| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.245 | | leniency | 0.491 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.27% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1744 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1744 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "comforting" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "charm" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "sturdy" | | 7 | "electric" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "tension" | | 12 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1732 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1000 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.7 | | worstName | "Elias" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Elias" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Vienna | 1 | | Elias | 27 | | Thorne | 2 | | Silas | 21 | | Budapest | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Blackwood" | | 3 | "Elias" | | 4 | "Thorne" | | 5 | "Silas" | | 6 | "Carter" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "Vienna" | | 2 | "Budapest" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.15 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1732 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 30.93 | | std | 19.16 | | cv | 0.619 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 34 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 69 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 53 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 53 | | 32 | 65 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 51 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 56 | | 49 | 32 |
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| 93.94% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were bitten" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | |
| 34.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "The bell above the door didn’t jingle; it tolled, a singular, rusted note that cut through the low hum of the refrigerator." | | 1 | "He focused on a stubborn ring of condensation left by a coaster, his thumb tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand—a nervous tic that had survived three decades of tradecraft." | | 2 | "Elias leaned forward; the smell coming off him wasn't just rain." | | 3 | "Aurora Carter—Rory—breezed in, helmet under her arm, rain slicking her black hair to her forehead." | | 4 | "She looked at Elias—the trembling hands, the desperate posture—and then at Silas’s rigid spine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1012 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.021739130434782608 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007905138339920948 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 13.12 | | std | 9.18 | | cv | 0.7 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 31 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3409090909090909 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a Tuesday." | | 1 | "He focused on a stubborn" | | 2 | "He sat, joints popping audibly." | | 3 | "His fingernails were bitten to" | | 4 | "He set two heavy tumblers" | | 5 | "He shuddered, a full-body convulsion" | | 6 | "He gestured vaguely at Silas's" | | 7 | "It was stale sweat and" | | 8 | "He didn't want to, but" | | 9 | "He shifted his weight, the" | | 10 | "He stared into the rye" | | 11 | "She stopped, sensing the pressure" | | 12 | "Her bright blue eyes darted" | | 13 | "She recognized tension before she" | | 14 | "She looked at Elias—the trembling" | | 15 | "She nodded, once, sharp and" | | 16 | "He reached into his deep" | | 17 | "He let his hand return" | | 18 | "He swayed, catching himself on" | | 19 | "He turned to the door." |
| | ratio | 0.264 | |
| 0.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain lashed against the" | | 1 | "Silas Blackwood dragged a rag" | | 2 | "It was a Tuesday." | | 3 | "Tuesdays were for the ghosts." | | 4 | "The bell above the door" | | 5 | "Silas didn’t look up immediately." | | 6 | "He focused on a stubborn" | | 7 | "The footsteps approaching the bar" | | 8 | "The rag stopped moving." | | 9 | "Silas stared at the grain" | | 10 | "The voice was gravel rolling" | | 11 | "Silas lifted his head." | | 12 | "Water dripped from the brim" | | 13 | "The handsome, devastating boy who" | | 14 | "Elias pulled a stool out," | | 15 | "He sat, joints popping audibly." | | 16 | "Elias placed a heavy, trembling" | | 17 | "His fingernails were bitten to" | | 18 | "Silas reached for the bottom" | | 19 | "He set two heavy tumblers" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He focused on a stubborn ring of condensation left by a coaster, his thumb tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand—a nervous tic that had survived thre…" | | 1 | "The voice was gravel rolling in a cement mixer, rougher than he remembered, stripped of the velvet charm that used to talk grandmothers out of their pension fun…" | | 2 | "The handsome, devastating boy who had run visuals in blink-and-you-miss-it operations was gone." | | 3 | "Elias pulled a stool out, the wood screeching against the varnish in a way that made Silas’s left knee throb in phantom sympathy." | | 4 | "He shuddered, a full-body convulsion that rattled his coat buttons against the bar edge." | | 5 | "Silas remained statuesque, the towel in his hand a white flag of surrender to a war that ended years ago." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Elias spat (spit)" | | 1 | "Elias laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 53 | | tagDensity | 0.038 | | leniency | 0.075 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.075 | |