| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1482 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1482 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "navigated" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "wavered" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "calculating" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "happened to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1477 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1473 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.95 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Chapter | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Midnight | 1 | | Aurora | 14 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Mum | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Fae | 1 | | November | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Mum" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like ancient stone" | | 1 | "seemed taller than any in the park proper" | | 2 | "felt like an improvement" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.677 | | wordCount | 1477 | | matches | | 0 | "not filtered through water but through something thicker" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "remembered that sensation" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 30.77 | | std | 26.46 | | cv | 0.86 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 66 | | 3 | 61 | | 4 | 79 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 74 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 74 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 78 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 41 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 77 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 52 | | 47 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "been disturbed" | | 1 | "was left" |
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| 9.52% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | | 0 | "was thickening" | | 1 | "were doing" | | 2 | "was watching" | | 3 | "was getting" | | 4 | "wasn't watching" | | 5 | "was looking" | | 6 | "was rising" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 56 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.017857142857142856 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017857142857142856 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 9.23 | | std | 7.42 | | cv | 0.804 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 59.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 64 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe thirty metres across, ringed" | | 1 | "Instead, she'd brought a secondary" | | 2 | "Just wildflowers swaying in their" | | 3 | "Just the wildflowers, just the" | | 4 | "Slightly less vulnerable felt like" | | 5 | "Deliberately cutting off her only" | | 6 | "Of course it had." |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd navigated Richmond Park before," | | 1 | "They marked the boundary of" | | 2 | "She'd felt it pulse when" | | 3 | "They swayed though Aurora felt" | | 4 | "Their movement suggested something beneath" | | 5 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 6 | "It burned now, almost uncomfortable" | | 7 | "She should have brought gloves." | | 8 | "She should have brought a" | | 9 | "She lifted her shirt just" | | 10 | "It came from the opposite" | | 11 | "She turned slowly on her" | | 12 | "She'd felt this before, years" | | 13 | "She moved toward the centre" | | 14 | "It would know." | | 15 | "She'd spent three days obsessing" | | 16 | "It came again, that drowned-out" | | 17 | "She didn't look at it" | | 18 | "It was there, then wasn't." | | 19 | "Her torch beam wavered." |
| | ratio | 0.252 | |
| 93.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "# Chapter: The Grove at" | | 1 | "She'd navigated Richmond Park before," | | 2 | "The park felt different now." | | 3 | "The path beneath her trainers" | | 4 | "The standing stones emerged from" | | 5 | "Aurora counted them as she" | | 6 | "They marked the boundary of" | | 7 | "The Heartstone hung heavy against" | | 8 | "She'd felt it pulse when" | | 9 | "The girl's mother had given" | | 10 | "The Fae Grove existed." | | 11 | "The wildflowers were wrong for" | | 12 | "Daffodils and bluebells bloomed in" | | 13 | "They swayed though Aurora felt" | | 14 | "Their movement suggested something beneath" | | 15 | "She forced herself to breathe" | | 16 | "The clearing opened like a" | | 17 | "The light from her torch" | | 18 | "Aurora stepped into the clearing" | | 19 | "The warmth from the Heartstone" |
| | ratio | 0.733 | |
| 38.17% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | | 0 | "If she'd misread that, if" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "The path beneath her trainers was harder somehow, compacted earth giving way to something that felt like ancient stone." | | 1 | "Three days of following breadcrumbs through university archives, old folklore databases, and a lead from a girl who'd disappeared near Richmond eight months ago…" | | 2 | "The girl's mother had given Aurora the address of a specialist, who'd given her a name, who'd given her a legend." | | 3 | "Daffodils and bluebells bloomed in chaotic profusion despite the frost that should have killed them weeks ago." | | 4 | "Maybe thirty metres across, ringed entirely by the standing stones and bordered by a dense perimeter of trees that seemed taller than any in the park proper." | | 5 | "The light from her torch bent strangely near them, as though the air itself was thickening around their trunks." | | 6 | "The crimson stone cast shadows across her ribs that looked disturbingly like fingers." | | 7 | "The *memory* of laughter filtered through water, through time, through something that made her teeth ache." | | 8 | "If she'd misread that, if the thing hanging around her neck was just a piece of jewellery that happened to warm up in unusual circumstances, then she'd walked i…" | | 9 | "Footprints circled her path, dozens of them, spiraling inward in patterns that made her eyes hurt if she tried to follow them too long." | | 10 | "A shape that rose taller than a person, with proportions that reminded her of branches, of antlers, of things that had no business having edges that articulate …" | | 11 | "A vibration that travelled up through her feet, through her spine, setting her teeth on edge." | | 12 | "The wildflowers trembled and bent and opened their petals wider, wider, as though some distant sun was rising from underground." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |