Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTXQV8PASER5EB3WG01M7CD

Run Details

Duration:
48.7s
Cost:
$0.005949
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose against the night sky like blackened teeth. Rory counted them again. Seven. There had been seven when she entered the grove twenty minutes ago. She was certain of it. Yet here she stood, counting eight ancient oaks arranged in their imperfect circle, each trunk twisted with age, bark grooved deep enough to lose a finger in. She adjusted the strap of her courier bag and looked up through the gap in the canopy. No stars. The moon hung fat and orange where it had been silver and sharp when she'd pedalled through Richmond Park's gates. Time moved strangely here. She'd known that. Isolde had warned her. But knowing and experiencing were different beasts entirely. The note had been specific. Come to the grove at midnight. Come alone. The pendant will show you the truth. No signature. No return address. Just those words printed on cream-colored paper that smelled of woodsmoke and something else, something that made her think of her grandmother's attic in Cardiff. Dust and old secrets. She touched the Heartstone through her shirt. The gem pulsed against her sternum, a second heartbeat that had grown stronger with every step she took past the park's boundary. Now it thrummed with a heat that bordered on uncomfortable. Midnight. She was late. The ride from Camden had taken longer than expected, her bike chain threatening to snap twice on the dark paths through the park. Rangers didn't patrol this far into Richmond after dark. She'd seen precisely one other living soul, a man walking his dog near the Pen Ponds, his flashlight swinging wild arcs across the grass. Neither had acknowledged the other. The wildflowers should not have been blooming. It was November. Frost had crisped the grass outside her flat this morning. Yet the clearing floor swayed with white blooms that caught what little light filtered through the trees, their petals luminous as bone. She crouched, brushing her fingers against a stem. Warm. The plant was warm, as if it had been lying in summer sun. Her phone buzzed in her jacket pocket. The sound cracked through the silence like a gunshot. Rory stood quickly, her heart hammering. The screen lit her face blue when she pulled it out. No signal. Of course there was no signal. But a notification glowed at the top of her display, timestamped three minutes from now. WE SEE YOU. Her thumb hovered over the message. Before she could tap it, the screen flickered. The notification vanished. Her messages app opened to an empty thread, the number field blank. Then her phone went dark. Dead. It had been at sixty percent when she'd left the flat. She was breathing too fast. Rory pressed her palm flat against her sternum, feeling the Heartstone's rhythm beneath her skin. Steady. Even. Far calmer than her own racing pulse. 'This was a mistake.' The words came out too loud. The clearing swallowed them without echo. No birds answered. No insects chirped. The silence pressed against her ears like deep water. She turned to leave. The path she'd taken into the grove had vanished. Rory blinked. Rubbed her eyes. The standing stones formed a complete circle now, no gap between them where she'd slipped through. The trunks stood shoulder to shoulder, their branches interlocking overhead in a lattice that blocked even the strange orange moon. 'Okay.' She spun in a slow circle, taking inventory. 'Okay. Think.' Someone was playing games. Evan, maybe. No. Evan was in Cardiff. She'd made certain of that before she'd fled to London. A year of silence from him, a year of rebuilding, of learning to sleep without checking the locks three times. This felt like him, though. The control. The manipulation. Make her paranoid. Make her doubt. But Evan didn't know about the pendant. No one knew about the pendant. She'd told no one about the stranger who'd pressed it into her palm outside the Golden Empress three weeks ago, a woman in a grey coat who'd vanished into the dinner rush before Rory could ask a single question. Something shifted at the edge of her vision. Rory snapped her head left. Nothing but wildflowers and stone. She looked right. The same. The standing stones stood motionless, their bark catching the faint glow of the flowers below. She started walking toward the easternmost oak. There had been a gap there. She was sure of it. The ground was soft beneath her boots, the wildflowers parting around her ankles like water. When she glanced down, they were already closing behind her, stems straightening, petals unbruised. The oak's trunk was wider than she'd realised. She had to extend her arms to span half its circumference. The bark was warm under her palms, warmer than the flowers, almost fever-hot. She pressed her shoulder against it and pushed, testing for a hollow, a hidden passage, something. The tree pushed back. Rory stumbled away, her boots catching on the uneven ground. She caught herself before she fell, one hand slapping against stone, and turned to face the oak. It hadn't moved. Of course it hadn't moved. Trees didn't move. 'Get a grip.' She was talking to herself again. Eva would have laughed at her, would have told her she was working herself into a state over nothing. Eva, who'd held her while she cried in a train station at three in the morning. Eva, who wasn't here. The Heartstone burned. Rory gasped, her hand flying to her chest. The pendant seared through her shirt, through her skin, a brand of heat that made her vision swim. She yanked the chain over her head, the silver links scalding her fingers, and held the gemstone away from her body. It glowed. A deep crimson pulse, rhythmic as a heartbeat, lighting the clearing in flashes of blood-red. Each pulse came faster than the last, a strobe that made the standing stones seem to dance at the edges of her vision. A portal. The pendant pulsed near portals. The stranger's words echoed back to her, delivered in a voice like autumn leaves skittering across pavement. When the stone burns, run. When it glows, hide. But there was nowhere to hide. The circle was complete. The path was gone. And something was moving between the stones. She saw it first as a shadow between shadows, a darkness deeper than the night around it. It passed behind the northern oak, silent, height impossible to gauge, form impossible to define. Rory held the pendant away from her body like a ward and turned in place, trying to track the movement. It circled. She could hear it now, a soft whisper of something against the wildflowers, too deliberate to be wind, too rhythmic to be animal. Steps. Something was taking steps around the grove's perimeter, just out of clear sight. 'Who's there?' No answer. The whispering stopped. Rory's eyes darted from stone to stone. The orange moon cast shadows between the oaks, black gaps where anything could hide. The wildflowers swayed without wind. And at the base of each standing stone, she realised now, something pale protruded from the earth. She moved closer to the nearest oak, her legs stiff, her breath shallow. The pale shapes resolved themselves as she approached. Hands. Stone hands, emerging from the ground, fingers clawing upward as if the earth itself were drowning. Each oak had one. Eight trees. Eight hands. The one nearest her was smaller than the others. Child-sized. Its fingers were curled inward, the stone weathered smooth in places, detailed enough to show fingernails, knuckles, the subtle ridge of tendons beneath the surface. Rory backed away. Her heel caught on something, and she went down hard, her spine cracking against a root that hadn't been there a moment ago. The pendant flew from her grip, its chain slithering across the wildflowers, and came to rest three feet away, pulsing faster now, its glow approaching a steady blaze. She scrambled toward it. The ground shifted beneath her palms, the wildflowers pressing down, flattening themselves against the earth as if bowing. Her fingers closed around the silver chain. The whispering resumed. Closer now. Much closer. Not circling anymore but approaching, the sound of movement coming from directly behind her, from the gap between two oaks where no gap had existed before. Rory clutched the pendant to her chest and turned, rising to her knees, her back pressed against the warm bark of the tree. A figure stood in the moonlight. It had no face.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
92.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1420
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"racing"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count2
7
word"dance"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"flickered"
3"racing"
4"pulse"
5"echo"
6"rhythmic"
7"dance"
8"echoed"
9"whisper"
10"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"think"
1"SEE"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1416
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1390
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Cardiff2
Heartstone3
Camden1
Pen1
Ponds1
November1
London1
Evan3
Golden1
Empress1
Rory12
Eva3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Evan"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Pen"
4"London"
5"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if bowing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.706
wordCount1416
matches
0"Not circling anymore but approaching, the sound of movement coming from directly behi"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.47
std20.11
cv0.639
sampleLengths
011
149
258
354
439
565
664
716
840
93
1046
1129
124
1327
144
1550
1611
1756
1852
198
2030
2147
2248
234
2427
2511
2648
273
2847
2940
3033
3121
3252
3339
342
355
3643
3746
3835
3954
4029
413
4253
436
444
98.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences158
matches
0"been seven"
1"was gone"
2"were curled"
59.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was playing"
2"was working"
3"was taking"
4"were drowning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences164
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount475
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.029473684210526315
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008421052631578947
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean8.63
std7.29
cv0.845
sampleLengths
011
14
21
312
45
527
617
72
820
94
103
114
128
135
146
152
167
172
183
1925
204
217
2222
2310
241
253
2623
279
2824
295
307
313
3210
3322
348
351
3613
377
389
396
4011
412
426
4315
443
456
468
473
4812
495
46.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.3353658536585366
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences131
matches
0"Just those words printed on"
1"Of course there was no"
2"Then her phone went dark."
3"Of course it hadn't moved."
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences131
matches
0"She was certain of it."
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"She'd known that."
3"She touched the Heartstone through"
4"She was late."
5"She'd seen precisely one other"
6"It was November."
7"She crouched, brushing her fingers"
8"Her phone buzzed in her"
9"WE SEE YOU."
10"Her thumb hovered over the"
11"Her messages app opened to"
12"It had been at sixty"
13"She was breathing too fast."
14"She turned to leave."
15"She'd made certain of that"
16"She'd told no one about"
17"She looked right."
18"She started walking toward the"
19"She was sure of it."
ratio0.26
63.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences131
matches
0"The standing stones rose against"
1"Rory counted them again."
2"There had been seven when"
3"She was certain of it."
4"She adjusted the strap of"
5"The moon hung fat and"
6"Time moved strangely here."
7"She'd known that."
8"Isolde had warned her."
9"The note had been specific."
10"The pendant will show you"
11"Dust and old secrets."
12"She touched the Heartstone through"
13"The gem pulsed against her"
14"She was late."
15"The ride from Camden had"
16"Rangers didn't patrol this far"
17"She'd seen precisely one other"
18"Neither had acknowledged the other."
19"The wildflowers should not have"
ratio0.794
76.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences131
matches
0"Now it thrummed with a"
1"Before she could tap it,"
ratio0.015
21.56% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Just those words printed on cream-colored paper that smelled of woodsmoke and something else, something that made her think of her grandmother's attic in Cardif…"
1"The gem pulsed against her sternum, a second heartbeat that had grown stronger with every step she took past the park's boundary."
2"She'd seen precisely one other living soul, a man walking his dog near the Pen Ponds, his flashlight swinging wild arcs across the grass."
3"The trunks stood shoulder to shoulder, their branches interlocking overhead in a lattice that blocked even the strange orange moon."
4"When she glanced down, they were already closing behind her, stems straightening, petals unbruised."
5"The pendant seared through her shirt, through her skin, a brand of heat that made her vision swim."
6"Her heel caught on something, and she went down hard, her spine cracking against a root that hadn't been there a moment ago."
7"The pendant flew from her grip, its chain slithering across the wildflowers, and came to rest three feet away, pulsing faster now, its glow approaching a steady…"
8"The ground shifted beneath her palms, the wildflowers pressing down, flattening themselves against the earth as if bowing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.9578%