Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXNYT7563E1CPXXCH8SFMA

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Duration:
58.5s
Cost:
$0.003079
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had driven her inside. That was the only reason Aurora Carter pushed through the door of The Raven's Nest that evening, shaking droplets from her black hair like a dog drying off. She hadn't planned on drinking. The delivery rounds had finished an hour ago, and she had the evening shift at the restaurant tomorrow. But the green neon sign had glowed through the downpour like a beacon, and her jacket was soaked through, and sometimes convenience was the only logic that mattered. The bar was quieter than usual. A Tuesday night in Soho, and The Raven's Nest kept its own hours anyway. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with the slow patience of a man who had learned that everything worth doing took time. He'd told her once that the maps on the walls held memories more than routes. She still didn't understand what he meant, but she'd stopped asking. "The usual?" Silas called out. "Tea, please. I can't afford—" She stopped herself. Old habits. "Just tea." He poured it anyway, sliding the cup across the bar without comment. Aurora wrapped her hands around the ceramic, letting the warmth seep into her fingers. The television above the bar played muted news. Somewhere in the back, a couple argued in hushed, urgent tones. She didn't look. The door opened again. A woman stepped in, shaking an umbrella, muttering something about British weather. She was tall, maybe an inch taller than Aurora, with close-cropped blonde hair and a sharp jawline that seemed familiar in a way Aurora couldn't place. The woman glanced around the bar, her eyes landing on Aurora for a moment, then moving on. Then she stopped. Turned back. "Rory?" The name hit Aurora like cold water. Nobody called her Rory anymore. Only one person had ever called her that—had ever been allowed to. "No," Aurora said, too quickly. "You've mistaken me for someone else." The woman laughed, but it was hollow, uncertain. "Don't be ridiculous. I know that scar." She pointed at her own left wrist, mirroring the placement. "You got it falling off Melissa Prendergast's fence. I was there. I held your hand while you screamed for your mum." Aurora looked down at her wrist. The scar was there, a small crescent, faded now to white against her tan. She pressed her thumb against it instinctively, a gesture she'd never been able to break. "Imogen?" The name came out strangled. "In the flesh." The woman—Imogen—crossed the bar in three long strides and pulled Aurora into a hug that smelled of rain and expensive perfume. She felt thinner than Aurora remembered. Harder. "God, look at you. You're all... grown up." Aurora stood stiff in the embrace, unsure where to put her hands. When Imogen finally released her, she saw the changes she'd missed at first glance. The slight hollowing of cheeks. The fine lines around eyes that had once laughed easily. A small silver cross hanging from her neck that hadn't been there before. "What are you doing in London?" Aurora asked. "I could ask you the same thing. Last I heard, you were in Cardiff. Pre-Law, wasn't it? You were going to be a barrister like your dad." The words landed like stones in water. Aurora gestured at the barstool beside her. "Sit down. Let me get you a drink." "Whisky. Neat." Of course. Imogen had always drunk like the older boys she tried to impress. Aurora poured two glasses from the bottle Silas had left within reach, sliding one across to her old friend. "So," Imogen said, wrapping her fingers around the glass but not drinking. "Cardiff didn't stick?" "It didn't." Aurora kept her voice flat. "What about you? What happened to the—" She hesitated. "What happened to everything?" Imogen laughed that hollow laugh again. "Everything. Right. That's one way to put it." She took a long sip of whisky, then set the glass down with a precise click. "I got married, actually. Did you know that? Last year. He was... he's a good man. A vicar." "A vicar." "God works in mysterious ways, or so he keeps telling me." There was something bitter beneath the joke. "What about you? Anyone special?" "No." "Anyone at all?" "No." The silence stretched between them, filled with the murmur of the television and the soft clink of Silas's glass. Aurora studied her old friend surreptitiously. The Imogen she remembered had been wild, careless, the kind of girl who snuck out to parties and dared Aurora to do things she'd never have done on her own. They'd been inseparable through secondary school, two halves of a whole chaos. Then university had pulled them apart, and phone calls had dwindled, and eventually they'd become photographs in albums and memories that hurt to touch. "You look different," Imogen said finally. "So do you." "I didn't mean—" Imogen stopped, pressed her fingers to her temples. "I'm not judging. I'm just trying to understand. You were always the one with the plan. The one who knew where she was going. And now you're here, in London, serving drinks?" "Delivery," Aurora corrected. "I deliver food. This is just—" She gestured vaguely at the bar. "This is where I live." "You live above a bar?" "I live above a bar owned by a former intelligence operative who may or may not be running an international spy network from his secret back room." Aurora shrugged. "It's a long story." Imogen stared at her. "That's not funny." "It's not meant to be." The television above the bar flickered. Somewhere in the back, the couple had stopped arguing. The silence had grown heavier, more expectant. "I should go," Imogen said, but she didn't move. Her fingers traced the rim of her glass. "I didn't come here to— I just saw you through the window, and I couldn't believe it, and now I don't know why I thought this was a good idea." "Why did you?" "I don't know." Imogen's voice cracked. "I thought maybe if I saw you, if I talked to you, I'd remember who I was. Before all this. Before the wedding and the house and the— God, Rory, I used to be fun." "You were terrifying." "I was terrified. There's a difference." Imogen finally looked at her, really looked, and Aurora saw something in those eyes she recognized. The same hollowed-out feeling. The same desperate search for solid ground. "I thought if I did everything right—got the husband, got the house, got the faith—I'd stop feeling like I was falling. But I just keep falling." Aurora remembered the nights with Evan. The explanations she made to herself. The promises she believed. The slow erosion of everything she thought she was until she didn't recognize herself in the mirror. "It doesn't work," she said quietly. "Doing everything right." "I know." Imogen's voice was barely a whisper. "That's why I came in. Because I saw you, and you looked— You looked like someone who understood." The door opened again. A burst of cold air. Two men in suits stumbled in, laughing loudly, disrupting the heavy atmosphere. Imogen glanced at them, then back at Aurora. "I have to go," she said. "He's waiting. The car— I have to go." Aurora nodded. "It was good seeing you." "Was it?" Imogen stood, pulled her coat tighter. "I don't know what it was. I don't know what I was looking for." She paused at the door. "Are you happy?" The question hung in the air like smoke. Aurora thought about the flat upstairs with its slanted ceilings and drafty windows. She thought about the deliveries through London streets, the anonymity of being just another face in the city. She thought about Silas and his secrets, about the strange comfort of living above a bar where nothing was quite what it seemed. "I'm still here," she said finally. Imogen nodded slowly, as if that meant something. "Yeah. I suppose that's something." The door closed behind her, and Aurora was alone again with her tea and her silence and the maps on the walls that held memories more than routes. She didn't know if she'd ever see Imogen again. She didn't know if she wanted to. But for a moment, in that dimly lit bar with the green neon glowing through the window, she'd seen herself in someone else—the same lost, the same searching, the same quiet desperation to find a reason to stay. She finished her tea. She left money on the counter. She climbed the stairs to her flat, and she didn't look back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Imogen said finally [finally]"
1"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.133
89.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1434
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"disrupting"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"flickered"
5"traced"
6"whisper"
7"disrupting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1426
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount984
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora25
Carter1
Raven2
Nest2
Tuesday1
Soho1
Old1
British1
Rory1
Imogen17
Silas5
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Rory"
5"Imogen"
6"Silas"
7"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
globalScore0.23
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed familiar in a way Aurora couldn't place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1426
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"learned that everything"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean25.93
std23.44
cv0.904
sampleLengths
085
170
25
312
448
559
65
71
824
911
1046
1135
126
1339
1454
158
1627
1722
182
1933
2015
2120
2248
232
2423
251
263
271
2891
296
303
3143
3220
335
3433
357
365
3722
3847
393
4041
413
4259
4333
449
4526
4629
4714
487
4930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"been allowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs178
matches(empty)
79.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences135
ratio0.022
matches
0"Only one person had ever called her that—had ever been allowed to."
1"\"In the flesh.\" The woman—Imogen—crossed the bar in three long strides and pulled Aurora into a hug that smelled of rain and expensive perfume."
2"But for a moment, in that dimly lit bar with the green neon glowing through the window, she'd seen herself in someone else—the same lost, the same searching, the same quiet desperation to find a reason to stay."
85.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount990
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.05656565656565657
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01919191919191919
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.56
std8.24
cv0.781
sampleLengths
06
128
25
318
428
56
614
724
815
911
105
118
122
132
1412
1514
168
1711
183
194
2012
2126
2217
233
242
251
267
275
2812
295
306
318
3217
3321
346
3514
3615
376
3824
396
401
418
4212
4314
445
4510
4613
478
4827
497
47.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences91
matches
0"Somewhere in the back, a"
1"Then she stopped."
2"Only one person had ever"
3"Then university had pulled them"
4"Somewhere in the back, the"
ratio0.055
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences91
matches
0"She hadn't planned on drinking."
1"He'd told her once that"
2"She still didn't understand what"
3"She stopped herself"
4"He poured it anyway, sliding"
5"She didn't look."
6"She was tall, maybe an"
7"She pointed at her own"
8"She pressed her thumb against"
9"She felt thinner than Aurora"
10"She took a long sip"
11"They'd been inseparable through secondary"
12"She gestured vaguely at the"
13"Her fingers traced the rim"
14"she said quietly"
15"She paused at the door"
16"She thought about the deliveries"
17"She thought about Silas and"
18"she said finally"
19"She didn't know if she'd"
ratio0.264
14.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences91
matches
0"The rain had driven her"
1"That was the only reason"
2"She hadn't planned on drinking."
3"The delivery rounds had finished"
4"The bar was quieter than"
5"A Tuesday night in Soho,"
6"Silas stood behind the counter,"
7"He'd told her once that"
8"She still didn't understand what"
9"Silas called out"
10"She stopped herself"
11"He poured it anyway, sliding"
12"Aurora wrapped her hands around"
13"The television above the bar"
14"She didn't look."
15"The door opened again."
16"A woman stepped in, shaking"
17"She was tall, maybe an"
18"The woman glanced around the"
19"The name hit Aurora like"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"But the green neon sign had glowed through the downpour like a beacon, and her jacket was soaked through, and sometimes convenience was the only logic that matt…"
1"Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with the slow patience of a man who had learned that everything worth doing took time."
2"She was tall, maybe an inch taller than Aurora, with close-cropped blonde hair and a sharp jawline that seemed familiar in a way Aurora couldn't place."
3"The woman glanced around the bar, her eyes landing on Aurora for a moment, then moving on."
4"The Imogen she remembered had been wild, careless, the kind of girl who snuck out to parties and dared Aurora to do things she'd never have done on her own."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.033
83.4348%