Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXQ7QN1MA237TTK5TWDZ1D

Run Details

Duration:
8.8s
Cost:
$0.003956
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The black cab dropped Rory at the gates of Richmond Park. A chill wind bit at her exposed skin, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else, something sharp and metallic, like ozone before a storm. The driver, a squat man with a perpetually furrowed brow, simply pointed towards the winding path disappearing into the twilight gloom. "Fae Grove. Good luck with that, love." He peeled away before she fully emerged from the cab’s interior. Silence descended, heavy and absolute. Above, the sky bled from bruised purple to an inky black, a few hesitant stars pricking through the velvet. The air, already cool, seemed to drop another ten degrees. Rory shivered, though not entirely from the cold. A small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throbbed with a dull ache. She clutched the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant, the deep crimson gemstone pulsing faintly, a warmth spreading beneath her fingertips. Before tonight, the pendant had only glowed near the Hel portal in Silas’s pub. Its current activity sent a prickle of unease down her spine. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s words echoed in her memory, a low hum of urgency. Go there. Find the truth. She stepped onto the path, the gravel crunching under her trainers. Trees, skeletal against the fading light, clawed at the sky. Their branches, stripped bare of leaves, clicked together in the breeze, a sound like dry bones rattling. The path twisted deeper into the park, the streetlights quickly fading behind her, swallowed by the encroaching darkness. A dense canopy of ancient oaks now formed a tunnel overhead. Moonlight, when it dared to penetrate, dappled the forest floor in shifting patterns of silver and shadow. The air grew heavy, thick with the smell of damp earth and decaying leaves. The scent of ozone intensified, sharp enough to make her nostrils tingle. She pressed on, her bright blue eyes scanning the gloom. The path narrowed, replaced by a barely discernible track through tall, rustling bracken. The oaks here were immense, their trunks gnarled and thick with ancient moss, their branches interwoven like gnarled fingers. They were the sentinels Isolde had spoken of, the standing stones marking the boundary. A flicker of movement caught her eye. She stopped, holding her breath, her heart hammering against her ribs. Nothing. Just the shadows playing tricks. She told herself that, but a cold knot of dread tightened in her stomach. The silence wasn’t empty; it was pregnant, waiting. She had the distinct impression of being watched. She pushed deeper, the pendant growing warmer, its faint inner glow now visible beneath her jumper. The air grew still, the breeze dying completely. The clicking branches ceased their dance. No birdsong, no distant hum of city traffic, just profound quiet. A new scent permeated the air, sweet and cloying, like overripe nectar. Amidst the shadows, wildflowers bloomed in impossible greens and blues, their petals luminous in the gloom. Isolde’s grove. This had to be it. She entered a clearing where the colossal oak trees stood in a rough circle, their roots snaking across the ground like petrified serpents. The air here shimmered with an almost visible haze, the luminous wildflowers growing in profusion, their intoxicating scent thick in her throat. Time moved differently, Isolde had said. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. Rory felt a sudden, dizzying sense of disorientation, as if the ground beneath her feet was subtly shifting. A faint sound reached her ears, a high-pitched, almost imperceptible whine. It came from the centre of the clearing, a hollow ring where the tallest oaks stood closest together. She moved towards it, drawn by an invisible thread. The whine grew stronger, an almost musical vibration that resonated in her bones. A sudden gust of wind, cold and sharp, whipped through the clearing, though the surrounding trees remained motionless. The luminous petals of the wildflowers shivered. Rory spun, scanning the perimeter of the grove. Another flicker of movement, faster this time, darted behind one of the ancient oaks. Too quick to be an animal, too low to the ground for a person. "Hello?" Her voice, usually steady, sounded reedy and thin in the vast quiet. The only answer was the faint whine, and then, a new sound, like dry leaves scuttling across stone. It moved in a rapid, irregular pattern, drawing closer. She gripped the pendant, its warmth now a burning ember against her skin. The sensation of being watched intensified, a hundred unseen eyes boring into her. The scuttling sound stopped abruptly, right behind her. Rory stood frozen, every muscle tensed. She could feel a presence, cold and alien, radiating just inches from her back. The sweet, cloying scent of the wildflowers intensified, turning sickly. A whisper, too faint to discern words, brushed her ear. It wasn't human. It was ancient, a voice made of rustling leaves and dried earth. Rory whirled around, heart pounding. Nothing. Not a leaf stirred. The clearing was empty. Yet, the air felt heavy with lingering malice. She rubbed the crescent scar on her wrist, a nervous habit. The pendant glowed, a crimson beacon against the oppressive gloom. The whine, too, continued its ceaseless drone from the centre of the grove. It was a siren song, luring her deeper. She stumbled forward, her legs feeling heavy, as if moving through water. The glowing pendant pulsed in her hand, a steady beat against her racing heart. As she approached the cluster of central oaks, the whine escalated, a shrill, piercing note that vibrated through her skull. In the very heart of the ring, nestled among the colossal roots, a faint light pulsed. It wasn't the natural luminescence of the wildflowers; this was an unnatural, sickly green glow, radiating from a fissure in the ground itself. The air around the fissure crackled with a palpable energy. The sweet smell of nectar became overpowering, almost suffocating. Rory knelt, peering into the green light. The fissure was narrow, no wider than her hand, but it pulsed with a dark, swirling energy. Images flickered within the green glow – fleeting glimpses of twisted branches, shadowy figures, and something else, something with too many eyes. A ripple disturbed the air beside her. A low, guttural growl vibrated through the earth, not from an animal, but from something far older, far more unnatural. The green light intensified, washing over her face, turning her skin to sickly emerald. She scrambled back, heart slamming against her ribs, her breath catching in her throat. A shadow detached itself from the base of the nearest oak, long and attenuated, twisting itself into a vaguely humanoid shape. It glided towards her, silent, a gaping maw where a face should be, eyes like chips of obsidian staring out from the void. The obsidian eyes held her captive, trapping her gaze, digging into her mind with a silent scream.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:24:13.307Z" 2/19/2026, 12:24:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He peeled away [away]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
86.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"completely"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms42
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count4
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count2
10
word"sentinels"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count2
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"profound"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count1
16
word"shimmered"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"resonated"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
21
word"pounding"
count1
22
word"beacon"
count1
23
word"oppressive"
count1
24
word"ceaseless"
count1
25
word"pulsed"
count3
26
word"racing"
count1
27
word"vibrated"
count2
28
word"palpable"
count1
29
word"flickered"
count1
30
word"fleeting"
count1
31
word"maw"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"furrowed"
2"gloom"
3"silence"
4"velvet"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"down her spine"
8"echoed"
9"scanning"
10"sentinels"
11"flicker"
12"stomach"
13"dance"
14"profound"
15"amidst"
16"shimmered"
17"sense of"
18"resonated"
19"could feel"
20"whisper"
21"pounding"
22"beacon"
23"oppressive"
24"ceaseless"
25"pulsed"
26"racing"
27"vibrated"
28"palpable"
29"flickered"
30"fleeting"
31"maw"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences95
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1141
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1133
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Richmond1
Park1
Silence1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Silas1
Fae1
Grove1
Isolde4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silence"
2"Pendant"
3"Silas"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if moving through water"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.876
wordCount1141
matches
0"not from an animal, but from something far older, far more unnatural"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
37.03% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean76.07
std21.27
cv0.28
sampleLengths
076
1120
284
382
454
576
678
751
861
940
1089
1164
1285
1365
14116
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"The silence wasn’t empty; it was pregnant, waiting."
1"It wasn't the natural luminescence of the wildflowers; this was an unnatural, sickly green glow, radiating from a fissure in the ground itself."
2"Images flickered within the green glow – fleeting glimpses of twisted branches, shadowy figures, and something else, something with too many eyes."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1134
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"unnatural, sickly green glow,"
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03350970017636684
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.01
std5.67
cv0.472
sampleLengths
011
126
221
318
45
519
610
78
813
921
1014
1111
123
1311
142
153
1611
1710
1817
1918
2011
2117
2214
2312
2410
2513
2619
2714
287
2911
301
315
3214
338
348
3516
368
376
3811
3912
4016
412
425
4323
4422
456
469
4718
4811
4918
46.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3368421052631579
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners32
73.26% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Just the shadows playing tricks."
1"Too quick to be an"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences91
matches
0"He peeled away before she"
1"She clutched the silver chain"
2"Its current activity sent a"
3"She stepped onto the path,"
4"Their branches, stripped bare of"
5"She pressed on, her bright"
6"They were the sentinels Isolde"
7"She stopped, holding her breath,"
8"She told herself that, but"
9"She had the distinct impression"
10"She pushed deeper, the pendant"
11"She entered a clearing where"
12"It came from the centre"
13"She moved towards it, drawn"
14"Her voice, usually steady, sounded"
15"It moved in a rapid,"
16"She gripped the pendant, its"
17"She could feel a presence,"
18"It wasn't human."
19"It was ancient, a voice"
ratio0.286
20.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences91
matches
0"The black cab dropped Rory"
1"A chill wind bit at"
2"The driver, a squat man"
3"He peeled away before she"
4"Silence descended, heavy and absolute."
5"The air, already cool, seemed"
6"Rory shivered, though not entirely"
7"A small crescent-shaped scar on"
8"She clutched the silver chain"
9"Its current activity sent a"
10"The Fae Grove."
11"Isolde’s words echoed in her"
12"She stepped onto the path,"
13"Trees, skeletal against the fading"
14"Their branches, stripped bare of"
15"The path twisted deeper into"
16"A dense canopy of ancient"
17"Moonlight, when it dared to"
18"The air grew heavy, thick"
19"The scent of ozone intensified,"
ratio0.879
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"Before tonight, the pendant had"
1"Yet, the air felt heavy"
ratio0.022
60.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"She stopped, holding her breath, her heart hammering against her ribs."
1"Rory felt a sudden, dizzying sense of disorientation, as if the ground beneath her feet was subtly shifting."
2"The whine grew stronger, an almost musical vibration that resonated in her bones."
3"She stumbled forward, her legs feeling heavy, as if moving through water."
4"As she approached the cluster of central oaks, the whine escalated, a shrill, piercing note that vibrated through her skull."
5"The green light intensified, washing over her face, turning her skin to sickly emerald."
6"She scrambled back, heart slamming against her ribs, her breath catching in her throat."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.1927%