Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXP350TAZDGT0M0TE7NJYM

Run Details

Duration:
5m 34s
Cost:
$0.009663
Provider:
AtlasCloud

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the pavement of Camden High Street. Harlow Quinn sprinted. Her boots slapped against wet concrete. Breath tore at her throat. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Ten minutes since the suspect fled the Raven's Nest. She wiped water from her eyes. Salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. The sharp line of her jaw tightened. She scanned the shadows. Streetlights flickered above. Puddles reflected the orange glow. Ahead, a figure darted between parked cars. Olive skin gleamed under the streetlights. Short curly dark brown hair bounced with each stride. Tomás Herrera. He favoured his left leg. The scar running along his forearm flashed white when he pushed off a brick wall. He vanished into the shadows of the high street. Harlow drew her service weapon. The metal felt cold against her palm. She moved with military precision. No wasted motion. She swept the corner. The street stood empty. Puddles rippled. Steam rose from a grate. She holstered the gun. Tomás headed for the old Tube station. The entrance stood boarded up. Chains hung loose. Rust flaked onto her hands when she grabbed the metal. She kicked the door. Wood splintered. Darkness swallowed her. The air grew heavy. Damp rot filled her nose. She descended the stairs. Tiles cracked underfoot. Graffiti covered the walls. Her footsteps echoed. A draft blew upward. It smelled of sulphur and burnt sugar. She reached the platform. Light glowed below the tracks. Not electric. Firelight. She crept to the edge. A cavern opened beneath the station. Stalls lined the tunnels. People wore masks made of bone and cloth. She spotted Tomás near the edge. He touched a medallion around his neck. Saint Christopher. He handed something to a vendor. A bone token. The vendor nodded. Harlow pressed against the concrete pillar. She watched the crowd. Creatures with too many joints bartered in the shadows. Glass vials bubbled with green liquid. Maps floated in mid-air. This was the Veil Market. The rumours held truth. Her partner Morris died three years ago. No body. No explanation. She suspected the clique then. Now she stood at the entrance of their stronghold. A guard stepped onto the platform. He wore a coat made of feathers. He scanned the tunnel. Harlow held her breath. Her hand hovered over her holster. The guard turned away. He walked toward the stairs. She needed to follow Tomás. The market moved every full moon. Tonight was the night. If she lost him, the trail went cold. She looked at the drop. Ten feet to the stalls. Below, the noise grew. Laughter mixed with screams. A man sold eyes in a jar. A woman traded memories for gold coins. Harlow checked her watch again. Backup stood twenty minutes away. She stood alone. The rain dripped from the ceiling. It hit her shoulder. She thought of Morris. He trusted her. She failed him. She would not fail this case. She stepped onto the rusted tracks. Gravel crunched. The guard paused. He listened. Harlow froze. Her heart beat against her ribs. The guard continued down the stairs. He disappeared into the dark. She reached the edge of the platform. The heat from below washed over her face. The market thrived. Illegal alchemy flowed like water. Banned substances sat on open shelves. This evidence buried her suspects for life. Or it got her killed. Tomás vanished into the crowd. He merged with the shoppers. She lost visual. She needed to move. Now. She gripped the edge of the platform. Her knuckles turned white. The drop waited. A vendor looked up. He pointed at her. He shouted to the guard. The guard spun around. He drew a blade. It glowed blue. Harlow calculated the distance. She could shoot. The noise would bring everyone. She could jump. The landing would break her ankle. She could retreat. The case would die. She looked at the bone token in the vendor's hand. It matched the description from the files. Morris found one in his pocket before he vanished. She touched her own pocket. She carried a spare magazine. No token. She could not buy entry. She would take it. The guard climbed the stairs. His boots clanged on the metal. He reached the landing. He saw her. He smiled. His teeth were filed to points. Harlow drew her weapon. She aimed at his chest. He stopped. He raised his hands. The blade vanished into his sleeve. You do not belong here. Harlow kept the gun steady. Her finger rested on the trigger. She stepped forward. The gravel shifted. I belong wherever justice leads. The guard laughed. The sound scraped against the walls. He stepped closer. The blue glow returned to his hand. Justice does not walk these tunnels. Only survivors. Harlow glanced at the market below. Tomás stood at a stall. He looked up. He saw her. He shook his head. He mouthed a word. Run. She ignored him. She focused on the guard. He lunged. She sidestepped. She struck his wrist with the barrel of the gun. The blade clattered to the floor. She kicked it over the edge. It fell into the dark. The guard stumbled. He regained his balance. He punched her stomach. Air left her lungs. She doubled over. He grabbed her collar. He lifted her off the ground. Harlow drove her knee into his groin. He grunted. He dropped her. She hit the tracks. Pain shot through her hip. She rolled. She came up swinging. She hit his jaw. He fell back. He hit the wall. He slid down. He did not move. She stood. She checked her watch. Five minutes. She looked at the drop. The market buzzed below. No one noticed the fight. They kept trading. They kept buying. She holstered her weapon. She wiped blood from her lip. She looked at the unconscious guard. She took his coat. She pulled the hood over her head. It smelled of bird musk. She stepped to the edge. She looked for Tomás. He waited near a stall selling enchanted maps. He watched her. He did not run. He waited to see what she would do. Harlow placed her foot on the ladder. The metal felt cold. She descended. One rung. Two. The heat rose. The smells intensified. Rot. Ozone. Blood. She reached the bottom. Her boots hit the dirt floor. She stood among the supernatural. They ignored her. They assumed she belonged. She walked toward Tomás. Her hand stayed near her holster. Tomás touched his medallion. He looked at the scar on his arm. He nodded at a stall behind him. You should not be here. Harlow stopped. She looked at the items on the table. Jars of smoke. Bones that whispered. I am here now. Tomás glanced at the crowd. A woman with no face walked past. She carried a cage with a beating heart inside. They will know you. Let them know. Tomás picked up a vial. He handed it to her. It felt warm. Then buy something. Blend in. Harlow took the vial. She looked at the liquid inside. It swirled without gravity. She looked at the vendor. The vendor held out a hand. Payment. She had no bone token. She had no gold. She had her badge. She kept it hidden. She reached into her pocket. She pulled out a coin. A standard pound coin. She placed it in the vendor's hand. The vendor looked at the coin. He looked at her. He laughed. He tossed the coin into the dark. This buys you nothing. Harlow leaned in. She stared into the empty space where the vendor's eyes should be. It buys you silence. The vendor paused. He tucked the coin away. He waved them off. Tomás grabbed her arm. He pulled her into the crowd. They moved deeper into the market. The stalls grew stranger. Shadows detached themselves from the walls. Harlow kept her eyes forward. She watched Tomás's back. The scar on his forearm disappeared under his sleeve. He moved with purpose. He led her to a curtain of beads. He stopped. He turned to her. This is the edge. Beyond here, the rules change. Harlow looked at the beads. They clicked together. They sounded like teeth. What lies beyond? Tomás looked at her brown eyes. He saw the determination. He saw the grief. Truth. Harlow pushed the beads aside. They chimed. She stepped through. The air changed. It grew colder. The noise faded. She stood in a quiet corridor. Tomás followed. He closed the curtain behind them. She checked her watch. The hands spun backward. She tapped the glass. They stopped. She looked at Tomás. Where are we? Tomás walked past her. He opened a door at the end of the hall. Light spilled out. The place where Morris ended. Harlow froze. Her hand went to her holster. She stepped toward the door. The light blinded her. She squinted. She saw a room. Maps covered the walls. Black-and-white photographs pinned to cork. A desk sat in the centre. She walked in. She recognized the desk. It belonged to Morris. She touched the surface. Dust covered the wood. She opened a drawer. It contained a file. Her name sat on the label. She looked at Tomás. He stood by the window. He looked out at the tunnel. Why bring me here? Tomás turned. He leaned against the sill. You wanted the truth. Harlow opened the file. Papers shuffled. She read the first line. Her breath caught. She looked up. Tomás watched her. He waited. She closed the file. She placed it on the desk. She looked at the door. Who else knows? Tomás pushed off the wall. He walked to the desk. He picked up a pen. He spun it in his fingers. Everyone who matters. Harlow straightened her jacket. She adjusted her watch. She looked at the door. She looked at Tomás. Then we have work to do. She walked past him. She opened the door. The market noise rushed back in. She stepped into the crowd. Tomás followed. They moved together. The crowd parted for them. They walked toward the centre of the market. The lights flickered. The ground shook. Harlow kept walking. She did not look back. She focused on the path ahead. The suspect was gone. The mission changed. She hunted a larger prey now. She touched her holster. She felt the weight of the gun. She felt the weight of the file in her pocket. She moved with precision. She moved with purpose. She moved into the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.09% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1761
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"calculated"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"scanned"
1"flickered"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"electric"
5"calculated"
6"stomach"
7"standard"
8"silence"
9"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences385
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount6
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences385
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences385
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1756
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1756
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera1
Tube1
Tomás23
Christopher1
Veil1
Market1
Morris5
Harlow22
You3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Tomás"
4"Christopher"
5"Market"
6"Morris"
7"Harlow"
8"You"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.845
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1756
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences385
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean24.39
std21.46
cv0.88
sampleLengths
072
1117
2105
363
436
555
639
732
841
932
1024
1128
1247
1326
1421
155
1617
175
1819
198
2026
2139
2228
2345
2428
2532
2632
2725
2832
2919
305
3116
324
3321
344
353
3613
375
3826
3938
4019
414
4215
434
4438
4536
469
4712
483
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences385
matches
0"were filed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs389
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences385
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1761
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"below washed over her"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.008517887563884156
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001135718341851221
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences385
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences385
mean4.56
std1.91
cv0.42
sampleLengths
08
13
26
35
410
59
66
76
87
94
103
115
127
136
149
152
165
1715
189
195
207
215
223
234
244
252
265
274
287
295
303
3110
324
332
343
354
365
374
383
394
403
414
427
434
445
452
461
475
486
494
31.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats72
diversityRatio0.2051948051948052
totalSentences385
uniqueOpeners79
19.55% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences341
matches
0"Then buy something."
1"Then we have work to"
ratio0.006
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount195
totalSentences341
matches
0"Her boots slapped against wet"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"She wiped water from her"
3"She scanned the shadows."
4"He favoured his left leg."
5"He vanished into the shadows"
6"She moved with military precision."
7"She swept the corner."
8"She holstered the gun."
9"She kicked the door."
10"She descended the stairs."
11"Her footsteps echoed."
12"It smelled of sulphur and"
13"She reached the platform."
14"She crept to the edge."
15"She spotted Tomás near the"
16"He touched a medallion around"
17"He handed something to a"
18"She watched the crowd."
19"Her partner Morris died three"
ratio0.572
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount315
totalSentences341
matches
0"Harlow Quinn sprinted."
1"Her boots slapped against wet"
2"Breath tore at her throat."
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"She wiped water from her"
5"Salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her"
6"The sharp line of her"
7"She scanned the shadows."
8"Streetlights flickered above."
9"Puddles reflected the orange glow."
10"Olive skin gleamed under the"
11"He favoured his left leg."
12"The scar running along his"
13"He vanished into the shadows"
14"Harlow drew her service weapon."
15"The metal felt cold against"
16"She moved with military precision."
17"She swept the corner."
18"The street stood empty."
19"Steam rose from a grate."
ratio0.924
29.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences341
matches
0"Now she stood at the"
1"If she lost him, the"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences8
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.9088%