Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXN5JPV8R2THFMDMVFYSE2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.002955
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The taxi had dumped her at the Richmond Park gates with a skeptical look and the engine still running, as if the driver hoped she'd change her mind and climb back in. Aurora had paid him in cash—the only way he'd accept the fare to this godforsaken corner of the city at half past midnight—and watched his taillights disappear down the dark country lane before turning toward the trees. The pendant lay cold against her chest. It had been warm since she'd left her flat above Silas' bar, a steady pulse that matched no heartbeat she recognized. Yu-Fei had warned her about the thing when she'd found it tucked in the restaurant's storage room three weeks ago. Dangerous, he'd said. Old. Don't trust it. But the pendant had led her here, to this place in the park that her phone's GPS refused to acknowledge, past the iron lampposts and into the shadow of the ancient oaks where the city lights couldn't reach. The entrance to the Fae Grove revealed itself the way the old stories promised—not as a door or a gap in the foliage, but as a knowing. One moment the woods pressed close and claustrophobic, and the next she stood in a clearing that hadn't existed a heartbeat before. Moonlight turned the wildflowers silver. The standing stones rose in a rough circle, ancient oaks petrified into shapes that almost resembled figures, almost resembled watchers. Aurora stepped forward and the grass beneath her boots made no sound. She noticed that immediately—the soft whisper of movement that should have accompanied each step, the quiet compression of dew-soaked earth. Nothing. She might as well have been walking on air. "I know why I'm here," she said aloud, her voice strange in the silence. The pendant pulsed warmer. She waited for an answer. None came. The grove stretched larger than it should have, given the boundaries of Richmond Park. Aurora walked its perimeter, counting the standing stones—there were thirteen, she was certain of that, though her count kept shifting when she looked away and back again. The oaks that marked the edge didn't grow in a natural pattern. They stood too perfectly spaced, too deliberately placed, as if someone had arranged them with intention. Something moved at the corner of her vision. She spun around. Nothing. The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel, their heads bent toward a moon that hung too large and too close in the dark sky. Aurora pressed her hand against her chest, feeling the pendant's warmth through her jacket, and forced herself to breathe. Get a grip. You came here for answers. The reason sat heavy in her chest. Eva had been missing for six days. No call, no text, no word at the flat they used to share. The police had taken her statement with the polite disinterest reserved for adults who chose to disappear. But Aurora knew better. Eva wouldn't leave without telling her. Eva had been the one to pull her out of Cardiff, out of Evan's shadow, out of the careful trap of a life that looked normal from the outside. Eva didn't abandon people. The pendant had started warming the night Eva vanished. Aurora had dismissed it as coincidence, then as the heat of her own body, then as imagination. But the warmth had led her here—to a place that shouldn't exist, in a park she'd visited only once before, years ago, when she'd first arrived in London and Eva had wanted to show her the "pretty bit with the old trees." She'd thought it was a clearing then. Just a clearing with unusual stones and flowers that bloomed out of season. She'd barely remembered it until the pendant started pulling her toward it like a compass needle toward north. The wrongness crept in slowly. First it was the silencenot the absence of sound, but something more active. A listening quality to the quiet, as if the grove held its breath and waited. Then it was the shadows. They didn't move with the moon. They moved against it, sliding along the ground like dark water, pooling in places that should have been bright. Aurora watched one stretch and contract against the base of a standing stone, and she made herself look away before her mind could make shapes in it. A sound came from somewhere behind her. A footstep, maybe. The soft displacement of grass. She spun again. Nothing. The clearing lay empty and silver and still. "Hello?" Her voice didn't echo. It fell flat, absorbed by the flowers and the stones and the unnatural dark beyond the tree line. "I know someone's there." No answer. The pendant burned against her skin now, hot enough that she wondered if it would leave a mark. She pulled it out from under her shirt and stared at it in the moonlight. The deep crimson gemstone glowed from within, a faint luminescence that had nothing to do with reflected light. It was beautiful and terrible and absolutely, impossibly wrong. The footsteps came again. Closer this time. Aurora whirled and saw only the empty clearing, the swaying flowers, the watching stones. But the grass—she stared at the ground—had moved. A trail of bent stems led from the tree line to within ten feet of where she stood, ending in a perfect circle of disturbed earth. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She thought of Evan's hands, of the bruises that bloomed purple and yellow along her arms, of the careful way he'd isolated her from everyone who might help. She'd escaped that. She'd built a life in London with a job she didn't hate and a flat above a bar and a friend who made her laugh until she forgot the sound of her own name crying behind a locked door. She wouldn't break now. Not here. Not when Eva needed her. Aurora walked toward the center of the clearing, toward the largest of the standing stones. She didn't know what she expected to find—a door, a symbol, some kind of answer—but she knew in her bones that this was why she'd come. The pendant pulsed faster as she approached, the light inside it growing brighter, casting crimson shadows across the ancient oak. The stone was warm to the touch. Not sun-warmed, not the residual heat of a summer day. Warm like skin. Warm like something alive. "You shouldn't have come." The voice came from everywhere and nowhere. It wasn't loud, but it filled the clearing, pressed against her eardrums, settled into her chest like a second heartbeat. Aurora stepped back from the stone and scanned the darkness beyond the tree line. "I know," she said, because she did. She'd known from the moment the pendant started pulling her toward this place that she was walking into something beyond her understanding. "But my friend is here. Eva. You have her." Silence. The flowers stopped swaying. The shadows stopped sliding. The entire grove held itself in perfect, terrible stillness. Then the darkness between the trees began to move. It didn't emerge from anywhere. It simply became, coalescing from the spaces between spaces into something that had weight and height and the vague suggestion of a shape. It stood just beyond the circle of stones, taller than the ancient oaks, broader than the clearing itself. Aurora couldn't see its face because it didn't have one—or because the moonlight refused to touch it, or because her mind refused to process what looked back at her. The pendant went cold. Not cooling. Not returning to normal temperature. Cold like ice, cold like death, cold like the space between stars. Aurora's fingers burned with the shock of it, but she couldn't let go. The pendant was the only thing anchoring her to this clearing, to this moment, to the world she'd come from. "You came for the girl," the voice said, and now it came from the thing in the darkness, from everywhere the shadows touched. "They always come for someone. That's what makes the door open. That's what makes you walk in." "Give her back." A sound that might have been laughter rippled through the grove. The wildflowers bent away from it, as if recoiling from a physical force. "She's not ours to give. She opened a door. She spoke a name she shouldn't have spoken. The grove took what was offered." Aurora's throat tightened. Eva had always been curious about the old stories, the fairy tales that weren't really tales at all. She'd researched them for fun, collected them like other people collected stamps. She hadn't believed they were real. Neither had Aurora, until tonight. "Show me," Aurora said. Her voice didn't shake. She was proud of that, later, when she had time to think about it. "Show me she's alive. Please." The darkness shifted. The shadows slid back toward the tree line, revealing gaps between the trunks that hadn't been there before. Beyond them, in a space that existed between one heartbeat and the next, a figure moved. Eva stood in a clearing of her own, surrounded by flowers that bloomed in impossible colors. She looked up, as if she could feel Aurora's gaze through whatever barrier separated them. Her mouth moved. No sound came through, but Aurora could read the words. Run.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
87.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"deliberately"
2"slowly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1562
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"absolutely"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"whisper"
2"silence"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"echo"
6"absolutely"
7"footsteps"
8"perfect"
9"scanned"
10"weight"
11"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences124
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences124
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1547
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1450
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Fae1
Grove1
Aurora17
Cardiff1
Evan2
Eva9
London2
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Aurora"
2"Evan"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore0.914
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if recoiling from a physical force"
70.72% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.293
wordCount1547
matches
0"not as a door or a gap in the foliage, but as a knowing"
1"not the absence of sound, but something more active"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean36.83
std26.82
cv0.728
sampleLengths
069
193
249
367
418
57
669
78
849
98
1087
1168
1238
135
1485
1515
1612
1727
1862
1955
2076
2111
2261
2324
244
2541
2638
2718
289
2975
304
3152
3240
333
3424
3523
3639
375
3827
3937
4044
411
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs235
matches
0"was walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences131
ratio0.069
matches
0"Aurora had paid him in cash—the only way he'd accept the fare to this godforsaken corner of the city at half past midnight—and watched his taillights disappear down the dark country lane before turning toward the trees."
1"The entrance to the Fae Grove revealed itself the way the old stories promised—not as a door or a gap in the foliage, but as a knowing."
2"She noticed that immediately—the soft whisper of movement that should have accompanied each step, the quiet compression of dew-soaked earth."
3"Aurora walked its perimeter, counting the standing stones—there were thirteen, she was certain of that, though her count kept shifting when she looked away and back again."
4"But the warmth had led her here—to a place that shouldn't exist, in a park she'd visited only once before, years ago, when she'd first arrived in London and Eva had wanted to show her the \"pretty bit with the old trees.\""
5"First it was the silence—not the absence of sound, but something more active."
6"But the grass—she stared at the ground—had moved."
7"She didn't know what she expected to find—a door, a symbol, some kind of answer—but she knew in her bones that this was why she'd come."
8"Aurora couldn't see its face because it didn't have one—or because the moonlight refused to touch it, or because her mind refused to process what looked back at her."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount149
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"lay cold against her"
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.020134228187919462
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006711409395973154
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean11.81
std9.18
cv0.777
sampleLengths
032
137
27
321
420
53
61
73
838
927
1022
115
1220
1312
1420
151
169
1714
184
195
202
2114
2227
2312
2416
258
263
271
2826
2919
303
315
327
337
3413
3517
364
376
3829
394
409
4117
4242
437
4413
4518
465
4713
4815
495
37.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2748091603053435
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners36
88.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"Just a clearing with unusual"
1"Then it was the shadows."
2"Then the darkness between the"
ratio0.027
96.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences113
matches
0"It had been warm since"
1"She noticed that immediately—the soft"
2"She might as well have"
3"she said aloud, her voice"
4"She waited for an answer."
5"They stood too perfectly spaced,"
6"She spun around."
7"You came here for answers."
8"She'd thought it was a"
9"She'd barely remembered it until"
10"They didn't move with the"
11"They moved against it, sliding"
12"She spun again."
13"Her voice didn't echo"
14"It fell flat, absorbed by"
15"She pulled it out from"
16"It was beautiful and terrible"
17"Her heart hammered against her"
18"She thought of Evan's hands,"
19"She'd escaped that."
ratio0.31
57.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences113
matches
0"The taxi had dumped her"
1"Aurora had paid him in"
2"The pendant lay cold against"
3"It had been warm since"
4"Yu-Fei had warned her about"
5"The entrance to the Fae"
6"Moonlight turned the wildflowers silver."
7"The standing stones rose in"
8"Aurora stepped forward and the"
9"She noticed that immediately—the soft"
10"She might as well have"
11"she said aloud, her voice"
12"The pendant pulsed warmer."
13"She waited for an answer."
14"The grove stretched larger than"
15"Aurora walked its perimeter, counting"
16"The oaks that marked the"
17"They stood too perfectly spaced,"
18"Something moved at the corner"
19"She spun around."
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She noticed that immediately—the soft whisper of movement that should have accompanied each step, the quiet compression of dew-soaked earth."
1"Aurora walked its perimeter, counting the standing stones—there were thirteen, she was certain of that, though her count kept shifting when she looked away and …"
2"The wildflowers swayed in a breeze she couldn't feel, their heads bent toward a moon that hung too large and too close in the dark sky."
3"The police had taken her statement with the polite disinterest reserved for adults who chose to disappear."
4"The deep crimson gemstone glowed from within, a faint luminescence that had nothing to do with reflected light."
5"She'd built a life in London with a job she didn't hate and a flat above a bar and a friend who made her laugh until she forgot the sound of her own name crying…"
6"It simply became, coalescing from the spaces between spaces into something that had weight and height and the vague suggestion of a shape."
7"The wildflowers bent away from it, as if recoiling from a physical force."
8"Eva stood in a clearing of her own, surrounded by flowers that bloomed in impossible colors."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said aloud, her voice strange in the silence"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4641%