| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 77.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "glistening" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "constructed" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "chill" | | 11 | "stark" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "stomach" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "intricate" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "oppressive" | | 18 | "silence" | | 19 | "footsteps" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "unreadable" | | 22 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1093 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 999 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Fae-Forged | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.949 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking from one room into an" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to curl from the shifting shadows at her side, their form more solid here, a tall, humanoid silhouette against the impossible light" | | 2 | "seemed fertile beyond reason, every inch bursting with life" | | 3 | "looked like dark, polished obsidian and g" | | 4 | "looked like a well, its rim carved with i" | | 5 | "felt like a punch to the gut" |
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| 17.02% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.83 | | wordCount | 1093 | | matches | | 0 | "not with water, but with a thick, dark red liquid" | | 1 | "not with berries, but with glistening, jewel-like candies" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.80% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 40.48 | | std | 18.51 | | cv | 0.457 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 81 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 34 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 39 |
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| 75.61% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "were terraced" | | 1 | "were narrowed" | | 2 | "was paved" | | 3 | "were hung" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "been found" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was stepping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Orchards bore fruits in shapes and colors she couldn’t name—spiraled yellow melons, fuzzy purple orbs that pulsed with a soft inner light." | | 1 | "It was a low, constant hum of celebration—the clink of glass, the murmur of a thousand conversations, the sound of feasting on a scale she couldn’t comprehend." | | 2 | "Along its banks, figures—some humanoid, some monstrously not—dipped cups and bowls into the current, drinking deeply." | | 3 | "They reached a hand—a solid, dark shape—over the opening." |
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| 94.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1011 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04648862512363996 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010880316518298714 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 14.01 | | std | 6.43 | | cv | 0.459 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 28 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 57.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 46.95% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, deep below, a flicker." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 1 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 2 | "It was warm against her" | | 3 | "They moved forward, the ground" | | 4 | "It was a low, constant" | | 5 | "It came from somewhere ahead," | | 6 | "They crested the hill, and" | | 7 | "It flowed not with water," | | 8 | "It glowed with a faint," | | 9 | "It was a place designed" | | 10 | "They passed a clearing where" | | 11 | "They reached a hand—a solid," | | 12 | "She left no footprints in" | | 13 | "She gasped, pulling it away" | | 14 | "It pulsed with a deep" | | 15 | "They were not alone anymore." | | 16 | "They were visitors in a" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 37.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shimmered, a heat" | | 1 | "The next, she was stepping" | | 2 | "The air that hit her" | | 3 | "She blinked, her bright blue" | | 4 | "The sky above was a" | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice was a whisper" | | 6 | "Rory could only nod, her" | | 7 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 8 | "Orchards bore fruits in shapes" | | 9 | "The very ground seemed fertile" | | 10 | "a voice, melodic and ancient," | | 11 | "Isolde, her silver hair seeming" | | 12 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 13 | "Rory’s hand went to the" | | 14 | "It was warm against her" | | 15 | "A gift from an unknown" | | 16 | "They moved forward, the ground" | | 17 | "The path was paved with" | | 18 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 19 | "Nyx tilted their head, the" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched a landscape" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 68.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air that hit her was thick and sweet, laden with the perfume of a thousand unfamiliar blossoms and the rich, savory scent of roasting meats and baking bread…" | | 1 | "Isolde, her silver hair seeming to drink the amber light, stood just within the archway of shimmering air that was their only way back." | | 2 | "It was warm against her skin, a steady, comforting pulse that thrummed in time with her own heartbeat." | | 3 | "But it was the river that cut through it that held her gaze." | | 4 | "Nyx paused beside a structure that looked like a well, its rim carved with intricate scenes of feasting and revelry." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice hushed" | | 1 | "Isolde stated, her tone flat" | | 2 | "Isolde said, coming to stand behind them" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |