved, no larger than his thumb. He pressed it into her palm. "A token," he said. "It won't stop them from noticing you, but it will stop them from killing you outright. The rules here are different from the surface. You break them, you pay. But you have rights, as long as you claim sanctuary." "Sanctuary?" "Find the eastern alcove, past the apothecary stall with the blue bottles. There's a woman there—white hair, red eyes, wears silver on every finger. Tell her Tomás sent you and you want to bargain. She'll keep you safe until you can get out." Quinn closed her fingers around the bone token. It was warm, warmer than it should have been, and something seemed to pulse beneath its surface. "Why are you helping me?" "Because someone helped me once." His hand drifted to the medallion at his throat, touched it briefly. "And because you don't belong here, and neither did I. The clique took my life from me. If I can help someone else get theirs back..." He trailed off, shrugged. "Go. Now. Before they notice you're not leaving." Quinn nodded once, a sharp movement. Then she turned and walked into the crowd, the bone token clutched in her hand, her gun still drawn at her side, her eyes scanning for a suspect who might already be beyond her help. The market swallowed her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.342
leniency0.684
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1382
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count2
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"footsteps"
2"echoing"
3"flickered"
4"silk"
5"scanned"
6"facade"
7"sanctuary"
8"pulse"
9"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
97.93% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0.008
matches
0"She was a detective with Metropolitan Police, eighteen years of service, a badge and a gun and a lifetime of不相信 the impossible."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1364
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1047
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Underground1
Spanish1
Morris2
Thames1
Tomás3
Metropolitan1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Tomás"
places
0"Thames"
globalScore0.736
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"gown that seemed to shift between silk and smoke, a man with skin like polished copper, three figures in hooded robes that obscured their faces"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1364
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences125
matches
0"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean26.75
std19.2
cv0.718
sampleLengths
041
118
259
323
47
530
644
72
836
936
1039
118
1252
136
1483
1519
1611
172
1849
1917
2014
2128
2217
236
2432
2526
2621
273
2829
291
3035
3169
3240
3314
3435
3558
3637
3715
388
398
407
415
4224
4332
4443
451
4643
4730
4855
4941
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"been closed"
1"was gone"
2"been ruled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was telling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences125
ratio0.096
matches
0"The station had been closed for years—boarded up, condemned, another casualty of budget cuts."
1"Emergency lights flickered—green, sickly—illuminating torn advertisements and water stains climbing the walls like ivy."
2"The corridor smelled of damp and something else—incense, maybe, or burnt herbs."
3"Tiles lined the floor in patterns she didn't recognize—symbols, maybe, or letters in a language she couldn't read."
4"But something about this place set her teeth on edge—the way the shadows seemed to move, the way the voices cut off when she drew near."
5"Stalls and booths crowded together in the cavernous space, their canopies a riot of colors—deep purple, blood red, midnight blue."
6"People moved between the stalls, hundreds of them, some in ordinary clothes, others in garments that made her blink—a woman in a gown that seemed to shift between silk and smoke, a man with skin like polished copper, three figures in hooded robes that obscured their faces."
7"Three years ago, her partner had been chasing something—not a man, she'd said at the time, something else—and he'd ended up in the Thames, his body broken, his eyes open and filled with a terror she'd never forgotten."
8"\"Then he's already dead or worse.\" The young man—Tomás, something in her memory whispered, she'd heard that name in connection with certain circles—shook his head."
9"Stalls displayed wares she couldn't name—bottles of luminescent liquid, cages containing creatures that shifted and snarled in languages she didn't recognize, scrolls and grimoires and objects that seemed to fold in on themselves."
10"This wasn't her world—whatever this world was."
11"Then he reached into his pocket and withdrew something small—a bone, white and curved, no larger than his thumb."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount842
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.015439429928741092
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.007125890736342043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean10.91
std8.82
cv0.808
sampleLengths
018
123
21
33
414
54
612
722
814
97
1010
1113
126
131
144
1512
1614
177
1812
1914
2011
212
2212
2311
2413
252
269
2716
283
296
3018
3121
322
331
345
357
3611
372
386
3926
406
415
4220
4311
4447
457
4612
473
488
492
58.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.384
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just a moment, a crack"
1"Then he reached into his"
2"Then she turned and walked"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences90
matches
0"She hit the stairs at"
1"He shoved through a gap"
2"He sprinted across the platform,"
3"Her shoulder wrenched, protest shooting"
4"Her footsteps rang against the"
5"Her free hand found her"
6"She'd done this a hundred"
7"She rounded the corner and"
8"She blinked, raised her gun"
9"He was gone."
10"He had warm brown eyes,"
11"His accent was faint, Spanish"
12"He wasn't afraid of her"
13"She gestured with the torch"
14"She hadn't told him her"
15"She hadn't given him her"
16"He stepped closer, lowered his"
17"He said the word like"
18"She'd spent three years chasing"
19"She should go."
ratio0.289
54.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences90
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"The suspectvaulted a trash can"
3"Quinn didn't slow down."
4"She hit the stairs at"
5"The station had been closed"
6"The suspect's silhouette materialized at"
7"He shoved through a gap"
8"Quinn's voice echoed off tile"
9"The man didn't stop."
10"He sprinted across the platform,"
11"Emergency lights flickered—green, sickly—illuminating torn"
12"Quinn pushed through the gap"
13"Her shoulder wrenched, protest shooting"
14"The platform stretched ahead, abandoned"
15"The suspect veered left, toward"
16"The corridor smelled of damp"
17"Her footsteps rang against the"
18"Her free hand found her"
19"The beam cut through darkness,"
ratio0.811
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She hit the stairs at a sprint, concrete steps slick with rain and grime, her hand gripping the iron railing for balance."
1"The air grew colder as she moved deeper, rain soaking through her coat, her breath misting in front of her face."
2"She'd spent three years chasing shadows, following leads that went nowhere, listening to whispers about things that couldn't exist."
3"Stalls displayed wares she couldn't name—bottles of luminescent liquid, cages containing creatures that shifted and snarled in languages she didn't recognize, s…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn kept, professional"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"her memory whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.132
leniency0.263
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.053
85.5447%