| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.366 | | leniency | 0.732 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1841 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 51.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1841 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "crystal" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "unsettled" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1858 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1604 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.25 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 16 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 4 | | Veil | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | globalScore | 0.877 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite from behind, not quite from beside, more like it rose from the ground beneath her feet" | | 1 | "not quite from beside, more like it rose from the ground beneath her feet" | | 2 | "felt like two full minutes and the stan" | | 3 | "n argument or, apparently, before walking int" | | 4 | "as though responding to the question" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.691 | | wordCount | 1858 | | matches | | 0 | "not birdsong, but close" | | 1 | "Not a single note but thousands, layered so precisely they blurred into one" | | 2 | "not speaking words but shaping the edges of them, like someone forming letters in w" | | 3 | "not warm, not the way it pulsed near Hel portals, but cold" | | 4 | "not the way it pulsed near Hel portals, but cold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 64 | | mean | 29.03 | | std | 25.02 | | cv | 0.862 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 97 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 52 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 58 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 50 | | 37 | 35 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 55 | | 41 | 55 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 64 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 39 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 95.09% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | 0 | "been picked" | | 1 | "was threaded" | | 2 | "been given" | | 3 | "was shaped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 250 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.128 | | matches | | 0 | "Not gradually — it simply stopped existing, replaced by a stillness so complete that Rory's ears rang with the absence of London's hum." | | 1 | "Nyx's voice reached her the way it always did — not quite from behind, not quite from beside, more like it rose from the ground beneath her feet." | | 2 | "Their form solidified as they crossed — shoulders, the suggestion of a jaw, those violet points of light where eyes belonged." | | 3 | "The pendant at her throat — the Heartstone, that thumbnail-sized crimson mystery — lay dormant against her collarbone, its usual faint warmth absent." | | 4 | "The light helped nothing — it came from everywhere and nowhere, warm and directionless, as though the sky itself were a lamp." | | 5 | "Something in the way her pulse felt — too slow, or too fast, she couldn't tell which." | | 6 | "A sound reached her — not birdsong, but close." | | 7 | "The moonsilver dagger sat in a leather sheath Isolde had provided — old leather, soft as cloth, with no buckle or clasp." | | 8 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled — phantom sensation, the kind that came before a storm or an argument or, apparently, before walking into the heart of a place that existed between worlds." | | 9 | "Its bark was white as bleached bone, and its leaves — she stopped walking." | | 10 | "A cascade of silver sound washed over them both, and for a moment Rory swore she heard a voice inside it — a woman's voice, not speaking words but shaping the edges of them, like someone forming letters in wet clay." | | 11 | "The wildflowers here were different — white blooms she had no name for, with petals that curled inward as she passed, as though shy or defensive." | | 12 | "Rory thought of Isolde — that silver waterfall of hair, those pale lavender eyes that looked at you and through you simultaneously, the way she walked without leaving footprints." | | 13 | "\"Close.\" Nyx tilted their head — that strange birdlike gesture they made when listening to sounds beyond mortal range." | | 14 | "Not heat-haze — something more deliberate, more architectural." | | 15 | "The Heartstone pendant flared — not warm, not the way it pulsed near Hel portals, but cold." | | 16 | "Through the crimson stone she felt something — a pull, a tug, as though a thread attached to her ribs had been given a single sharp yank." | | 17 | "For the first time since Rory had known them — if known was the right word for a creature of living shadow who appeared uninvited and stayed out of what seemed like either boredom or obligation — Nyx sounded unsettled." | | 18 | "The luminous veins in the soil blazed bright enough to cast shadows — her shadow, Nyx's shadow, and a third that belonged to nothing visible." | | 19 | "Nyx was already moving — flowing across the clearing like spilled oil, shadow reaching for shadow." | | 20 | "Then a voice — Isolde's voice, unmistakable, that tone like a bell rung underwater — cut through from everywhere at once." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1590 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay dormant against her" | | 1 | "faint blue-white luminescence," |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.035849056603773584 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007547169811320755 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 11.33 | | std | 8.74 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 54.27% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.36585365853658536 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a pale gold wash" | | 1 | "Too many angles, joints that" | | 2 | "Just Nyx, wrapped around something" | | 3 | "Then a voice — Isolde's" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused between two oaks" | | 1 | "It had the grain and" | | 2 | "She stepped through." | | 3 | "Their form solidified as they" | | 4 | "They surveyed the grove the" | | 5 | "She squinted at what might" | | 6 | "They rarely did when the" | | 7 | "She pressed deeper." | | 8 | "She touched it once, a" | | 9 | "She looked up." | | 10 | "She didn't know how she" | | 11 | "It came from ahead, where" | | 12 | "She didn't draw it." | | 13 | "She kept moving." | | 14 | "Its bark was white as" | | 15 | "Its leaves were silver." | | 16 | "She understood nothing." | | 17 | "She understood that she was" | | 18 | "She took a step back." | | 19 | "They circled the birch at" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 76.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed before the" | | 1 | "The next, the cold vanished." | | 2 | "She paused between two oaks" | | 3 | "The bark wasn't bark anymore." | | 4 | "It had the grain and" | | 5 | "Nyx's voice reached her the" | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "The grove opened like a" | | 8 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in" | | 9 | "Snowdrops pushed through beds of" | | 10 | "The grass between them was" | | 11 | "Their form solidified as they" | | 12 | "They surveyed the grove the" | | 13 | "She squinted at what might" | | 14 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-form" | | 15 | "Nyx didn't answer." | | 16 | "They rarely did when the" | | 17 | "She pressed deeper." | | 18 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 19 | "Whatever this place was, it" |
| | ratio | 0.767 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass between them was the vivid impossible green of a place that had never known frost, and it bent without sound beneath her boots." | | 1 | "The light helped nothing — it came from everywhere and nowhere, warm and directionless, as though the sky itself were a lamp." | | 2 | "Just a pale gold wash that faded to silver at the edges, like the inside of an oyster shell." | | 3 | "The wildflowers here were different — white blooms she had no name for, with petals that curled inward as she passed, as though shy or defensive." | | 4 | "Whatever safe meant to a three-hundred-year-old exile who spoke in riddles." | | 5 | "The luminous veins pulsed once, brighter, as though responding to the question." | | 6 | "For the first time since Rory had known them — if known was the right word for a creature of living shadow who appeared uninvited and stayed out of what seemed …" | | 7 | "The moonsilver edge caught the grove's strange light and threw it back as something sharper, something that cut the air itself." | | 8 | "Just Nyx, wrapped around something that thrashed and twisted in their grip, and the Veil shuddering between the standing stones like a struck drum." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx had, their edges bleeding into the ambient light" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.171 | | leniency | 0.341 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |