Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXNCD9G0DKZZSZ5D59VNM4

Run Details

Duration:
39.0s
Cost:
$0.025218

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak trees loomed against the night sky like ancient sentinels, their gnarled branches twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate in the moonlight. Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her throat—warmer than it should have been. She'd come here because the pendant had been pulling her toward Richmond Park all evening, its crimson surface pulsing with that familiar heat that meant a portal was near. But now, standing in Isolde's grove with wildflowers blooming impossibly bright beneath her feet, the wrongness settled over her like a shroud. The flowers shouldn't be blooming. Not in November. Not with frost warnings across London. Her mobile showed 11:47 PM, but the light filtering through the canopy held the quality of late afternoon sun. Time moved differently here—she knew that much from her previous visits with Isolde. An hour inside could stretch into days outside, or compress into mere minutes. Tonight, something about the temporal distortion felt malevolent. A twig snapped somewhere behind her. Aurora turned, scanning the treeline. Nothing moved among the ancient oaks, yet the sound had been distinct. Deliberate. She waited, counting her heartbeats while the pendant's warmth spread across her chest. "Isolde?" Her voice carried strangely in the grove, as if the words were being absorbed by the very air. "Are you there?" Silence answered her. Even the usual night sounds—owls, rustling leaves, the distant hum of London traffic—had died away completely. The grove felt suspended, caught between breaths. She moved deeper into the clearing, her footsteps muffled by the carpet of unnaturally vibrant flowers. Purple foxgloves towered beside her path, their bell-shaped blooms swaying without wind. Roses climbed the oak trunks in spirals of white and red, thorns gleaming like small teeth in the strange light. Another sound. This time from her left—a whisper of movement through undergrowth. Aurora's hand found the pendant instinctively, her fingers closing around the warm stone. The crimson glow intensified at her touch, and for a moment she could have sworn she saw something shift in her peripheral vision. When she turned toward it, only shadows waited between the trees. The grove stretched further than it should have. She'd been here three times before, always with Isolde as her guide, and each visit had shown her the same intimate clearing—perhaps fifty feet across, ringed by the standing stone oaks. Tonight, the boundaries seemed to have expanded, the treeline receding into darkness that her eyes couldn't penetrate. A low sound drifted from somewhere ahead. Almost like singing, but with notes that hurt to hear—too high, too low, frequencies that made her teeth ache. The melody, if it could be called that, wove between the trees with purpose, circling closer. Aurora backed toward the entrance, but when she turned, the path she'd followed had vanished. Walls of thorned roses blocked her retreat, their white blooms luminous in the half-light. The standing stones that marked the boundary were nowhere to be seen. The singing grew louder. She pressed deeper into the grove, searching for another way out, but each step seemed to take her further from escape. The flowers beneath her feet began to change—their colors bleeding from vibrant purples and reds into sickly yellows and greens that reminded her uncomfortably of old bruises. Movement flickered at the corner of her eye again. This time she caught it—a pale shape darting between the oak trunks, too quick to focus on, too large to be natural. It moved with liquid grace, as if gravity held no sway over it. The pendant burned against her skin now, its heat almost painful. She pulled it from beneath her shirt and watched its crimson depths pulse in rhythm with her racing heart. The stone's glow cast dancing shadows on the surrounding trees, and in those shadows, shapes writhed and twisted. The singing stopped. In the sudden silence, Aurora heard her own breathing, quick and shallow. Then another sound rose to replace the melody—a rustling, as if hundreds of things were moving through the undergrowth around her. Circling. Getting closer. She backed against one of the ancient oaks, its bark rough against her shoulders. The tree felt solid, real, an anchor point in a grove that seemed increasingly unmoored from reality. But even the oak felt wrong—too warm, as if something living pulsed beneath its bark. A branch creaked overhead. Aurora looked up to see pale shapes moving through the canopy, flowing from tree to tree like liquid moonlight. They kept to the shadows between the leaves, never quite solid enough to make out clearly, but their presence pressed against her consciousness like fingers probing at the edges of her mind. The rustling grew louder. Closer. She fumbled for her mobile, desperate for its mundane blue glow, but the screen showed only static. The time display flickered between impossible readings—3:17 AM, 6:45 PM, 13:82 XM—before going dark entirely. One of the pale shapes dropped from the canopy, landing in the clearing with no sound at all. It stood perhaps twenty feet away, tall and elongated, its form wavering like heat shimmer. Where its face should have been, Aurora saw only shadows within shadows. It tilted its head, studying her with attention that felt hungry. More shapes emerged from the treeline, their movements synchronized, predatory. They formed a loose circle around her, and Aurora realized with crystalline clarity that whatever these things were, they'd been hunting her from the moment she entered the grove. The pendant flared brighter, its heat now bordering on agony. The crimson light seemed to pain the creatures—they hissed and recoiled, their forms becoming even less substantial. But they didn't retreat. Instead, they began to close in, moving with the patience of things that had waited centuries and could wait centuries more. Aurora pressed tighter against the oak, her mind racing through possibilities. The pendant was clearly her protection, but its light was finite. Already she could feel its warmth beginning to ebb, the glow fading by degrees. In the dying crimson light, the creatures' true forms began to resolve. What she'd taken for elongated limbs were actually clusters of reaching tendrils. What she'd mistaken for shadows were mouths—too many mouths, opening and closing in silent hunger. They were almost close enough to touch her now.
total_cost0.025218

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice carried strangely [strangely]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
90.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1073
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count2
10
word"depths"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"racing"
count2
13
word"dancing"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
16
word"synchronized"
count1
17
word"crystalline"
count1
18
word"could feel"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"gleaming"
8"whisper"
9"flickered"
10"depths"
11"pulse"
12"racing"
13"dancing"
14"pulsed"
15"wavering"
16"synchronized"
17"crystalline"
18"could feel"
19"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
51.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1056
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1046
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde3
November1
London2
Silence1
Aurora9
persons
0"Silence"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Isolde"
3"November"
4"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed increasingly unmoored from reality"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1056
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"knew that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean34.06
std17.39
cv0.511
sampleLengths
055
151
214
353
46
531
622
726
848
912
1047
1156
1242
1341
144
1548
1644
1748
183
1936
2046
2155
225
2332
2445
2511
2639
2752
2836
2939
309
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"being absorbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs171
matches
0"were moving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences79
ratio0.165
matches
0"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her throat—warmer than it should have been."
1"Time moved differently here—she knew that much from her previous visits with Isolde."
2"Even the usual night sounds—owls, rustling leaves, the distant hum of London traffic—had died away completely."
3"This time from her left—a whisper of movement through undergrowth."
4"She'd been here three times before, always with Isolde as her guide, and each visit had shown her the same intimate clearing—perhaps fifty feet across, ringed by the standing stone oaks."
5"Almost like singing, but with notes that hurt to hear—too high, too low, frequencies that made her teeth ache."
6"The flowers beneath her feet began to change—their colors bleeding from vibrant purples and reds into sickly yellows and greens that reminded her uncomfortably of old bruises."
7"This time she caught it—a pale shape darting between the oak trunks, too quick to focus on, too large to be natural."
8"Then another sound rose to replace the melody—a rustling, as if hundreds of things were moving through the undergrowth around her."
9"But even the oak felt wrong—too warm, as if something living pulsed beneath its bark."
10"The time display flickered between impossible readings—3:17 AM, 6:45 PM, 13:82 XM—before going dark entirely."
11"The crimson light seemed to pain the creatures—they hissed and recoiled, their forms becoming even less substantial."
12"What she'd mistaken for shadows were mouths—too many mouths, opening and closing in silent hunger."
95.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1026
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.04483430799220273
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014619883040935672
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean13.37
std7.55
cv0.565
sampleLengths
024
131
229
322
45
53
66
719
813
913
108
116
125
1312
141
1513
1619
173
183
1916
207
2116
2212
2320
242
2510
2613
2723
2811
298
3031
3117
327
3319
3416
3515
3614
3712
384
3921
4027
419
4222
4313
4411
4519
4618
473
4812
4921
71.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.46835443037974683
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"Even the usual night sounds—owls,"
1"Almost like singing, but with"
2"Then another sound rose to"
3"Instead, they began to close"
4"Already she could feel its"
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences73
matches
0"She'd come here because the"
1"Her mobile showed 11:47 PM,"
2"She waited, counting her heartbeats"
3"Her voice carried strangely in"
4"She moved deeper into the"
5"She'd been here three times"
6"She pressed deeper into the"
7"It moved with liquid grace,"
8"She pulled it from beneath"
9"She backed against one of"
10"They kept to the shadows"
11"She fumbled for her mobile,"
12"It stood perhaps twenty feet"
13"It tilted its head, studying"
14"They formed a loose circle"
15"They were almost close enough"
ratio0.219
90.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences73
matches
0"The oak trees loomed against"
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter"
2"She'd come here because the"
3"The flowers shouldn't be blooming."
4"Her mobile showed 11:47 PM,"
5"Time moved differently here—she knew"
6"An hour inside could stretch"
7"Tonight, something about the temporal"
8"A twig snapped somewhere behind"
9"Aurora turned, scanning the treeline."
10"Nothing moved among the ancient"
11"She waited, counting her heartbeats"
12"Her voice carried strangely in"
13"Silence answered her."
14"The grove felt suspended, caught"
15"She moved deeper into the"
16"Roses climbed the oak trunks"
17"This time from her left—a"
18"Aurora's hand found the pendant"
19"The crimson glow intensified at"
ratio0.74
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The oak trees loomed against the night sky like ancient sentinels, their gnarled branches twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate in the moonlight."
1"Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her throa…"
2"She'd come here because the pendant had been pulling her toward Richmond Park all evening, its crimson surface pulsing with that familiar heat that meant a port…"
3"Almost like singing, but with notes that hurt to hear—too high, too low, frequencies that made her teeth ache."
4"The flowers beneath her feet began to change—their colors bleeding from vibrant purples and reds into sickly yellows and greens that reminded her uncomfortably …"
5"It moved with liquid grace, as if gravity held no sway over it."
6"The tree felt solid, real, an anchor point in a grove that seemed increasingly unmoored from reality."
7"But even the oak felt wrong—too warm, as if something living pulsed beneath its bark."
8"It tilted its head, studying her with attention that felt hungry."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice carried strangely, as if the words were being absorbed by the very air"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.4470%