Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXMZBZC8HAY0BDKJ00V9XG

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.017419
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crimson gem against Aurora's collarbone burned like a coal. She stopped at the edge of the alleyway, fingers digging into the leather of her jacket. The air in front of them shimmered, a heat haze rising from the wet pavement despite the London chill. Nyx stepped out of the shadow of a dumpster, their form solidifying into a humanoid silhouette of living darkness. Violet eyes glowed within the void of their face. The stone pulses. Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant. Heat radiated into her sternum. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade from the sheath at her hip. Moonsilver gleamed in the dim streetlight, cold biting into her palm. We cross now. Nyx tilted their head, the shadowy edges of their shoulders rippling. The Veil thins here. The Wardens miss this tear. Aurora stepped toward the distortion. The shimmering barrier stood waist-high, widening as she approached. She glanced at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, then tightened her grip on the dagger. Stay close. She thrust her hand into the shimmer. Resistance clung to her skin like syrup. She pushed through. Nyx flowed after her, a stain of darkness sliding across the boundary. Gravity shifted. The smell of exhaust and damp brick vanished, replaced by the heavy scent of roasting meat and overripe fruit. Aurora stumbled onto soft grass. She looked up. The sky was a warm amber, devoid of clouds or sun, yet bright as midday. Vines thick as her thigh draped between stone archways overhead, heavy with grapes the size of fists. Nyx materialized fully beside her, their height looming over the treeline. Dymas. The realm of Gluttony. Aurora sheathed the blade but kept her hand on the hilt. The ground felt spongy, rich with decay and growth. She walked forward, boots sinking into the loam. To their left, an orchard stretched into the distance. Trees groaned under the weight of golden apples that dripped syrup onto the roots. This place breathes. Nyx reached out a shadowy hand. A grape hanging low on a vine turned to dust at their touch. Organic matter destabilizes in my presence. Aurora moved deeper into the grove. The air hung thick and humid. Her breath came slower here, as if the atmosphere itself resisted her lungs. She checked the pendant. The crimson glow intensified. It leads deeper. They followed the pull. The path widened into a boulevard paved with polished obsidian. Statues lined the walkway, carved figures holding platters of stone food. Moss crept over the faces of the sculptures, softening their expressions. Aurora ran a finger along a statue's base. The stone felt warm. Prince Belphegor rules this sin. Nyx drifted over the obsidian, leaving no footprints. His contractors feast above. Souls bound to the kitchens of Earth send offerings down. Aurora stopped. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. The vines overhead swayed without wind. Do you hear that? Nyx froze. The violet light in their eyes dimmed. Voices. Many. Aurora crouched behind a cluster of giant ferns. She parted the fronds. Beyond the tree line, a valley opened up. Tables stretched for miles, laden with roasted beasts and towers of pastry. Figures moved between the tables, some human-shaped, others distorted by excess. She pulled the collar of her jacket up. The pendant throbbed against her skin, matching the rhythm of the hum. We need the source of the rift. Nyx leaned over her shoulder, their voice a whisper carried on the wind. The source lies beneath the feast. The ground swallows the waste. The energy cycles back up. Aurora stood. She wiped sweat from her brow. The amber light cast no shadows, which made Nyx stand out even more, a void in the illumination. Can you slip ahead? I can move through the shadows cast by the diners. But the light here... it is pervasive. Aurora looked at the sky. The amber glow came from everywhere, nowhere. Find the center. I'll follow the pendant. Nyx dissolved into a wisp of smoke and shot toward the valley floor. Aurora waited until the darkness vanished into the crowd below. She checked the Fae Blade again. The metal remained cold, a stark contrast to the humid air. She descended the slope. The grass gave way to packed earth. The smell of food grew stronger, cloying. Her stomach growled, a sudden sharp pain. She ignored it. The excess of Dymas sought to weaken resolve through indulgence. She reached the edge of the banquet. A figure sat at the nearest table, carving a joint of meat that smoked with aromatic spices. The figure wore the uniform of a delivery driver, similar to her own from the Golden Empress, but the fabric was woven with gold thread. The driver looked up. Eyes hollow, skin pale. Aurora stepped into the light. The driver did not react. She moved past the table. The pendant burned hotter. She navigated between the feasting souls. None acknowledged her. They ate with mechanical precision, stuffing food into mouths that never seemed to fill. Nyx reformed beside a massive pillar at the valley's center. Here. Aurora joined them. The pillar pulsed with a faint violet light, matching Nyx's eyes. Cracks ran down the stone, leaking shadow. This isn't natural to Hel. Nyx traced the crack. Shadow pooled around their fingers. Someone forced a connection. Earth to Hel. Using the Veil's weakness. Aurora placed her hand near the stone. The heat from the pendant matched the pulse of the pillar. The winter solstice weakens the Barrier. She looked around. The feasting continued, oblivious. The amber sky remained constant. We seal it. Nyx stepped back, their form expanding. My substance can fill the breach. But it requires an anchor. Aurora looked at the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver hummed. Take the blade. Nyx hesitated, the violet eyes widening. It cuts wards. It will bind your shadow to the stone. Aurora gripped the hilt. She held it out. Nyx reached for it. Their shadowy fingers brushed the metal. Frost spread from the contact point, cracking the air. The ground shook. A table overturned nearby. Wine spilled like blood across the obsidian. The diners stopped chewing. Heads turned in unison. Aurora shoved the blade into Nyx's grasp. Do it. Nyx wrapped around the dagger. They plunged the weapon into the crack in the pillar. A scream tore through the valley. Not from Nyx, but from the ground itself. The amber sky flickered. For a second, the grey clouds of London showed through. Aurora grabbed Nyx's arm. The shadow felt solid, heavy. Hold the line. The diners stood. They dropped their cutlery. The metal clattered on the stone. They began to walk toward the pillar. Aurora drew her own backup knife. Steel against the approaching mass. Nyx pushed the blade deeper. The violet light intensified. They come for the anchor. Aurora planted her feet. The crescent scar on her wrist itched. Let them come.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1154
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"mechanical"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"traced"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"chill"
2"looming"
3"weight"
4"vibrated"
5"throbbed"
6"whisper"
7"stark"
8"stomach"
9"resolve"
10"navigated"
11"mechanical"
12"pulsed"
13"traced"
14"pulse"
15"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences169
filterMatches
0"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1149
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1149
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.83
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Aurora21
London2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged2
Blade3
Veil2
Wardens1
Gluttony1
Belphegor1
Earth2
Nyx21
Fae3
Dymas2
Golden1
Empress1
Hel2
Barrier1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Veil"
3"Belphegor"
4"Earth"
5"Nyx"
6"Dymas"
7"Barrier"
places
0"London"
1"Fae-Forged"
2"Fae"
3"Golden"
4"Hel"
globalScore0.586
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.87
wordCount1149
matches
0"Not from Nyx, but from the ground itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean15.12
std12.5
cv0.827
sampleLengths
045
128
23
332
43
511
69
731
82
929
1029
1132
1211
135
1451
153
1619
176
1833
193
2036
2112
225
238
2414
2518
264
279
282
2943
3020
317
3213
3316
3426
354
3617
3712
387
3940
4038
4149
428
4310
4432
4510
461
4721
485
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences169
matches
0"was woven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences169
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1154
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.011265164644714038
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0008665511265164644
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean6.8
std4.17
cv0.613
sampleLengths
010
116
219
319
49
53
65
75
811
911
103
1111
124
135
145
159
1617
172
187
197
203
2112
222
2319
245
253
2615
2717
2811
291
304
3111
329
338
349
3514
363
376
3813
396
406
416
4213
434
444
453
464
4710
4811
4911
49.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3254437869822485
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners55
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences159
matches
0"She stopped at the edge"
1"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
2"We cross now."
3"She glanced at the crescent-shaped"
4"She thrust her hand into"
5"She pushed through."
6"She looked up."
7"She walked forward, boots sinking"
8"Her breath came slower here,"
9"She checked the pendant."
10"It leads deeper."
11"They followed the pull."
12"His contractors feast above."
13"She parted the fronds."
14"She pulled the collar of"
15"We need the source of"
16"She wiped sweat from her"
17"I can move through the"
18"it is pervasive."
19"I'll follow the pendant."
ratio0.245
7.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences159
matches
0"The crimson gem against Aurora's"
1"She stopped at the edge"
2"The air in front of"
3"Nyx stepped out of the"
4"Violet eyes glowed within the"
5"The stone pulses."
6"Aurora touched the Heartstone Pendant."
7"Heat radiated into her sternum."
8"She drew the Fae-Forged Blade"
9"Moonsilver gleamed in the dim"
10"We cross now."
11"Nyx tilted their head, the"
12"The Veil thins here."
13"The Wardens miss this tear."
14"Aurora stepped toward the distortion."
15"The shimmering barrier stood waist-high,"
16"She glanced at the crescent-shaped"
17"She thrust her hand into"
18"Resistance clung to her skin"
19"She pushed through."
ratio0.906
31.45% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences159
matches
0"To their left, an orchard"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her breath came slower here, as if the atmosphere itself resisted her lungs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.0711%