Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXP161KJGXVCDPXEGQFNZ2

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Duration:
1m 19s
Cost:
$0.004048
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of rain-soaked moss and something sweeter—something that felt almost mortal and not at all mortal at once. The trio stepped through a fringe of ivy that clung to a gate no one remembered closing, and the world shifted. The Fae Grove opened like a breath exhaled gently, a clearing that hadn’t existed yesterday in any map. Old oaks rose in a circle, their bark etched with runes that glowed faint green beneath the shadows of Richmond Park. Between them, standing stones—ancient oak-formed sentinels—lined a horseshoe path, their surfaces warm to the touch, humming with a quiet syllable you could hear if you listened hard enough. Time did not behave here; it tugged at its own sleeve and forgot the hour it wore. A single hour inside could braid into minutes or stretch into days outside. Aurora Carter moved first, careful or perhaps bored with being careful, the Fae-Forged Blade resting at her side like a promise kept too long. The blade felt impossibly light in her grip, moonsilver cool and almost alive under her fingertips. The Heartstone Pendant lay against her chest, a rough crimson seed pressed against her skin, and it pulsed with a patient warmth that spread through her like a slow river beneath the skin. Nyx stepped behind, a living silhouette that gathered in the left half of her vision and dissolved in the right. The shade wasn’t a shadow tonight so much as a memory made audible—soft, a whisper in the throat, a rustle of cloth that didn’t touch anything. Their presence bent the air in small ways, enough to loosen leaves from their stems as if the grove itself exhaled around them. Isolde Varga moved with the grave grace of someone who knew too much and kept most of it locked away. Her silver hair spilled in a long line against her pale skin, catching the faint amber glow that bled from the runes and the moss. She spoke in a low, almost musical cadence, and the words came threaded with riddles she never asked you to solve for the sake of cleverness, only to test whether you’d listen at all. “The grove remembers every footstep, and it forgets nothing,” Isolde began, hands folded, eyes half-closed as if the secret she spoke were a breath away from slipping. Nyx curved their shoulders, a shadow skimming the edge of a root, and whispered, “The boundary quarrels with our steps. It wants to know what we want most.” Aurora’s grip tightened on the blade. “We want to get through,” she said, but the words felt too small for what their bodies already knew. The air thrummed with something like a palmed heartbeat, a rhythm that rose from the ground and threaded through the veins. The ground at their feet shifted. The standing stones hummed a deeper note, a chorus of rough voices from long ago. Runes sparked to life along the edges of the stones—tendrils of pale light that stretched toward the trio as if inviting them to touch the glow and be drawn inside the same current. Rory stepped closer to the nearest stone, noticing how the runes formed a language of warmth that wasn’t spoken so much as felt. The pendant on her chest warmed, a slow pulse against her sternum. It wasn’t fear; it was a mapping system waking inside her blood. She kept her voice even, a line of steel over silk. “The Veil holds,” she said, though the words sounded almost ceremonial rather than a report. Isolde withdrew a step and studied the space between shadows and light, as if listening to a song that never fully arrived. “The Boundary loves precision,” she murmured, almost to herself, and then straightened, eyes bright as frost at moonrise. “Look where the light refuses to go. There, your answer hides.” Nyx moved, a ripple along the air, and their eyes—faintly violet and almost too bright to be truly human—scanned the undergrowth. “There,” Nyx said, pointing a shadow-leaning finger toward a patch of ferns that glowed with a faint, orangish incandescence. It wasn’t firelight; it was something purer, a glow that looked almost like the outbreath of the earth itself. They stepped into that glow and found the path beyond, a tunnel carved of living wood, the walls breathing as if the trees were lungs. The path curved, and the air shifted from the perfumed breath of wildflowers to something heavier, a scent that hung around the tongue like copper and wine. It was the hunger of the place, the promise of abundance with teeth. Nyx slipped between two trunks and reappeared a stride ahead, their movement almost seamless, a suggestion of motion in the air that you could only see if you watched the air itself. The corridor broadened, and the ceiling bent into a vaulted canopy of intertwined branches, leaves like small stained glass windows letting through shards of amber and green. Isolde’s gaze didn’t waver from the path, but the lines around her mouth softened into a thoughtful crease. “The grove keeps its doors, but it does not lock its doors well,” she said softly. “The door only opens for those who bring the right hunger and the right mercy.” The hum grew louder, and with it came a scent that surprised Rory—the memory of meals long ago, the aroma of orchards bursting with fruit, the glint of bottled wine left uncorked in the sun. It wasn’t tainted by fear, not exactly; it carried a sense of invitation as if someone were laying a feast before them and asking them to sit down and stay a while. Rory raised the blade a fraction, not in threat but in readiness. The moon-silver of the blade caught the amber light and cast a pale crescent across the moss. The weight was still there, but it had learned her hand, and she had learned its quiet, patient voice. The deeper they went, the more the grove revealed itself as a paradox: an ancient place that looked nothing like a ruin and everything like a living yearbook. The trees wore paint—runes etched into bark that never wore away, leaves that shifted color with the mood of the moment, branches that rearranged themselves into bridges when the foot traffic pressed too hard on the old earth. A soft ripple of sound passed through the aisle of trees, a chorus of soft sighs. The Whispering Woods had a language, and the voice traveled on the breeze instead of along the tongue. It spoke not to their ears alone but through the bones of the grove, and Isolde’s eyes gleamed with the recognition of a familiar tune. “The grove has its own memories of you,” Isolde finally said, voice low. “It will show you what you have become when you listen.” Then a light did something unexpected: it leapt from one rune to another, a delicate aurora that traced the path ahead. The runes formed a corridor of light, spiraling slightly as if guiding them along a river of weathered memory. The Heartstone Pendant against Rory’s chest brightened in a slow, patient rhythm, and the pulse answered the pulse of the grove as though the two were locked in a mutual heartbeat. Nyx drifted closer to Rory and touched the edge of a stone with a smoky fingertip, not quite touching, more like feeling for a breath in a corner of space. “It isn’t a door you walk through,” Nyx whispered, though the words carried clearly, as if the grove heard them too. “It’s a tide you ride.” Rory’s breath came a touch faster. The Fae-Forged Blade—normally a companion of stillness—felt as if it thickened with expectation, the blade’s edge catching a new glint, a promise of possibilities beyond wards and veils. The weapon’s power seemed to gather around her, almost in acknowledgement of the path ahead. The corridor opened into a larger chamber, not empty but layered with things that did not belong to one era alone: a table carved from a single root, bowls of fruit that shimmered with dew that tasted faintly of mint and rain, and a pool of water whose surface held a map of the grove’s memories, stopping and starting as if a page were being turned. Isolde stepped up to the pool first, her face half-lit by the water’s reflection. “Ask,” she said simply, her tone both invitation and dare. “Ask what the grove wants you to know.” Nyx hovered at the pool’s edge, their shadow presence stretching out over the surface until it felt as if they could pluck the ripples from the water and hold them in hand. The pool’s glow shifted, showing a succession of brief visions: a marketplace of impossible fruits, a banquet table set with the same dishes that the grove remembered, a crown of ivy resting on a stone, a path of moonlight that led into a doorway carved in air. Rory spoke, her voice steady even as the weight of what she saw pressed at the corners of her mind. “Is this what the Veil protects us from or what it hides from us?” She looked at Isolde, who answered not with certainty but with a radiance of possible truths. Isolde’s lips moved, and the words came quiet, almost a whisper of wind through leaves. “Truth can be bright, but it burns when you look at it too long. The grove asks you to choose what you walk away from and what you take forward.” The Heartstone Pendant pulsed again, a subtle, insisting glow that traveled across Rory’s sternum and settled in her eyes, turning them from blue to something more determined, a pale storm inside. She stepped closer to the pool, green light catching on the edge of the blade’s moon-metal sheath. Nyx spoke then, a half-whisper that seemed to pass through the stones rather than words spoken aloud. “The boundary is hungry tonight. It feeds on risk and resolve.” A ripple-tremor ran through the chamber as the ground beneath their feet hummed at a deeper note, a reminder that this place existed at a margin—between Earth and the Fae Realms, between the human memory of trees and the ancient memory the grove kept for itself. The Veil was near; the edge between Hel and Earth whispered through the ground as the grove exhaled a scent that felt like the first rain after a drought. Rory kept her eyes on the pool. The image shifted, not a vision but a memory playing in reverse: a moment when the grove had welcomed travelers it could not trust, a corner of the bark fence that glowed with a different hue, a warning that came too late to matter. She thought of the Hel portal the pendant could sense near such places and of the hunger that a place like Dymas might ship forward, the idea of a city built on excess, where every notable thing came with a price. “Keep moving,” she said, the words crisp. “We came here to learn how to walk through.” Isolde nodded, though the look in her eyes warned against arrogance. “The grove does not forgive careless footsteps,” she said. “Careful breaths, careful steps.” The group advanced along a corridor formed by living branches, the canopy above curving into a vaulted ceiling that opened onto a night sky full of unfamiliar constellations, their light pale and blue, like frost on glass. The floor beneath shifted again, not a shift of earth but a subtle rearrangement of the grove’s mind, a reminder that they might be here as guests, but the grove did not forget what you intend to keep. Then a whisper brushed against Rory’s ear, not a voice but a notion pressed gently into her inner ear, the sense of a memory that wasn’t her own. She turned her gaze toward a pair of doors formed by intertwined roots that had not existed before. The doors stood ajar just enough to show an interior beyond—an inner chamber that breathed, and in that breath there came a sound like a distant hunger, a sound not spoken but felt. Nyx drifted closer to a crack in the roots where the air carried a sharper sting, a scent of iron and honey both, the sort of smell that suggested something was consuming and yet, paradoxically, offering nourishment to anyone who dared to step inside. They did not step through; they waited, watching the others with a patient vigilance. “We are not here to eat,” Isolde said softly, almost to the air, the corners of her mouth lifting in a dry smile. “We are here to touch and measure what touches us.” Rory’s gaze drifted to the Heartstone Pendant again, to the warm glow that persisted even as the grove drew them deeper. She shifted the blade in her grip, not to threaten but to breathe life into the metal, to prove to herself that it remained hers to wield in this strange place. A childlike peal rang somewhere within the walls—like a bell that had learned to ring in a whisper rather than a shout. It came and went, and with it a green glow crawled along the doors, tracing patterns in the air as if the doors themselves were writing an invitation. The grove’s living architecture pulsed in time with the pendant, and Rory felt her heartbeat align to that rhythm, a drum against the chest of a storm she hadn’t summoned. “We go forward,” Rory finally said, a firm cadence that surprised even her. “We keep what we need and leave what we don’t.” Nyx laughed softly, not with mirth but with relief and something like relief’s cousin, curiosity. “Forward then. The shadows thin as we step.” Isolde inclined her head slightly, eyes narrowing as if listening to a chorus she alone could hear. “The grove asks a vow,” she declared, her voice clear as a bell in a quiet hall. “What you choose will shape what you become.” Rory looked from Nyx to Isolde, and then to the doors that trembled at their breath. Her fingers tightened on the hilt of the blade, then relaxed. The blade hummed as if agreeing with her decision, that quiet, tireless agreement a blade’s only true allegiance. The doors opened wider, not by force but by a gentle yielding, and beyond lay a space that defied simple description—a chamber of air and light that bent like glass, where the walls shimmered with reflected scenes of trees, streams, and stars that did not match the sky outside. Hemmed with vines that glowed the color of dawn, the room exhaled a perfume that reminded Rory of home and of a feast she’d never eaten, a memory of which the grove seemed to be offering a taste. A figure stood at the far edge of the room—a silhouette of a person whose outline suggested both a living creature and a dream, someone the grove had kept safe for a time before the travelers arrived. The figure stepped forward, and the air shifted to a different note of sound, closer now to music than to wind. “Isolde,” the silhouette intoned, and the voice carried no malice, only a patient curiosity. “The mercy you bring is unusual in a place like this.” Isolde inclined her head. “Mercy is not weakness,” she said. “It is the heavy truth that binds the truth you seek to the truth you fear.” The figure stepped into the light, and the light did not fall on any particular feature. It was the absence of a face that startled Rory—the absence of the conclave of eyes that might judge them. The figure’s presence felt like a doorway without a doorframe, a knowing without memory. The room hummed again, this time with a softer, more intimate resonance. The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, and Rory felt the weight of every decision she had borne pressing into her chest, as if the pendant were guiding her toward a choice she hadn’t realized she was meant to make. “Time here moves by a different clock,” Isolde said, her voice almost a caress. “If you listen, you’ll hear it like a breath. If you don’t, you’ll hear nothing but noise.” Nyx stepped forward, the shadow of their form stretching toward the light and then curling away again as if the light did not quite know what to do with a being of shadow. “The room wants a pledge,” they said, low enough that it might have been a whisper carried on the wind. “A pledge and a passage.” Rory’s gaze drifted to a shallow pool at the edge of the chamber, where the water’s surface trembled as if it were a throat about to sing. The pool reflected her face, the blade, and the pendant—a single moment split into three reflections, three versions of her staring back as if from three different lives. The image in the pool shifted: her own features, but not her life. A life where she stayed in Cardiff, studied the law and never fled. A life where she stayed in London, chasing a different dream. A life where she never found Eva or left behind Evan, a life that would become something other than hers. The image flickered and then settled into a single version, the one that felt most true even if it was not the one she expected. Rory lowered her gaze to the pool, watched the ripple slow, and then watched as the surface steadied. The stone at the pool’s edge—no ordinary stone, but a small, carved disk of obsidian—caught the pendant’s glow and intensified it. Isolde spoke again, almost to the stone and not to them. “There is a rift here, a seam where the Veil is thin. The Heartstone will guide you past the seam if you trust what it is telling you about your own hunger.” Rory looked at Isolde, then at Nyx, and then back to the pool’s surface. The reflection showed a future she hadn’t decided to choose yet, a future in which the Fae Grove could either become a sanctuary or a snare. The potential danger lay in becoming used to miracles; the danger also lay in turning away from them when they mattered most. The blade in Rory’s hand grew incredibly quiet, as if even moonsilver respected the gravity of the moment. She pressed the blade against the edge of the cold stone that lined the pool, then drew it back a fraction. The edge glowed with the pale light of moonlight and then sank into the stone as if cutting air rather than rock. The room’s light flared once, twice, and the door flush with the chamber’s warmth opened a little wider, revealing a corridor beyond lined with more roots and light that felt older than the grove itself. The pulse of the pendant steadied, not just warm but purposeful now, guiding them toward a choice. “Step through,” Rory said, voice even but carried by the blade’s earnest cold. “If we’re meant to learn, we won’t learn by standing still.” Nyx held their ground only by sleight of shadow, which was to say, they did not hold at all; they kept shifting, ready to disappear and reappear where the need was greatest. They tilted their head toward Rory, not a gesture of surrender but a signal of agreement. Isolde’s silver hair moved with a small, almost approving nod. “Very well,” she said, her voice a sealed riddle opening in a careful breath. “Walk the seam, and keep your covenants light as dawn. The grove will keep you honest.” The corridor’s air thickened with the weight of possibility as they stepped forward. It wasn’t fear that pressed against their chests now; it was resonance—an alignment of intention, of a shared purpose, of a willingness to walk into something together and accept what might come. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a warmth that was not a gift but a ledger, reminding them of what they stood to gain and what they might risk. The world beyond the corridor widened into a hall of shifting light, where the walls seemed to breathe in time with their steps. The floor bore a lattice of roots that rose and fell as if the earth itself were walking beneath them, a soft lullaby conducted by some ancient, patient hand. The soundscape shifted from the grove’s whisper to a chorus of distant bells, then back again, a loop of sound that felt both ancient and intimately personal. But the most startling thing was the sense that they were not alone in this hall; there were presences here, not seen yet. Nyx’s breath caught, a short, almost astonished exhale. They spoke in a voice that carried both reverence and warning. “The passage accepts you, but it does not forgive lightness.” Rory moved forward, the blade’s glow guiding the way, Isolde close behind with a measured pace that never betrayed fear, and Nyx hovering in the shade between light and darkness, watching, always watching. The grove’s hum rose again, a deeper note that seemed to answer the pendant’s rhythm, and the trio crossed into the deeper heart of the strange place. What they found there wasn’t a single thing so much as a collection of truths—the kind that arrive not as speeches but as glints of understanding, as moments of shared breath, as the kind of quiet that comes after a storm and before a new one. The roots wound together into a bridge, a natural arch that carried them from the chamber into a deeper sanctum. The air tasted of orchard fruit and rain-soaked earth, of the first bite of a perfectly ripe pear and the last note of a clockwork memory. They stepped onto the bridge and looked down to a pool of still water that reflected not faces but a tapestry of possibilities, each thread a path not yet taken. “Do we take the path that promises plenty or the path that promises truth?” Isolde asked, though the question wasn’t to any one of them, but to the grove itself. Nyx answered in a whisper that didn’t belong to any mouth. “The path you fear to choose is the one that chooses you.” Rory angled her head, listening to the tiny creak of wood, the faint chorus of something like a distant choir, and the subtle tempering of the pendant’s warmth against her chest. The blade’s edge hovered just above the root-bridge’s surface, catching the light in a way that made it seem both a tool and a promise at once. “We didn’t come here for simple wonder,” Rory said, her voice steady, “and we won’t leave unchanged.” The words, once spoken, bent and settled into the air like the last note of a held breath. The grove’s light danced a little faster, as if pleased by a shared decision. The harmony between the group, forged in this strange space, suggested a pact of sorts—to walk forward together, to respect the living memory of the place, and to use what they found to keep the Veil intact without becoming enslaved by it. As they pressed deeper, the chamber opened to reveal a corridor that seemed to lean into a far-off glow, a pale amber that looked almost like the warm season rather than the cold, precise cold of Hel. The Heir of Dymas—the appetite for abundance, the banquet that could devour a world if given breath—lingered in their minds as a cautionary silhouette only. The grove offered no appetite for destruction, only a test of restraint. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a stronger glow now, and Rory realized it wasn’t merely warmth but guidance—an invitation to step toward a threshold that might redefine them. The Fae-Forged Blade lay still in her hand, but its presence was a constant reminder that wards could be cut if one blinked at the right moment, that power here wasn’t an aura to wield but a discipline to balance. The group moved as a unit, each step a sentence in a paragraph they were writing for the grove’s eyes alone. The sky beyond the woven canopy shifted into a silent, star-skeined vault, and a distant note—somewhere between a chime and a sigh—drifted down the corridor. The hall widened again, and the trio found themselves standing before an arch carved from the living wood itself, an arched doorway whose threshold glowed with the soft, patient crimson of the pendant. Beyond the arch, the grove let out a breath they felt in their bones, a calm that held the promise of arrival and the threat of consequence in careful balance. The invitation lay before them—not a map, not a decree, but a choice: to step through and become part of something older than memory, or to turn back and carry the act of stepping as a memory of their own. Isolde pressed her palm to Rory’s shoulder for a fraction, a gesture so brief it might have been nothing at all, were the grove any less ancient. “Consider what your heart is prepared to carry and what you are willing to leave behind,” she said, her voice soft as spider silk. Nyx drifted closer, a whisper of shadow against the glow. “The seam listens. It remembers what you want most and what you’re afraid of losing.” Rory looked at the others, and in their faces she saw the same quiet resolve that had carried her through every hallway she had ever crossed—the resolve to walk through even when the way forward was not yet lit, to take the blade’s cold comfort and turn it into a shield not for herself alone but for the three of them together. She ran her fingers along the blade’s edge, felt the faint tug of its moonlight, and then, with a final breath that tasted of rain and iron, stepped through. The arch dissolved into a corridor of light and sound and heat, and the grove’s heart beat in time with theirs as if the world itself held its breath for a moment longer, letting them know that what lay beyond would redefine them all. The light folded around them, not blinding but bright in a way that made the eyes quicken and the senses sharpen, and then they moved, stepping into whatever lay past the threshold, into the unknown where wonder and unease rode side by side, where a promise waited and a danger watched, and where, for a breath of a moment, the grove was still and then, suddenly, not.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Isolde finally said [finally]"
2"she said simply [simply]"
3"Isolde said softly [softly]"
4"Rory finally said [finally]"
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leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
87.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4468
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"gently"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count3
3
adverb"slightly"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"perfectly"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"truly"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
4"very"
5"perfectly"
6"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4468
totalAiIsms63
found
0
word"etched"
count2
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"almost alive"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count5
4
word"warmth"
count6
5
word"whisper"
count9
6
word"grave"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count4
8
word"silk"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"glint"
count2
11
word"sense of"
count2
12
word"weight"
count4
13
word"familiar"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count2
16
word"determined"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count3
18
word"reminder"
count3
19
word"footsteps"
count1
20
word"tracing"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count2
22
word"resonance"
count2
23
word"flickered"
count1
24
word"sanctuary"
count1
25
word"potential"
count1
26
word"measured"
count1
27
word"shared breath"
count1
28
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"sentinels"
2"almost alive"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"grave"
7"pulse"
8"silk"
9"scanned"
10"glint"
11"sense of"
12"weight"
13"familiar"
14"traced"
15"shimmered"
16"determined"
17"resolve"
18"reminder"
19"footsteps"
20"tracing"
21"trembled"
22"resonance"
23"flickered"
24"sanctuary"
25"potential"
26"measured"
27"shared breath"
28"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences176
matches
0"t with relief"
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences176
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tend to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4423
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions38
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions120
wordCount3973
uniqueNames26
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae6
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Heartstone7
Pendant7
Varga1
Nyx19
Aurora2
Isolde21
Rory29
Whispering1
Woods1
Earth2
Realms1
Veil2
Hel3
Dymas2
Cardiff1
London1
Eva1
Evan1
Heir1
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Blade"
3"Pendant"
4"Varga"
5"Nyx"
6"Aurora"
7"Isolde"
8"Rory"
9"Earth"
10"Dymas"
11"Eva"
12"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Heartstone"
4"Whispering"
5"Woods"
6"Cardiff"
7"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences170
glossingSentenceCount16
matches
0"something like a palmed heartbeat, a rhythm"
1"as if inviting them to touch the glow and be drawn inside the same current"
2"as if listening to a song that never fully arrived"
3"as if guiding them along a river of weathered memory"
4"not quite touching, more like feeling for a breath in a corner of space"
5"whisper that seemed to pass through the stones rather than words spoken aloud"
6"felt like the first rain after a drough"
7"something like relief’s cousin, curiosity"
8"as if listening to a chorus she alone could hear"
9"as if agreeing with her decision, that quiet, tireless agreement a blade’s only true allegiance"
10"felt like a doorway without a doorframe"
11"not quite know what to do with a being of shadow"
12"as if cutting air rather than rock"
13"note that seemed to answer the pendant’s rhythm, and the trio crossed into the deeper heart of the strange place"
14"something like a distant choir, and the subt"
15"corridor that seemed to lean into a far-off glow, a pale amber that looked almost like the warm season rather than the cold, precise cold of Hel"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches20
per1kWords4.522
wordCount4423
matches
0"not in threat but in readiness"
1"not to their ears alone but through the bones of the grove"
2"not empty but layered with things"
3"not with certainty but with a radiance of possible truths"
4"not a vision but a memory playing in reverse: a moment"
5"not a shift of earth but a subtle rearrangement of the grove’s mind, a reminder"
6"not a voice but a notion pressed gently into her inner ear, the sense of a m"
7"not spoken but felt"
8"not to threaten but to breathe life into the metal, to prove to herself"
9"not with mirth but with relief"
10"not by force but by a gentle yielding"
11"not just warm but purposeful now, guiding them toward a choice"
12"not a gesture of surrender but a signal of agreement"
13"not a gift but a ledger, reminding them of what they stood to gain"
14"not as speeches but as glints of understanding, as moments of shared breath, as"
15"not faces but a tapestry of possibilities, each thread a path not yet take"
16"not a map, not a decree, but a choice: to step through"
17"not a decree, but a choice: to step through"
18"not for herself alone but for the three of them together"
19"not blinding but bright in a way"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
72.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs82
mean53.94
std21.76
cv0.403
sampleLengths
041
197
273
369
479
527
628
746
854
958
1015
1151
1259
1365
1459
1549
1667
1748
1866
1959
2024
2171
2256
2349
2466
2532
2679
2750
2845
2948
3028
3175
3292
3316
3424
3575
3679
3758
3833
3952
4080
4123
4223
4342
4445
4587
4658
4725
4826
4950
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences176
matches
0"were locked"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs592
matches
0"were laying"
1"were being"
2"was consuming"
3"were writing"
4"were guiding"
5"were walking"
6"were writing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount30
semicolonCount10
flaggedSentences33
totalSentences199
ratio0.166
matches
0"The air tasted of rain-soaked moss and something sweeter—something that felt almost mortal and not at all mortal at once."
1"Between them, standing stones—ancient oak-formed sentinels—lined a horseshoe path, their surfaces warm to the touch, humming with a quiet syllable you could hear if you listened hard enough."
2"Time did not behave here; it tugged at its own sleeve and forgot the hour it wore."
3"The shade wasn’t a shadow tonight so much as a memory made audible—soft, a whisper in the throat, a rustle of cloth that didn’t touch anything."
4"Runes sparked to life along the edges of the stones—tendrils of pale light that stretched toward the trio as if inviting them to touch the glow and be drawn inside the same current."
5"It wasn’t fear; it was a mapping system waking inside her blood."
6"Nyx moved, a ripple along the air, and their eyes—faintly violet and almost too bright to be truly human—scanned the undergrowth."
7"It wasn’t firelight; it was something purer, a glow that looked almost like the outbreath of the earth itself."
8"The hum grew louder, and with it came a scent that surprised Rory—the memory of meals long ago, the aroma of orchards bursting with fruit, the glint of bottled wine left uncorked in the sun."
9"It wasn’t tainted by fear, not exactly; it carried a sense of invitation as if someone were laying a feast before them and asking them to sit down and stay a while."
10"The trees wore paint—runes etched into bark that never wore away, leaves that shifted color with the mood of the moment, branches that rearranged themselves into bridges when the foot traffic pressed too hard on the old earth."
11"The Fae-Forged Blade—normally a companion of stillness—felt as if it thickened with expectation, the blade’s edge catching a new glint, a promise of possibilities beyond wards and veils."
12"A ripple-tremor ran through the chamber as the ground beneath their feet hummed at a deeper note, a reminder that this place existed at a margin—between Earth and the Fae Realms, between the human memory of trees and the ancient memory the grove kept for itself."
13"The Veil was near; the edge between Hel and Earth whispered through the ground as the grove exhaled a scent that felt like the first rain after a drought."
14"The doors stood ajar just enough to show an interior beyond—an inner chamber that breathed, and in that breath there came a sound like a distant hunger, a sound not spoken but felt."
15"They did not step through; they waited, watching the others with a patient vigilance."
16"A childlike peal rang somewhere within the walls—like a bell that had learned to ring in a whisper rather than a shout."
17"The doors opened wider, not by force but by a gentle yielding, and beyond lay a space that defied simple description—a chamber of air and light that bent like glass, where the walls shimmered with reflected scenes of trees, streams, and stars that did not match the sky outside."
18"A figure stood at the far edge of the room—a silhouette of a person whose outline suggested both a living creature and a dream, someone the grove had kept safe for a time before the travelers arrived."
19"It was the absence of a face that startled Rory—the absence of the conclave of eyes that might judge them."
20"The pool reflected her face, the blade, and the pendant—a single moment split into three reflections, three versions of her staring back as if from three different lives."
21"The stone at the pool’s edge—no ordinary stone, but a small, carved disk of obsidian—caught the pendant’s glow and intensified it."
22"The potential danger lay in becoming used to miracles; the danger also lay in turning away from them when they mattered most."
23"Nyx held their ground only by sleight of shadow, which was to say, they did not hold at all; they kept shifting, ready to disappear and reappear where the need was greatest."
24"It wasn’t fear that pressed against their chests now; it was resonance—an alignment of intention, of a shared purpose, of a willingness to walk into something together and accept what might come."
25"But the most startling thing was the sense that they were not alone in this hall; there were presences here, not seen yet."
26"What they found there wasn’t a single thing so much as a collection of truths—the kind that arrive not as speeches but as glints of understanding, as moments of shared breath, as the kind of quiet that comes after a storm and before a new one."
27"The harmony between the group, forged in this strange space, suggested a pact of sorts—to walk forward together, to respect the living memory of the place, and to use what they found to keep the Veil intact without becoming enslaved by it."
28"The Heir of Dymas—the appetite for abundance, the banquet that could devour a world if given breath—lingered in their minds as a cautionary silhouette only."
29"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a stronger glow now, and Rory realized it wasn’t merely warmth but guidance—an invitation to step toward a threshold that might redefine them."
30"The sky beyond the woven canopy shifted into a silent, star-skeined vault, and a distant note—somewhere between a chime and a sigh—drifted down the corridor."
31"The invitation lay before them—not a map, not a decree, but a choice: to step through and become part of something older than memory, or to turn back and carry the act of stepping as a memory of their own."
32"Rory looked at the others, and in their faces she saw the same quiet resolve that had carried her through every hallway she had ever crossed—the resolve to walk through even when the way forward was not yet lit, to take the blade’s cold comfort and turn it into a shield not for herself alone but for the three of them together."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4018
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"ancient oak-formed sentinels—"
1"silent, star-skeined vault,"
adverbCount138
adverbRatio0.03434544549527128
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.007715281234444997
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean22.23
std11.23
cv0.505
sampleLengths
020
121
218
321
428
517
613
724
816
933
1020
1126
1223
1320
1425
1534
1627
1728
186
1919
2021
216
2215
2333
2423
2512
2612
2711
2815
2922
3018
3111
3221
3319
3419
3525
3627
3713
3832
3927
4018
4116
4215
4335
4432
4512
4617
4719
4828
4938
29.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats40
diversityRatio0.18592964824120603
totalSentences199
uniqueOpeners37
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences174
matches
0"Then a light did something"
1"Then a whisper brushed against"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences174
matches
0"Their presence bent the air"
1"Her silver hair spilled in"
2"She spoke in a low,"
3"she said, but the words"
4"It wasn’t fear; it was"
5"She kept her voice even,"
6"she said, though the words"
7"she murmured, almost to herself,"
8"It wasn’t firelight; it was"
9"They stepped into that glow"
10"It was the hunger of"
11"she said softly"
12"It wasn’t tainted by fear,"
13"It spoke not to their"
14"she said simply, her tone"
15"She looked at Isolde, who"
16"She stepped closer to the"
17"She thought of the Hel"
18"she said, the words crisp"
19"She turned her gaze toward"
ratio0.201
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount164
totalSentences174
matches
0"The air tasted of rain-soaked"
1"The trio stepped through a"
2"The Fae Grove opened like"
3"Time did not behave here;"
4"A single hour inside could"
5"Aurora Carter moved first, careful"
6"The blade felt impossibly light"
7"The Heartstone Pendant lay against"
8"Nyx stepped behind, a living"
9"The shade wasn’t a shadow"
10"Their presence bent the air"
11"Isolde Varga moved with the"
12"Her silver hair spilled in"
13"She spoke in a low,"
14"Isolde began, hands folded, eyes"
15"Nyx curved their shoulders, a"
16"Aurora’s grip tightened on the"
17"she said, but the words"
18"The air thrummed with something"
19"The ground at their feet"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences145
technicalSentenceCount46
matches
0"The air tasted of rain-soaked moss and something sweeter—something that felt almost mortal and not at all mortal at once."
1"Old oaks rose in a circle, their bark etched with runes that glowed faint green beneath the shadows of Richmond Park."
2"Nyx stepped behind, a living silhouette that gathered in the left half of her vision and dissolved in the right."
3"Their presence bent the air in small ways, enough to loosen leaves from their stems as if the grove itself exhaled around them."
4"Her silver hair spilled in a long line against her pale skin, catching the faint amber glow that bled from the runes and the moss."
5"Runes sparked to life along the edges of the stones—tendrils of pale light that stretched toward the trio as if inviting them to touch the glow and be drawn ins…"
6"It wasn’t firelight; it was something purer, a glow that looked almost like the outbreath of the earth itself."
7"The hum grew louder, and with it came a scent that surprised Rory—the memory of meals long ago, the aroma of orchards bursting with fruit, the glint of bottled …"
8"The deeper they went, the more the grove revealed itself as a paradox: an ancient place that looked nothing like a ruin and everything like a living yearbook."
9"The trees wore paint—runes etched into bark that never wore away, leaves that shifted color with the mood of the moment, branches that rearranged themselves int…"
10"Then a light did something unexpected: it leapt from one rune to another, a delicate aurora that traced the path ahead."
11"The runes formed a corridor of light, spiraling slightly as if guiding them along a river of weathered memory."
12"The Heartstone Pendant against Rory’s chest brightened in a slow, patient rhythm, and the pulse answered the pulse of the grove as though the two were locked in…"
13"The Fae-Forged Blade—normally a companion of stillness—felt as if it thickened with expectation, the blade’s edge catching a new glint, a promise of possibiliti…"
14"The corridor opened into a larger chamber, not empty but layered with things that did not belong to one era alone: a table carved from a single root, bowls of f…"
15"The pool’s glow shifted, showing a succession of brief visions: a marketplace of impossible fruits, a banquet table set with the same dishes that the grove reme…"
16"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed again, a subtle, insisting glow that traveled across Rory’s sternum and settled in her eyes, turning them from blue to something m…"
17"The image shifted, not a vision but a memory playing in reverse: a moment when the grove had welcomed travelers it could not trust, a corner of the bark fence t…"
18"The group advanced along a corridor formed by living branches, the canopy above curving into a vaulted ceiling that opened onto a night sky full of unfamiliar c…"
19"The doors stood ajar just enough to show an interior beyond—an inner chamber that breathed, and in that breath there came a sound like a distant hunger, a sound…"
20"Nyx drifted closer to a crack in the roots where the air carried a sharper sting, a scent of iron and honey both, the sort of smell that suggested something was…"
21"Rory’s gaze drifted to the Heartstone Pendant again, to the warm glow that persisted even as the grove drew them deeper."
22"It came and went, and with it a green glow crawled along the doors, tracing patterns in the air as if the doors themselves were writing an invitation."
23"Isolde inclined her head slightly, eyes narrowing as if listening to a chorus she alone could hear."
24"The blade hummed as if agreeing with her decision, that quiet, tireless agreement a blade’s only true allegiance."
25"The doors opened wider, not by force but by a gentle yielding, and beyond lay a space that defied simple description—a chamber of air and light that bent like g…"
26"Hemmed with vines that glowed the color of dawn, the room exhaled a perfume that reminded Rory of home and of a feast she’d never eaten, a memory of which the g…"
27"The Heartstone Pendant grew warmer, and Rory felt the weight of every decision she had borne pressing into her chest, as if the pendant were guiding her toward …"
28"Nyx stepped forward, the shadow of their form stretching toward the light and then curling away again as if the light did not quite know what to do with a being…"
29"The pool reflected her face, the blade, and the pendant—a single moment split into three reflections, three versions of her staring back as if from three differ…"
30"A life where she never found Eva or left behind Evan, a life that would become something other than hers."
31"The blade in Rory’s hand grew incredibly quiet, as if even moonsilver respected the gravity of the moment."
32"Nyx held their ground only by sleight of shadow, which was to say, they did not hold at all; they kept shifting, ready to disappear and reappear where the need …"
33"The floor bore a lattice of roots that rose and fell as if the earth itself were walking beneath them, a soft lullaby conducted by some ancient, patient hand."
34"The soundscape shifted from the grove’s whisper to a chorus of distant bells, then back again, a loop of sound that felt both ancient and intimately personal."
35"Rory moved forward, the blade’s glow guiding the way, Isolde close behind with a measured pace that never betrayed fear, and Nyx hovering in the shade between l…"
36"The grove’s hum rose again, a deeper note that seemed to answer the pendant’s rhythm, and the trio crossed into the deeper heart of the strange place."
37"What they found there wasn’t a single thing so much as a collection of truths—the kind that arrive not as speeches but as glints of understanding, as moments of…"
38"The blade’s edge hovered just above the root-bridge’s surface, catching the light in a way that made it seem both a tool and a promise at once."
39"As they pressed deeper, the chamber opened to reveal a corridor that seemed to lean into a far-off glow, a pale amber that looked almost like the warm season ra…"
40"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed with a stronger glow now, and Rory realized it wasn’t merely warmth but guidance—an invitation to step toward a threshold that mig…"
41"The Fae-Forged Blade lay still in her hand, but its presence was a constant reminder that wards could be cut if one blinked at the right moment, that power here…"
42"Beyond the arch, the grove let out a breath they felt in their bones, a calm that held the promise of arrival and the threat of consequence in careful balance."
43"Rory looked at the others, and in their faces she saw the same quiet resolve that had carried her through every hallway she had ever crossed—the resolve to walk…"
44"The arch dissolved into a corridor of light and sound and heat, and the grove’s heart beat in time with theirs as if the world itself held its breath for a mome…"
45"The light folded around them, not blinding but bright in a way that made the eyes quicken and the senses sharpen, and then they moved, stepping into whatever la…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Nyx curved, a shadow skimming the edge of a root, and whispered,"
1"she said, but the words felt too small for what their bodies already knew"
2"she said, though the words sounded almost ceremonial rather than a report"
3"Isolde finally said, voice low"
4"Nyx whispered, though the words carried clearly, as if the grove heard them too"
5"she said simply, her tone both invitation and dare"
6"she declared, her voice clear as a bell in a quiet hall"
7"the silhouette intoned, and the voice carried no malice, only a patient curiosity"
8"Isolde said, her voice almost a caress"
9"she said, her voice a sealed riddle opening in a careful breath"
10"Isolde asked, though the question wasn’t to any one of them, but to the grove itself"
11"Rory said, her voice steady,"
12"she said, her voice soft as spider silk"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"she declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.125
63.7080%