| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Isolde smiled again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.441 | | leniency | 0.882 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 73.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "intensely" | | 4 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1139 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 15.31% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "try to" | | 1 | "managed to" | | 2 | "seemed to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1126 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 753 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 6 | | Aurora | 17 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | London | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-Forged" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.371 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to exist only for her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 37.53 | | std | 22.72 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 72 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 75 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "Beside her, Nyx's shadowy form flickered—a pulse of violet light in their eyes, there and gone." | | 1 | "Since they'd entered Richmond Park an hour ago—had it only been an hour?—the pendant had grown warmer with each step toward this hidden clearing." | | 2 | "Time moved strangely here—that much Aurora had read in the few texts she'd managed to find about Fae-touched places—but reading about it and experiencing it were vastly different things." | | 3 | "The water reflected nothing—not the sky above, not the trees, not their faces." | | 4 | "One moment the space had been empty, and the next—" | | 5 | "A city skyline Aurora recognised as London, but wrong—darker, the buildings twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "Then nothing—just the blank, reflective surface of the pool." |
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| 89.19% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 764 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.05235602094240838 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017015706806282723 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 15.01 | | std | 10.34 | | cv | 0.688 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 48 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 42 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 75.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.49333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, shapes moved beneath the" | | 1 | "Then nothing—just the blank, reflective" |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "She knelt, reaching toward one," | | 1 | "She shot them a look," | | 2 | "Her watch had stopped the" | | 3 | "She turned in a slow" | | 4 | "She looked up, searching for" | | 5 | "She moved closer, and Aurora" | | 6 | "She left no impression in" | | 7 | "She tilted her head, studying" | | 8 | "She thought about removing the" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 24.81% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Aurora's breath caught as she" | | 2 | "The whisper came from everywhere" | | 3 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone at" | | 4 | "The crimson gem pulsed warm" | | 5 | "Wildflowers carpeted the grove in" | | 6 | "Blues that shifted toward violet" | | 7 | "Yellows that held the warmth" | | 8 | "A carpet of white blooms" | | 9 | "She knelt, reaching toward one," | | 10 | "Nyx's form solidified, a hand" | | 11 | "Aurora pulled back, cradling her" | | 12 | "The flower had already returned" | | 13 | "She shot them a look," | | 14 | "The effect was like watching" | | 15 | "The grove itself defied easy" | | 16 | "Oak trees ringed the perimeter," | | 17 | "Time moved strangely here—that much" | | 18 | "Her watch had stopped the" | | 19 | "She turned in a slow" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some enormous beast, ancient oak transformed into something that was no longer quite wood." | | 1 | "Aurora's breath caught as she stepped between two of them, the air on the other side carrying a sweetness that bordered on intoxication." | | 2 | "Oak trees ringed the perimeter, their branches intertwined overhead in a canopy that filtered the daylight into something softer, more golden." | | 3 | "Instead, shapes moved beneath the surface, suggestions of places and people that flickered past too quickly to identify." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The whisper came, the way Nyx always spoke" | | 1 | "Nyx's form solidified, a hand of concentrated shadow closing around her wrist" | | 2 | "Isolde gestured, and the water began to shift, images forming on its surface" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.029 | | leniency | 0.059 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |