| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1760 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1760 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "furrowed" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "lurch" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "could feel" | | 13 | "measured" | | 14 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 190 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 190 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 193 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1773 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "Bring the stone. Midnight." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1731 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Richmond" | | discoveredNames | | Waterloo | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Rory | 13 | | London | 2 | | Isolde | 6 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 7 | | Charles | 1 | | November | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Watcher | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Charles" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed carved by a hand rather than grown" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.256 | | wordCount | 1773 | | matches | | 0 | "not warm this time but hot, a sharp bloom of heat" | | 1 | "not for standing alone in an interdimensional clearing at midnight, but it slowed her heart all the same" | | 2 | "not the absence of sound but its opposite" | | 3 | "Not the cold of weather or metal but the cold of deep water, of caves below the frost line, a col" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 193 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 62 | | mean | 28.6 | | std | 21.93 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 93 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 54 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 46 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 94.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 190 | | matches | | 0 | "been locked" | | 1 | "been compressed" | | 2 | "been swallowed" | | 3 | "been forged" | | 4 | "was designed" | | 5 | "been pressed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 268 | | matches | | 0 | "was pretending" | | 1 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 193 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time Rory crossed through the park gates — the ones that should have been locked at dusk, but weren't, never were on nights like this — the city had gone quiet in that way London only managed when it was pretending to sleep." | | 1 | "Not the sharp, insistent pulse it gave near a Hel portal — just a low, steady heat, the way it always behaved when she approached the Grove." | | 2 | "And under it — or woven through it, she couldn't tell — something that might have been a voice, or might have been nothing at all." | | 3 | "The air tasted different here — sweeter, denser, as if each molecule carried a drop of honey." | | 4 | "The tread pattern unfamiliar — deep chevrons, like something military." | | 5 | "The pendant flared — not warm this time but hot, a sharp bloom of heat that made her hiss and pull her hand away from her jacket." | | 6 | "Above, the moon had moved — or rather, it hadn't." | | 7 | "Isolde had left her a message — scratched in the bark of the ash tree behind the Golden Empress, of all places, where Yu-Fei stacked the recycling bins." | | 8 | "It came from the oak to her left — the largest of the five, the one Isolde called the Watcher." | | 9 | "Warm and close, just behind her left ear, carrying a smell like turned earth and copper and something sweet underneath that she recognized with a lurch — the honey-smell of the Grove itself, concentrated and wrong." | | 10 | "Just smooth, even depressions, as if whoever — whatever — had walked barefoot with soles of polished stone." | | 11 | "The way she'd learned to speak to Evan on his bad nights — calm, neutral, nothing to grip." | | 12 | "The silence that followed was not the absence of sound but its opposite — a pressure, a held breath, the Grove itself listening." | | 13 | "She could feel the shape of them — too many knuckles, each one a hard ridge pressing into her flesh." | | 14 | "She felt its presence the way you feel a building when you stand in its shadow — massive, vertical, blocking out the light." | | 15 | "The tapping started again — from all five oaks simultaneously now, faster, urgent, a staccato that sounded less like fingernails on glass and more like a warning." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1718 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 61 | | adverbRatio | 0.03550640279394645 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007566938300349243 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 193 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 193 | | mean | 9.19 | | std | 8.25 | | cv | 0.898 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 48.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3471502590673575 | | totalSentences | 193 | | uniqueOpeners | 67 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Then why did her shoulders" | | 1 | "Just smooth, even depressions, as" | | 2 | "Then the nearest foxglove bent" | | 3 | "Just a gem." | | 4 | "Just a rock on a" | | 5 | "Then they released." | | 6 | "Just her own boots in" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "She told herself the walk" | | 1 | "She'd made it twice before" | | 2 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 3 | "She'd read about it." | | 4 | "She should have been stepping" | | 5 | "She stopped walking." | | 6 | "She moved on." | | 7 | "It had tasted that way" | | 8 | "It sat in the soft" | | 9 | "She crouched and studied it." | | 10 | "She scanned the ground ahead." | | 11 | "She had never mentioned anyone" | | 12 | "She straightened up and stepped" | | 13 | "It hung in precisely the" | | 14 | "She'd come for a reason." | | 15 | "She'd spent two days translating" | | 16 | "It was past midnight." | | 17 | "She held still and counted" | | 18 | "It came from the oak" | | 19 | "It started again." |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 111 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "The last train from Waterloo" | | 1 | "She told herself the walk" | | 2 | "She'd made it twice before" | | 3 | "The paths were the same" | | 4 | "The trees were the same" | | 5 | "Richmond Park didn't change just" | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed warm" | | 7 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 8 | "The moon sat fat and" | | 9 | "Rory could see well enough." | | 10 | "That wasn't the problem." | | 11 | "The problem was the silence." | | 12 | "Richmond Park at night should" | | 13 | "Hundreds of them bedded down" | | 14 | "She'd read about it." | | 15 | "Fallow deer, red deer, descendants" | | 16 | "She should have been stepping" | | 17 | "The grass lay flat and" | | 18 | "She stopped walking." | | 19 | "The pendant ticked its quiet" |
| | ratio | 0.694 | |
| 93.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time Rory crossed" | | 1 | "As if someone had taken" | | 2 | "As if the sound had" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 37.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Fallow deer, red deer, descendants of herds that had grazed here since Charles I's time." | | 1 | "The grass lay flat and undisturbed as if no living thing had passed through it in hours." | | 2 | "The canopy closed above her like a hand shutting over a coin, and the moonlight cut down in thin silver ribbons that made the ground a patchwork of light and de…" | | 3 | "The air tasted different here — sweeter, denser, as if each molecule carried a drop of honey." | | 4 | "It hung in precisely the same position it had occupied from the path, but the light that fell here was thicker, more golden, as if filtered through amber glass." | | 5 | "Thumbnail-sized but heavier than it looked, always heavier, as if the stone carried density from wherever it had been forged." | | 6 | "The silence that followed was not the absence of sound but its opposite — a pressure, a held breath, the Grove itself listening." | | 7 | "Not the cold of weather or metal but the cold of deep water, of caves below the frost line, a cold that didn't just touch the skin but leached through it, sucki…" | | 8 | "The tapping started again — from all five oaks simultaneously now, faster, urgent, a staccato that sounded less like fingernails on glass and more like a warnin…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 7.14% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |