Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXNX7K396XRF96J8JW1ZWB

Run Details

Duration:
2m 27s
Cost:
$0.002549
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the asphalt, turning Soho into a distorted mirror of city lights. Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t care. Her boots splashed over a gutter, sending a spray of dirty water up her pant leg. Water sluiced off the green neon sign for *The Raven's Nest*, leaving a wet streak on the brickwork. She didn’t look up. Her focus was the figure darting between the parked black cabs ahead. "Freeze!" she yelled, her voice cracking slightly before snapping into command. The suspect didn't pause. He didn't even glance back. He pivoted left, cutting toward the rear of the industrial complex. Quinn ran. Her lungs burned, a cold fire in her chest. The weight of her service belt pressed against her hip, a constant reminder of the last eighteen years. She checked her wrist. 0230 hours. Typical hours for a criminal, hellish hours for a cop. She grabbed the lapel of his jacket as they rounded a corner. The man stiffened, his arm jerking back to elbow her in the jaw. Quinn sidestepped, falling into a defensive crouch. She gripped his forearm—muscular, tense. He pulled away, his boot skidding on the wet cobblestones. "Get off me, pig." She lunged again. This time her fingers hooked into the fabric of his shoulder. "Police." They crashed into a chain-link fence. Metal shrieked. The suspect twisted, using his momentum to drive his shoulder into Quinn’s chest. She grunted, the air leaving her in a rush. Her back hit the concrete barrier, rattling her teeth. He scrambled up, hauling himself over the top of the fence. Quinn scrambled after him, scraping her palms raw. Above ground, they were fast. Down here? He had the advantage. The alley narrowed, the brick walls closing in. He reached the end, disappearing around a corner marked with a faded "Exit" sign that wasn't currently working. Quinn skidded to a halt at the corner. She peered around the bend. An abandoned Tube station entrance yawned before her. Graffiti smeared the turnstiles, and the air smelled of stagnant water and mildew. A chain-link gate at the bottom of the stairwell was padlocked. Empty. He was gone. She took a breath, straightening her jacket. The cold air bit at her exposed skin, cutting through the adrenaline. She unholstered her service weapon, giving the chamber a quiet click. "Dispatch?" Static hissed for a moment before a crackling voice answered. "Dispatch here. Go ahead." "Suspect entered an abandoned subway tunnel near Old Street. I need a unit down here, ASAP. Code 4. Lethal force authorized." "Copy that. ETA five minutes. Maintain visual." "Five minutes isn't going to cut it." She snapped the radio off. She looked down the dark stairwell. There was no sign of him coming back up. This was underground Camden, or whatever patch of the city had been swallowed by the earth. Legend had it people sold things down there—enchantments, poisons, favors for the right price. The Veil Market. A thin sliver of light cut across the damp floor. Someone had left a door ajar on a service access hatch halfway down the stairs. Quinn hesitated. She stepped back into the shadows of the concrete pillar, pulling her jacket tighter around herself. She scanned the street above. No sirens yet. Just the rhythmic drum of the rain against the cobblestones. If she went down there, she walked into the unknown. The station was the entrance to a black market where human life was worth less than a bottle of magical ink. Three years ago, her partner, Morris, had gone into a situation just like this. Never came out. The official report said suicide. Quinn knew better. The shadows had a habit of keeping secrets. She watched the hatch. The light from inside was flickering, a sickly yellow. "Detective Quinn?" A voice called from the street above. Tommy. Her source. He was waving at her from the corner of the intersection, holding a yellow umbrella. "You shouldn't be down here alone." He was right. Tommy was good, but he wasn't a detective. He was a former paramedic with olive skin and a penchant for getting into trouble with the wrong crowd. But he knew the underground layout better than any case file. Quinn tucked her radio into her belt pocket and walked out from the pillar. She nodded at Tommy as she passed, keeping her eyes on the stairwell. She didn't slow down. "Check the exits at street level," she said over the rising wind. "If I don't come up in ten minutes, wait for the boys in blue." She descended the stairs, the iron railing cold and slick under her grip. The air grew thicker, the smell of damp rot fading into the scent of ozone and exotic spices. The flickering light ahead grew brighter, revealing rows of makeshift stalls. The Veil Market was in session. She reached the bottom of the stairs, her hand hovering over her weapon. Hundreds of figures—predominantly human, but with the occasional hooded cloak—huddled under flickering gas lamps. Cobwebs draped the shelves that lined the damp walls, filled with jars of glowing liquid, vials of crushed herbs, and jagged stones that pulsed with faint light. She didn't see her target. The crowd parted around her, eyes darting away, terrified of the uniform and the badge. The sound of a bone rattling against stone echoed from the far end of the station. *Click, clack, scrape.* Quinn tightened her grip on her holster. That was the sound of the lock mechanism. She looked for the door he had used. There, past a stall selling dried bat wings and a vender hawking eye of newt, a heavy iron door stood slightly ajar. A sign carved into the wood read *Staff Only*, but the letters were worn smooth, likely carved by hand over decades. She took a step forward. "Quinn?" The voice came from behind her. Quiet, hesitant. Tomás Herrera emerged from the shadows of a pile of crates. He adjusted the silver Saint Christopher medallion hanging at his neck, his expression grim. "You found the hatch," he said. He wiped rain from his brow, his olive skin pale in the dim light. "I did." She kept her voice low. "Do you see him?" Tomás shook his head, glancing around nervously. "He’s fast. That bone token... whoever he bought it from is playing with fire." "Bone token?" "Entrance to the Inner Market," Tomás explained, stepping closer so she had to lower her voice to a whisper. "You need a vertebrae, usually horse or human, to open the barrier between the Outer stalls and the Inner deals. If you don't have it, you're walking into a slaughterhouse." Quinn looked at the open door. Inside, the darkness seemed to reach out, hungry. "Did he have it?" "He pulled it out right before he slipped through. Didn't look like horse." Quinn’s gut tightened. The suspect had a supernatural item. Illegal to own, impossible to trace. "We wait," she said. Tomás crossed his arms, leaning against a crate filled with weirdly shaped fruits. "For backup?" "For him to realize he's made a mistake." She watched the entrance door. "And for a tactical team to arrive upstairs. If he goes in there, he's armed with something more than just a token." They stood in silence, listening to the hum of voices and the occasional cough from the crowd. The green neon sign of *The Raven's Nest* still shone through the grit at the surface, casting an ethereal glow on the grime of the tunnel ceiling. But here, in the belly of the beast, the city lights felt miles away. Quinn checked her watch again. The leather strap had grown cold. 0235. Time was running out. If she didn't go in now, the door would seal, and the trail would go cold forever. "I'm going in," she whispered to Tomás. "You don't have the bone," he countered, his voice dropping an octave. "I don't need it to stop a bad guy. I just need a gun and the will to use it." She stepped away from the safety of the shadows and walked toward the open iron door. The smell inside was thick, a mixture of sulfur and old blood. "Quinn." Her name was a plea. She didn't look back. She gripped the pistol firmly, her jaw set in that sharp line that had gotten her promoted and suspended in equal measure. She crossed the threshold, leaving the safety of the station behind, and plunged into the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.387
leniency0.774
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.41% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"complex"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"complex"
1"weight"
2"reminder"
3"scanned"
4"rhythmic"
5"pulsed"
6"echoed"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords11
totalWords1411
ratio0.008
matches
0"The Raven's Nest"
1"Click, clack, scrape."
2"Staff Only"
3"The Raven's Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1194
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven2
Tube1
Camden1
Veil2
Market2
Morris1
Tommy3
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Tommy"
5"Herrera"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
8"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.956
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1411
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.52
std16.61
cv0.707
sampleLengths
034
134
211
320
445
547
64
714
81
939
1019
1137
1213
1332
144
1530
161
1714
1821
197
2027
2133
2225
2336
2464
2513
2633
2741
2831
2926
3042
316
3254
3320
3419
3566
365
371
3833
3920
4011
4121
422
4349
4414
454
4613
4715
484
4915
97.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"was padlocked"
1"was gone"
2"been swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was flickering"
1"was waving"
2"was running"
85.33% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences149
ratio0.02
matches
0"She gripped his forearm—muscular, tense."
1"Legend had it people sold things down there—enchantments, poisons, favors for the right price."
2"Hundreds of figures—predominantly human, but with the occasional hooded cloak—huddled under flickering gas lamps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1200
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.02
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.009166666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.47
std6.08
cv0.642
sampleLengths
013
15
216
318
44
512
611
74
85
911
102
119
1218
134
142
1510
1612
1713
187
195
2010
214
223
2311
241
256
262
2713
289
299
3011
318
325
332
344
358
3618
378
385
398
4013
4111
421
433
447
4512
4611
471
4810
494
56.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3783783783783784
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners56
28.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just the rhythmic drum of"
ratio0.008
50.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences118
matches
0"Her boots splashed over a"
1"She didn’t look up."
2"Her focus was the figure"
3"she yelled, her voice cracking"
4"He didn't even glance back."
5"He pivoted left, cutting toward"
6"Her lungs burned, a cold"
7"She checked her wrist."
8"She grabbed the lapel of"
9"She gripped his forearm—muscular, tense."
10"He pulled away, his boot"
11"She lunged again."
12"They crashed into a chain-link"
13"She grunted, the air leaving"
14"Her back hit the concrete"
15"He scrambled up, hauling himself"
16"He had the advantage."
17"He reached the end, disappearing"
18"She peered around the bend."
19"He was gone."
ratio0.424
19.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences118
matches
0"Rain slicked the asphalt, turning"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t care."
2"Her boots splashed over a"
3"Water sluiced off the green"
4"She didn’t look up."
5"Her focus was the figure"
6"she yelled, her voice cracking"
7"The suspect didn't pause."
8"He didn't even glance back."
9"He pivoted left, cutting toward"
10"Her lungs burned, a cold"
11"The weight of her service"
12"She checked her wrist."
13"She grabbed the lapel of"
14"The man stiffened, his arm"
15"Quinn sidestepped, falling into a"
16"She gripped his forearm—muscular, tense."
17"He pulled away, his boot"
18"She lunged again."
19"This time her fingers hooked"
ratio0.881
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"If she went down there,"
1"If she didn't go in"
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Cobwebs draped the shelves that lined the damp walls, filled with jars of glowing liquid, vials of crushed herbs, and jagged stones that pulsed with faint light…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she yelled, her voice cracking slightly before snapping into command"
1"he countered, his voice dropping an octave"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she yelled (yell)"
1"She snapped (snap)"
2"Tomás explained (explain)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.258
84.4876%