Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXQ3SJ85Z9WEZJEFYG3K6B

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.005357
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed with a dying insect rhythm, casting a sickly pallor over the rain-slicked pavement of Soho. Inside The Raven's Nest, the air hung thick with the scent of stale ale, lemon polish, and decades of cigarette smoke absorbed into the wood paneling. Old maps of forgotten empires papered the walls, their faded ink lines looking like cracked veins under the low amber lights. Black-and-white photographs captured faces from another era, eyes fixed on some distant horizon none of them ever reached. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy oak door, shaking water from her straight, shoulder-length black hair. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, bypassing the few scattered patrons to find the familiar shape behind the bar. She moved with the efficient, guarded gait of someone who spent too many nights navigating London's backstreets alone. A delivery bag from the Golden Empress still swung from her hand, smelling faintly of ginger and soy. Silas Blackwood looked up from polishing a tumbler. His hazel eyes narrowed, then widened as recognition struck. He set the glass down with a sharp clink that cut through the low hum of jazz playing in the corner. The slight limp in his left leg betrayed him as he rounded the end of the bar, moving slower than the man she remembered from childhood summers in Cardiff. His grey-streaked auburn beard was neatly trimmed, framing a face etched with deeper lines than those old memories held. "Rory?" The name left his lips like a question he wasn't sure he wanted answered. "Little Rory Carter?" Aurora stopped three feet from him. The fluorescent light from the street outside flickered across her face, highlighting the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist as she shifted the delivery bag. "Hello, Si. Long time." Silas leaned against the bar, his right hand resting on the polished surface. The silver signet ring on his finger caught the dim light, flashing briefly before disappearing into the shadow of his sleeve. "I heard you were in London. Eva mentioned something about... running away." He paused, choosing his words with the precision of a man who once measured them in classified briefings. "She didn't say you were working for Yu-Fei." "Life happens." Aurora's voice remained level, cool-headed despite the sudden tightening in her chest. "People move. Things change." "You look different." Silas studied her, his gaze lingering on the hard set of her jaw, the way her shoulders squared against an invisible weight. "Harder. The girl who used to climb the limestone cliffs at Penarth without a rope wouldn't stand like she's expecting a blow." "The girl who climbed those cliffs doesn't exist anymore." Aurora placed the delivery bag on the bar, the plastic crinkling in the silence. "That girl believed in happy endings. She thought if you followed the rules, kept your head down, did everything right, the world would treat you kindly." Silas poured two fingers of whiskey into a clean glass and slid it toward her. "And the world didn't?" "The world broke her teeth." Aurora wrapped her fingers around the glass but didn't lift it. "Evan happened. Then the flat in Cardiff became a cage. Then I ran here." She traced the rim of the glass with her thumb. "Pre-Law at Cardiff University felt like a prison sentence handed down by my father. Brendan and his endless lectures on jurisprudence. Jennifer with her Welsh proverbs about patience. I swallowed it all until I choked." "You left without saying goodbye." Silas's voice dropped, losing its professional edge to reveal something raw underneath. "One day you were there, helping your mother grade papers, talking about becoming a barrister like your dad. The next, you vanished. Eva found a note taped to her door. That was it." "I couldn't say goodbye, Si. Goodbyes make things real. If I said it out loud, I might have stayed. And staying would have killed me." Aurora finally lifted the glass, taking a slow sip. The whiskey burned a path down her throat, warming the cold knot in her stomach. "You know how it is. Sometimes the only way forward is to burn the bridge behind you." "I know exactly how it is." Silas rubbed his left knee, the old injury flaring in the damp London air. "Prague. Botched operation. Left me with this limp and a lifetime of wondering what I could have done differently." He looked at her, really looked at her, seeing past the delivery uniform and the defensive posture. "But you didn't just leave Cardiff, Rory. You left yourself behind. Who are you now?" Aurora set the glass down. "I'm someone who delivers food to people who can't be bothered to cook. I'm someone who lives above a bar owned by a man who used to spy on countries for a living. I'm someone who doesn't believe in destinies or grand plans anymore." She laughed, a short, humorless sound. "I used to think I'd be arguing cases in the High Court by now. Wearing silk robes, quoting precedents, making my father proud." "Your father would still be proud." "My father thinks I'm a disappointment who threw away her future." Aurora's bright blue eyes flashed with sudden anger. "He called me reckless. Irresponsible. Said I threw away everything he and Mum worked for. Maybe he's right. Maybe I am just running from one mess to another." Silas reached across the bar, his large hand covering hers. The silver signet ring pressed against her skin, cool and solid. "Running isn't always cowardice, Rory. Sometimes it's the bravest thing you can do. I've seen people stay in situations that destroyed them because they were too afraid to move. You moved. That takes courage." "Courage doesn't pay the rent." Aurora pulled her hand away, needing the distance. "Courage doesn't fix the things you break along the way. I left Eva crying. I left my parents confused and hurt. I left a version of myself that believed in decency and justice." She gestured around the dim bar. "And look where it got me. Hiding in the shadows of Soho, serving takeout to strangers." "You're not hiding." Silas straightened, his quiet authority filling the space between them. "You're surviving. There's a difference. And you're not alone anymore. You have Eva. You have this place, if you want it." Aurora looked at him, really seeing him for the first time since she walked in. The grey in his hair, the weariness around his eyes, the way he carried his past like a heavy coat he couldn't take off. He wasn't the glamorous spy from her childhood stories anymore. He was just a man with a bad knee and a bar full of ghosts. "I don't know how to be friends with the person I used to be," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "She seems like a stranger now. A naive child who thought the world made sense." "Maybe she wasn't naive." Silas picked up his polishing cloth again, rubbing at a spot on the bar that was already clean. "Maybe she just hadn't seen enough yet. We all change, Rory. The trick isn't to mourn who we were. It's to decide who we're going to become next." The jazz record ended, leaving a sudden silence that pressed against the windows. Outside, the rain continued to fall, washing the streets clean of the day's grime. Aurora looked down at her hands, at the scar on her wrist, a permanent reminder of a childhood accident that seemed insignificant compared to the fractures in her adult life. "I don't know who that is yet," she said. "Good." Silas smiled, a genuine expression that softened the harsh lines of his face. "Not knowing means you're still writing the story. That's more than most people can say." He reached under the bar and pulled out a set of keys, sliding them across the polished wood until they stopped in front of her. "The flat above needs someone reliable. The last tenant left in a hurry. Rent's cheap, and the landlord," he tapped his chest, "is willing to overlook late payments during rough months." Aurora stared at the keys. They gleamed in the dim light, simple brass objects that represented something far larger than shelter. "Si, I can't—" "You can." He cut her off gently. "And you will. Because you're not that scared girl running from Cardiff anymore. You're Aurora Carter. You're clever, you're tough, and you've survived worse than a little uncertainty." Aurora closed her fingers around the keys. The metal felt warm against her palm, heavy with possibility. She looked up at Silas, at the man who had been a hero in her childhood stories and was now just a friend offering a second chance. "Thank you," she said, the words feeling foreign on her tongue. "Don't thank me yet." Silas turned back to the bottles behind him, his limp less noticeable as he moved with purpose. "Just promise me one thing." "Anything." "Next time you think about running," he said without looking back, "try sticking around first. See what happens." Aurora watched him work, the familiar movements of a man comfortable in his own skin despite all the scars life had dealt him. She took another sip of whiskey, letting the warmth spread through her chest. Outside, the green neon sign continued to buzz, casting its sickly glow over the wet streets of London. But inside, for the first time in years, the darkness felt a little less absolute.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
1"Silas turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.51
leniency1
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.08
87.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"navigating"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"measured"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"reminder"
count1
14
word"comfortable"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"familiar"
2"efficient"
3"navigating"
4"etched"
5"flickered"
6"measured"
7"weight"
8"silence"
9"traced"
10"stomach"
11"silk"
12"whisper"
13"reminder"
14"comfortable"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1585
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount920
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
London3
Golden1
Empress1
Blackwood1
Cardiff1
Aurora14
Silas12
persons
0"Carter"
1"Empress"
2"Blackwood"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
3"Golden"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.739
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed insignificant compared to the fractures in her adult life"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1585
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean45.29
std24.02
cv0.53
sampleLengths
088
172
286
318
436
572
618
747
849
919
1075
1150
1266
1371
1478
156
1647
1755
1868
1934
2064
2137
2250
2357
249
2529
2656
2724
2835
2944
3011
3126
321
3318
3469
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences88
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount927
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02696871628910464
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010787486515641856
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean18.01
std9.31
cv0.517
sampleLengths
023
126
221
318
416
520
618
718
88
99
1021
1129
1219
1315
143
156
1626
174
1813
1921
2030
218
2214
234
2425
2522
2623
2726
2815
294
3016
3124
3235
3317
3433
3534
3615
3717
3820
3936
4015
415
4250
4323
446
4519
4628
4710
4811
4934
71.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4659090909090909
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1"She moved with the efficient,"
2"His hazel eyes narrowed, then"
3"He set the glass down"
4"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
5"He paused, choosing his words"
6"She traced the rim of"
7"He looked at her, really"
8"She laughed, a short, humorless"
9"She gestured around the dim"
10"He wasn't the glamorous spy"
11"He was just a man"
12"she admitted, her voice barely"
13"He reached under the bar"
14"he tapped his chest"
15"They gleamed in the dim"
16"He cut her off gently"
17"She looked up at Silas,"
18"she said, the words feeling"
19"he said without looking back"
ratio0.333
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences63
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3"She moved with the efficient,"
4"A delivery bag from the"
5"Silas Blackwood looked up from"
6"His hazel eyes narrowed, then"
7"He set the glass down"
8"The slight limp in his"
9"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
10"The name left his lips"
11"Aurora stopped three feet from"
12"The fluorescent light from the"
13"Silas leaned against the bar,"
14"The silver signet ring on"
15"He paused, choosing his words"
16"Aurora's voice remained level, cool-headed"
17"Silas studied her, his gaze"
18"Aurora placed the delivery bag"
19"Silas poured two fingers of"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She moved with the efficient, guarded gait of someone who spent too many nights navigating London's backstreets alone."
1"Aurora looked down at her hands, at the scar on her wrist, a permanent reminder of a childhood accident that seemed insignificant compared to the fractures in h…"
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Aurora placed, the plastic crinkling in the silence"
1"Silas rubbed, the old injury flaring in the damp London air"
2"Silas straightened, his quiet authority filling the space between them"
3"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, the words feeling foreign on her tongue"
5"Silas turned back, his limp less noticeable as he moved with purpose"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.102
leniency0.204
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.082
81.5271%