Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXKZPN0YE28REZP3GQNPY3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 53s
Cost:
$0.007742
Provider:
Friendli

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some enormous beast, ancient oak transformed into something that was no longer quite wood. Aurora's breath caught as she stepped between two of them, the air on the other side carrying a sweetness that bordered on intoxication. Beside her, Nyx's shadowy form flickered—a pulse of violet light in their eyes, there and gone. "Interesting." The whisper came from everywhere and nowhere, the way Nyx always spoke. "The boundary thins here." "You think?" Aurora touched the Heartstone at her throat. The crimson gem pulsed warm against her collarbone, a steady heartbeat matching her own. Since they'd entered Richmond Park an hour ago—had it only been an hour?—the pendant had grown warmer with each step toward this hidden clearing. Wildflowers carpeted the grove in colours Aurora had no names for. Blues that shifted toward violet when she looked directly at them. Yellows that held the warmth of fresh honey. A carpet of white blooms with centres that glowed faintly, like captured starlight scattered across the ground. She knelt, reaching toward one, and the flower turned its face toward her hand. "Don't." Nyx's form solidified, a hand of concentrated shadow closing around her wrist. "The grove remembers intention. Touch nothing until we understand what it remembers." Aurora pulled back, cradling her hand against her chest. The flower had already returned to its original position, swaying despite the absence of wind. "You could have just said that without grabbing me." "I could have." She shot them a look, but Nyx had already drifted toward the centre of the clearing, their body alternating between solid and translucent as they moved. The effect was like watching smoke try to remember how to be human. The grove itself defied easy comprehension. Oak trees ringed the perimeter, their branches intertwined overhead in a canopy that filtered the daylight into something softer, more golden. Time moved strangely here—that much Aurora had read in the few texts she'd managed to find about Fae-touched places—but reading about it and experiencing it were vastly different things. Her watch had stopped the moment she crossed the threshold, the second hand frozen between ticks. "Do you feel that?" She turned in a slow circle, arms spread at her sides. "The pull of something old?" Nyx paused at the centre of the clearing, near a pool of water so still it might have been glass. "Yes. It feels like the between-places where I exist. Like home, if home had ever been anything but a memory." Aurora joined them at the pool's edge. The water reflected nothing—not the sky above, not the trees, not their faces. Instead, shapes moved beneath the surface, suggestions of places and people that flickered past too quickly to identify. "That's unnerving." "Most truths are, at first glance." She looked up, searching for the source of the new voice. A woman stood at the far edge of the clearing, her silver hair catching light that seemed to exist only for her. Aurora hadn't seen her approach. Hadn't heard footsteps on the soft earth. One moment the space had been empty, and the next— "You must be Isolde." The Half-Fae smiled, and it transformed her ethereal features into something almost approachable. Almost. "Aurora Carter. The one who carries a heart from Dymas and a blade from my people." She moved closer, and Aurora noticed with a start that the wildflowers didn't bend beneath her feet. She left no impression in the soil, no trace of her passage. "You've come seeking answers." "I've come because you sent me that blade without explanation. Because this pendant appeared in my flat three days ago with a note that had your signature." Aurora's hand moved to the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, the moonsilver hilt cold even through the fabric of her jacket. "I don't appreciate being manipulated." "Lies." Isolde's pale lavender eyes gleamed with amusement rather than accusation. "You do appreciate it, on some level. You appreciate the mystery. The puzzle. It's why you left Cardiff, why you ran to London instead of somewhere quieter, somewhere you could disappear." She tilted her head, studying Aurora like a particularly interesting specimen. "You don't want to disappear. You want to matter." Nyx shifted beside Aurora, their form elongating slightly. "We didn't come here to be psychoanalysed." "No. You came because the Veil grows thin, and Aurora's connection to Dymas through that pendant makes her a beacon for things that should remain on the other side." Isolde's gaze moved to the Heartstone, and for a moment, her playful demeanour shifted into something older, more serious. "You've noticed the warmth. The way it pulses when you near places where the barrier is weakest." Aurora's hand went to the pendant without conscious thought. "How did you—" "I see what is, what was, and what might yet come to pass. The gift is as much curse as blessing." Isolde gestured to the pool, and the water began to shift, images forming on its surface. A city skyline Aurora recognised as London, but wrong—darker, the buildings twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly. Hel-bound creatures crawling through tears in reality. The amber sky of Dymas visible through gaps in the clouds. "The winter solstice approaches. The Veil will weaken, as it always does." Isolde's voice had lost its riddling quality, settling into something more direct. "But this year, the thinning has already begun. Premature. Unnatural. Someone is pulling at the threads from the other side." The images in the water shifted. A figure in shadow, performing a ritual Aurora didn't recognise. The Heartstone, glowing with that deep crimson light, sitting on an altar surrounded by candles. Then nothing—just the blank, reflective surface of the pool. "That's where the pendant came from," Aurora said slowly. "Someone in Dymas sent it to me. Someone who wanted me to find you." "Or someone who wanted you marked." Isolde moved to a flat stone near the pool's edge, settling onto it with a grace that made Aurora intensely aware of her own human clumsiness. "The Heartstone is exactly what its name suggests—a piece of crystallised essence from Dymas itself. It carries a piece of that realm within it. And it carries a piece of you now, as well." The warmth at Aurora's throat suddenly felt heavier. More significant. She thought about removing the chain, setting the pendant aside, but something in Isolde's words suggested it was far too late for that. "You said I was a beacon." "For the things hunting you? Yes." Isolde smiled again, and this time the expression held no warmth. "Welcome to the grove, Aurora Carter. You've stepped into a war that has been brewing for three hundred years. I suggest you learn to fight quickly."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora said slowly [slowly]"
1"Isolde smiled again [again]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.118
73.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"intensely"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"intensely"
4"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1139
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count4
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"beacon"
count2
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"footsteps"
6"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
15.31% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"managed to"
2"seemed to"
3"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1126
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount753
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx6
Aurora17
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-touched1
Half-Fae1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde7
London1
Dymas1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae-Forged"
3"London"
globalScore0.371
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"light that seemed to exist only for her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1126
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.53
std22.72
cv0.605
sampleLengths
064
117
247
361
425
533
63
739
872
915
1045
1138
122
136
1455
154
1663
1753
1862
1915
2065
2112
2275
2344
2440
2523
2666
2733
286
2943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs123
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences75
ratio0.093
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx's shadowy form flickered—a pulse of violet light in their eyes, there and gone."
1"Since they'd entered Richmond Park an hour ago—had it only been an hour?—the pendant had grown warmer with each step toward this hidden clearing."
2"Time moved strangely here—that much Aurora had read in the few texts she'd managed to find about Fae-touched places—but reading about it and experiencing it were vastly different things."
3"The water reflected nothing—not the sky above, not the trees, not their faces."
4"One moment the space had been empty, and the next—"
5"A city skyline Aurora recognised as London, but wrong—darker, the buildings twisted into shapes that hurt to look at directly."
6"Then nothing—just the blank, reflective surface of the pool."
89.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount764
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.05235602094240838
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.017015706806282723
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.01
std10.34
cv0.688
sampleLengths
025
123
216
313
44
59
614
724
811
911
108
1117
1214
1313
1412
159
1615
179
183
1926
2013
216
2221
2329
2416
2515
2625
2720
287
2913
3018
312
326
3311
3422
355
367
3710
384
3913
401
4133
4212
434
4448
455
4611
4742
489
498
75.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.49333333333333335
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, shapes moved beneath the"
1"Then nothing—just the blank, reflective"
ratio0.037
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences54
matches
0"She knelt, reaching toward one,"
1"She shot them a look,"
2"Her watch had stopped the"
3"She turned in a slow"
4"She looked up, searching for"
5"She moved closer, and Aurora"
6"She left no impression in"
7"She tilted her head, studying"
8"She thought about removing the"
ratio0.167
24.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences54
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora's breath caught as she"
2"The whisper came from everywhere"
3"Aurora touched the Heartstone at"
4"The crimson gem pulsed warm"
5"Wildflowers carpeted the grove in"
6"Blues that shifted toward violet"
7"Yellows that held the warmth"
8"A carpet of white blooms"
9"She knelt, reaching toward one,"
10"Nyx's form solidified, a hand"
11"Aurora pulled back, cradling her"
12"The flower had already returned"
13"She shot them a look,"
14"The effect was like watching"
15"The grove itself defied easy"
16"Oak trees ringed the perimeter,"
17"Time moved strangely here—that much"
18"Her watch had stopped the"
19"She turned in a slow"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The standing stones rose from the earth like the ribs of some enormous beast, ancient oak transformed into something that was no longer quite wood."
1"Aurora's breath caught as she stepped between two of them, the air on the other side carrying a sweetness that bordered on intoxication."
2"Oak trees ringed the perimeter, their branches intertwined overhead in a canopy that filtered the daylight into something softer, more golden."
3"Instead, shapes moved beneath the surface, suggestions of places and people that flickered past too quickly to identify."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"The whisper came, the way Nyx always spoke"
1"Nyx's form solidified, a hand of concentrated shadow closing around her wrist"
2"Isolde gestured, and the water began to shift, images forming on its surface"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.9117%