Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXQMAKP8MCSQTT8A8HF69M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.083028
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain lashed against the darkened windows of The Raven's Nest, blurring the neon green glow of the sign into a radioactive smear upon the Soho pavement. Inside, the air hung heavy with the scent of beeswax polish and the stale, comforting ghost of tobacco smoke. Silas Blackwood dragged a rag across the mahogany counter, the friction burning a dull heat into his palm. It was a Tuesday. Tuesdays were for the ghosts. The bell above the door didn’t jingle; it tolled, a singular, rusted note that cut through the low hum of the refrigerator. Silas didn’t look up immediately. He focused on a stubborn ring of condensation left by a coaster, his thumb tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand—a nervous tic that had survived three decades of tradecraft. He listened. The footsteps approaching the bar were uneven, heavy on the heel, light on the toe. Wet leather squeaked against the floorboards. "You still keep the lights too low, Si. A man could hide a knife in these shadows." The rag stopped moving. Silas stared at the grain of the wood. The voice was gravel rolling in a cement mixer, rougher than he remembered, stripped of the velvet charm that used to talk grandmothers out of their pension funds in Vienna. Silas lifted his head. Standing on the other side of the bar was a ruin of a man wrapped in a soaked trench coat. Water dripped from the brim of a fedora that looked thirty years out of style. Underneath, Elias Thorne’s face was a roadmap of broken capillaries and deep, canyon-like wrinkles. The handsome, devastating boy who had run visuals in blink-and-you-miss-it operations was gone. In his place stood a wreck. "And you still don't know how to wipe your feet, Eli. I just waxed that floor." Elias pulled a stool out, the wood screeching against the varnish in a way that made Silas’s left knee throb in phantom sympathy. He sat, joints popping audibly. "Wax. Is that what we’re doing now? Domesticity?" Elias placed a heavy, trembling hand on the bar. His fingernails were bitten to the quick, the cuticles ragged. "Pour me something that burns. None of that artisanal gin rubbish I saw in the window." Silas reached for the bottom shelf, grabbing a bottle of unlabelled rye he kept for personal sorrows. He set two heavy tumblers down. Glass clinked against wood, sharp and final. "I heard you were in Leeds. Or was it Lisbon? The wires get crossed these days." Silas poured. The amber liquid swirled, catching the dim light. "Leeds. Lisbon. Hell. It’s all the same geography when you’re looking at it through the bottom of a glass." Elias picked up the drink, bypassing the toast, and threw it back. He shuddered, a full-body convulsion that rattled his coat buttons against the bar edge. "Better. Hits the spot where the conscience used to be." Silas nursed his own, watching the man who had once dragged him out of a burning sedan in Budapest. "You look tired, Eli." "And you look... sturdy." Elias’s eyes, bloodshot and rimmed with yellow, darted around the room, taking in the framed black-and-white photographs, the antique maps plastered to the walls. "Look at this. A shrine to the Golden Age. You got the layout of the Berlin sector up there next to a picture of a 1920s flapper. It’s grotesque, Si. Kitsch." "It’s decor. The punters like the mystery. Makes them feel like they’re part of something important while they overpay for an Old Fashioned." "Important." Elias spat the word out like a cherry pit. He gestured vaguely at Silas's chest. "You got out. You took the limp and the pension and you bought a pub. You sat down." "I didn't have much of a choice. The knee doesn't bend the way it used to. You can't run a dead drop if you can't run." Elias leaned forward; the smell coming off him wasn't just rain. It was stale sweat and cheap hotel soap. "Prague." The word hung in the air, heavier than the smoke, thicker than the glass. Silas twisted the signet ring. The metal bit into his skin. "Prague was a long time ago." "Was it? Feels like this morning. I wake up, and my hands are shaking, and I can hear the tires screeching on the cobblestones." Elias tapped the empty glass fast, a woodpecker rhythm. "Hit me again." Silas poured. He didn't want to, but refusing a man like Elias was more dangerous than indulging him. "I thought you stayed in. Heard you took a desk at Vauxhall. Deputy Director of something vital and boring." "I did. For a year. Then they decided my... temperament... wasn't suited for the new world order. Too analog. Too messy." Elias laughed, a dry, hacking sound. "They retired me, Silas. Handshake, gold watch, and a nondisclosure agreement thick enough to choke a horse. But they didn't give me a bar. They gave me a studio flat in Croydon and a weekly meeting with a therapist who looks twelve." "You could have reached out." "To you?" Elias scoffed, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. "The great Silas Blackwood? The martyr of the Charles Bridge? What would I say? 'Hello, old friend, sorry I didn't take the shot earlier? Sorry you caught the bullet meant for the extract team?'" Silas stiffened. The pain in his leg flared, a sharp, electric jolt. He shifted his weight, the bad knee buckling slightly before locking into place. "It was chaos, Eli. Fog of war. Back room deals gone sour. We don't do 'what ifs' in this house. We serve drinks." "You serve lies." Elias spun the glass on the wet counter. "You sell the aesthetic of the game. The romance. Look at this place. The Raven's Nest. Clever. Hiding in plain sight. But you and I know there’s no romance. Just cold pavement and wet socks and waiting for a phone to ring." "It’s a living." "It’s a mausoleum." Elias finally looked at him, really looked at him. The envy in his eyes was naked, ugly. "You got out with a piece of yourself left. You built something. I have... I have silence. The phone doesn't ring anymore, Si. Not even for the wrong number." Silas picked up a towel and began drying a glass that was already dry. "Everyone leaves the game eventually. Some of us walk, some of us are carried, some of us get pushed." "I didn't want to leave." Elias's voice dropped to a whisper. He stared into the rye as if it were a scrying mirror. "I didn't know how to be anything else. Who is Elias Thorne if he isn't checking for tails in a reflection? Just a sad old drunk in a wet coat." The back door creaked open. Heavy boots thudded on the stairs leading up to the flats. Aurora Carter—Rory—breezed in, helmet under her arm, rain slicking her black hair to her forehead. She stopped, sensing the pressure drop in the room immediately. Her bright blue eyes darted from Silas to the stranger, analyzing the threat level. Smart girl. She recognized tension before she saw the cause. "Silas? Everything alright? I saw the light on." Silas didn't break eye contact with Elias. "Fine, Rory. Just catching up with history. Go on upstairs. Get dry." Rory hesitated. She looked at Elias—the trembling hands, the desperate posture—and then at Silas’s rigid spine. She nodded, once, sharp and professional, and disappeared up the stairs, the sound of her footsteps fading into the ceiling. Elias watched her go. "One of yours?" "Tenant. Works for the restaurant down the street. Good kid." "She clocked me. Saw the weapon under the coat before I even turned around." "You aren't carrying, Eli." Elias smiled, a grotesque revealing of yellowed teeth. He reached into his deep pocket. Silas’s hand dropped below the bar, fingers brushing the cold steel of the shotgun mounted there. Elias pulled out a silver flask. Dented, tarnished, engraved with initials that had long since worn away. "Just this. My service weapon." Silas released the breath he hadn't realized he was holding. He let his hand return to the counter. "You should go home. Before the weather turns worse." "Home." Elias debated the word. "I came here to tell you something. I rehearsed it on the train." "And?" "I forgot it." Elias stood up. The stool groaned in relief. He swayed, catching himself on the bar rail. "No. That's a lie. I didn't forget. I just realized it doesn't matter. You built a life, Silas. A real one. With walls and dry floors and people who check on you." Elias buttoned his coat with fumbling, numb fingers. "I hated you for Prague. For years. I thought you botched it on purpose to get the medical discharge. To get out." "You know me better than that." "I did. Once." Elias adjusted his fedora, pulling it low to hide the ruin of his eyes. "Now? I look at you and I don't see the operative. I just see a barkeep. And God help me, I’d trade every medal, every commendation, every secret I’ve ever stolen just to be the one polishing that glass." Silas remained statuesque, the towel in his hand a white flag of surrender to a war that ended years ago. "There's always a stool open, Eli. If you want to dry out." Elias laughed again, but the edge was gone, replaced by a hollow defeat. He turned to the door. "No. The cheap stuff doesn't sit right with me anymore." "Goodbye, Elias." The door opened, letting the London rain gust in, cold and biting. The bell tolled its singular, rusted note. Elias Thorne stepped out into the dark, and the shadows swallowed him whole before the door even swung shut. Silas stood alone in the silence. The refrigerator hummed. The rain drummed. He looked at the empty glass Elias had left behind, a ring of moisture already seeping into the wood, threatening to leave a permanent mark. He picked up the glass and smashed it into the bin. It shattered with a satisfying crunch. Silas poured himself another finger of rye, drank it in one burning gulp, and went back to polishing the counter. The spot where Elias had sat was still warm, but soon, like everything else in this city, it would turn cold.
created_at"2026-02-19T12:24:26.199Z" 2/19/2026, 12:24:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1744
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1744
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"sturdy"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"tracing"
2"footsteps"
3"velvet"
4"charm"
5"throb"
6"sturdy"
7"electric"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"whisper"
11"tension"
12"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences93
matches
0"d in relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1732
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1000
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.7
worstName"Elias"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Elias"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Blackwood1
Tuesday1
Vienna1
Elias27
Thorne2
Silas21
Budapest1
Carter1
Rory2
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Blackwood"
3"Elias"
4"Thorne"
5"Silas"
6"Carter"
7"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Vienna"
2"Budapest"
3"London"
globalScore0.15
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1732
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean30.93
std19.16
cv0.619
sampleLengths
073
122
260
317
442
54
668
716
828
943
1030
1126
1255
1323
1459
1523
1634
1726
1820
1925
206
2136
2237
2369
245
2547
2648
2753
283
2949
3033
3153
3265
338
3419
3536
367
3710
3814
394
4030
4122
4227
4318
441
4551
4630
476
4856
4932
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"was gone"
1"were bitten"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was holding"
34.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences132
ratio0.038
matches
0"The bell above the door didn’t jingle; it tolled, a singular, rusted note that cut through the low hum of the refrigerator."
1"He focused on a stubborn ring of condensation left by a coaster, his thumb tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand—a nervous tic that had survived three decades of tradecraft."
2"Elias leaned forward; the smell coming off him wasn't just rain."
3"Aurora Carter—Rory—breezed in, helmet under her arm, rain slicking her black hair to her forehead."
4"She looked at Elias—the trembling hands, the desperate posture—and then at Silas’s rigid spine."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1012
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.021739130434782608
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007905138339920948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean13.12
std9.18
cv0.7
sampleLengths
027
119
218
34
45
522
65
732
82
915
106
1117
124
138
1430
154
1620
1715
1814
1913
206
2116
2223
235
2417
2510
2616
2717
286
297
3018
318
3231
3314
3410
3519
364
3728
3831
3923
4010
416
4218
4326
4411
458
461
4714
485
496
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3409090909090909
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences87
matches
0"It was a Tuesday."
1"He focused on a stubborn"
2"He sat, joints popping audibly."
3"His fingernails were bitten to"
4"He set two heavy tumblers"
5"He shuddered, a full-body convulsion"
6"He gestured vaguely at Silas's"
7"It was stale sweat and"
8"He didn't want to, but"
9"He shifted his weight, the"
10"He stared into the rye"
11"She stopped, sensing the pressure"
12"Her bright blue eyes darted"
13"She recognized tension before she"
14"She looked at Elias—the trembling"
15"She nodded, once, sharp and"
16"He reached into his deep"
17"He let his hand return"
18"He swayed, catching himself on"
19"He turned to the door."
ratio0.264
0.23% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences87
matches
0"The rain lashed against the"
1"Silas Blackwood dragged a rag"
2"It was a Tuesday."
3"Tuesdays were for the ghosts."
4"The bell above the door"
5"Silas didn’t look up immediately."
6"He focused on a stubborn"
7"The footsteps approaching the bar"
8"The rag stopped moving."
9"Silas stared at the grain"
10"The voice was gravel rolling"
11"Silas lifted his head."
12"Water dripped from the brim"
13"The handsome, devastating boy who"
14"Elias pulled a stool out,"
15"He sat, joints popping audibly."
16"Elias placed a heavy, trembling"
17"His fingernails were bitten to"
18"Silas reached for the bottom"
19"He set two heavy tumblers"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He focused on a stubborn ring of condensation left by a coaster, his thumb tracing the silver signet ring on his right hand—a nervous tic that had survived thre…"
1"The voice was gravel rolling in a cement mixer, rougher than he remembered, stripped of the velvet charm that used to talk grandmothers out of their pension fun…"
2"The handsome, devastating boy who had run visuals in blink-and-you-miss-it operations was gone."
3"Elias pulled a stool out, the wood screeching against the varnish in a way that made Silas’s left knee throb in phantom sympathy."
4"He shuddered, a full-body convulsion that rattled his coat buttons against the bar edge."
5"Silas remained statuesque, the towel in his hand a white flag of surrender to a war that ended years ago."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Elias spat (spit)"
1"Elias laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.075
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.075
78.8594%