Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXNHK87G0003DDMV41XFA4

Run Details

Duration:
53.1s
Cost:
$0.005208
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hit the pavement in sheets, turning the London street into a river of reflected neon. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed through puddles as she rounded the corner onto Greek Street, her breath coming in sharp bursts that fogged in the cold air. Twenty metres ahead, the figure in the dark jacket ducked between two buildings, vanishing into the narrow gap. She didn't slow down. Her hand found the wall, steadying herself as she swung into the alley. Her heart hammered against her ribs. The salt-and-pepper crop of her hair was soaked through, water dripping down the back of her collar, but she barely felt it. Three years since Morris. Three years of dead ends and cold cases and that gnawing feeling in her gut that something was wrong with the world, something just beyond the edge of what she could see. Tonight felt different. The alley opened onto a courtyard behind a row of shuttered shops. Steam rose from a vent, obscuring her vision for a moment. She pushed through it, her brown eyes scanning the shadows. There—a flash of movement near the far wall, a door slamming shut. Quinn sprinted across the courtyard, her worn leather watch bouncing against her left wrist. She reached the door and found it locked from the other side. A fire escape ladder hung just out of reach above her. She jumped, caught the bottom rung, and hauled herself up. The metal groaned under her weight. Second floor. A window, cracked open. She slid through it into a dark corridor that smelled of damp concrete and something else, something sharp and metallic that she couldn't quite place. Her torch beam cut through the darkness. The corridor stretched ahead, lined with pipes and electrical conduits. Somewhere in the distance, the rumble of a train. She moved forward, keeping her footsteps light. The corridor angled downward, leading her deeper into the building. Or under it. The walls changed from brick to curved tiles, and she realised she was in an old service tunnel, probably connected to the Underground. The fluorescent strips overhead flickered and died. She clicked on her torch again, the beam catching graffiti on the walls—strange symbols she didn't recognise, painted in colours that seemed to shift in the light. A sound echoed from somewhere ahead. Footsteps? No, more like the shuffle of fabric against stone. Someone moving carefully. She pressed on. The tunnel opened onto a platform. An old Tube station, abandoned by the look of it, the tracks rusted and the advertisements on the walls faded beyond recognition. Camden, maybe. Or somewhere close to it. But the platform wasn't empty. Stalls lined the edges, constructed from makeshift materials—canvas sheets draped over poles, wooden crates stacked to form counters, glass cases lit by candles that burned with an unusual blue flame. People moved between them, their faces obscured by hoods and masks. Quinn stepped back into the shadow of the tunnel entrance. She counted at least two dozen figures. Some carried cloth bundles under their arms. Others examined objects laid out on the stalls—bottles filled with swirling liquids, jewellery that caught the candlelight in odd ways, what looked like animal bones carved with intricate patterns. A market. Down here, in an abandoned station, a market was operating. She'd heard rumours, of course. Every detective in the Met had. Whispers about underground trading, about places that didn't appear on any maps, about goods that couldn't be explained. She'd always dismissed them as fantasy. Or as cover for ordinary criminal operations—drugs, stolen property, forged documents. Things that made sense. This didn't look like ordinary crime. A figure emerged from a side tunnel to her right, and she pressed herself flat against the wall. Close. Too close. The figure passed within arm's reach, and she caught the smell of ozone and burnt herbs. The bone token around their neck caught the light. Quinn waited until they'd moved away, then risked another look at the platform. The suspect she'd followed was nowhere in sight. They'd disappeared into the crowd, or into one of the side tunnels that branched off from the station. She had a choice to make. Her training said to call for backup. To observe, document, report. To follow proper procedure and let the system handle it. That was the right way. The safe way. But the system hadn't helped Morris. She touched the watch on her wrist—a habit, a comfort, a reminder of things she refused to forget. Three years of searching for answers. Three years of hitting walls, of being told to let it go, of knowing in her bones that the official explanation was wrong. And now she'd stumbled onto something that felt connected. She couldn't explain why, but the same wrongness she'd sensed that night—the night Morris died—hung in the air down here like smoke. A woman at one of the stalls turned her head, and Quinn saw her eyes catch the torchlight. They reflected it back, golden and luminous, before the woman looked away. Quinn switched off the torch. She could turn back. Return to the surface, file a report, pretend she'd lost the suspect in the alley. No one would blame her. No one would even question it. But she'd seen where the suspect had gone. Or at least, she'd seen the direction. One of the tunnels on the far side of the platform, marked with a symbol she recognised from the corridor—same strange design, same colours that shouldn't have been possible. The rain had washed away any trail she might have followed up top. Down here, she still had a chance. Still had a lead. Her jaw tightened. She stepped out of the shadow and onto the platform. The nearest stall holder looked up at her approach. An older man, his face weathered and his eyes sharp, watched her without speaking. On the table in front of him, rows of small glass vials glittered in the candlelight. "You're new." His voice was rough, accented with something she couldn't identify. Quinn met his gaze. "Looking for someone." "Aren't we all." He didn't ask who. Didn't ask why. Just waited, his fingers drumming on the table in a rhythm that matched the distant rumble of trains. She reached into her pocket and found her warrant card. Old instinct. She started to pull it out, then stopped. Something told her that showing credentials down here would be a mistake. "Man in a dark jacket," she said instead. "Came through here five minutes ago." The drumming stopped. "Describe him." "Average height. Thin. Moving like he was hurt." The stall holder's eyes flicked to something behind her. A tunnel entrance, half-hidden by a stack of wooden crates. "You don't want to go down there." "I didn't ask what I want." He smiled, and it was not a kind expression. "First time in the Market, yeah? I can tell. You've got that look. The one that says you think the rules still apply." He leaned forward, lowering his voice. "They don't. Not down here. You follow that tunnel, you'd better have a reason worth dying for." Quinn thought of Morris. Of the reports she'd read, the witnesses she'd interviewed, the dead ends she'd chased. Of the feeling that had brought her out tonight, chasing a suspect she'd been watching for weeks—a suspect who might, finally, lead her somewhere useful. "I do." The stall holder studied her for a long moment. Then he reached into his coat and pulled out a small object. A bone disc, carved with the same symbols she'd seen on the walls. He tossed it to her, and she caught it reflexively. "Entry token. You'll need it for the deeper levels." He settled back, the warning clear in his posture. "Don't say I didn't tell you." Quinn looked at the token in her palm. It was warm, though she couldn't imagine why. The bone was smooth, almost polished, and the symbols seemed to shift slightly when she wasn't looking directly at them. She raised her eyes to meet his one last time, then turned toward the tunnel. The darkness swallowed her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
1"He settled back [back]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.286
92.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1366
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"constructed"
count1
6
word"intricate"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
3"flickered"
4"echoed"
5"constructed"
6"intricate"
7"reminder"
8"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences122
matches(empty)
96.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences122
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1353
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount1254
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Greek1
Street1
Morris4
Underground1
Tube1
Met1
Three4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"Underground"
globalScore1
windowScore1
65.73% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite place"
1"colours that seemed to shift in the light"
2"looked like animal bones carved with intr"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"sensed that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean23.33
std17.99
cv0.771
sampleLengths
062
14
277
33
445
553
631
726
843
934
1019
113
1235
135
1441
1510
1643
1741
1821
196
2037
219
2239
236
2429
256
2647
2731
2830
295
3030
3144
3224
333
3410
3539
362
3710
387
393
4025
4132
4214
433
442
458
4619
477
486
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences122
matches
0"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs225
matches
0"was operating"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences133
ratio0.068
matches
0"There—a flash of movement near the far wall, a door slamming shut."
1"She clicked on her torch again, the beam catching graffiti on the walls—strange symbols she didn't recognise, painted in colours that seemed to shift in the light."
2"Stalls lined the edges, constructed from makeshift materials—canvas sheets draped over poles, wooden crates stacked to form counters, glass cases lit by candles that burned with an unusual blue flame."
3"Others examined objects laid out on the stalls—bottles filled with swirling liquids, jewellery that caught the candlelight in odd ways, what looked like animal bones carved with intricate patterns."
4"Or as cover for ordinary criminal operations—drugs, stolen property, forged documents."
5"She touched the watch on her wrist—a habit, a comfort, a reminder of things she refused to forget."
6"She couldn't explain why, but the same wrongness she'd sensed that night—the night Morris died—hung in the air down here like smoke."
7"One of the tunnels on the far side of the platform, marked with a symbol she recognised from the corridor—same strange design, same colours that shouldn't have been possible."
8"Of the feeling that had brought her out tonight, chasing a suspect she'd been watching for weeks—a suspect who might, finally, lead her somewhere useful."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1267
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.03472770323599053
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0055248618784530384
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean10.17
std7.12
cv0.7
sampleLengths
017
127
218
34
413
56
622
74
832
93
1012
1111
1210
1312
1414
1512
1611
1710
186
192
204
2125
227
2310
249
257
2610
273
2823
297
3027
316
321
339
343
353
366
3722
382
395
405
4130
4211
4310
447
457
4629
472
4810
495
67.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.44360902255639095
totalSentences133
uniqueOpeners59
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences115
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, the"
1"Still had a lead."
2"Just waited, his fingers drumming"
3"Then he reached into his"
ratio0.035
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences115
matches
0"She didn't slow down."
1"Her hand found the wall,"
2"Her heart hammered against her"
3"She pushed through it, her"
4"She reached the door and"
5"She jumped, caught the bottom"
6"She slid through it into"
7"Her torch beam cut through"
8"She moved forward, keeping her"
9"She clicked on her torch"
10"She pressed on."
11"She counted at least two"
12"She'd heard rumours, of course."
13"She'd always dismissed them as"
14"They'd disappeared into the crowd,"
15"She had a choice to"
16"Her training said to call"
17"She touched the watch on"
18"She couldn't explain why, but"
19"They reflected it back, golden"
ratio0.296
90.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences115
matches
0"The rain hit the pavement"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
2"She didn't slow down."
3"Her hand found the wall,"
4"Her heart hammered against her"
5"The salt-and-pepper crop of her"
6"Tonight felt different."
7"The alley opened onto a"
8"Steam rose from a vent,"
9"She pushed through it, her"
10"There—a flash of movement near"
11"Quinn sprinted across the courtyard,"
12"She reached the door and"
13"A fire escape ladder hung"
14"She jumped, caught the bottom"
15"The metal groaned under her"
16"A window, cracked open."
17"She slid through it into"
18"Her torch beam cut through"
19"The corridor stretched ahead, lined"
ratio0.739
86.96% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences115
matches
0"To observe, document, report."
1"To follow proper procedure and"
ratio0.017
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She slid through it into a dark corridor that smelled of damp concrete and something else, something sharp and metallic that she couldn't quite place."
1"Stalls lined the edges, constructed from makeshift materials—canvas sheets draped over poles, wooden crates stacked to form counters, glass cases lit by candles…"
2"Others examined objects laid out on the stalls—bottles filled with swirling liquids, jewellery that caught the candlelight in odd ways, what looked like animal …"
3"One of the tunnels on the far side of the platform, marked with a symbol she recognised from the corridor—same strange design, same colours that shouldn't have …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.4682%