Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXM7265D22FBKAZBP84HY4

Run Details

Duration:
34.3s
Cost:
$0.027900
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavements of Camden, turning the cobblestones into mirrors that reflected the amber glow of streetlights. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she barreled around the corner, her breath coming in controlled bursts despite the sprint. Twenty metres ahead, Tomás Herrera's Saint Christopher medallion caught the light as he vaulted over a rubbish bin with practiced ease. "Herrera! Metropolitan Police—stop!" He didn't stop. Never did. Quinn's worn leather watch pressed against her wrist as she pumped her arms harder, the salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull doing nothing to slow her down. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the ones who ran always had something to hide, and Tomás Herrera had been on her radar for three months now—ever since a stabbing victim with impossible injuries walked out of A&E fully healed, and security footage showed the former paramedic leaving through a side entrance at 3 AM. Herrera cut left into an alley, his olive skin gleaming with rain. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set. The alley narrowed, brick walls pressing close on either side. He was fast, but she'd chased down faster. Her military-trained body moved with precision, each footfall calculated even as her mind raced through the possibilities. The connection to The Raven's Nest. The unexplained recoveries. The pattern that looked too much like the circumstances around Morris's death three years ago. The alley opened onto a side street where construction barriers cordoned off a section of pavement. Herrera leaped the barrier without breaking stride. Quinn cleared it a second later, landing hard enough to jar her teeth. The rain came down heavier now, a wall of water that turned the world into a watercolor painting running down a canvas. "I just want to talk, Herrera!" He glanced back over his shoulder, warm brown eyes wide with something that looked like genuine fear. Not the fear of arrest. Something else. Then he ducked right, disappearing down a set of stone steps that Quinn almost missed in the downpour. She skidded to a halt at the top of the stairs, rain streaming down her face. The steps descended into darkness, into what looked like an old entrance to the Underground. But the Tube didn't run through here anymore—this section had been closed since the seventies. Condemned. Forgotten. Her hand moved instinctively to the radio clipped to her belt. Protocol demanded she call it in. Request backup. But the voice that crackled through would ask questions she couldn't answer, and Herrera would disappear into whatever network had kept him hidden this long. The same network that had swallowed the truth about Morris. Quinn descended into the dark. The temperature dropped as she moved underground, the rain's percussion fading to a distant drum. Emergency lighting still functioned in patches, casting pools of jaundiced yellow every few metres. The walls wept moisture, and the air tasted of rust and something else—incense, perhaps, or burning sage. Her boots echoed on the tiles. Ahead, Herrera's footsteps pattered in double-time. The tunnel curved, following the ghost of rail lines long since removed. Graffiti covered the walls, but not the usual tags. Symbols. Sigils. Things that made Quinn's skin crawl with the same wrongness she'd felt in the warehouse where Morris had died, where the crime scene photos showed blood patterns that defied physics. The tunnel opened into a wider chamber, an old platform where commuters once waited for trains that would never come again. Except the platform wasn't abandoned. Quinn stopped at the threshold, her brown eyes adjusting to the scene before her. Stalls lined the platform, cobbled together from salvaged materials and lit by lanterns that burned with flames in colours fire had no business being. Blue. Green. Purple that hurt to look at directly. People—at least, she assumed they were people—moved between the stalls with purpose, their voices a low murmur that reminded Quinn of bees in a hive. The scar tissue on her left shoulder, legacy of a knife fight in Brixton, began to ache the way it always did before a storm. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumours. Whispers from informants who spoke too fast and looked over their shoulders. A black market that didn't deal in drugs or weapons but in things that had no names in police reports. Herrera stood thirty metres away, chest heaving, the scar on his left forearm visible where he'd rolled up his wet sleeve. His hand clutched the medallion at his throat. Behind him, the market stretched into darkness, stalls disappearing into shadows that seemed too thick, too absolute. A woman at the nearest stall looked up from her wares—jars filled with liquids that moved wrong, sluggish and alive. Her eyes met Quinn's, and the detective felt the weight of that gaze like a physical thing. The woman smiled, revealing teeth filed to points, and turned back to her customer without concern. This wasn't jurisdiction. This wasn't procedure. This was something else entirely, something that existed in the cracks between the London she knew and something far older, far stranger. Herrera backed deeper into the market, his warm brown eyes pleading. "Don't." The word carried across the platform. "You don't understand what you're walking into." "Then help me understand." Quinn took one step onto the platform. The ache in her shoulder intensified. "Tell me what happened to Morris. Tell me what these people are." "Some questions get people killed, Detective." "My partner's already dead." She took another step. "You know something. The medical anomalies, The Raven's Nest, all of it connects. Tell me." A man emerged from between two stalls to Quinn's left. Tall, gaunt, with skin pale as paper and eyes that reflected the strange firelight like an animal's. He didn't speak, just watched her with an expression somewhere between curiosity and hunger. Quinn's hand moved to her belt, fingers finding the familiar grip of her baton. Standard issue. Probably useless here. Herrera shook his head slowly. "Walk away, Quinn. Please. This isn't your world." "It is if crimes are being committed in it." She held her ground at the market's edge, rain dripping from her clothes to pool at her feet. The bone-deep certainty that had driven her investigation for three months warred with the survival instinct honed over eighteen years of walking into dangerous places. "I'm coming in, Herrera. Either you talk to me here, or I drag you back up those stairs." He laughed, bitter and short. "You think you can drag anyone out of here?" His hand dropped from the medallion. "You think your badge means anything past that threshold?" The question hung in the air between them. The market continued its business, indifferent to the standoff. A woman walked past carrying a cage with something inside that whispered in a language Quinn's brain refused to process. The wrongness saturated everything, pressing against her like deep water. This was the edge. The choice. Morris had made a choice three years ago. Followed a lead into darkness and never came back out.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"footfall"
count1
3
word"calculated"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"streaming"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"standard"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"gleaming"
2"footfall"
3"calculated"
4"raced"
5"streaming"
6"echoed"
7"footsteps"
8"weight"
9"familiar"
10"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences90
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1058
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tomás2
Herrera9
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven1
Nest1
Morris4
Underground1
Tube1
Brixton1
Veil1
Market1
London1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
8"Tube"
places
0"Raven"
1"Underground"
2"London"
globalScore0.838
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like genuine fear"
1"looked like an old entrance to the Underg"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1169
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"steps that Quinn"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean37.71
std24.02
cv0.637
sampleLengths
061
13
290
377
458
56
642
748
854
95
1046
1165
1226
1314
1483
1538
1646
1753
1828
1925
2029
216
2223
2341
2419
2513
2670
2729
2847
296
3018
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences99
ratio0.051
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the ones who ran always had something to hide, and Tomás Herrera had been on her radar for three months now—ever since a stabbing victim with impossible injuries walked out of A&E fully healed, and security footage showed the former paramedic leaving through a side entrance at 3 AM."
1"But the Tube didn't run through here anymore—this section had been closed since the seventies."
2"The walls wept moisture, and the air tasted of rust and something else—incense, perhaps, or burning sage."
3"People—at least, she assumed they were people—moved between the stalls with purpose, their voices a low murmur that reminded Quinn of bees in a hive."
4"A woman at the nearest stall looked up from her wares—jars filled with liquids that moved wrong, sluggish and alive."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"far older, far stranger."
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.031805425631431246
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005612722170252572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean11.81
std8.72
cv0.739
sampleLengths
018
122
221
33
43
52
627
758
812
96
1010
118
1217
136
143
1515
1616
177
1813
1922
206
2117
225
232
2418
2516
2615
2715
281
291
3011
316
322
3325
3410
355
3615
3714
3817
396
406
4112
429
431
441
4530
4621
475
4814
4924
74.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.494949494949495
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners49
84.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then he ducked right, disappearing"
1"Probably useless here."
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences79
matches
0"He didn't stop."
1"He was fast, but she'd"
2"Her military-trained body moved with"
3"He glanced back over his"
4"She skidded to a halt"
5"Her hand moved instinctively to"
6"Her boots echoed on the"
7"She'd heard rumours."
8"His hand clutched the medallion"
9"Her eyes met Quinn's, and"
10"She took another step"
11"He didn't speak, just watched"
12"She held her ground at"
13"He laughed, bitter and short."
14"His hand dropped from the"
ratio0.19
48.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences79
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"He didn't stop."
2"Quinn's worn leather watch pressed"
3"Herrera cut left into an"
4"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
5"The alley narrowed, brick walls"
6"He was fast, but she'd"
7"Her military-trained body moved with"
8"The connection to The Raven's"
9"The unexplained recoveries."
10"The pattern that looked too"
11"The alley opened onto a"
12"Herrera leaped the barrier without"
13"Quinn cleared it a second"
14"The rain came down heavier"
15"He glanced back over his"
16"She skidded to a halt"
17"The steps descended into darkness,"
18"Her hand moved instinctively to"
19"Protocol demanded she call it"
ratio0.823
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
21.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Eighteen years on the force had taught her that the ones who ran always had something to hide, and Tomás Herrera had been on her radar for three months now—ever…"
1"He glanced back over his shoulder, warm brown eyes wide with something that looked like genuine fear."
2"Things that made Quinn's skin crawl with the same wrongness she'd felt in the warehouse where Morris had died, where the crime scene photos showed blood pattern…"
3"People—at least, she assumed they were people—moved between the stalls with purpose, their voices a low murmur that reminded Quinn of bees in a hive."
4"Behind him, the market stretched into darkness, stalls disappearing into shadows that seemed too thick, too absolute."
5"A woman at the nearest stall looked up from her wares—jars filled with liquids that moved wrong, sluggish and alive."
6"This was something else entirely, something that existed in the cracks between the London she knew and something far older, far stranger."
7"The bone-deep certainty that had driven her investigation for three months warred with the survival instinct honed over eighteen years of walking into dangerous…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1344%