| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice carried strangely [strangely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 90.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1073 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "gleaming" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "dancing" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "synchronized" | | 17 | "crystalline" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1056 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1046 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 3 | | November | 1 | | London | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Aurora | 9 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed increasingly unmoored from reality" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1056 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 34.06 | | std | 17.39 | | cv | 0.511 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 31 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 42 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 52 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 79 | | ratio | 0.165 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her throat—warmer than it should have been." | | 1 | "Time moved differently here—she knew that much from her previous visits with Isolde." | | 2 | "Even the usual night sounds—owls, rustling leaves, the distant hum of London traffic—had died away completely." | | 3 | "This time from her left—a whisper of movement through undergrowth." | | 4 | "She'd been here three times before, always with Isolde as her guide, and each visit had shown her the same intimate clearing—perhaps fifty feet across, ringed by the standing stone oaks." | | 5 | "Almost like singing, but with notes that hurt to hear—too high, too low, frequencies that made her teeth ache." | | 6 | "The flowers beneath her feet began to change—their colors bleeding from vibrant purples and reds into sickly yellows and greens that reminded her uncomfortably of old bruises." | | 7 | "This time she caught it—a pale shape darting between the oak trunks, too quick to focus on, too large to be natural." | | 8 | "Then another sound rose to replace the melody—a rustling, as if hundreds of things were moving through the undergrowth around her." | | 9 | "But even the oak felt wrong—too warm, as if something living pulsed beneath its bark." | | 10 | "The time display flickered between impossible readings—3:17 AM, 6:45 PM, 13:82 XM—before going dark entirely." | | 11 | "The crimson light seemed to pain the creatures—they hissed and recoiled, their forms becoming even less substantial." | | 12 | "What she'd mistaken for shadows were mouths—too many mouths, opening and closing in silent hunger." |
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| 95.77% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1026 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04483430799220273 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014619883040935672 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 79 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 79 | | mean | 13.37 | | std | 7.55 | | cv | 0.565 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 71.73% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.46835443037974683 | | totalSentences | 79 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the usual night sounds—owls," | | 1 | "Almost like singing, but with" | | 2 | "Then another sound rose to" | | 3 | "Instead, they began to close" | | 4 | "Already she could feel its" |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd come here because the" | | 1 | "Her mobile showed 11:47 PM," | | 2 | "She waited, counting her heartbeats" | | 3 | "Her voice carried strangely in" | | 4 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 5 | "She'd been here three times" | | 6 | "She pressed deeper into the" | | 7 | "It moved with liquid grace," | | 8 | "She pulled it from beneath" | | 9 | "She backed against one of" | | 10 | "They kept to the shadows" | | 11 | "She fumbled for her mobile," | | 12 | "It stood perhaps twenty feet" | | 13 | "It tilted its head, studying" | | 14 | "They formed a loose circle" | | 15 | "They were almost close enough" |
| | ratio | 0.219 | |
| 90.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trees loomed against" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "She'd come here because the" | | 3 | "The flowers shouldn't be blooming." | | 4 | "Her mobile showed 11:47 PM," | | 5 | "Time moved differently here—she knew" | | 6 | "An hour inside could stretch" | | 7 | "Tonight, something about the temporal" | | 8 | "A twig snapped somewhere behind" | | 9 | "Aurora turned, scanning the treeline." | | 10 | "Nothing moved among the ancient" | | 11 | "She waited, counting her heartbeats" | | 12 | "Her voice carried strangely in" | | 13 | "Silence answered her." | | 14 | "The grove felt suspended, caught" | | 15 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 16 | "Roses climbed the oak trunks" | | 17 | "This time from her left—a" | | 18 | "Aurora's hand found the pendant" | | 19 | "The crimson glow intensified at" |
| | ratio | 0.74 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak trees loomed against the night sky like ancient sentinels, their gnarled branches twisted into shapes that seemed almost deliberate in the moonlight." | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter as she stepped between the standing stones that marked the boundary of the grove, the Heartstone pendant warm against her throa…" | | 2 | "She'd come here because the pendant had been pulling her toward Richmond Park all evening, its crimson surface pulsing with that familiar heat that meant a port…" | | 3 | "Almost like singing, but with notes that hurt to hear—too high, too low, frequencies that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "The flowers beneath her feet began to change—their colors bleeding from vibrant purples and reds into sickly yellows and greens that reminded her uncomfortably …" | | 5 | "It moved with liquid grace, as if gravity held no sway over it." | | 6 | "The tree felt solid, real, an anchor point in a grove that seemed increasingly unmoored from reality." | | 7 | "But even the oak felt wrong—too warm, as if something living pulsed beneath its bark." | | 8 | "It tilted its head, studying her with attention that felt hungry." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice carried strangely, as if the words were being absorbed by the very air" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |