| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said instead [instead]" | | 1 | "He settled back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1366 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "constructed" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "flicked" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1353 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.72 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 9 | | Greek | 1 | | Street | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Met | 1 | | Three | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Greek" | | 2 | "Street" | | 3 | "Underground" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.73% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite place" | | 1 | "colours that seemed to shift in the light" | | 2 | "looked like animal bones carved with intr" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1353 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 23.33 | | std | 17.99 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 41 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 47 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was operating" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "There—a flash of movement near the far wall, a door slamming shut." | | 1 | "She clicked on her torch again, the beam catching graffiti on the walls—strange symbols she didn't recognise, painted in colours that seemed to shift in the light." | | 2 | "Stalls lined the edges, constructed from makeshift materials—canvas sheets draped over poles, wooden crates stacked to form counters, glass cases lit by candles that burned with an unusual blue flame." | | 3 | "Others examined objects laid out on the stalls—bottles filled with swirling liquids, jewellery that caught the candlelight in odd ways, what looked like animal bones carved with intricate patterns." | | 4 | "Or as cover for ordinary criminal operations—drugs, stolen property, forged documents." | | 5 | "She touched the watch on her wrist—a habit, a comfort, a reminder of things she refused to forget." | | 6 | "She couldn't explain why, but the same wrongness she'd sensed that night—the night Morris died—hung in the air down here like smoke." | | 7 | "One of the tunnels on the far side of the platform, marked with a symbol she recognised from the corridor—same strange design, same colours that shouldn't have been possible." | | 8 | "Of the feeling that had brought her out tonight, chasing a suspect she'd been watching for weeks—a suspect who might, finally, lead her somewhere useful." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1267 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03472770323599053 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0055248618784530384 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 10.17 | | std | 7.12 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 29 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 67.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.44360902255639095 | | totalSentences | 133 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, the" | | 1 | "Still had a lead." | | 2 | "Just waited, his fingers drumming" | | 3 | "Then he reached into his" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn't slow down." | | 1 | "Her hand found the wall," | | 2 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 3 | "She pushed through it, her" | | 4 | "She reached the door and" | | 5 | "She jumped, caught the bottom" | | 6 | "She slid through it into" | | 7 | "Her torch beam cut through" | | 8 | "She moved forward, keeping her" | | 9 | "She clicked on her torch" | | 10 | "She pressed on." | | 11 | "She counted at least two" | | 12 | "She'd heard rumours, of course." | | 13 | "She'd always dismissed them as" | | 14 | "They'd disappeared into the crowd," | | 15 | "She had a choice to" | | 16 | "Her training said to call" | | 17 | "She touched the watch on" | | 18 | "She couldn't explain why, but" | | 19 | "They reflected it back, golden" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 90.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hit the pavement" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed" | | 2 | "She didn't slow down." | | 3 | "Her hand found the wall," | | 4 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 5 | "The salt-and-pepper crop of her" | | 6 | "Tonight felt different." | | 7 | "The alley opened onto a" | | 8 | "Steam rose from a vent," | | 9 | "She pushed through it, her" | | 10 | "There—a flash of movement near" | | 11 | "Quinn sprinted across the courtyard," | | 12 | "She reached the door and" | | 13 | "A fire escape ladder hung" | | 14 | "She jumped, caught the bottom" | | 15 | "The metal groaned under her" | | 16 | "A window, cracked open." | | 17 | "She slid through it into" | | 18 | "Her torch beam cut through" | | 19 | "The corridor stretched ahead, lined" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 86.96% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "To observe, document, report." | | 1 | "To follow proper procedure and" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 90.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She slid through it into a dark corridor that smelled of damp concrete and something else, something sharp and metallic that she couldn't quite place." | | 1 | "Stalls lined the edges, constructed from makeshift materials—canvas sheets draped over poles, wooden crates stacked to form counters, glass cases lit by candles…" | | 2 | "Others examined objects laid out on the stalls—bottles filled with swirling liquids, jewellery that caught the candlelight in odd ways, what looked like animal …" | | 3 | "One of the tunnels on the far side of the platform, marked with a symbol she recognised from the corridor—same strange design, same colours that shouldn't have …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.071 | | leniency | 0.143 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |