Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXPE9SZ2G1KTTQ2ZVJJPEZ

Run Details

Duration:
41.6s
Cost:
$0.004764
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door buzzed like a dying insect, casting a sickly pallor over the wet pavement of Soho. Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting the fractured lights of passing taxis. Aurora pushed through the heavy oak door of The Raven's Nest, shaking water from her black hair. The scent of stale beer, lemon polish, and old paper hit her immediately. She wiped her boots on the mat, leaving dark smears, and scanned the dim interior. Maps covered every inch of wall space, their yellowed parchment curling at the edges. Black-and-white photographs of men in suits and women with sharp eyes watched from beneath glass frames. She spotted him in the corner booth, the one tucked behind a stack of atlases. Silas Blackwood sat with his back to the wall, a habit drilled into him by decades of survival. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the low light from the table lamp. He nursed a glass of amber liquid, his left leg stretched out slightly to accommodate the old knee injury. A silver signet ring glinted on his right hand as he traced the rim of the glass. Aurora froze. Ten years dissolved in a heartbeat. The last time she saw him, he stood straighter, his eyes brighter, before the Prague mission stripped pieces of him away. She approached the table, her heartbeat thudding against her ribs. Silas looked up. His hazel eyes widened, then narrowed. He didn't stand. The slight limp in his leg kept him anchored to the seat. "Rory," he said. The name tasted strange on his tongue, rough and unused. "Si." She slid into the booth opposite him. The leather creaked under her weight. "Didn't think you'd still be haunting this place." "Habits die harder than men." He signaled the bartender with a flick of his wrist. "What are you drinking?" "Nothing. I'm working." She gestured to the delivery bag slung over her shoulder, the logo of the Golden Empress restaurant faded but visible. "Yu-Fei needs these noodles hot. Traffic was a nightmare." "You look tired." "And you look like you've been carved out of driftwood." She leaned forward, resting her elbows on the sticky table. "When did you stop shaving every day?" Silas touched his neatly trimmed beard. "Three years ago. Gives me something to do with my hands while I think." "You used to say facial hair was a security risk. Said it changed your silhouette too much." "People change their minds. People change entirely." He took a sip of his drink. The ice clinked against the glass. "I heard you left Cardiff. Your father mentioned it once, before he stopped calling." "Brendan talks too much when he's had a few." Aurora picked at a loose thread on her jacket sleeve. "London suited me better. Less expectation. More noise." "You were going to be a barrister. Top of your class at Cardiff University. Irish wit, Welsh stubbornness. The perfect combination for the courts." "And look at me now." She tapped the delivery bag. "I deliver noodles to drunkards in Shoreditch." "It pays the rent?" "It keeps me off the street. That's enough." Silas studied her face. The bright blue eyes that used to sparkle with ambition now held a flat, guarded stillness. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist peeked out from her sleeve, a relic of a childhood accident she used to laugh about. Now she kept her hand hidden. "Eva told me you ran," Silas said. "Said you packed a single bag and vanished." "Eva talks too much too." "She was worried." "She should have minded her own business." Aurora's voice sharpened. "I made a choice. Evan made it clear I wasn't welcome in my own life anymore. Leaving felt like breathing for the first time in years." Silas nodded slowly. "I know that feeling. The need to vanish." "But you didn't run, did you? You got hurt. You got pulled out of the game because your knee gave out in Prague." She gestured to his leg. "That's not running. That's being retired." "Semantics." He swirled the liquid in his glass. "I lost more than my mobility that day. I lost the belief that I could fix things. You? You ran to save yourself. There's honor in that." "There's no honor in delivering food while my degree gathers dust." "Honor doesn't keep the lights on. Survival does." Silas leaned forward, the wood of the booth groaning. "You think I don't see what you're doing? You're hiding. Just like I am. Only my hiding spot has better liquor." Aurora laughed, a short, brittle sound. "You always did see too much. Remember that time in secondary school? When I tried to cheat on the chemistry final? You knew before the teacher even caught me." "You left your notes in the bathroom. And you have a tell. You tap your thumb against your index finger when you're lying or scared." She stilled her hand. "Old habits." "Some things don't change." Silas watched her. "You still have that fire. It's just buried under layers of exhaustion and fear." "Fear keeps you alive, Si. You taught me that. Or did you forget?" "I remember." He took another drink, finishing the glass. "I remember teaching you how to pick a lock, how to spot a tail, how to lie without blinking. I thought you'd use those skills to dismantle corrupt corporations or defend the innocent in court. Not to dodge an ex-boyfriend and deliver takeout." "Life has a funny way of rerouting plans." Aurora reached for the water pitcher on the table and poured herself a glass. Her hand shook slightly. She set the glass down hard. "I didn't ask for a lecture. I just needed a place to wait out the rain before my next drop-off." "And I didn't ask for a ghost from my past to walk through my door and remind me of everything I failed to become." Silas rubbed his knee. The joint ached when the weather turned, a constant reminder of the botched operation. "Do you regret it? Leaving everything behind?" Aurora looked away, focusing on a map of the British Isles pinned to the wall. The lines of the counties blurred in the dim light. "Regret is a luxury I can't afford. I made a choice. I chose me. For the first time, I chose me over what everyone else wanted." "Even if it meant becoming someone you barely recognize?" "Especially then." She turned back to him. Her gaze was steady now. "Who I was wasn't working. Who I am... survives. That has to count for something." Silas reached across the table. His hand, rough and scarred, hovered near hers. He didn't touch her, just held his palm open. An offer. A bridge. "You're still Aurora Carter," he said. "Daughter of Brendan and Jennifer. The girl who argued her way out of detention three times in one term. The woman who saw through my cover story the first time we met." "That girl feels like a stranger." "Strangers can become friends again. It takes time." He withdrew his hand and signaled the bartender for another round. "Stay. Have a drink. Tell Yu-Fei the rain delayed you. She'll understand." Aurora hesitated. The delivery bag sat heavy on her lap. The rain hammered against the window, a relentless rhythm. Inside, the bar hummed with low conversations and the clink of glass. The weight of ten years pressed down on her shoulders, but for the first time in a long while, the air felt breathable. "One drink," she said. "Then I have to go. The noodles get soggy." Silas smiled, a genuine expression that cracked the weathered map of his face. "One drink. That's a start." The bartender arrived with a fresh glass for Silas and a bottle of lager for Aurora. She popped the cap, the foam rising to the rim. They clinked glasses, the sound sharp and clear in the quiet corner of The Raven's Nest. Outside, the city roared on, indifferent to the two old friends sitting in the dim light, navigating the treacherous waters of who they used to be and who they had become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.712
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.034
88.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1363
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"navigating"
count1
7
word"treacherous"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"scanned"
2"traced"
3"weight"
4"perfect"
5"reminder"
6"navigating"
7"treacherous"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1356
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount708
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.69
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Blackwood1
Prague1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas12
Aurora9
British1
Isles1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Silas"
4"Aurora"
5"Isles"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
globalScore0.653
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1356
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean28.85
std21.23
cv0.736
sampleLengths
0108
181
239
324
413
522
619
732
83
927
1020
1117
1234
1327
1424
1517
164
178
1850
1915
205
213
2236
2311
2434
2535
2611
2738
2835
2925
306
3121
3213
3352
3452
3549
3651
379
3827
3926
4038
416
4231
4354
4413
4518
4673
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences111
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount712
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.018258426966292134
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008426966292134831
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean12.22
std7.99
cv0.654
sampleLengths
022
111
217
313
415
514
616
715
818
912
1019
1117
122
136
1421
1510
163
176
183
1912
203
2110
228
236
248
2515
264
2723
289
293
3020
317
326
3314
3417
3514
366
3714
3819
398
4024
4110
427
434
448
454
4616
4724
486
497
76.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4864864864864865
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences65
matches
0"She wiped her boots on"
1"She spotted him in the"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"He nursed a glass of"
4"She approached the table, her"
5"His hazel eyes widened, then"
6"He didn't stand."
7"She slid into the booth"
8"He signaled the bartender with"
9"She gestured to the delivery"
10"She leaned forward, resting her"
11"He took a sip of"
12"She tapped the delivery bag"
13"She gestured to his leg"
14"He swirled the liquid in"
15"She stilled her hand."
16"He took another drink, finishing"
17"Her hand shook slightly."
18"She set the glass down"
19"She turned back to him"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences65
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rain slicked the cobblestones, reflecting"
2"Aurora pushed through the heavy"
3"The scent of stale beer,"
4"She wiped her boots on"
5"Maps covered every inch of"
6"She spotted him in the"
7"Silas Blackwood sat with his"
8"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
9"He nursed a glass of"
10"A silver signet ring glinted"
11"The last time she saw"
12"She approached the table, her"
13"Silas looked up."
14"His hazel eyes widened, then"
15"He didn't stand."
16"The slight limp in his"
17"The name tasted strange on"
18"She slid into the booth"
19"The leather creaked under her"
ratio0.923
76.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences65
matches
0"Now she kept her hand"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas smiled, a genuine expression that cracked the weathered map of his face."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She gestured, the logo of the Golden Empress restaurant faded but visible"
1"Silas leaned, the wood of the booth groaning"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.3620%