Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXQ5KAX7D6TDDBR5J5NP8Z

Run Details

Duration:
34.7s
Cost:
$0.010205
Provider:
Venice

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The darkness in Richmond Park was supposed to be ordinary. Just shadows cast by old oaks and the occasional rustle of a deer. But as Rory stepped past the ancient standing stones, the air shifted. It dropped in temperature, not the chill of a wind, but a static dampness that clung to her skin. "Brilliant," she muttered, zipping her jacket up to her chin. "Absolutely brilliant." She gripped the silver chain around her neck, thumb rubbing the smooth, cool facet of the Heartstone. Why she had let whatever instinct that drove her convince her this was a good idea, she didn't know. The stone had been humming against her chest for days, a low-frequency vibration that only stopped when she faced this direction. Towards the Grove. The clearing opened up, swallowing the twilight. Here, the rules of London fell away. The canopy above was too thick, woven together from branches that didn't quite look like oak or ash. Below, the ground was carpeted in wildflowers. Snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—a riot of colour that had no business blooming in the same season, let alone at midnight. "You're glowing," she said, glancing down at the pendant. The crimson gem was shedding a faint, bloody light, pulsing in a rhythm that felt uncomfortably like a heartbeat. "Is that a warning or a welcome?" A twig snapped. Rory spun around, her boots scraping silently over the moss. Nothing but the standing stones looming like jagged teeth against the sky. "Just a fox," she told the silence. "Or a badger. Definitely a badger." She took a step deeper into the Grove. The flowers brushed against her jeans, whispering. It sounded like dry skin rubbing together. She stopped, looking down. The petals weren't moving in the wind. There was no wind here. "Okay," she breathed. "Not a fox." The Heartstone flared hotter, searing her skin. She hissed, clutching it, but didn't let go. She moved forward, scanning the perimeter. The standing stones marked the boundary, but they looked different now. Taller. Leaning inward as if they were listening. The geometry of the place felt... compressed. The distance between the trees seemed to stretch and shrink when she wasn't looking directly at them. "Focus," she said, the sound of her own voice too loud in the enclosed space. "You're here for a reason. Find the source. Find the... whatever it is." A sound drifted from the left. A wet, dragging noise. Rory turned her head slowly. At the edge of her vision, something shifted behind the trunk of a massive oak. It was tall, pale, and motionless. "I can see you," she called out, her voice steady despite the icy knot forming in her stomach. "This is private property. Sort of." Silence stretched, thick and taut. The shape didn't move. It was probably just a birch tree with white bark. She stared at it, willing her eyes to adjust to the gloom. The bark was too smooth. It had the texture of... muscle? She blinked, and it was gone. Just an oak tree, gnarled and dark. "Right," she said, a tremor sneaking into the edge of the word. "Sleep deprivation. That’s what this is." She reached into her pocket for her phone, needing a timestamp, a connection to reality, anything. She pulled it out. The screen was black. She pressed the power button. Nothing. "Dead. Of course." She shoved it back into her pocket. The Heartstone was beating faster now. Thump-thump. Thump-thump. Rory crouched down, examining the ground. The grass here wasn't green; it was a dark, bruised purple. She plucked a blade of it. It snapped with a brittle crunch, oozing a thick, dark sap that smelled like copper and old pennies. " Lovely," she whispered, wiping her fingers on the grass. "Just lovely." A giggle echoed through the clearing. Rory shot up. The sound hadn't come from the trees. It had come from right above her. She looked up. The branches were bare, twisted into knots that resembled faces. Hundreds of them. All smiling. "Who is that?" she demanded, backing away, her heels catching on the exposed roots of a standing stone. "Show yourself." The giggling stopped instantly. The abrupt silence was worse than the noise. It pressed against her ears, heavy and suffocating. She turned to leave, heading back toward the gap in the stones she had entered through. The path was gone. Where the opening had been, a wall of dense thorns now stood, growing rapidly before her eyes. The vines twisted together, knitting themselves into an impenetrable barrier. "No," she said, lunging forward and grabbing a handful of thorns. They bit into her palm, sharp and hot. She pulled, but the wall held firm, rooted deep in the earth. "Open up!" The Heartstone burned white-hot against her chest. She gasped, dropping the thorns. The light from the pendant grew stronger, casting long, jagged shadows across the clearing. The shadows moved. They detached themselves from the bases of the trees and the standing stones, sliding across the purple grass like oil spills. They were elongated, with too many joints in their limbs. Rory backed up until her spine pressed against the rough bark of the central oak. She pulled a small folding knife from her pocket—the only weapon she carried for late city deliveries—and flipped the blade open. It looked pathetic against the encroaching darkness. "You want to play games?" she shouted, the knife trembling in her grip. "I’m not in the mood." The nearest shadow paused. It had no eyes, but she could feel it studying her. It raised a limb, pointing a long, jagged finger at her chest. At the pendant. The sound of fluttering wings erupted from the canopy, thousands of them, like a flock of birds taking flight in reverse. But there were no birds. Only leaves falling, swirling around her in a tight vortex. The leaves were sharp as razor blades, slicing at her clothes and skin. She covered her face, ducking her head. "Stop!" The vortex died down as quickly as it had started. The leaves lay scattered on the ground, shredded. Rory lowered her arms, blood welling from a dozen shallow cuts on her forearms. She looked at the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. It was throbbing, the old injury waking up as if it had just happened. She wasn't alone. The realization didn't come as a fright; it settled in her gut like a heavy stone. The Grove wasn't just a place. It was a stomach, and she was the food. "Alright," she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper. She raised the knife, stepping away from the tree. "Come and get it then." The shadows lunged.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"looming"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"searing"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"absolutely"
2"looming"
3"silence"
4"searing"
5"scanning"
6"stomach"
7"gloom"
8"echoed"
9"could feel"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1113
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1025
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Rory7
Heartstone4
Grove3
London1
Silence1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Silence"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
59.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite look like oak or ash"
1"sounded like dry skin rubbing together"
2"smelled like copper and old pennies"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.898
wordCount1113
matches
0"not the chill of a wind, but a static dampness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean24.73
std15.57
cv0.63
sampleLengths
054
112
260
358
435
53
622
713
838
96
1015
1149
1228
1310
1426
1524
165
1737
1813
1918
2030
213
2215
2341
2412
256
2617
2718
2820
2920
3047
3133
3226
333
3431
3543
3618
3730
3849
398
4018
4138
4234
4324
443
90.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences117
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was carpeted"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"were elongated"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was shedding"
1"weren't moving"
2"were listening"
3"wasn't looking"
4"was beating"
5"was throbbing"
55.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences131
ratio0.031
matches
0"Snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—a riot of colour that had no business blooming in the same season, let alone at midnight."
1"The grass here wasn't green; it was a dark, bruised purple."
2"She pulled a small folding knife from her pocket—the only weapon she carried for late city deliveries—and flipped the blade open."
3"The realization didn't come as a fright; it settled in her gut like a heavy stone."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1033
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white-hot against her"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.031945788964181994
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010648596321393998
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean8.5
std5.25
cv0.618
sampleLengths
010
113
212
319
410
52
617
719
821
93
107
117
1218
137
1419
159
1619
177
183
1910
2012
217
226
238
247
257
264
277
285
293
303
317
328
336
3411
351
367
376
381
3917
4015
4113
426
434
445
4515
466
4718
486
495
52.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35877862595419846
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners47
91.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"Just shadows cast by old"
1"Just an oak tree, gnarled"
2"Only leaves falling, swirling around"
ratio0.028
43.85% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount48
totalSentences109
matches
0"It dropped in temperature, not"
1"she muttered, zipping her jacket"
2"She gripped the silver chain"
3"she said, glancing down at"
4"she told the silence"
5"She took a step deeper"
6"It sounded like dry skin"
7"She stopped, looking down."
8"She hissed, clutching it, but"
9"She moved forward, scanning the"
10"she said, the sound of"
11"It was tall, pale, and"
12"she called out, her voice"
13"It was probably just a"
14"She stared at it, willing"
15"It had the texture of..."
16"She blinked, and it was"
17"she said, a tremor sneaking"
18"She reached into her pocket"
19"She pulled it out."
ratio0.44
19.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences109
matches
0"The darkness in Richmond Park"
1"It dropped in temperature, not"
2"she muttered, zipping her jacket"
3"She gripped the silver chain"
4"The stone had been humming"
5"The clearing opened up, swallowing"
6"Here, the rules of London"
7"The canopy above was too"
8"Snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—a riot of"
9"she said, glancing down at"
10"The crimson gem was shedding"
11"A twig snapped."
12"Rory spun around, her boots"
13"Nothing but the standing stones"
14"she told the silence"
15"She took a step deeper"
16"The flowers brushed against her"
17"It sounded like dry skin"
18"She stopped, looking down."
19"The petals weren't moving in"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It dropped in temperature, not the chill of a wind, but a static dampness that clung to her skin."
1"Why she had let whatever instinct that drove her convince her this was a good idea, she didn't know."
2"Snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—a riot of colour that had no business blooming in the same season, let alone at midnight."
3"The crimson gem was shedding a faint, bloody light, pulsing in a rhythm that felt uncomfortably like a heartbeat."
4"It snapped with a brittle crunch, oozing a thick, dark sap that smelled like copper and old pennies."
5"It was throbbing, the old injury waking up as if it had just happened."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, a tremor sneaking into the edge of the word"
1"she shouted, the knife trembling in her grip"
2"she said, her voice dropping to a harsh whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she called out (call out)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she demanded (demand)"
5"she shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.462
72.3734%