Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXM0TKRV079Q337YVTS7X8

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26.4s
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$0.014765
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
# Chapter: The Grove at Midnight Aurora's torch beam cut through the darkness in thin, trembling lines. She'd navigated Richmond Park before, back when Eva dragged her out for midnight jogs neither of them particularly wanted. But those excursions had ended years ago, replaced by later shifts at the Golden Empress and evenings nursing pints at Silas' bar. The park felt different now. Older. The path beneath her trainers was harder somehow, compacted earth giving way to something that felt like ancient stone. The standing stones emerged from the dark like broken teeth. Aurora counted them as she passed, a childhood habit Mum had taught her. Seven ancient oaks, their bark so rough it resembled petrified skin. They marked the boundary of the Grove, though the boundary seemed less a line and more a threshold her body recognized before her mind could process it. The Heartstone hung heavy against her sternum. Warm. She'd felt it pulse when she'd arrived at the park's edge, a steady rhythm like a second heartbeat. Three days of investigation had led her here. Three days of following breadcrumbs through university archives, old folklore databases, and a lead from a girl who'd disappeared near Richmond eight months ago. The girl's mother had given Aurora the address of a specialist, who'd given her a name, who'd given her a legend. The Fae Grove existed. Actually existed. The wildflowers were wrong for November. Daffodils and bluebells bloomed in chaotic profusion despite the frost that should have killed them weeks ago. They swayed though Aurora felt no wind. Their movement suggested something beneath the earth pushing them aside, the way a body moves under a blanket when someone else is in the bed. She forced herself to breathe steady. The clearing opened like a throat. Maybe thirty metres across, ringed entirely by the standing stones and bordered by a dense perimeter of trees that seemed taller than any in the park proper. Or closer. The light from her torch bent strangely near them, as though the air itself was thickening around their trunks. Aurora stepped into the clearing proper. The warmth from the Heartstone intensified. It burned now, almost uncomfortable against her skin. She should have brought gloves. She should have brought a lot of things. A weapon. Someone who knew what they were doing. Instead, she'd brought a secondary torch, a notebook with twelve hastily scrawled questions, and an absolute certainty that the girl was here. Or had been here. Or would be here, depending on how time worked in this place. The pendant's pulse matched her heartbeat now. She lifted her shirt just enough to see it glowing faintly beneath the silver chain. The crimson stone cast shadows across her ribs that looked disturbingly like fingers. A sound froze her mid-breath. Laughter. No. Not quite laughter. The *memory* of laughter filtered through water, through time, through something that made her teeth ache. It came from the opposite side of the clearing, somewhere in the dense copse of trees. Aurora's torch beam swept across that direction and found nothing. No silhouettes. No movement. Just wildflowers swaying in their phantom breeze and the suggestion of shapes that vanished when she looked at them directly. She turned slowly on her heel, scanning the perimeter. All of it was watching. Not the trees themselves, though they rose in a wall of shadow. But something behind them. Something that pressed against the boundary like a hand against glass, testing the edges, mapping the surface. Aurora's skin prickled. She'd felt this before, years ago, when a neighbour's dog had backed her into a corner. The dog's owner had called it off before anything happened, but she remembered that sensation. That absolute animal awareness of being prey. The difference was, she could see the dog. Could understand its motivations. Here, there was only the dark and the sense that it had a mouth. She moved toward the centre of the clearing, away from the trees. The Heartstone burned warmer still. This had to mean something. Intent. Direction. The folklore had been vague, but consistent on one point. The pendant would guide her. It would know. If she'd misread that, if the thing hanging around her neck was just a piece of jewellery that happened to warm up in unusual circumstances, then she'd walked into something she couldn't walk back out of. The ground beneath her feet shifted. Not dramatically. A subtle subsidence, as though the earth had settled after she'd pressed her weight into it. But when she looked down, her torch illuminated grass that hadn't been disturbed. Footprints circled her path, dozens of them, spiraling inward in patterns that made her eyes hurt if she tried to follow them too long. Breathe. Think. Hallucinations. Sleep deprivation. The power of suggestion meeting the need to find something. She'd spent three days obsessing over the girl, over the case, over the possibility that something beyond the rational world existed in her city. The human mind was remarkably good at generating exactly what it expected to find. Evolution had designed her to see predators in shadows, threats in the dark. But evolution hadn't explained why the laughter was getting closer. It came again, that drowned-out sound like voices preserved in amber. This time from her left. Aurora spun, torch beam flailing wildly. Nothing. Just the wildflowers, just the trees, just the sense of attention pressing in from all sides. Movement at the edge of her vision. She didn't look at it directly. Rule three from the files she'd read. Don't acknowledge them yet. Don't give them permission. But the movement continued, that peripheral shift of something tall and wrong moving between the standing stones. It was there, then wasn't. There, then wasn't. A stuttering approach made of stop-motion darkness. The Heartstone's warmth bordered on pain. Aurora forced herself to walk deeper into the clearing, toward the absolute centre where her logic assured her she'd be equidistant from every danger, equally vulnerable in all directions. Slightly less vulnerable felt like an improvement. Her torch beam wavered. She steadied it with her other hand. "Show yourself," she called out. Her voice sounded thin. Young. Afraid. She didn't recognize it as her own. The laughter stopped. In that silence, she heard something worse. Breathing. Multiple threads of respiration moving around her in the dark, circular, calculating. Circling prey. The Heartstone pulsed once, twice, three times in rapid succession. A warning. Or an invitation. Aurora couldn't tell which. She pulled out her notebook with shaking fingers. The pen felt ridiculous in her hand. She wrote anyway, documenting the time (23:47), the phenomena (movement, vocalisation, sensations of observation), keeping her hands busy whilst her mind spiralled through increasingly unlikely explanations. A shadow moved across her torch light. This one was definite. Solid. A shape that rose taller than a person, with proportions that reminded her of branches, of antlers, of things that had no business having edges that articulate and purposeful. It stood perhaps ten metres away, on the far side of the clearing. Aurora's torch found it clearly. But when she looked at it directly, focusing on the shape, it dissolved into just-trees and just-darkness and the sense that she'd imagined it entirely. Peripheral vision showed it again. Waiting. Patient. She closed her eyes. Stupid. Deliberately cutting off her only sensory advantage in a place where something hunted by moving sideways through human perception. But the need to stop seeing, to stop confirming these things existed, overrode every survival instinct screaming at her to watch. The Heartstone burned like a coal against her ribs. She could hear it now, that breathing. Close. Too close. Close enough that she could smell something acrid beneath the wildflower scent. Something old and sharp like lichen on stone, like the inside of ancient tombs, like whatever was left after life forgot to finish something. Aurora opened her eyes. The figure stood three metres away. It had come whilst she wasn't watching. Of course it had. The laughter resumed, a whole chorus of it now, not filtered through water but through something thicker. Through lungs that weren't quite right. Through voices that had forgotten how to be human. She raised her torch higher. The figure didn't flinch from the light. It remained perfectly still, and in that stillness, Aurora recognised something worse than any threat. Recognition. It was looking at her the way someone looks at an old friend. The way someone looks at something they'd been expecting. The Heartstone pulsed once, hard enough to hurt. And something in that hollow place beneath the earth answered. A vibration that travelled up through her feet, through her spine, setting her teeth on edge. The standing stones began to hum. The wildflowers trembled and bent and opened their petals wider, wider, as though some distant sun was rising from underground. Aurora turned and ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1482
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1482
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"navigated"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"navigated"
1"pulse"
2"chaotic"
3"warmth"
4"scanning"
5"weight"
6"sense of"
7"wavered"
8"silence"
9"calculating"
10"pulsed"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences160
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences160
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1477
ratio0.001
matches
0"memory"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1473
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Chapter1
Grove3
Midnight1
Aurora14
Richmond2
Park1
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
Mum1
Heartstone7
Fae1
November1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Eva"
2"Mum"
3"Heartstone"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Golden"
4"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore1
73.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like ancient stone"
1"seemed taller than any in the park proper"
2"felt like an improvement"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.677
wordCount1477
matches
0"not filtered through water but through something thicker"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences160
matches
0"remembered that sensation"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean30.77
std26.46
cv0.86
sampleLengths
06
111
266
361
479
56
655
76
854
96
1074
1135
125
1371
149
155
1674
1712
1814
1978
206
2155
222
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2410
2539
267
2753
286
2947
3018
313
3241
3341
347
3577
367
374
3841
399
4046
414
4249
435
4445
458
4652
474
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences160
matches
0"been disturbed"
1"was left"
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was thickening"
1"were doing"
2"was watching"
3"was getting"
4"wasn't watching"
5"was looking"
6"was rising"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences160
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount56
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.017857142857142856
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.017857142857142856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences160
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences160
mean9.23
std7.42
cv0.804
sampleLengths
017
119
222
35
41
519
610
713
811
927
107
111
1218
138
1424
1521
164
172
186
1917
207
2125
226
236
2427
252
2619
276
286
298
305
318
322
337
3422
354
3612
377
3815
3913
405
411
421
433
4416
4516
4610
472
482
4920
59.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences160
uniqueOpeners64
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences131
matches
0"Maybe thirty metres across, ringed"
1"Instead, she'd brought a secondary"
2"Just wildflowers swaying in their"
3"Just the wildflowers, just the"
4"Slightly less vulnerable felt like"
5"Deliberately cutting off her only"
6"Of course it had."
ratio0.053
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences131
matches
0"She'd navigated Richmond Park before,"
1"They marked the boundary of"
2"She'd felt it pulse when"
3"They swayed though Aurora felt"
4"Their movement suggested something beneath"
5"She forced herself to breathe"
6"It burned now, almost uncomfortable"
7"She should have brought gloves."
8"She should have brought a"
9"She lifted her shirt just"
10"It came from the opposite"
11"She turned slowly on her"
12"She'd felt this before, years"
13"She moved toward the centre"
14"It would know."
15"She'd spent three days obsessing"
16"It came again, that drowned-out"
17"She didn't look at it"
18"It was there, then wasn't."
19"Her torch beam wavered."
ratio0.252
93.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences131
matches
0"# Chapter: The Grove at"
1"She'd navigated Richmond Park before,"
2"The park felt different now."
3"The path beneath her trainers"
4"The standing stones emerged from"
5"Aurora counted them as she"
6"They marked the boundary of"
7"The Heartstone hung heavy against"
8"She'd felt it pulse when"
9"The girl's mother had given"
10"The Fae Grove existed."
11"The wildflowers were wrong for"
12"Daffodils and bluebells bloomed in"
13"They swayed though Aurora felt"
14"Their movement suggested something beneath"
15"She forced herself to breathe"
16"The clearing opened like a"
17"The light from her torch"
18"Aurora stepped into the clearing"
19"The warmth from the Heartstone"
ratio0.733
38.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"If she'd misread that, if"
ratio0.008
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The path beneath her trainers was harder somehow, compacted earth giving way to something that felt like ancient stone."
1"Three days of following breadcrumbs through university archives, old folklore databases, and a lead from a girl who'd disappeared near Richmond eight months ago…"
2"The girl's mother had given Aurora the address of a specialist, who'd given her a name, who'd given her a legend."
3"Daffodils and bluebells bloomed in chaotic profusion despite the frost that should have killed them weeks ago."
4"Maybe thirty metres across, ringed entirely by the standing stones and bordered by a dense perimeter of trees that seemed taller than any in the park proper."
5"The light from her torch bent strangely near them, as though the air itself was thickening around their trunks."
6"The crimson stone cast shadows across her ribs that looked disturbingly like fingers."
7"The *memory* of laughter filtered through water, through time, through something that made her teeth ache."
8"If she'd misread that, if the thing hanging around her neck was just a piece of jewellery that happened to warm up in unusual circumstances, then she'd walked i…"
9"Footprints circled her path, dozens of them, spiraling inward in patterns that made her eyes hurt if she tried to follow them too long."
10"A shape that rose taller than a person, with proportions that reminded her of branches, of antlers, of things that had no business having edges that articulate …"
11"A vibration that travelled up through her feet, through her spine, setting her teeth on edge."
12"The wildflowers trembled and bent and opened their petals wider, wider, as though some distant sun was rising from underground."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.0146%