Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXM9XW18F117SVG5W54XRY

Run Details

Duration:
50.4s
Cost:
$0.012496
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts slid back with heavy, metallic thuds, one after another. Rain drummed a relentless, chaotic rhythm against the single pane of the flat’s only window, drowning out the bass thrum of music from the curry house downstairs. Rory checked the peephole, the brass rim cold against her skin, and frowned. She threw the locks open and yanked the door inward. Air rushed out, carrying the scent of ozone and wet wool. Lucien stood on the landing. Water dripped from the hem of his charcoal coat, pooling on the worn floorboards of Eva’s hallway. His platinum hair was plastered to his skull in dark, slick streaks, but he held himself with that infuriating, rigid posture. The ivory handle of his cane caught the yellow light of the hallway bulb. She stared. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a traitorous rhythm that had nothing to do with surprise. "You're dripping on the carpet." "Charming as ever. May I?" She stepped aside. Not because she wanted to, but because standing in the doorway while he loomed there felt like surrender. He moved past her. The scent hit her then—sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and the metallic tang that always clung to his skin. A hint of sulfur, buried deep. He brought the London night in with him, a cold shadow that seemed to suck the warmth right out of the cluttered room. "It’s been three months, Rory. You could at least offer me a towel." " towels are in the bath. Help yourself." She leaned back against the door, crossing her arms. The small crescent scar on her left wrist throbbed, a phantom itch she couldn't scratch. Lucien ignored the invitation to the bathroom. He stopped in the centre of the living room, his head turning slowly as he surveyed the chaos. Stacks of books towered over the armchair like precarious skyscrapers. Scrolls lay unrolled on the coffee table, weighed down by empty tea mugs and a jar of pencils. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted his head from his cushion on the sofa, eyed the intruder with disdain, and went back to sleep. "I see Eva hasn’t changed." "I'm house-sitting. She’s in Cardiff." "I know." Rory pushed off the door. "Of course you do. You probably had a bird watching the train station." "I had a meeting." Lucien turned. His eyes locked onto hers. The mismatched gaze—one amber, one void black—always unsettled her, stripping away her defenses faster than she could rebuild them. "I finished early. I thought I would see if you were still alive." "Barely. The delivery bike almost killed me yesterday." "A hazard of the profession." "It pays the rent." He unbuttoned his coat, revealing a pristine waistcoat beneath. He placed the cane against the arm of the sofa, careful not to disturb the cat. The motion was fluid, practiced. He looked too perfect here. Too sharp. The flat was a mess of intellectual curiosity and human messiness, and Lucien was a blade cutting through it all. "You didn't call." "The network is compromised." "Bullshit." He arched a brow. "You have a secure line. You have three. You just didn't want to use them." Lucien walked towards the kitchenette. He ran a finger along the dusty top of the refrigerator, inspecting the grime. "I was busy. The situation in Avaros is deteriorating. My father’s kin are restless." "Always an excuse with you. It’s the demon blood, or the business, or the alignment of the stars." She followed him, keeping a safe distance. "You vanished, Lucien. One night we were drinking wine at Silas's, the next you were gone. No note. No text." "It was safer that way." "Safer for who? You? Or me?" He stopped. His hand dropped from the counter. "For you. Being associated with me attracts attention you don't need. You have enough problems with that ex-boyfriend of yours without adding my family to the list." Rory flinched. She hated that he knew about Evan. Hated that he knew everything. "Don't bring him into this. This is about us." "Is there an 'us'?" He turned to face her. The question hung in the damp air, heavy and sharp. He took a step closer. The space between them shrank. "You tell me," she said. Lucien reached out. He didn't touch her, just hovered his hand near her face, his fingers trembling slightly. She saw the exhaustion now. The faint purple bruise beneath his good eye. He wasn't invincible. He was just very good at pretending. "I tried to stay away." "Clearly failed." "I am a creature of habit, unfortunately. And bad decisions." "Coming here is a bad decision?" "Coming here is the worst decision I have made in weeks." He let his hand drop. It brushed her shoulder, a feather-light contact that seared through her t-shirt. Rory didn't pull away. She leaned into it, just for a second, before she caught herself and straightened her spine. "You're hurt." "A disagreement." "Let me see." "It is nothing." "Let me see, Lucien." She grabbed his wrist. He tensed, his muscles hard as iron, then relaxed. She pushed up the sleeve of his coat and waistcoat, rolling the fine white linen of his shirt up to his elbow. Three gouges marred his forearm. Angry, red lines that looked suspiciously like claw marks. They weren't bleeding anymore, but they looked deep. "Werewolf?" she asked. "Troll. Bargaining is tedious when they lack the mental capacity for basic arithmetic." Rory ran her thumb over the edge of the worst wound. Lucien hissed, a sharp intake of breath between his teeth. He didn't pull away. "You need stitches." "I heal." "Not fast enough to avoid infection. You know how gross the Thames is? Trolls carry things." She dragged him over to the kitchen chair. He sat, looking like a king deposed to a pauper's court. She rummaged through the drawers, pushing aside takeaway menus and rubber bands until she found the first-aid kit. "This is going to sting." "I have endured worse." "Pity party later." She poured antiseptic onto a cotton pad. The smell cut through the scent of rain and sandalwood. She dabbed the wound. He watched her face, not his arm. His eyes traced the line of her jaw, the curve of her mouth. The intensity of his scrutiny made her hands shake slightly. "You cut your hair," he said. "It was getting in my eyes." "I liked it long." "Well, I'm not here for your aesthetic appreciation." "It suits you. Sharp. No-nonsense." "You're talking nonsense." She applied a bandage with practiced efficiency, tearing the tape with her teeth. When she looked up, he was still watching her. The black eye seemed to swallow the light of the room, while the amber one burned with a heat that had nothing to do with fever. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" "You have a book. Something Eva picked up in Soho last week." Rory froze. "The Grimoire of Ashes? How do you know about that?" "I know everything that enters this city, Rory. Especially things that burn with that kind of signature." "It's just research. We're translating the introduction." "It is a trap. A beacon. I am not the only one who sensed it." "Who else?" "A collector. A man who does not believe in lending libraries." He stood up, the chair scraping loudly against the floor. "I came to warn you. And to hide it." "You came to steal it." "I came to save your life." Rory slammed the first-aid kit shut. The noise made Ptolemy twitch an ear. She faced him, her back against the counter. "I don't need saving. I can handle myself." "Can you?" Lucien stepped into her space again. This time he didn't stop. He crowded her, trapping her between the counter and the hard wall of his chest. He placed a hand on the counter on either side of her hips, boxing her in. "You run deliveries. You study law you hate. You live in a flat above a curry house that smells of cardamom and despair." His voice dropped, low and rough. "You are brilliant, Rory. You are the most intelligent human I have met in decades. But you are not a fighter. Not like this." "So I should just hand it over? Let the big bad demon fix everything?" "Yes." "Not a chance." Lucien leaned closer. His breath ghosted over her lips. He smelled of rain and blood. The anger in his eyes warred with something else. Something hungry. "You are infuriating." "And you arrogant." He didn't deny it. He dipped his head, his forehead resting against hers. The contact was electric, a jolt that sparked memories she had spent three months trying to drown in cheap lager and late shifts. His body was solid and warm against hers, the cane still leaning forgotten against the sofa across the room. "I missed you," he whispered. The confession stripped the air from her lungs. "Don't." "I did. I missed the noise. I missed the way you look at me like I am an idiot." "You are an idiot." "I know." She gripped the lapels of his coat, her fingers twisting the damp wool. She wanted to shove him away. She wanted to pull him closer until the space between them dissolved completely. "Three months, Lucien." "I know." "You don't get to just walk back in here." "I am aware." "Then why are you still standing this close?" He pulled back just enough to look her in the eye. The amber eye swirled with internal fire. "Because I am terrified that if I step away, you will slam that door in my face. And because I cannot seem to remember how to breathe when you are not near." He reached up, his thumb brushing the small scar on her left wrist. The touch was gentle, reverent. "I am not asking for forgiveness. I am asking for a chance to stop whatever is coming for that book." "Just the book?" "Just the book." "Liar." He smiled then. A genuine, crooked thing that transformed his face from a mask of cold elegance into something boyish and dangerous. He leaned in, his lips a breath away from hers. "Possibly." Rory closed the gap.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:22:37.251Z" 2/19/2026, 12:22:37 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.209
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"very"
3"really"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1708
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"unsettled"
count1
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"beacon"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"loomed"
2"warmth"
3"throbbed"
4"unsettled"
5"pristine"
6"perfect"
7"traced"
8"intensity"
9"beacon"
10"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences113
matches
0"o with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences113
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1701
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1062
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
London1
Lucien9
Evan1
Rory8
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Rory"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like surrender"
1"shadow that seemed to suck the warmth right out of the cluttered room"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1701
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences190
matches
0"hated that he"
1"Hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean15.32
std16.27
cv1.062
sampleLengths
062
111
257
318
45
55
621
750
813
98
1049
1151
125
135
142
1518
1643
178
185
194
2057
213
224
231
244
2515
2633
2745
285
296
3035
3114
329
334
3425
355
3641
375
382
3910
406
4111
4237
432
442
453
463
474
4835
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"was plastered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"weren't bleeding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences190
ratio0.011
matches
0"The scent hit her then—sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and the metallic tang that always clung to his skin."
1"The mismatched gaze—one amber, one void black—always unsettled her, stripping away her defenses faster than she could rebuild them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1068
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03838951310861423
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006554307116104869
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean8.95
std6.52
cv0.728
sampleLengths
012
127
213
310
411
55
617
721
814
92
1016
115
125
133
1418
154
1617
176
1823
1913
208
219
2215
237
2418
2510
2618
2723
285
295
302
315
3213
336
345
3519
3613
378
385
394
409
4116
425
435
442
4520
463
474
481
494
43.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.28421052631578947
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.39% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount56
totalSentences102
matches
0"She threw the locks open"
1"His platinum hair was plastered"
2"Her heart hammered against her"
3"She stepped aside."
4"He moved past her."
5"He brought the London night"
6"She leaned back against the"
7"He stopped in the centre"
8"His eyes locked onto hers."
9"He unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
10"He placed the cane against"
11"He looked too perfect here."
12"He arched a brow."
13"He ran a finger along"
14"She followed him, keeping a"
15"His hand dropped from the"
16"She hated that he knew"
17"He turned to face her."
18"He took a step closer."
19"He didn't touch her, just"
ratio0.549
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount97
totalSentences102
matches
0"The three deadbolts slid back"
1"Rain drummed a relentless, chaotic"
2"Rory checked the peephole, the"
3"She threw the locks open"
4"Air rushed out, carrying the"
5"Lucien stood on the landing."
6"Water dripped from the hem"
7"His platinum hair was plastered"
8"The ivory handle of his"
9"Her heart hammered against her"
10"She stepped aside."
11"He moved past her."
12"The scent hit her then—sandalwood,"
13"A hint of sulfur, buried"
14"He brought the London night"
15"She leaned back against the"
16"The small crescent scar on"
17"Lucien ignored the invitation to"
18"He stopped in the centre"
19"Stacks of books towered over"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a traitorous rhythm that had nothing to do with surprise."
1"It brushed her shoulder, a feather-light contact that seared through her t-shirt."
2"The contact was electric, a jolt that sparked memories she had spent three months trying to drown in cheap lager and late shifts."
3"A genuine, crooked thing that transformed his face from a mask of cold elegance into something boyish and dangerous."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stood up, the chair scraping loudly against the floor"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.047
leniency0.093
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.023
80.8518%